Comments received on poems by Xalvazora
Part 3: You\'re Not Coming Out
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor here in the room and door and the knocking. Well written
April 17th, 2026 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor here in the room and door and the knocking. Well written
April 17th, 2026 09:43
Part 2: Full, But Not Fed
sorenbarrett said:
Here the distinction of passion and real romance is made. Very nicely done with great understanding.
April 16th, 2026 21:27
sorenbarrett said:
Here the distinction of passion and real romance is made. Very nicely done with great understanding.
April 16th, 2026 21:27
Part 1: Only You
sorenbarrett said:
I like this comparison of attraction to another as a drug. That addiction in its good feelings becomes potentially detrimental overwhelming the care for oneself. Nicely written
April 15th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
I like this comparison of attraction to another as a drug. That addiction in its good feelings becomes potentially detrimental overwhelming the care for oneself. Nicely written
April 15th, 2026 04:22
Adieu, By Blood
sorenbarrett said:
The journey from getting what one never asked for or wanted to loosing what one has a painful trip. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
The journey from getting what one never asked for or wanted to loosing what one has a painful trip. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 03:51
Adieu, By Blood
Lyric Rune said:
Loss of family is hard, especially during this time. Thoughts are with you.
Good writing!
December 24th, 2025 00:58
Lyric Rune said:
Loss of family is hard, especially during this time. Thoughts are with you.
Good writing!
December 24th, 2025 00:58
When Touch Requires Meaning
Bragee said:
The devils tango is actually funny to me!
But I totally agree with the message.
November 15th, 2025 15:05
Bragee said:
The devils tango is actually funny to me!
But I totally agree with the message.
November 15th, 2025 15:05
When Touch Requires Meaning
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual and poem of relationship as a foreplay to anything else. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual and poem of relationship as a foreplay to anything else. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 13:13
Child\'s Play
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fantasy in this poem nicely written from a child\'s eyes
November 10th, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fantasy in this poem nicely written from a child\'s eyes
November 10th, 2025 16:12
Taboo Love
Alex Arnot said:
Dreams of losing someone\'s love are painful enough. When it\'s reality, it becomes a waking nightmare. I hope your heart mends soon.
October 31st, 2025 15:43
Alex Arnot said:
Dreams of losing someone\'s love are painful enough. When it\'s reality, it becomes a waking nightmare. I hope your heart mends soon.
October 31st, 2025 15:43
Taboo Love
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a plea for love that has been lost. A sad poem where one loves but the other does not. Unrequited love a need unsatisfied. Nicely done
October 31st, 2025 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a plea for love that has been lost. A sad poem where one loves but the other does not. Unrequited love a need unsatisfied. Nicely done
October 31st, 2025 14:15
The Girl and the Priestess
sorenbarrett said:
The princess within displayed in exterior beauty. Well written
October 22nd, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
The princess within displayed in exterior beauty. Well written
October 22nd, 2025 16:16
I Go To Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
Dream withdrawal, I feel it and have lived it, know it and believe it. Well done
October 15th, 2025 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Dream withdrawal, I feel it and have lived it, know it and believe it. Well done
October 15th, 2025 15:59
The Ghost I Once Loved
sorenbarrett said:
Youth impairs vision not the heart. A read of love lost but fortunately so. Well done
October 13th, 2025 14:53
sorenbarrett said:
Youth impairs vision not the heart. A read of love lost but fortunately so. Well done
October 13th, 2025 14:53
People-Pleasing
Poetic_Princess said:
This is very good as well as relatable!
October 9th, 2025 21:18
Poetic_Princess said:
This is very good as well as relatable!
October 9th, 2025 21:18
Diagnosis: Doubt
NinjaGirl said:
What a difficult position to be in...I totally relate. Things ended up not working out for the friendship...but now we\'re sort of friends again. It\'s one of those things. I suggest just being kind, even if they\'re lying.
October 8th, 2025 20:25
NinjaGirl said:
What a difficult position to be in...I totally relate. Things ended up not working out for the friendship...but now we\'re sort of friends again. It\'s one of those things. I suggest just being kind, even if they\'re lying.
October 8th, 2025 20:25
Diagnosis: Doubt
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with trust and belief and then doubt steps in and suspicion is the undermining of friendships. A wonderful write
October 8th, 2025 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with trust and belief and then doubt steps in and suspicion is the undermining of friendships. A wonderful write
October 8th, 2025 14:55
The Crown of Laurel
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of value in the unseen. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of value in the unseen. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 11:16
Red Lights
2781 said:
Well, I hope he doesn\'t mess her up to bad. She seemed like a nice girl.
October 3rd, 2025 08:35
2781 said:
Well, I hope he doesn\'t mess her up to bad. She seemed like a nice girl.
October 3rd, 2025 08:35
Red Lights
Paul Bell said:
Looks like the red light turned green for go, go, go.
Good to see a bit of eroticism. Could have sworn the site was celibate.
October 3rd, 2025 08:10
Paul Bell said:
Looks like the red light turned green for go, go, go.
Good to see a bit of eroticism. Could have sworn the site was celibate.
October 3rd, 2025 08:10
Red Lights
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual, sexual, erotic poem of pleasure. Full of desire it presses on.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual, sexual, erotic poem of pleasure. Full of desire it presses on.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
The Archer and the Witch
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with some most wonderful images that shine through. Mythical in nature it tells its story in good meter. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with some most wonderful images that shine through. Mythical in nature it tells its story in good meter. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 19:34
People-Pleasing
sorenbarrett said:
A tale of life and how it works or rather doesn\'t work. Well written
September 26th, 2025 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A tale of life and how it works or rather doesn\'t work. Well written
September 26th, 2025 12:52
I Escaped Groundhog Day
sorenbarrett said:
When each day seems as the last and life runs full circle it speaks of how to alter it. A most thought provoking write
September 19th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
When each day seems as the last and life runs full circle it speaks of how to alter it. A most thought provoking write
September 19th, 2025 13:39
Dead or Alive
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a game show that should be on TV. A fun read
September 18th, 2025 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a game show that should be on TV. A fun read
September 18th, 2025 17:06
Dead or Alive
Fred1794 said:
Interesting story about a kind of Killing Game. Mysterious and interesting in its premise, reads like a script of a television show.
September 18th, 2025 16:50
Fred1794 said:
Interesting story about a kind of Killing Game. Mysterious and interesting in its premise, reads like a script of a television show.
September 18th, 2025 16:50
Voices Beyond the Cross
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a heartfelt and vivid story of fear, growth, and spiritual discovery. The nightmare is intense, and the ending feels peaceful and empowering. Nicely written story in poetic form.
September 17th, 2025 17:08
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a heartfelt and vivid story of fear, growth, and spiritual discovery. The nightmare is intense, and the ending feels peaceful and empowering. Nicely written story in poetic form.
September 17th, 2025 17:08
Voices Beyond the Cross
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of belief and disbelief. One\'s thoughts shaped by parents and those around us and a need to have our own thoughts and beliefs. Well done
September 17th, 2025 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of belief and disbelief. One\'s thoughts shaped by parents and those around us and a need to have our own thoughts and beliefs. Well done
September 17th, 2025 14:54
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