Comments received on poems by Xalvazora
People-Pleasing
Poetic_Princess said:
This is very good as well as relatable!
October 9th, 2025 21:18
Poetic_Princess said:
This is very good as well as relatable!
October 9th, 2025 21:18
Diagnosis: Doubt
NinjaGirl said:
What a difficult position to be in...I totally relate. Things ended up not working out for the friendship...but now we\'re sort of friends again. It\'s one of those things. I suggest just being kind, even if they\'re lying.
October 8th, 2025 20:25
NinjaGirl said:
What a difficult position to be in...I totally relate. Things ended up not working out for the friendship...but now we\'re sort of friends again. It\'s one of those things. I suggest just being kind, even if they\'re lying.
October 8th, 2025 20:25
Diagnosis: Doubt
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with trust and belief and then doubt steps in and suspicion is the undermining of friendships. A wonderful write
October 8th, 2025 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with trust and belief and then doubt steps in and suspicion is the undermining of friendships. A wonderful write
October 8th, 2025 14:55
The Crown of Laurel
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of value in the unseen. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of value in the unseen. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 11:16
Red Lights
2781 said:
Well, I hope he doesn\'t mess her up to bad. She seemed like a nice girl.
October 3rd, 2025 08:35
2781 said:
Well, I hope he doesn\'t mess her up to bad. She seemed like a nice girl.
October 3rd, 2025 08:35
Red Lights
Paul Bell said:
Looks like the red light turned green for go, go, go.
Good to see a bit of eroticism. Could have sworn the site was celibate.
October 3rd, 2025 08:10
Paul Bell said:
Looks like the red light turned green for go, go, go.
Good to see a bit of eroticism. Could have sworn the site was celibate.
October 3rd, 2025 08:10
Red Lights
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual, sexual, erotic poem of pleasure. Full of desire it presses on.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual, sexual, erotic poem of pleasure. Full of desire it presses on.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
The Archer and the Witch
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with some most wonderful images that shine through. Mythical in nature it tells its story in good meter. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with some most wonderful images that shine through. Mythical in nature it tells its story in good meter. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 19:34
People-Pleasing
sorenbarrett said:
A tale of life and how it works or rather doesn\'t work. Well written
September 26th, 2025 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A tale of life and how it works or rather doesn\'t work. Well written
September 26th, 2025 12:52
I Escaped Groundhog Day
sorenbarrett said:
When each day seems as the last and life runs full circle it speaks of how to alter it. A most thought provoking write
September 19th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
When each day seems as the last and life runs full circle it speaks of how to alter it. A most thought provoking write
September 19th, 2025 13:39
Dead or Alive
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a game show that should be on TV. A fun read
September 18th, 2025 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a game show that should be on TV. A fun read
September 18th, 2025 17:06
Dead or Alive
Fred1794 said:
Interesting story about a kind of Killing Game. Mysterious and interesting in its premise, reads like a script of a television show.
September 18th, 2025 16:50
Fred1794 said:
Interesting story about a kind of Killing Game. Mysterious and interesting in its premise, reads like a script of a television show.
September 18th, 2025 16:50
Voices Beyond the Cross
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a heartfelt and vivid story of fear, growth, and spiritual discovery. The nightmare is intense, and the ending feels peaceful and empowering. Nicely written story in poetic form.
September 17th, 2025 17:08
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a heartfelt and vivid story of fear, growth, and spiritual discovery. The nightmare is intense, and the ending feels peaceful and empowering. Nicely written story in poetic form.
September 17th, 2025 17:08
Voices Beyond the Cross
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of belief and disbelief. One\'s thoughts shaped by parents and those around us and a need to have our own thoughts and beliefs. Well done
September 17th, 2025 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of belief and disbelief. One\'s thoughts shaped by parents and those around us and a need to have our own thoughts and beliefs. Well done
September 17th, 2025 14:54
Games I Never Wanted To Play
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks out of fear. Childlike yet extending beyond that into an adults eyes and feelings. Tragic
September 16th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks out of fear. Childlike yet extending beyond that into an adults eyes and feelings. Tragic
September 16th, 2025 04:29
Unspoken Confession
Poetic Licence said:
A dilemma many have come across, where the boundaries can easily become blurred, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 06:52
Poetic Licence said:
A dilemma many have come across, where the boundaries can easily become blurred, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 06:52
Unspoken Confession
sorenbarrett said:
Values explored in this poem and boundaries where one begins and the other ends fuzzy areas. Well written with a question formate. Loved it
August 18th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Values explored in this poem and boundaries where one begins and the other ends fuzzy areas. Well written with a question formate. Loved it
August 18th, 2025 04:26
Clubs, Hearts, Diamonds, & Spades
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting and clever write, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 15:57
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting and clever write, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 15:57
Clubs, Hearts, Diamonds, & Spades
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write so identifiable. What card would be best to play? Mind provoking many that play each suit loose. Good read
August 5th, 2025 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write so identifiable. What card would be best to play? Mind provoking many that play each suit loose. Good read
August 5th, 2025 14:05
Envy to Empathy
Poetic Licence said:
A lesson learned and friendship born, you cannot judge by only what you can see , enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
A lesson learned and friendship born, you cannot judge by only what you can see , enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:17
Envy to Empathy
sorenbarrett said:
A confession in a poem a confession of friendship and feelings that need expression. Well done
August 2nd, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A confession in a poem a confession of friendship and feelings that need expression. Well done
August 2nd, 2025 04:29
Making Ground Beef
Poetic Licence said:
That had wetted my appetite, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 11:55
Poetic Licence said:
That had wetted my appetite, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 11:55
Making Ground Beef
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I have done it many times and you only left out burns from the oil spatters. Well done just like the beef
July 23rd, 2025 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I have done it many times and you only left out burns from the oil spatters. Well done just like the beef
July 23rd, 2025 11:31
Making Ground Beef
Cheeky Missy said:
Ground beef only needs salt to taste and all ton of diced onion, unless you\'re crafting a different dish, such as taco meat. Nicely rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 23rd, 2025 11:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Ground beef only needs salt to taste and all ton of diced onion, unless you\'re crafting a different dish, such as taco meat. Nicely rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 23rd, 2025 11:02
I Said No
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and tragic write that cuts to the heart, you can feel the tension rising as you read the write as you come to the horrific conclusion of abuse, nicely expressed and written, wishing you all the best
July 17th, 2025 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and tragic write that cuts to the heart, you can feel the tension rising as you read the write as you come to the horrific conclusion of abuse, nicely expressed and written, wishing you all the best
July 17th, 2025 12:10
I Said No
Priya Tomar said:
The story has tragic tone.....
Love has become a tool of exploitation.....
Reveal your anxiety by writing ......
July 17th, 2025 11:09
Priya Tomar said:
The story has tragic tone.....
Love has become a tool of exploitation.....
Reveal your anxiety by writing ......
July 17th, 2025 11:09
I Said No
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a story of going beyond the boundaries that one feels. Graphic and dark. Well written in short bursts that convey the urgency and anxiety of the situation.
July 17th, 2025 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a story of going beyond the boundaries that one feels. Graphic and dark. Well written in short bursts that convey the urgency and anxiety of the situation.
July 17th, 2025 11:01
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