Comments received on poems by Micah Finchley
The fox
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Micah...I wanted that fox to get away so badly. Iβm upset and thoroughly pissed at the hunter. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 23rd, 2026 17:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Micah...I wanted that fox to get away so badly. Iβm upset and thoroughly pissed at the hunter. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 23rd, 2026 17:56
The fox
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but nicely described. I have hated hunting since I killed a bird with a bb gun when young. It was a waste or maybe not since it deterred me from hunting afterwards. My father was a hunter bringing home pheasants, duck and deer but I never liked it and felt it was a waste, he stopped after a while and saw no one would eat it. Nice write
October 23rd, 2026 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but nicely described. I have hated hunting since I killed a bird with a bb gun when young. It was a waste or maybe not since it deterred me from hunting afterwards. My father was a hunter bringing home pheasants, duck and deer but I never liked it and felt it was a waste, he stopped after a while and saw no one would eat it. Nice write
October 23rd, 2026 16:48
Meat and Cheese
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Micah...I wish I could have pulled up a chair. Iβm sorry you were left feeling like you didnβt matter. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 23rd, 2026 16:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Micah...I wish I could have pulled up a chair. Iβm sorry you were left feeling like you didnβt matter. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 23rd, 2026 16:31
The bluebirds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, as a parent, I find myself looking back at my own childhood while watching my daughters navigate adulthood. It\'s quite something to experience life from both sides of that equation. Thanks for getting me reflecting today! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 22nd, 2026 17:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, as a parent, I find myself looking back at my own childhood while watching my daughters navigate adulthood. It\'s quite something to experience life from both sides of that equation. Thanks for getting me reflecting today! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 22nd, 2026 17:27
Meat and Cheese
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is about to me the ingratitude people display when something is offered. It is sad when someone goes out of their way to give, especially something that costs them and others show no appreciation. Well done
October 22nd, 2026 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is about to me the ingratitude people display when something is offered. It is sad when someone goes out of their way to give, especially something that costs them and others show no appreciation. Well done
October 22nd, 2026 16:20
The day after
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this one hit me hard. I\'ve known some dark days myself, and reading this brought back some difficult memories. I hope you\'re doing okay, my friend, and that you know you don\'t have to face whatever you\'re going through alone. Sending you love and strength. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 16th, 2026 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this one hit me hard. I\'ve known some dark days myself, and reading this brought back some difficult memories. I hope you\'re doing okay, my friend, and that you know you don\'t have to face whatever you\'re going through alone. Sending you love and strength. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 16th, 2026 10:58
The day after
sorenbarrett said:
Although the world goes on those that knew you will experience an impact. Nicely written
October 15th, 2026 18:27
sorenbarrett said:
Although the world goes on those that knew you will experience an impact. Nicely written
October 15th, 2026 18:27
The path
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic confession and exploration of friendship. Well done
October 15th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic confession and exploration of friendship. Well done
October 15th, 2026 04:08
The path
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this one hurts, my friend. Especially knowing what you\'ve shared about the experience. I hope you\'re beginning to recognize that you deserve friendships where you never have to question whether you\'re wanted. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 14th, 2026 23:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this one hurts, my friend. Especially knowing what you\'ve shared about the experience. I hope you\'re beginning to recognize that you deserve friendships where you never have to question whether you\'re wanted. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 14th, 2026 23:16
Burn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck, Micah...Iβm angry, and I wish I could give you a hug. You deserve to be here, exactly as you are. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 9th, 2026 11:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck, Micah...Iβm angry, and I wish I could give you a hug. You deserve to be here, exactly as you are. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 9th, 2026 11:38
Ben
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Micah. I wish I could reach through this screen and give you a hug, brother. I\'m so sorry. Much love to you, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈοΏ½
October 7th, 2026 21:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Micah. I wish I could reach through this screen and give you a hug, brother. I\'m so sorry. Much love to you, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈοΏ½
October 7th, 2026 21:53
The doves carry messages
sorenbarrett said:
If only doves could talk. This poem is unsettling because I don\'t know what type of messages they carry but it feels ominous. Well done
October 5th, 2026 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
If only doves could talk. This poem is unsettling because I don\'t know what type of messages they carry but it feels ominous. Well done
October 5th, 2026 16:45
The doves carry messages
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this has the feel of a warning whispered just loudly enough to make me pay attention. Nicely done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 5th, 2026 14:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this has the feel of a warning whispered just loudly enough to make me pay attention. Nicely done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 5th, 2026 14:20
Give up.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this one has fight in it. The reflection tells you to quit, and you answer back with a smile and a middle finger...that is the heartbeat of the whole thing for me. Strong write. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 3rd, 2026 06:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this one has fight in it. The reflection tells you to quit, and you answer back with a smile and a middle finger...that is the heartbeat of the whole thing for me. Strong write. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 3rd, 2026 06:34
Give up.
sorenbarrett said:
If you want something for nothing get more sleep dreams are the only place that that happens. A fun read and I hear the determination stifled by lethargy. Well done.
