Comments received on poems by Muse of Calliope
shine with your light
arqios said:
Beauty and functionality here- a confession and a declaration, recognising human frailty while celebrating the strength found in grace. The metaphors of fire, wind, rain, and silence all contribute to the feeling of a personal, intimate awakening—an invitation to be \"lit up\" by the divine. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 07:24
arqios said:
Beauty and functionality here- a confession and a declaration, recognising human frailty while celebrating the strength found in grace. The metaphors of fire, wind, rain, and silence all contribute to the feeling of a personal, intimate awakening—an invitation to be \"lit up\" by the divine. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 07:24
In The Abyss
arqios said:
Surely transported me back to those cold dark days! Splendid 🕊🙏🏻
May 14th, 2025 17:11
arqios said:
Surely transported me back to those cold dark days! Splendid 🕊🙏🏻
May 14th, 2025 17:11
In The Abyss
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of extreme isolation and alienation. Feelings of being lost and without meaning. Very well expressed.
May 14th, 2025 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of extreme isolation and alienation. Feelings of being lost and without meaning. Very well expressed.
May 14th, 2025 11:37
Shakespearean / Poet
Soman Ragavan said:
“I stopped living for lack of breathing...” In fact the poet never dies, for he or she is immortal. After our physical death our works speak for us.
“To stir up a spark of emotion in one heart...” Is it a particular heart or a random one ?...
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May 14th, 2025 05:37
Soman Ragavan said:
“I stopped living for lack of breathing...” In fact the poet never dies, for he or she is immortal. After our physical death our works speak for us.
“To stir up a spark of emotion in one heart...” Is it a particular heart or a random one ?...
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May 14th, 2025 05:37
Forgotten Dreams
Steve Goldenfort said:
very insightful, thanks for letting me read it.
May 13th, 2025 21:24
Steve Goldenfort said:
very insightful, thanks for letting me read it.
May 13th, 2025 21:24
the heart is home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem declaring oneself to another and their importance. Nicely said
May 13th, 2025 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem declaring oneself to another and their importance. Nicely said
May 13th, 2025 19:35
the heart is home
arqios said:
What was heavy is gone, what was quiet now hums. Love is not walls, but the space that feels safe even when we step beyond it.🕊️🙏🏻
May 13th, 2025 18:59
arqios said:
What was heavy is gone, what was quiet now hums. Love is not walls, but the space that feels safe even when we step beyond it.🕊️🙏🏻
May 13th, 2025 18:59
shine with your light
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and this can nor should be criticized but the poem holds power.
May 10th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and this can nor should be criticized but the poem holds power.
May 10th, 2025 13:11
The SINGULARITY
YourUglyBoy said:
Ai wont replace us, it will revalue us as we learn to appreciate each other more rather than sit on meaningless social media sites arguing over nonsense of the day... well at least thats what I hope.
May 10th, 2025 09:34
YourUglyBoy said:
Ai wont replace us, it will revalue us as we learn to appreciate each other more rather than sit on meaningless social media sites arguing over nonsense of the day... well at least thats what I hope.
May 10th, 2025 09:34
Sparkle-Dust
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write reminding us though at times we think we know it all, we actually know very little, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 12:57
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write reminding us though at times we think we know it all, we actually know very little, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 12:57
Sparkle-Dust
sorenbarrett said:
It is both the message and the manner it was written that get the fave. Such a great metaphor we often think we know so much but we know so little and only from our perspective. We are indeed dust. Loved it
May 9th, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
It is both the message and the manner it was written that get the fave. Such a great metaphor we often think we know so much but we know so little and only from our perspective. We are indeed dust. Loved it
May 9th, 2025 11:30
Caustic Double-Acrostic
YourUglyBoy said:
I am part of this Anxious Generation... such a great poem!!
May 9th, 2025 11:29
YourUglyBoy said:
I am part of this Anxious Generation... such a great poem!!
