Comments received on poems by Georgia Watson



Harvest maiden
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Georgia, this is mythic and evocative…the cry of Demeter woven into the call to carve one’s own history. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛ Wonderful!

September 10th, 2025 18:52

Harvest maiden
sorenbarrett said:

A good metaphorical read and Demeter needs to know that her daughter resides below. Those pomegranate seeds pack a punch

September 10th, 2025 11:16

Apollo’s call
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Beautifully crafted, Georgia. You’ve captured the weight of myth and memory colliding with our present…prophecy and lament braided together. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 29th, 2025 18:02

Apollo’s call
sorenbarrett said:

This poem evokes feelings of a love lost and broken that speaks of what could have been. This is echoed in the last line a history not written. Well done.

August 29th, 2025 16:15

Oh, a child’s mind.
sorenbarrett said:

So well spoken and the last line ties it up so well. Nicely done

August 19th, 2025 09:24

Oh, a child’s mind.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Another strong poem, Georgia. That final turn...“Curiosity killed the children? No. Life did.\"...that’s such a gut punch of truth. Stark, unflinching, and unforgettable. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 19th, 2025 07:48

I’d let the world burn for you.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Georgia, this poem blazes straight through…love and fire hand in hand. It’s fierce, it’s tender, and it doesn’t let go. Beautiful return, and welcome back! No worries, we\'re here waiting for your if things get too busy! It happens! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 19th, 2025 07:26

I’d let the world burn for you.
Poetic Licence said:

A strong feeling of someone feeling smitten, a dedication of love, enjoyed the read

August 18th, 2025 15:43

I’d let the world burn for you.
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of love and dedication to the point of antihalation. Nicely done

August 18th, 2025 15:38

The driver
peto said:

I\'m glad I came along for the ride driver


August 1st, 2025 19:06

The driver
Poetic Licence said:

Interesting write allowing the reader to interpret in different ways, my sense is it is referring to life and relationships, which quite often can turn out to be car crashes. Some by accident and some by us not paying enough attention, enjoyed the read

August 1st, 2025 17:08

The driver
sorenbarrett said:

Ambiguous and I love it. Not sure if this is the crash of a car when the driver is too busy sightseeing to watch the road and the click of a camera or if it is the loss of a relationship in metaphor as one is not observing what is happening. Well done

August 1st, 2025 13:46

Dear Jason
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of missing someone and it speaks of hope of seeing them again. Lovely

July 25th, 2025 18:14

Englands on fire
sorenbarrett said:

Words from the grave to modern ears. Well written

July 18th, 2025 07:10

Built this city
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Georgia, what a beautifully honest piece. The repetition gives it this steady emotional rhythm...like the speaker is trying to hold something together even as it slips. That last stanza lays the truth down gently. Powerful work. 🌹👏

July 18th, 2025 06:30

Built this city
Poetic Licence said:

Feels like a heartfelt write of sadness over the loss of a close possibly parental relationship , very well expressed write

July 17th, 2025 09:58

Built this city
sorenbarrett said:

A mournful and sad poem that speaks to loneliness and to loss. Well done

July 17th, 2025 09:35

When I flew too close to the sun.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Georgia, what an unflinching poem. I totes dig and respect that, my friend. Love the Icarus image, but what got me was the deeper fear...not the fall itself, but being lost with no goodbye. That’s what stays. And your ending is brutal in its honesty. You gave weight to what people usually hide. 🌹👏 Much appreciation for this, my friend!

July 16th, 2025 20:44

When I flew too close to the sun.
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of reaching for what is not there. A most lovely write

July 16th, 2025 18:14

Put on your happy face
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love this, Georgia. A fave. That last line wraps around you like a lifeline...quiet but firm. I felt the weight in every line, my friend...and the resilience too. Keep writing through it. 🌹👏

July 15th, 2025 14:05

Put on your happy face
sorenbarrett said:

Being fragile in one aspect does not mean one has to be fragile in all. A poignant write

July 14th, 2025 14:50

Line up the constellations
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow, Georgia! Wow. That line...“my stars are shaped like scars”...wrecked me in the best way. I love how you wrap cosmic imagery around very human pain and plea. It reads like a prayer whispered into the void, hoping someone’s still listening. 🌹👏 Excellent job, my dear friend! A fave.

July 14th, 2025 06:36

Line up the constellations
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 13th, 2025 09:55

Line up the constellations
2781 said:

Yes, time has always been of the essence

July 13th, 2025 09:35

Line up the constellations
sorenbarrett said:

Diametrically opposed put together in completion using wonderful poetic wording to send a message of truth that rings out loud. Lovley

July 13th, 2025 09:34

I understand, don’t I?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh Georgia…this one hit that quiet ache so many know but rarely name. 😔 That looping, reaching voice—trying to make peace with pain while still questioning it—it’s raw and real. You captured that tension between “I get it” and “I don’t, not really” so well. Thank you for your honesty here. 🌹👏 A fave!

July 9th, 2025 10:25

I understand, don’t I?
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 8th, 2025 15:36

I understand, don’t I?
Poetic Licence said:

A sad write of the effects and sadness of being alone, and the hundred questions you ask yourself repeatedly trying to understand why this is happening, nicely expressed and written

July 8th, 2025 13:12

I understand, don’t I?
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of confusion as to blame, the game, how to be, how to see. A poem of loneliness and sadness. Questions unanswered raw and painful

July 8th, 2025 13:02

BARE YOUR TEETH AT ME
Tony36 said:

Amazing write

July 7th, 2025 19:11

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