Comments received on poems by Xalvazora



Unspoken Confession
Poetic Licence said:

A dilemma many have come across, where the boundaries can easily become blurred, nicely expressed and written

August 18th, 2025 06:52

Unspoken Confession
sorenbarrett said:

Values explored in this poem and boundaries where one begins and the other ends fuzzy areas. Well written with a question formate. Loved it

August 18th, 2025 04:26

Clubs, Hearts, Diamonds, & Spades
Poetic Licence said:

A very interesting and clever write, enjoyed the read

August 5th, 2025 15:57

Clubs, Hearts, Diamonds, & Spades
sorenbarrett said:

Clever write so identifiable. What card would be best to play? Mind provoking many that play each suit loose. Good read

August 5th, 2025 14:05

Envy to Empathy
Poetic Licence said:

A lesson learned and friendship born, you cannot judge by only what you can see , enjoyed the read

August 2nd, 2025 05:17

Envy to Empathy
sorenbarrett said:

A confession in a poem a confession of friendship and feelings that need expression. Well done

August 2nd, 2025 04:29

Making Ground Beef
Tony36 said:

Love it

July 23rd, 2025 17:49

Making Ground Beef
Poetic Licence said:

That had wetted my appetite, enjoyed the read

July 23rd, 2025 11:55

Making Ground Beef
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed I have done it many times and you only left out burns from the oil spatters. Well done just like the beef

July 23rd, 2025 11:31

Making Ground Beef
Cheeky Missy said:

Ground beef only needs salt to taste and all ton of diced onion, unless you\'re crafting a different dish, such as taco meat. Nicely rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

July 23rd, 2025 11:02

I Said No
Poetic Licence said:

A sad and tragic write that cuts to the heart, you can feel the tension rising as you read the write as you come to the horrific conclusion of abuse, nicely expressed and written, wishing you all the best

July 17th, 2025 12:10

I Said No
Priya Tomar said:

The story has tragic tone.....
Love has become a tool of exploitation.....
Reveal your anxiety by writing ......


July 17th, 2025 11:09

I Said No
sorenbarrett said:

Sad and tragic a story of going beyond the boundaries that one feels. Graphic and dark. Well written in short bursts that convey the urgency and anxiety of the situation.

July 17th, 2025 11:01

Born A Valentine
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of one in search of romance nicely written

July 8th, 2025 15:37

As I Preach to the Choir
Tony36 said:

Beautifully written

July 6th, 2025 08:08

As I Preach to the Choir
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of finally breaking out and putting themselves first for a change, very tired of being controlled and unloved, nicely expressed and written

July 5th, 2025 22:41

As I Preach to the Choir
sorenbarrett said:

I hear the tiredness of this relationship where you feel controlled and unappreciated. Well written

July 5th, 2025 17:29

The Girl in the Cupboard
sorenbarrett said:

Most interesting story that reminds me of Harry Potter in some ways. Nicely done

June 30th, 2025 14:56

Pitch and Tension
Poetic Licence said:

Story nicely told of a relationship that was never meant to be, well written

June 25th, 2025 22:50

Pitch and Tension
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of a relationship not meant to be. From line to line it became more apparent. Well ended.

June 25th, 2025 15:46

Mary Jane
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting write of someone\'s declaration of the enjoyment they get out of smoking weed, interesting the title of your write means something else here

June 16th, 2025 21:23

Mary Jane
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 16th, 2025 20:10

More Than One
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

June 12th, 2025 09:44

More Than One
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting write although I\'m not sure that worshiping one god denies the others. There is a mother and a father to acknowledge one does not deny the other. Each to their own as for me nature and all of its pieces in my god. A lovely write well worked and crafted.

June 12th, 2025 09:24

Impurities
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of judgement, others, self, God. One must decide which is most important. Lovely

June 10th, 2025 13:49

You\'re Not In Control Anymore
Poetic Licence said:

That gets the message across loud and clear, I am in control, nicely expressed and written

May 29th, 2025 11:06

You\'re Not In Control Anymore
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 29th, 2025 10:21

You\'re Not In Control Anymore
sorenbarrett said:

A bit of a one way conversation about growth and tolerance. Nicely done.

May 29th, 2025 10:07

Talk To Me
Poetic Licence said:

On hand a plea for a chance to understand and know someone better, which also highlights the defensive nature of some people, who fear letting there guard down will cost them dearly, nicely expressed and written

May 28th, 2025 08:16

Talk To Me
sorenbarrett said:

A plea for openness and understanding. Not understanding that such openness may lead to rejection due to needs and desires being so different. Well written

May 28th, 2025 07:32

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