October 2nd, 2026 17:46
sorenbarrett said:
If you want something for nothing get more sleep dreams are the only place that that happens. A fun read and I hear the determination stifled by lethargy. Well done.
October 2nd, 2026 17:46
LONG LIVE!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, you reached the point where holding back was no longer an option. I felt that urgency. Long live the freaks, my friend! β πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 21st, 2026 20:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, you reached the point where holding back was no longer an option. I felt that urgency. Long live the freaks, my friend! β πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 21st, 2026 20:32
Ode to the king
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It makes sense just fine, Micah...kingdom gone, bodies everywhere, and two men still standing. Hell of a scene. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 20th, 2026 18:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It makes sense just fine, Micah...kingdom gone, bodies everywhere, and two men still standing. Hell of a scene. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 20th, 2026 18:20
Ode to the king
sorenbarrett said:
We are all pawns in a game of chess. Sacrificed to obtain a greater goal. Traded for advantage. Nicely written
September 20th, 2026 16:34
sorenbarrett said:
We are all pawns in a game of chess. Sacrificed to obtain a greater goal. Traded for advantage. Nicely written
September 20th, 2026 16:34
The sunspot
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That mirror got me, Micah. Been there...when even your own reflection feels like it belongs to somebody else. Really well done on this and I can certainly relate, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 19th, 2026 14:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That mirror got me, Micah. Been there...when even your own reflection feels like it belongs to somebody else. Really well done on this and I can certainly relate, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 19th, 2026 14:11
The sunspot
sorenbarrett said:
Sunspot a place of sun and I take it it is in the mind. Well written
September 18th, 2026 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
Sunspot a place of sun and I take it it is in the mind. Well written
September 18th, 2026 12:49
The Scorpions inside
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this is visceral and unrelenting...the repeated return makes the suffering feel impossible to escape. Powerful writing, but more importantly, I hope the person behind it is safe and not carrying this alone. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2026 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this is visceral and unrelenting...the repeated return makes the suffering feel impossible to escape. Powerful writing, but more importantly, I hope the person behind it is safe and not carrying this alone. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2026 10:13
The Scorpions inside
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and morbid it speaks of death. Scorpions the sign of betrayal and eating you. Well written
September 16th, 2026 17:56
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and morbid it speaks of death. Scorpions the sign of betrayal and eating you. Well written
September 16th, 2026 17:56
Ring oβ ring
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dark and vivid, Micah! The repetition keeps tightening the dread until that final moment feels completely unavoidable. This carries the weight and atmosphere of a gothic nightmare. Excellent write, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 11th, 2026 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dark and vivid, Micah! The repetition keeps tightening the dread until that final moment feels completely unavoidable. This carries the weight and atmosphere of a gothic nightmare. Excellent write, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 11th, 2026 08:13
Bones.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, what a visceral and deeply moving piece. The desperation to reshape the body is brutal, but the ending transforms that pain into something capable of carrying the true self forward. Absolutely beautiful work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 10th, 2026 21:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, what a visceral and deeply moving piece. The desperation to reshape the body is brutal, but the ending transforms that pain into something capable of carrying the true self forward. Absolutely beautiful work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 10th, 2026 21:23
Bones.
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder they say. They also say it is only skin deep. I look at beauty different now that I am old. Good write.
September 9th, 2026 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder they say. They also say it is only skin deep. I look at beauty different now that I am old. Good write.
September 9th, 2026 16:04
Purest of my love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this is heartbreak poured straight onto the page. The archaic voice gives the separation the weight of an ancient tragedy, while the speakerβs devotion remains painfully alive. Sometimes farewell does not end loveβ¦it simply accepts that love will not be returned. Powerful work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 28th, 2026 17:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Micah, this is heartbreak poured straight onto the page. The archaic voice gives the separation the weight of an ancient tragedy, while the speakerβs devotion remains painfully alive. Sometimes farewell does not end loveβ¦it simply accepts that love will not be returned. Powerful work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 28th, 2026 17:47
Purest of my love
sorenbarrett said:
A love unrequited and a sad write well done
August 28th, 2026 16:52
sorenbarrett said:
A love unrequited and a sad write well done
August 28th, 2026 16:52
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