Comments received on poems by Muse of Calliope



Caustic Double-Acrostic
YourUglyBoy said:

I am part of this Anxious Generation... such a great poem!!

May 9th, 2025 11:29

Forgotten Dreams
Poetic Licence said:

A very positive and uplifting write to those feeling that there is nothing left to dream or hope for, nicely expressed and written

May 8th, 2025 14:55

Forgotten Dreams
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of encouragement to the lost and the hopeless that well could be a song with chorus. Nicely done

May 8th, 2025 13:18

Shakespearean / Poet
Poetic Licence said:

Wonderfully written and very relatable write, now relax as they say, enjoyed the read

May 7th, 2025 08:38

Shakespearean / Poet
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Wholly relatable. The last line, pun not intended, took my breath away, because anxiety does this to me. Leaves me not breathing. So I could literally feel that as I was reading. The poem is truth! Stark and true. Well done on these, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

May 5th, 2025 11:31

Shakespearean / Poet
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of pledge and one of excuse for being. These travel deeper than the written word and are more profound that the verse. Well written

May 5th, 2025 10:10

real-rage-roar
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I love it!!! And yes, this would be fitting lyrics for many different styles and genres...from classic rock, to hard rock, to hip hop, to dance, to country, to heavy metal. I love it a lot, my friend! Well done on this. Instant fave for the form, the the spirit and its lyricality. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

May 4th, 2025 07:36

real-rage-roar
sorenbarrett said:

Sometimes certain alliterations catch in the mind and create their own verse that makes no sense to the brain but does to the body in its rhythmic feel a good write

May 4th, 2025 04:33

real-rage-roar
arqios said:

real-rage-roar/new world order/over me/(guitar riff)

May 4th, 2025 01:59

show me the way
rrodriguez said:

Rose, this is a deeply heartfelt and spiritually resonant piece. I\'m reminded of the Lord\'s guidance in times of trouble. I sense the spiritual depth of this poem. Thank you for sharing.


May 3rd, 2025 17:00

01111010 -Gen Z- 01111010
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of the rapid change in technology and its effects on society and people. Well done in verse as well.

May 1st, 2025 17:04

Hope to Light the Way
sorenbarrett said:

A great rhyme scheme to emphasize the the message in this poem making it the dramatic. Nicely done

April 30th, 2025 12:53

Caustic Double-Acrostic
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dang, this gets a fave just for pulling the form off, brilliant poet. What a wonderful job! And, as someone who suffers from an Anxiety disorder, I very much relate. Brava, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

April 29th, 2025 19:21

Caustic Double-Acrostic
arqios said:

Quite the anxious generation. Excellent formπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

April 29th, 2025 14:15

Caustic Double-Acrostic
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and creative double acrostics are not easy to pull off they are like number boxes where all the rows and columns have to add up to the same. Wonderful

April 29th, 2025 09:51

The SINGULARITY
Sunshinefalling said:

AI can never replace you as you are your own existence crafted through eyes it does not have. It can only do what it is told to do or say what others have said. It’s a stream compared to an ocean. Gene editing now that’s another nightmare.

April 26th, 2025 22:34

Unravel me
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A wonderful read filled with animals galore. This fine piece, my friend, is a magical riddle (vulnerable as I was trying to figure it out πŸ˜‰πŸ™ƒ) and it is one heck of a write. An immediate fave. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

April 26th, 2025 20:07

Unravel me
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting read a menagerie of animals all to be freed. Are these elements of us that we need to free? A wonderful puzzle.

April 26th, 2025 19:26

The Song of the Unicorn
Cheeky Missy said:

Now that\'s a properly pulled off fusion poem. Aren\'t such downright fun to compose?! You two succeeded excellently. Beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery. [Only one caveat... contrary to popular falsehoods, the unicorn is no myth whatsoever, nor a trifle from which to derive fantasies] Thank you for sharing.

April 25th, 2025 17:34

The Song of the Unicorn
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh, how neat! A wonderful exercise leading to a most excellent poem. Great job, both of you! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

April 25th, 2025 14:05

The Song of the Unicorn
orchidee said:

A blip for me! It\'s shown up in Greek and won\'t translate! lol.

April 25th, 2025 10:50

Hallelujah Variations
Tony Grannell said:

Well, this is a surprise and a beautiful one at that. This song is your own and how gifted you are. The flow, meter and rhyming - sublime. The song itself befitting the melody and the message therein. In a word - divine. Much praise for this one.

Kind regards,
Tony.

April 24th, 2025 15:31

Hallelujah Variations
sorenbarrett said:

A close resemblance indeed. Nicely done

April 23rd, 2025 12:46

Hallelujah Variations
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I love the original. Your sings well with tune and is very effective with a wonderful message. Well done! πŸ™πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

April 23rd, 2025 11:34

\"the sky is GREEN\", They Said
Genesis said:

Indeed, telling the truth is crazy in a world full of lies. Beautiful analogy and write

April 22nd, 2025 19:26

\"the sky is GREEN\", They Said
sorenbarrett said:

Different points of view that will never agree. We are all different in perceptions and over this we argue. Good write.

April 22nd, 2025 13:07

Will o\' the Wisp
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Too late indeed. Wonderful write. And in relation to your poem and your note, so true how dangerous some beautiful things can be. Well done! πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

April 21st, 2025 13:38

for those who weep, I grieve and bleed
sorenbarrett said:

The cruelty of man to his own kind is never ending and often is simply based on disagreement of thought and nothing more. A poignant write for the season

April 21st, 2025 04:03

show me the way
sorenbarrett said:

The poem is so gentle and kind in true poetic form. It speaks out to one\'s child very nice

April 18th, 2025 13:51

The SINGULARITY
Mutley Ravishes said:

It doesn\'t have Imagination. You do!

April 17th, 2025 19:28

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