Comments received on poems by Vanna



The Double-Edged Mind
freyaaa said:

twin this is so real

January 16th, 2026 16:53

The Double-Edged Mind
sorenbarrett said:

Ah that is the trick indeed where so many lost at sea drown. A most interesting write blending the intellectual with the practical

January 12th, 2026 03:44

The Double-Edged Mind
NinjaGirl said:

That last line! It\'s so true. We are always trying to read what was said and what wasn\'t... I find that leads to a lot of speculation on my part

January 11th, 2026 23:57

I Haven’t Healed
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem of damage done faith put in the wrong hands. Nicely done

December 15th, 2025 03:41

I Haven’t Healed
freyaaa said:

Real twin 💪💪

December 14th, 2025 22:51

It’s Back Again
sorenbarrett said:

True love does not depend upon liking it is or is not and if it is no defect will deter it. A poem of insecurity provoked by fear of loss. Well written

December 14th, 2025 03:46

My Mask
NafisaSB said:

the more sensitive you are, the more you tend to suffer; so maybe your mask of indifference is making its mark..
However my face always reveals whatever I am feeling at the moment..so sometimes its good, and at others embarrassing...

December 14th, 2025 00:42

It’s Back Again
freyaaa said:

Holy tuff

December 13th, 2025 23:51

My Mask
freyaaa said:

Twin I’m here for you 🫰🫰

December 12th, 2025 20:46

My Mask
sorenbarrett said:

We all wear masks much of the time and this poem speak of this to protect others as well as oneself. A write about a behavior that is common for us in social situations. Nicely done

December 12th, 2025 20:43

Why
Doggerel Dave said:

Good question. So I would suggest you forget about you for a while. and instead focus on the big bad world out there and try to suss that out.

December 12th, 2025 07:20

Why
sorenbarrett said:

This sad reflection begs to be answered with the word for oneself and one\'s sense of joy that then one may impart to others. A most thought provoking piece

December 12th, 2025 04:20

You Handled It so Well
freyaaa said:

Every. Single. Word. Exactly how I feel twin. Here for you always 🫰🫰

December 11th, 2025 16:59

You Handled It so Well
sorenbarrett said:

Perceptions are often different from outside and inside. To others they may never see the pain held inside and feel that everything is all right when it is not. A poem of perspectives and trauma. Nicely written

December 11th, 2025 03:54

Sweet Syrup
freyaaa said:

I knew you were gonna cook when I suggested syrup 🔥🔥

December 10th, 2025 22:19

Sweet Syrup
sorenbarrett said:

The term sweet syrup is most interesting not only is it sticky and slow moving but sweet in the sense that pain can bee sweet. Well written

December 9th, 2025 03:52

The Last One to Know the Sequel
freyaaa said:

Twin this is so real 🫰🫰

December 8th, 2025 21:38

The Last One to Know the Sequel
sorenbarrett said:

Love can blind in more than one way. A most interesting write about a common topic in such a different way. Loved it

December 8th, 2025 04:12

The Last One to Know the Sequel
NinjaGirl said:

Lovely poem! And cute story...it\'s often that it\'s a good match when others see it before we do!

December 7th, 2025 20:32

Somebody Like That
Bella Shepard said:

Life is a series of hello\'s and goodbye\'s, and you capture beautifully the transient nature of relationships, lessons to be learned. The wisdom to recognize the true value of another, even in hindsight, is a step towards finding something more meaningful and fulfilling, never say never, it comes when you least expect it. A very honest and well written piece!

December 7th, 2025 12:48

Somebody Like That
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem that speaks to growing up and the disillusionment that goes with it. Knights in shining armor, princesses, and happy ever after only exists in fairy tales that we leave behind and find a harder world. Well written

December 7th, 2025 03:49

The Girl in the mirror
Iris Nazarene said:

This is extremely relatable. Love how you wrote this piece, it\'s beautifully written out.

December 7th, 2025 00:29

Somebody Like That
freyaaa said:

Twin is back and better than ever 🔥🔥 We are so bagging them trust 🤞🤞

December 6th, 2025 23:07

Time Doesn’t Heal
rebellion_in_sanity said:

\"Fresh cuts from soft words, deep bruises from silence.\" stunning line.

August 18th, 2025 09:06

Muted
sorenbarrett said:

Well imaged and good allegory employed to set the rather melancholic mood here. Nicely written

July 29th, 2025 04:19

Muted
Poetic Licence said:

Enjoyed the read

July 28th, 2025 23:35

Muted
Cheeky Missy said:

Superb. Excellently rendered with exquisite imagery and a gripping poignancy. I love it. Thank you for sharing. (And of course, I know how you feel.)

July 28th, 2025 22:59

The Last to Know
sorenbarrett said:

A raw poem that takes the topic of self awareness and puts it in question form. A nicely composed work that makes us all reflect

July 27th, 2025 05:06

When the Mask Slips
sorenbarrett said:

A poignant write about today\'s world. Nicely stated and when there is nothing you can say just act.

July 22nd, 2025 04:05

Ghost and Puppy
RSM0812 said:

Sounds like the cure to this is meditation. Clearing the mind of all the dustractions of other peoples thoughts and actions. Nice write.

July 21st, 2025 09:18

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