Comments received on poems by Vanna
Sweet Syrup
sorenbarrett said:
The term sweet syrup is most interesting not only is it sticky and slow moving but sweet in the sense that pain can bee sweet. Well written
December 9th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
The term sweet syrup is most interesting not only is it sticky and slow moving but sweet in the sense that pain can bee sweet. Well written
December 9th, 2025 03:52
The Last One to Know the Sequel
sorenbarrett said:
Love can blind in more than one way. A most interesting write about a common topic in such a different way. Loved it
December 8th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Love can blind in more than one way. A most interesting write about a common topic in such a different way. Loved it
December 8th, 2025 04:12
The Last One to Know the Sequel
NinjaGirl said:
Lovely poem! And cute story...it\'s often that it\'s a good match when others see it before we do!
December 7th, 2025 20:32
NinjaGirl said:
Lovely poem! And cute story...it\'s often that it\'s a good match when others see it before we do!
December 7th, 2025 20:32
Somebody Like That
Bella Shepard said:
Life is a series of hello\'s and goodbye\'s, and you capture beautifully the transient nature of relationships, lessons to be learned. The wisdom to recognize the true value of another, even in hindsight, is a step towards finding something more meaningful and fulfilling, never say never, it comes when you least expect it. A very honest and well written piece!
December 7th, 2025 12:48
Bella Shepard said:
Life is a series of hello\'s and goodbye\'s, and you capture beautifully the transient nature of relationships, lessons to be learned. The wisdom to recognize the true value of another, even in hindsight, is a step towards finding something more meaningful and fulfilling, never say never, it comes when you least expect it. A very honest and well written piece!
December 7th, 2025 12:48
Somebody Like That
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks to growing up and the disillusionment that goes with it. Knights in shining armor, princesses, and happy ever after only exists in fairy tales that we leave behind and find a harder world. Well written
December 7th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks to growing up and the disillusionment that goes with it. Knights in shining armor, princesses, and happy ever after only exists in fairy tales that we leave behind and find a harder world. Well written
December 7th, 2025 03:49
The Girl in the mirror
Iris Nazarene said:
This is extremely relatable. Love how you wrote this piece, it\'s beautifully written out.
December 7th, 2025 00:29
Iris Nazarene said:
This is extremely relatable. Love how you wrote this piece, it\'s beautifully written out.
December 7th, 2025 00:29
Somebody Like That
freyaaa said:
Twin is back and better than ever 🔥🔥 We are so bagging them trust 🤞🤞
December 6th, 2025 23:07
freyaaa said:
Twin is back and better than ever 🔥🔥 We are so bagging them trust 🤞🤞
December 6th, 2025 23:07
Time Doesn’t Heal
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Fresh cuts from soft words, deep bruises from silence.\" stunning line.
August 18th, 2025 09:06
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Fresh cuts from soft words, deep bruises from silence.\" stunning line.
August 18th, 2025 09:06
Muted
sorenbarrett said:
Well imaged and good allegory employed to set the rather melancholic mood here. Nicely written
July 29th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Well imaged and good allegory employed to set the rather melancholic mood here. Nicely written
July 29th, 2025 04:19
Muted
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Excellently rendered with exquisite imagery and a gripping poignancy. I love it. Thank you for sharing. (And of course, I know how you feel.)
July 28th, 2025 22:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Excellently rendered with exquisite imagery and a gripping poignancy. I love it. Thank you for sharing. (And of course, I know how you feel.)
July 28th, 2025 22:59
The Last to Know
sorenbarrett said:
A raw poem that takes the topic of self awareness and puts it in question form. A nicely composed work that makes us all reflect
July 27th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A raw poem that takes the topic of self awareness and puts it in question form. A nicely composed work that makes us all reflect
July 27th, 2025 05:06
When the Mask Slips
sorenbarrett said:
A poignant write about today\'s world. Nicely stated and when there is nothing you can say just act.
July 22nd, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poignant write about today\'s world. Nicely stated and when there is nothing you can say just act.
July 22nd, 2025 04:05
Ghost and Puppy
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like the cure to this is meditation. Clearing the mind of all the dustractions of other peoples thoughts and actions. Nice write.
July 21st, 2025 09:18
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like the cure to this is meditation. Clearing the mind of all the dustractions of other peoples thoughts and actions. Nice write.
July 21st, 2025 09:18
Ghost and Puppy
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one in metaphor has to be thought about to be understood and even then is deeply psychological. When guilt chases pain away it is a difficult day indeed. Very nicely done.
July 20th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one in metaphor has to be thought about to be understood and even then is deeply psychological. When guilt chases pain away it is a difficult day indeed. Very nicely done.
July 20th, 2025 03:57
The Day No One Asked
sorenbarrett said:
A world that moves too fast to care where social distance is growing by the minute and one is more concerned with the functioning of one\'s cell phone than another person. Good write that is sad. Hope you are doing okay.
July 19th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
A world that moves too fast to care where social distance is growing by the minute and one is more concerned with the functioning of one\'s cell phone than another person. Good write that is sad. Hope you are doing okay.
July 19th, 2025 04:24
The Day No One Asked
Brynlee said:
Gosh, I really enjoyed this read! Really well done.
July 19th, 2025 00:34
Brynlee said:
Gosh, I really enjoyed this read! Really well done.
July 19th, 2025 00:34
Not Yet
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor encompases this poem and it speaks to seeing and distinguishing the truth from fantasy\'s illusions. Nicely done
July 18th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor encompases this poem and it speaks to seeing and distinguishing the truth from fantasy\'s illusions. Nicely done
July 18th, 2025 03:50
Time Doesn’t Heal
sorenbarrett said:
A strong a powerful write that oozes pain. There needs to be a coagulant to stop the hemorrhage and if time is not it the question becomes what else? A change in point of view works for me but then they call that insanity. A most mind provoking read. Well done
July 15th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A strong a powerful write that oozes pain. There needs to be a coagulant to stop the hemorrhage and if time is not it the question becomes what else? A change in point of view works for me but then they call that insanity. A most mind provoking read. Well done
July 15th, 2025 04:35
I Left the Door Open for You
sorenbarrett said:
Night keeps its secrets. A raw write of needing a mask under light. Well done
July 13th, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
Night keeps its secrets. A raw write of needing a mask under light. Well done
July 13th, 2025 07:47
My Closest Friend
sorenbarrett said:
I too find the night my best friend, comforting and nondemanding. It listens and holds one in its protecting arms. A lovely write
July 13th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I too find the night my best friend, comforting and nondemanding. It listens and holds one in its protecting arms. A lovely write
July 13th, 2025 04:46
Sleep Isn’t Rest
sorenbarrett said:
There are many possibilities sleep apnea, chronic fatigue syndrome, high levels of anxiety, depression among a few. Your should have your physician check it out.
July 11th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
There are many possibilities sleep apnea, chronic fatigue syndrome, high levels of anxiety, depression among a few. Your should have your physician check it out.
July 11th, 2025 05:18
Sleep Isn’t Rest
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write, relatable to many, when everything gets us down and evetything appears to be a struggle and we get tired of it all, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 01:23
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write, relatable to many, when everything gets us down and evetything appears to be a struggle and we get tired of it all, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 01:23
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