Comments received on poems by Vanna
Muted
sorenbarrett said:
Well imaged and good allegory employed to set the rather melancholic mood here. Nicely written
July 29th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Well imaged and good allegory employed to set the rather melancholic mood here. Nicely written
July 29th, 2025 04:19
Muted
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Excellently rendered with exquisite imagery and a gripping poignancy. I love it. Thank you for sharing. (And of course, I know how you feel.)
July 28th, 2025 22:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Excellently rendered with exquisite imagery and a gripping poignancy. I love it. Thank you for sharing. (And of course, I know how you feel.)
July 28th, 2025 22:59
The Last to Know
sorenbarrett said:
A raw poem that takes the topic of self awareness and puts it in question form. A nicely composed work that makes us all reflect
July 27th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A raw poem that takes the topic of self awareness and puts it in question form. A nicely composed work that makes us all reflect
July 27th, 2025 05:06
When the Mask Slips
sorenbarrett said:
A poignant write about today\'s world. Nicely stated and when there is nothing you can say just act.
July 22nd, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poignant write about today\'s world. Nicely stated and when there is nothing you can say just act.
July 22nd, 2025 04:05
Ghost and Puppy
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like the cure to this is meditation. Clearing the mind of all the dustractions of other peoples thoughts and actions. Nice write.
July 21st, 2025 09:18
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like the cure to this is meditation. Clearing the mind of all the dustractions of other peoples thoughts and actions. Nice write.
July 21st, 2025 09:18
Ghost and Puppy
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one in metaphor has to be thought about to be understood and even then is deeply psychological. When guilt chases pain away it is a difficult day indeed. Very nicely done.
July 20th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one in metaphor has to be thought about to be understood and even then is deeply psychological. When guilt chases pain away it is a difficult day indeed. Very nicely done.
July 20th, 2025 03:57
The Day No One Asked
sorenbarrett said:
A world that moves too fast to care where social distance is growing by the minute and one is more concerned with the functioning of one\'s cell phone than another person. Good write that is sad. Hope you are doing okay.
July 19th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
A world that moves too fast to care where social distance is growing by the minute and one is more concerned with the functioning of one\'s cell phone than another person. Good write that is sad. Hope you are doing okay.
July 19th, 2025 04:24
The Day No One Asked
Brynlee said:
Gosh, I really enjoyed this read! Really well done.
July 19th, 2025 00:34
Brynlee said:
Gosh, I really enjoyed this read! Really well done.
July 19th, 2025 00:34
Not Yet
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor encompases this poem and it speaks to seeing and distinguishing the truth from fantasy\'s illusions. Nicely done
July 18th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor encompases this poem and it speaks to seeing and distinguishing the truth from fantasy\'s illusions. Nicely done
July 18th, 2025 03:50
Time Doesn’t Heal
sorenbarrett said:
A strong a powerful write that oozes pain. There needs to be a coagulant to stop the hemorrhage and if time is not it the question becomes what else? A change in point of view works for me but then they call that insanity. A most mind provoking read. Well done
July 15th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A strong a powerful write that oozes pain. There needs to be a coagulant to stop the hemorrhage and if time is not it the question becomes what else? A change in point of view works for me but then they call that insanity. A most mind provoking read. Well done
July 15th, 2025 04:35
I Left the Door Open for You
sorenbarrett said:
Night keeps its secrets. A raw write of needing a mask under light. Well done
July 13th, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
Night keeps its secrets. A raw write of needing a mask under light. Well done
July 13th, 2025 07:47
My Closest Friend
sorenbarrett said:
I too find the night my best friend, comforting and nondemanding. It listens and holds one in its protecting arms. A lovely write
July 13th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I too find the night my best friend, comforting and nondemanding. It listens and holds one in its protecting arms. A lovely write
July 13th, 2025 04:46
Sleep Isn’t Rest
sorenbarrett said:
There are many possibilities sleep apnea, chronic fatigue syndrome, high levels of anxiety, depression among a few. Your should have your physician check it out.
July 11th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
There are many possibilities sleep apnea, chronic fatigue syndrome, high levels of anxiety, depression among a few. Your should have your physician check it out.
July 11th, 2025 05:18
Sleep Isn’t Rest
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write, relatable to many, when everything gets us down and evetything appears to be a struggle and we get tired of it all, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 01:23
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write, relatable to many, when everything gets us down and evetything appears to be a struggle and we get tired of it all, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 01:23
Invisible Bleeding
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with a familiar voice and the metaphor fits. Emotional wounds bleed and hurt but can not be seen. being invisible they can be denied. A hard read. Well done
July 9th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with a familiar voice and the metaphor fits. Emotional wounds bleed and hurt but can not be seen. being invisible they can be denied. A hard read. Well done
July 9th, 2025 04:08
The Sky Wasn’t Her
sorenbarrett said:
The analogies are great and it makes one wonder why. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
The analogies are great and it makes one wonder why. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 15:01
Helpless Witness
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful, but sad poem. You\'ve expressed your depiction of the situation in a lovely manner, straight-forward and yet poetic. The image of a melting candle will remain in the reader\'s eyes for a while. Good poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 19:43
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful, but sad poem. You\'ve expressed your depiction of the situation in a lovely manner, straight-forward and yet poetic. The image of a melting candle will remain in the reader\'s eyes for a while. Good poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 19:43
Helpless Witness
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of someone changing in front of you, for the worse and there is nothing you can do about it except watch, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 13:43
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of someone changing in front of you, for the worse and there is nothing you can do about it except watch, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 13:43
Helpless Witness
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of gravity pulling at melting wax as the candle bends under its weight of someone changing for what ever cause be it their need or the weight of others on someone too weak to resist. A very nice write of helplessness in a situation that they wish was different.
July 6th, 2025 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of gravity pulling at melting wax as the candle bends under its weight of someone changing for what ever cause be it their need or the weight of others on someone too weak to resist. A very nice write of helplessness in a situation that they wish was different.
July 6th, 2025 12:55
That’s Why
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of something happening that has caused alot of pain, anger and sadness, nicely expressed
July 5th, 2025 05:54
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of something happening that has caused alot of pain, anger and sadness, nicely expressed
July 5th, 2025 05:54
Dear Me
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write telling themselves in the future that everything will be alright and they would of healed, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write telling themselves in the future that everything will be alright and they would of healed, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 05:37
Dear Me
Aurora1 said:
This is a very touching poem, and I could related to every line here, you\'ve done an excellent job, good work! ❤️
July 5th, 2025 04:29
Aurora1 said:
This is a very touching poem, and I could related to every line here, you\'ve done an excellent job, good work! ❤️
July 5th, 2025 04:29
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