Comments received on poems by Xalvazora
Mars
sorenbarrett said:
Here a love that falls in the category of convenience and feels second place. Well written as a proposal for more.
August 24th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Here a love that falls in the category of convenience and feels second place. Well written as a proposal for more.
August 24th, 2026 04:21
\"We\'ll See.\"
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of regret over actions taken. Well written it reveals the downward slide.
August 22nd, 2026 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of regret over actions taken. Well written it reveals the downward slide.
August 22nd, 2026 14:59
Hot
sorenbarrett said:
An Egyptian religious view expressed in metaphorical spiritual terms in this poem of phoenix like resurrection from the ashes burnt by a sun god. There is much symbolic in this write. Nicely done
July 17th, 2026 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
An Egyptian religious view expressed in metaphorical spiritual terms in this poem of phoenix like resurrection from the ashes burnt by a sun god. There is much symbolic in this write. Nicely done
July 17th, 2026 03:31
Part 3: You\'re Not Coming Out
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor here in the room and door and the knocking. Well written
April 17th, 2026 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor here in the room and door and the knocking. Well written
April 17th, 2026 09:43
Part 2: Full, But Not Fed
sorenbarrett said:
Here the distinction of passion and real romance is made. Very nicely done with great understanding.
April 16th, 2026 21:27
sorenbarrett said:
Here the distinction of passion and real romance is made. Very nicely done with great understanding.
April 16th, 2026 21:27
Part 1: Only You
sorenbarrett said:
I like this comparison of attraction to another as a drug. That addiction in its good feelings becomes potentially detrimental overwhelming the care for oneself. Nicely written
April 15th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
I like this comparison of attraction to another as a drug. That addiction in its good feelings becomes potentially detrimental overwhelming the care for oneself. Nicely written
April 15th, 2026 04:22
Adieu, By Blood
sorenbarrett said:
The journey from getting what one never asked for or wanted to loosing what one has a painful trip. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
The journey from getting what one never asked for or wanted to loosing what one has a painful trip. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 03:51
Adieu, By Blood
Lyric Rune said:
Loss of family is hard, especially during this time. Thoughts are with you.
Good writing!
December 24th, 2025 00:58
Lyric Rune said:
Loss of family is hard, especially during this time. Thoughts are with you.
Good writing!
December 24th, 2025 00:58
When Touch Requires Meaning
Bragee said:
The devils tango is actually funny to me!
But I totally agree with the message.
November 15th, 2025 15:05
Bragee said:
The devils tango is actually funny to me!
But I totally agree with the message.
November 15th, 2025 15:05
When Touch Requires Meaning
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual and poem of relationship as a foreplay to anything else. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual and poem of relationship as a foreplay to anything else. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 13:13
Child\'s Play
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fantasy in this poem nicely written from a child\'s eyes
November 10th, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fantasy in this poem nicely written from a child\'s eyes
November 10th, 2025 16:12
Taboo Love
Alex Arnot said:
Dreams of losing someone\'s love are painful enough. When it\'s reality, it becomes a waking nightmare. I hope your heart mends soon.
October 31st, 2025 15:43
Alex Arnot said:
Dreams of losing someone\'s love are painful enough. When it\'s reality, it becomes a waking nightmare. I hope your heart mends soon.
October 31st, 2025 15:43
Taboo Love
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a plea for love that has been lost. A sad poem where one loves but the other does not. Unrequited love a need unsatisfied. Nicely done
October 31st, 2025 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a plea for love that has been lost. A sad poem where one loves but the other does not. Unrequited love a need unsatisfied. Nicely done
October 31st, 2025 14:15
The Girl and the Priestess
sorenbarrett said:
The princess within displayed in exterior beauty. Well written
October 22nd, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
The princess within displayed in exterior beauty. Well written
October 22nd, 2025 16:16
I Go To Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
Dream withdrawal, I feel it and have lived it, know it and believe it. Well done
October 15th, 2025 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Dream withdrawal, I feel it and have lived it, know it and believe it. Well done
October 15th, 2025 15:59
The Ghost I Once Loved
sorenbarrett said:
Youth impairs vision not the heart. A read of love lost but fortunately so. Well done
October 13th, 2025 14:53
sorenbarrett said:
Youth impairs vision not the heart. A read of love lost but fortunately so. Well done
October 13th, 2025 14:53
People-Pleasing
Poetic_Princess said:
This is very good as well as relatable!
October 9th, 2025 21:18
Poetic_Princess said:
This is very good as well as relatable!
October 9th, 2025 21:18
Diagnosis: Doubt
NinjaGirl said:
What a difficult position to be in...I totally relate. Things ended up not working out for the friendship...but now we\'re sort of friends again. It\'s one of those things. I suggest just being kind, even if they\'re lying.
October 8th, 2025 20:25
NinjaGirl said:
What a difficult position to be in...I totally relate. Things ended up not working out for the friendship...but now we\'re sort of friends again. It\'s one of those things. I suggest just being kind, even if they\'re lying.
October 8th, 2025 20:25
Diagnosis: Doubt
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with trust and belief and then doubt steps in and suspicion is the undermining of friendships. A wonderful write
October 8th, 2025 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with trust and belief and then doubt steps in and suspicion is the undermining of friendships. A wonderful write
October 8th, 2025 14:55
The Crown of Laurel
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of value in the unseen. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of value in the unseen. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 11:16
Red Lights
2781 said:
Well, I hope he doesn\'t mess her up to bad. She seemed like a nice girl.
October 3rd, 2025 08:35
2781 said:
Well, I hope he doesn\'t mess her up to bad. She seemed like a nice girl.
October 3rd, 2025 08:35
Red Lights
Paul Bell said:
Looks like the red light turned green for go, go, go.
Good to see a bit of eroticism. Could have sworn the site was celibate.
October 3rd, 2025 08:10
Paul Bell said:
Looks like the red light turned green for go, go, go.
Good to see a bit of eroticism. Could have sworn the site was celibate.
October 3rd, 2025 08:10
Red Lights
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual, sexual, erotic poem of pleasure. Full of desire it presses on.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual, sexual, erotic poem of pleasure. Full of desire it presses on.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
The Archer and the Witch
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with some most wonderful images that shine through. Mythical in nature it tells its story in good meter. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with some most wonderful images that shine through. Mythical in nature it tells its story in good meter. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 19:34
People-Pleasing
sorenbarrett said:
A tale of life and how it works or rather doesn\'t work. Well written
September 26th, 2025 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A tale of life and how it works or rather doesn\'t work. Well written
September 26th, 2025 12:52
I Escaped Groundhog Day
sorenbarrett said:
When each day seems as the last and life runs full circle it speaks of how to alter it. A most thought provoking write
September 19th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
When each day seems as the last and life runs full circle it speaks of how to alter it. A most thought provoking write
September 19th, 2025 13:39
Dead or Alive
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a game show that should be on TV. A fun read
September 18th, 2025 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a game show that should be on TV. A fun read
September 18th, 2025 17:06
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