May 9th, 2025 11:29
Forgotten Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive and uplifting write to those feeling that there is nothing left to dream or hope for, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 14:55
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive and uplifting write to those feeling that there is nothing left to dream or hope for, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 14:55
Forgotten Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement to the lost and the hopeless that well could be a song with chorus. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 13:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement to the lost and the hopeless that well could be a song with chorus. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 13:18
Shakespearean / Poet
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written and very relatable write, now relax as they say, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:38
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderfully written and very relatable write, now relax as they say, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:38
Shakespearean / Poet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Wholly relatable. The last line, pun not intended, took my breath away, because anxiety does this to me. Leaves me not breathing. So I could literally feel that as I was reading. The poem is truth! Stark and true. Well done on these, my friend! 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Wholly relatable. The last line, pun not intended, took my breath away, because anxiety does this to me. Leaves me not breathing. So I could literally feel that as I was reading. The poem is truth! Stark and true. Well done on these, my friend! 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:31
Shakespearean / Poet
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pledge and one of excuse for being. These travel deeper than the written word and are more profound that the verse. Well written
May 5th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pledge and one of excuse for being. These travel deeper than the written word and are more profound that the verse. Well written
May 5th, 2025 10:10
real-rage-roar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love it!!! And yes, this would be fitting lyrics for many different styles and genres...from classic rock, to hard rock, to hip hop, to dance, to country, to heavy metal. I love it a lot, my friend! Well done on this. Instant fave for the form, the the spirit and its lyricality. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love it!!! And yes, this would be fitting lyrics for many different styles and genres...from classic rock, to hard rock, to hip hop, to dance, to country, to heavy metal. I love it a lot, my friend! Well done on this. Instant fave for the form, the the spirit and its lyricality. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 07:36
real-rage-roar
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes certain alliterations catch in the mind and create their own verse that makes no sense to the brain but does to the body in its rhythmic feel a good write
May 4th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes certain alliterations catch in the mind and create their own verse that makes no sense to the brain but does to the body in its rhythmic feel a good write
May 4th, 2025 04:33
show me the way
rrodriguez said:
Rose, this is a deeply heartfelt and spiritually resonant piece. I\'m reminded of the Lord\'s guidance in times of trouble. I sense the spiritual depth of this poem. Thank you for sharing.
May 3rd, 2025 17:00
rrodriguez said:
Rose, this is a deeply heartfelt and spiritually resonant piece. I\'m reminded of the Lord\'s guidance in times of trouble. I sense the spiritual depth of this poem. Thank you for sharing.
May 3rd, 2025 17:00
01111010 -Gen Z- 01111010
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the rapid change in technology and its effects on society and people. Well done in verse as well.
May 1st, 2025 17:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the rapid change in technology and its effects on society and people. Well done in verse as well.
May 1st, 2025 17:04
Hope to Light the Way
sorenbarrett said:
A great rhyme scheme to emphasize the the message in this poem making it the dramatic. Nicely done
April 30th, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
A great rhyme scheme to emphasize the the message in this poem making it the dramatic. Nicely done
April 30th, 2025 12:53
Caustic Double-Acrostic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dang, this gets a fave just for pulling the form off, brilliant poet. What a wonderful job! And, as someone who suffers from an Anxiety disorder, I very much relate. Brava, my friend! 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 19:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dang, this gets a fave just for pulling the form off, brilliant poet. What a wonderful job! And, as someone who suffers from an Anxiety disorder, I very much relate. Brava, my friend! 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 19:21
Caustic Double-Acrostic
arqios said:
Quite the anxious generation. Excellent form🙏🏻🕊️
April 29th, 2025 14:15
arqios said:
Quite the anxious generation. Excellent form🙏🏻🕊️
April 29th, 2025 14:15
Caustic Double-Acrostic
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and creative double acrostics are not easy to pull off they are like number boxes where all the rows and columns have to add up to the same. Wonderful
April 29th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and creative double acrostics are not easy to pull off they are like number boxes where all the rows and columns have to add up to the same. Wonderful
April 29th, 2025 09:51
The SINGULARITY
Sunshinefalling said:
AI can never replace you as you are your own existence crafted through eyes it does not have. It can only do what it is told to do or say what others have said. It’s a stream compared to an ocean. Gene editing now that’s another nightmare.
April 26th, 2025 22:34
Sunshinefalling said:
AI can never replace you as you are your own existence crafted through eyes it does not have. It can only do what it is told to do or say what others have said. It’s a stream compared to an ocean. Gene editing now that’s another nightmare.
April 26th, 2025 22:34
Unravel me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful read filled with animals galore. This fine piece, my friend, is a magical riddle (vulnerable as I was trying to figure it out 😉🙃) and it is one heck of a write. An immediate fave. 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 20:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful read filled with animals galore. This fine piece, my friend, is a magical riddle (vulnerable as I was trying to figure it out 😉🙃) and it is one heck of a write. An immediate fave. 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 20:07
Unravel me
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read a menagerie of animals all to be freed. Are these elements of us that we need to free? A wonderful puzzle.
April 26th, 2025 19:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read a menagerie of animals all to be freed. Are these elements of us that we need to free? A wonderful puzzle.
April 26th, 2025 19:26
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