Comments received on poems by Xalvazora
You\'re Not In Control Anymore
Poetic Licence said:
That gets the message across loud and clear, I am in control, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 11:06
Poetic Licence said:
That gets the message across loud and clear, I am in control, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 11:06
You\'re Not In Control Anymore
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of a one way conversation about growth and tolerance. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of a one way conversation about growth and tolerance. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2025 10:07
Talk To Me
Poetic Licence said:
On hand a plea for a chance to understand and know someone better, which also highlights the defensive nature of some people, who fear letting there guard down will cost them dearly, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 08:16
Poetic Licence said:
On hand a plea for a chance to understand and know someone better, which also highlights the defensive nature of some people, who fear letting there guard down will cost them dearly, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 08:16
Talk To Me
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for openness and understanding. Not understanding that such openness may lead to rejection due to needs and desires being so different. Well written
May 28th, 2025 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for openness and understanding. Not understanding that such openness may lead to rejection due to needs and desires being so different. Well written
May 28th, 2025 07:32
I Don\'t Owe You
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write over coming to terms with a diffucult childhood, having the strength now to state their own feelings to their mother, nicely expressed and written
May 27th, 2025 13:07
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write over coming to terms with a diffucult childhood, having the strength now to state their own feelings to their mother, nicely expressed and written
May 27th, 2025 13:07
I Don\'t Owe You
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and strongly stated this poem is a declaration of one\'s own feelings. Nicely composed it rings with sincerity.
May 27th, 2025 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and strongly stated this poem is a declaration of one\'s own feelings. Nicely composed it rings with sincerity.
May 27th, 2025 12:21
Don\'t Let It Stress You Out
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write as many will know people just like this, written with care for their friend but wishing they would change, nicely expressed and written
May 26th, 2025 16:34
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write as many will know people just like this, written with care for their friend but wishing they would change, nicely expressed and written
May 26th, 2025 16:34
Don\'t Let It Stress You Out
sorenbarrett said:
We all have met such people if not live with them as friends and family. A most real write that touches through its relatability. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
We all have met such people if not live with them as friends and family. A most real write that touches through its relatability. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 14:52
Dreams
NafisaSB said:
this dichotomy does exist sometimes, until whatever is stronger takes over - and you either completely love or loathe..
makes one thinkdeep
May 13th, 2025 01:12
NafisaSB said:
this dichotomy does exist sometimes, until whatever is stronger takes over - and you either completely love or loathe..
makes one thinkdeep
May 13th, 2025 01:12
Love
Poetic Licence said:
Such a true write, if we are honest none of us really understand what love is and the many sides to it, nicely written, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 14:04
Poetic Licence said:
Such a true write, if we are honest none of us really understand what love is and the many sides to it, nicely written, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 14:04
Love
sorenbarrett said:
What we call love has so many aspects all under one word. Everyone confused by its generalization say they love and no one knows what they mean. A great write
May 12th, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
What we call love has so many aspects all under one word. Everyone confused by its generalization say they love and no one knows what they mean. A great write
May 12th, 2025 11:51
My Voice
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Speak what you know, what you wish, that which you are, into poetry. The eyes of the reader can sometimes hear the voices in the void, a powerful write this is! Much enjoyed this poem, inspiring!
May 12th, 2025 02:16
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Speak what you know, what you wish, that which you are, into poetry. The eyes of the reader can sometimes hear the voices in the void, a powerful write this is! Much enjoyed this poem, inspiring!
May 12th, 2025 02:16
My Voice
Poetic Licence said:
If you have the strength and desire to persist, you will he heard, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 11:26
Poetic Licence said:
If you have the strength and desire to persist, you will he heard, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 11:26
My Voice
Cheeky Missy said:
From experience, I\'d say you\'ll find it when and where you\'re least expecting it, and if you lose sight of that goal you\'ll realize it. Hopefully that\'s not too convoluted. Beautifully rendered with a delightful poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 11:02
Cheeky Missy said:
From experience, I\'d say you\'ll find it when and where you\'re least expecting it, and if you lose sight of that goal you\'ll realize it. Hopefully that\'s not too convoluted. Beautifully rendered with a delightful poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 11:02
Be My Guide
sorenbarrett said:
We all need a guide in this world without direction. This poem could be romantic or just existential. Very nice
May 10th, 2025 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
We all need a guide in this world without direction. This poem could be romantic or just existential. Very nice
May 10th, 2025 11:45
Dreams
RSM0812 said:
This invokes to me the complicated emotions of love and finding a new love somewhere in the multitude of a vast universe.
May 10th, 2025 06:22
RSM0812 said:
This invokes to me the complicated emotions of love and finding a new love somewhere in the multitude of a vast universe.
May 10th, 2025 06:22
Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
Some say they are two sides of the same coin, love and hate, can you have one without the other, beautiful write making you ask those questions, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:17
Poetic Licence said:
Some say they are two sides of the same coin, love and hate, can you have one without the other, beautiful write making you ask those questions, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:17
Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
I truly believe that you can not love a person that you do not hate as much as you love. There is a balance in the universe and neither love or hate can exist without the other just as there can not be light without dark, zero without infinity. A very thought provoking poem a fave
May 9th, 2025 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
I truly believe that you can not love a person that you do not hate as much as you love. There is a balance in the universe and neither love or hate can exist without the other just as there can not be light without dark, zero without infinity. A very thought provoking poem a fave
May 9th, 2025 12:55
Depression
Poetic Licence said:
Well written write around the dark subject, keep writing it has helped me through some of the darkness, nicely written
May 9th, 2025 02:12
Poetic Licence said:
Well written write around the dark subject, keep writing it has helped me through some of the darkness, nicely written
May 9th, 2025 02:12
Depression
Jal said:
Excellent write, mate. I\'m on the same boat in using poetry as a way to vent about depression and the many anxieties I had and/or have experienced. It helps alot to write out my feelings, and I hope it equally helps you too. Wishing ya the best 🤘
May 8th, 2025 20:14
Jal said:
Excellent write, mate. I\'m on the same boat in using poetry as a way to vent about depression and the many anxieties I had and/or have experienced. It helps alot to write out my feelings, and I hope it equally helps you too. Wishing ya the best 🤘
May 8th, 2025 20:14
Depression
sorenbarrett said:
A great expression in poetic form of depression in a black form. I too use poetry to work out turmoil and it is a great tool. A lovely write.
May 8th, 2025 17:30
sorenbarrett said:
A great expression in poetic form of depression in a black form. I too use poetry to work out turmoil and it is a great tool. A lovely write.
May 8th, 2025 17:30
