Comments received on poems by Muse of Calliope



Nocturne, a Lullaby
sorenbarrett said:

This seems like a beautiful song. Nicely worded and metered. Well done

July 29th, 2025 12:12

Nocturne, a Lullaby
Cheeky Missy said:

Very lovely. Thank you for sharing. Initially reading it sans the accompaniment, once through, how thanks to your notes I wanted it, finding it so much more perfect as a whole.

July 29th, 2025 10:09

Few cast the die
RSM0812 said:

Suffering can be a part of life unfortunately. You have to grin and bear it i guess.

July 21st, 2025 09:04

Few cast the die
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely! a fave

July 20th, 2025 17:00

Inexpressible
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 18th, 2025 10:30

Wall-Gaze
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting write, to me that is a familier feeling to many, the mind has gone travelling leaving the body behind, enjoyed the read

July 18th, 2025 10:25

Inexpressible
sorenbarrett said:

Clever rhyme and meter in this poem nicely done

July 18th, 2025 09:55

Wall-Gaze
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting poem that seems a bit cryptic. Most interesting.

July 17th, 2025 20:55

My preciousss…..
Poetic Licence said:

Very poignant write, staggering how many people are addicted to phones and technology, enjoyable read

June 11th, 2025 14:01

My preciousss…..
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 11th, 2025 11:43

My preciousss…..
sorenbarrett said:

A great poem of technology and how we become addicted to it and what comforts it offers. Hooked on our laziness. With each convenience another freedom lost. Nicely written and poignant

June 11th, 2025 11:11

A Lovecraftian horror trip
sorenbarrett said:

A changing and rather complex set of images in dreamlike fashion evoking a sense of unease. Very precisely imaged in this work. Well done

June 8th, 2025 06:40

It’s been a while
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful concise and true account of how many writes view their work, enjoyed the read

May 31st, 2025 05:38

It’s been a while
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed they are Rose and well stated in most poetic rhyme. Some of our private lives we share hidden in the skin of our poetic children and although to others they may appear ugly to the parent there is always that love that distorts their vision. That should always be respected. Loved your poem

May 31st, 2025 04:24

Luciferean
Poetic Licence said:

Very much enjoyed this write

May 28th, 2025 02:06

Luciferean
sorenbarrett said:

Nice rhyme and cadence. Liked it

May 27th, 2025 17:07

Pandora’s Box
Mutley Ravishes said:

I recall reading somewhere that Eve is a symbol for the sexual energy, through which we were tempted and then fell.

May 23rd, 2025 19:47

Pandora’s Box
Poetic Licence said:

Wonderfully written write if myth which also apply to in the real world. The power of the woman unleashed, with a touch of passion thrown in, enjoyed the read

May 23rd, 2025 09:33

Pandora’s Box
sorenbarrett said:

A most lovely poem of myth and the metaphor always got me. If you think of opening a woman\'s box many plagues may ensue physical as well as emotional. A delightful read and to pair it with Prometheus and fire (passion) it gets even hotter. This one could have been for over 18 indeed.

May 23rd, 2025 08:46

Nature
Poetic Licence said:

A powerful and meaningful write, few words that say so much, lovely write, enjoyed the read

May 20th, 2025 12:13

Nature
sorenbarrett said:

So well said in so few words it is powerful and most poetic.

May 20th, 2025 10:43

Transcendence
arqios said:

What an excellent poem on the rising 🙏🏻🕊️ inspiring!

May 20th, 2025 00:47

Transcendence
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely positive and uplifting write, beautifully written, enjoyed the read

May 19th, 2025 16:09

Transcendence
Demar Desu said:

Bravo

May 19th, 2025 15:05

Transcendence
sorenbarrett said:

What a lovely and most poetic set of verse. A fave

May 19th, 2025 14:51

DayBreak (in dreams i wake)
Poetic Licence said:

I particularly like the bridge, blinded by a torrent of dreams all haunting me, I have spent most of my life feeling that way. Is life for real or one never ending dream, really enjoyed the read

May 18th, 2025 15:13

DayBreak (in dreams i wake)
sorenbarrett said:

This is always an intriguing issue of whether we are dreaming or awake a type of Matrix issue or more anciently a philosophical question. Well written.

May 18th, 2025 13:18

blinded in the dark
arqios said:

...journey over destination- now there\'s my kind of viewpoint!
Night folds itself around us, shaping what is yet to come. We drift, not lost, but searching, guided by something unseen.
The sky does not name its wanderers, and time does not set a path— but in the quiet motion of it all, we move toward first light.
🕊️🙏🏻

May 16th, 2025 04:39

blinded in the dark
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of the body wants to sleep, but the mind has something to say, enjoyed the read

May 16th, 2025 00:00

blinded in the dark
sorenbarrett said:

A sense of the unknown and a feel for mystery, well done.

May 15th, 2025 16:02

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