Comments received on poems by Muse of Calliope
My preciousss…..
Poetic Licence said:
Very poignant write, staggering how many people are addicted to phones and technology, enjoyable read
June 11th, 2025 14:01
Poetic Licence said:
Very poignant write, staggering how many people are addicted to phones and technology, enjoyable read
June 11th, 2025 14:01
My preciousss…..
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of technology and how we become addicted to it and what comforts it offers. Hooked on our laziness. With each convenience another freedom lost. Nicely written and poignant
June 11th, 2025 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of technology and how we become addicted to it and what comforts it offers. Hooked on our laziness. With each convenience another freedom lost. Nicely written and poignant
June 11th, 2025 11:11
A Lovecraftian horror trip
sorenbarrett said:
A changing and rather complex set of images in dreamlike fashion evoking a sense of unease. Very precisely imaged in this work. Well done
June 8th, 2025 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
A changing and rather complex set of images in dreamlike fashion evoking a sense of unease. Very precisely imaged in this work. Well done
June 8th, 2025 06:40
It’s been a while
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful concise and true account of how many writes view their work, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 05:38
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful concise and true account of how many writes view their work, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 05:38
It’s been a while
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are Rose and well stated in most poetic rhyme. Some of our private lives we share hidden in the skin of our poetic children and although to others they may appear ugly to the parent there is always that love that distorts their vision. That should always be respected. Loved your poem
May 31st, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are Rose and well stated in most poetic rhyme. Some of our private lives we share hidden in the skin of our poetic children and although to others they may appear ugly to the parent there is always that love that distorts their vision. That should always be respected. Loved your poem
May 31st, 2025 04:24
Pandora’s Box
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall reading somewhere that Eve is a symbol for the sexual energy, through which we were tempted and then fell.
May 23rd, 2025 19:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall reading somewhere that Eve is a symbol for the sexual energy, through which we were tempted and then fell.
May 23rd, 2025 19:47
Pandora’s Box
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written write if myth which also apply to in the real world. The power of the woman unleashed, with a touch of passion thrown in, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 09:33
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written write if myth which also apply to in the real world. The power of the woman unleashed, with a touch of passion thrown in, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 09:33
Pandora’s Box
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of myth and the metaphor always got me. If you think of opening a woman\'s box many plagues may ensue physical as well as emotional. A delightful read and to pair it with Prometheus and fire (passion) it gets even hotter. This one could have been for over 18 indeed.
May 23rd, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of myth and the metaphor always got me. If you think of opening a woman\'s box many plagues may ensue physical as well as emotional. A delightful read and to pair it with Prometheus and fire (passion) it gets even hotter. This one could have been for over 18 indeed.
May 23rd, 2025 08:46
Nature
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and meaningful write, few words that say so much, lovely write, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 12:13
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and meaningful write, few words that say so much, lovely write, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 12:13
Nature
sorenbarrett said:
So well said in so few words it is powerful and most poetic.
May 20th, 2025 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
So well said in so few words it is powerful and most poetic.
May 20th, 2025 10:43
Transcendence
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely positive and uplifting write, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 16:09
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely positive and uplifting write, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 16:09
Transcendence
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely and most poetic set of verse. A fave
May 19th, 2025 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely and most poetic set of verse. A fave
May 19th, 2025 14:51
DayBreak (in dreams i wake)
Poetic Licence said:
I particularly like the bridge, blinded by a torrent of dreams all haunting me, I have spent most of my life feeling that way. Is life for real or one never ending dream, really enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 15:13
Poetic Licence said:
I particularly like the bridge, blinded by a torrent of dreams all haunting me, I have spent most of my life feeling that way. Is life for real or one never ending dream, really enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 15:13
DayBreak (in dreams i wake)
sorenbarrett said:
This is always an intriguing issue of whether we are dreaming or awake a type of Matrix issue or more anciently a philosophical question. Well written.
May 18th, 2025 13:18
sorenbarrett said:
This is always an intriguing issue of whether we are dreaming or awake a type of Matrix issue or more anciently a philosophical question. Well written.
May 18th, 2025 13:18
blinded in the dark
arqios said:
...journey over destination- now there\'s my kind of viewpoint!
Night folds itself around us, shaping what is yet to come. We drift, not lost, but searching, guided by something unseen.
The sky does not name its wanderers, and time does not set a path— but in the quiet motion of it all, we move toward first light.
🕊️🙏🏻
May 16th, 2025 04:39
arqios said:
...journey over destination- now there\'s my kind of viewpoint!
Night folds itself around us, shaping what is yet to come. We drift, not lost, but searching, guided by something unseen.
The sky does not name its wanderers, and time does not set a path— but in the quiet motion of it all, we move toward first light.
🕊️🙏🏻
May 16th, 2025 04:39
blinded in the dark
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of the body wants to sleep, but the mind has something to say, enjoyed the read
May 16th, 2025 00:00
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of the body wants to sleep, but the mind has something to say, enjoyed the read
May 16th, 2025 00:00
blinded in the dark
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of the unknown and a feel for mystery, well done.
May 15th, 2025 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of the unknown and a feel for mystery, well done.
May 15th, 2025 16:02
shine with your light
arqios said:
Beauty and functionality here- a confession and a declaration, recognising human frailty while celebrating the strength found in grace. The metaphors of fire, wind, rain, and silence all contribute to the feeling of a personal, intimate awakening—an invitation to be \"lit up\" by the divine. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 07:24
arqios said:
Beauty and functionality here- a confession and a declaration, recognising human frailty while celebrating the strength found in grace. The metaphors of fire, wind, rain, and silence all contribute to the feeling of a personal, intimate awakening—an invitation to be \"lit up\" by the divine. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 07:24
In The Abyss
arqios said:
Surely transported me back to those cold dark days! Splendid 🕊🙏🏻
May 14th, 2025 17:11
arqios said:
Surely transported me back to those cold dark days! Splendid 🕊🙏🏻
May 14th, 2025 17:11
In The Abyss
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of extreme isolation and alienation. Feelings of being lost and without meaning. Very well expressed.
May 14th, 2025 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of extreme isolation and alienation. Feelings of being lost and without meaning. Very well expressed.
May 14th, 2025 11:37
Shakespearean / Poet
Soman Ragavan said:
“I stopped living for lack of breathing...” In fact the poet never dies, for he or she is immortal. After our physical death our works speak for us.
“To stir up a spark of emotion in one heart...” Is it a particular heart or a random one ?...
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May 14th, 2025 05:37
Soman Ragavan said:
“I stopped living for lack of breathing...” In fact the poet never dies, for he or she is immortal. After our physical death our works speak for us.
“To stir up a spark of emotion in one heart...” Is it a particular heart or a random one ?...
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May 14th, 2025 05:37
Forgotten Dreams
Steve Goldenfort said:
very insightful, thanks for letting me read it.
May 13th, 2025 21:24
Steve Goldenfort said:
very insightful, thanks for letting me read it.
May 13th, 2025 21:24
the heart is home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem declaring oneself to another and their importance. Nicely said
May 13th, 2025 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem declaring oneself to another and their importance. Nicely said
May 13th, 2025 19:35
the heart is home
arqios said:
What was heavy is gone, what was quiet now hums. Love is not walls, but the space that feels safe even when we step beyond it.🕊️🙏🏻
May 13th, 2025 18:59
arqios said:
What was heavy is gone, what was quiet now hums. Love is not walls, but the space that feels safe even when we step beyond it.🕊️🙏🏻
May 13th, 2025 18:59
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