Comments received on poems by Xalvazora
Making Ground Beef
Poetic Licence said:
That had wetted my appetite, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 11:55
Poetic Licence said:
That had wetted my appetite, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 11:55
Making Ground Beef
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I have done it many times and you only left out burns from the oil spatters. Well done just like the beef
July 23rd, 2025 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I have done it many times and you only left out burns from the oil spatters. Well done just like the beef
July 23rd, 2025 11:31
Making Ground Beef
Cheeky Missy said:
Ground beef only needs salt to taste and all ton of diced onion, unless you\'re crafting a different dish, such as taco meat. Nicely rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 23rd, 2025 11:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Ground beef only needs salt to taste and all ton of diced onion, unless you\'re crafting a different dish, such as taco meat. Nicely rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 23rd, 2025 11:02
I Said No
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and tragic write that cuts to the heart, you can feel the tension rising as you read the write as you come to the horrific conclusion of abuse, nicely expressed and written, wishing you all the best
July 17th, 2025 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and tragic write that cuts to the heart, you can feel the tension rising as you read the write as you come to the horrific conclusion of abuse, nicely expressed and written, wishing you all the best
July 17th, 2025 12:10
I Said No
Priya Tomar said:
The story has tragic tone.....
Love has become a tool of exploitation.....
Reveal your anxiety by writing ......
July 17th, 2025 11:09
Priya Tomar said:
The story has tragic tone.....
Love has become a tool of exploitation.....
Reveal your anxiety by writing ......
July 17th, 2025 11:09
I Said No
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a story of going beyond the boundaries that one feels. Graphic and dark. Well written in short bursts that convey the urgency and anxiety of the situation.
July 17th, 2025 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a story of going beyond the boundaries that one feels. Graphic and dark. Well written in short bursts that convey the urgency and anxiety of the situation.
July 17th, 2025 11:01
Born A Valentine
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of one in search of romance nicely written
July 8th, 2025 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of one in search of romance nicely written
July 8th, 2025 15:37
As I Preach to the Choir
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of finally breaking out and putting themselves first for a change, very tired of being controlled and unloved, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:41
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of finally breaking out and putting themselves first for a change, very tired of being controlled and unloved, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:41
As I Preach to the Choir
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the tiredness of this relationship where you feel controlled and unappreciated. Well written
July 5th, 2025 17:29
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the tiredness of this relationship where you feel controlled and unappreciated. Well written
July 5th, 2025 17:29
The Girl in the Cupboard
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting story that reminds me of Harry Potter in some ways. Nicely done
June 30th, 2025 14:56
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting story that reminds me of Harry Potter in some ways. Nicely done
June 30th, 2025 14:56
Pitch and Tension
Poetic Licence said:
Story nicely told of a relationship that was never meant to be, well written
June 25th, 2025 22:50
Poetic Licence said:
Story nicely told of a relationship that was never meant to be, well written
June 25th, 2025 22:50
Pitch and Tension
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a relationship not meant to be. From line to line it became more apparent. Well ended.
June 25th, 2025 15:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a relationship not meant to be. From line to line it became more apparent. Well ended.
June 25th, 2025 15:46
Mary Jane
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write of someone\'s declaration of the enjoyment they get out of smoking weed, interesting the title of your write means something else here
June 16th, 2025 21:23
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write of someone\'s declaration of the enjoyment they get out of smoking weed, interesting the title of your write means something else here
June 16th, 2025 21:23
More Than One
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write although I\'m not sure that worshiping one god denies the others. There is a mother and a father to acknowledge one does not deny the other. Each to their own as for me nature and all of its pieces in my god. A lovely write well worked and crafted.
June 12th, 2025 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write although I\'m not sure that worshiping one god denies the others. There is a mother and a father to acknowledge one does not deny the other. Each to their own as for me nature and all of its pieces in my god. A lovely write well worked and crafted.
June 12th, 2025 09:24
Impurities
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of judgement, others, self, God. One must decide which is most important. Lovely
June 10th, 2025 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of judgement, others, self, God. One must decide which is most important. Lovely
June 10th, 2025 13:49
You\'re Not In Control Anymore
Poetic Licence said:
That gets the message across loud and clear, I am in control, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 11:06
Poetic Licence said:
That gets the message across loud and clear, I am in control, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 11:06
You\'re Not In Control Anymore
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of a one way conversation about growth and tolerance. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of a one way conversation about growth and tolerance. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2025 10:07
Talk To Me
Poetic Licence said:
On hand a plea for a chance to understand and know someone better, which also highlights the defensive nature of some people, who fear letting there guard down will cost them dearly, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 08:16
Poetic Licence said:
On hand a plea for a chance to understand and know someone better, which also highlights the defensive nature of some people, who fear letting there guard down will cost them dearly, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 08:16
Talk To Me
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for openness and understanding. Not understanding that such openness may lead to rejection due to needs and desires being so different. Well written
May 28th, 2025 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for openness and understanding. Not understanding that such openness may lead to rejection due to needs and desires being so different. Well written
May 28th, 2025 07:32
I Don\'t Owe You
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write over coming to terms with a diffucult childhood, having the strength now to state their own feelings to their mother, nicely expressed and written
May 27th, 2025 13:07
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write over coming to terms with a diffucult childhood, having the strength now to state their own feelings to their mother, nicely expressed and written
May 27th, 2025 13:07
I Don\'t Owe You
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and strongly stated this poem is a declaration of one\'s own feelings. Nicely composed it rings with sincerity.
May 27th, 2025 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and strongly stated this poem is a declaration of one\'s own feelings. Nicely composed it rings with sincerity.
May 27th, 2025 12:21
Don\'t Let It Stress You Out
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write as many will know people just like this, written with care for their friend but wishing they would change, nicely expressed and written
May 26th, 2025 16:34
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write as many will know people just like this, written with care for their friend but wishing they would change, nicely expressed and written
May 26th, 2025 16:34
Don\'t Let It Stress You Out
sorenbarrett said:
We all have met such people if not live with them as friends and family. A most real write that touches through its relatability. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
We all have met such people if not live with them as friends and family. A most real write that touches through its relatability. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 14:52
Dreams
NafisaSB said:
this dichotomy does exist sometimes, until whatever is stronger takes over - and you either completely love or loathe..
makes one thinkdeep
May 13th, 2025 01:12
NafisaSB said:
this dichotomy does exist sometimes, until whatever is stronger takes over - and you either completely love or loathe..
makes one thinkdeep
May 13th, 2025 01:12
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