Comments received on poems by Vanna
My Closest Friend
sorenbarrett said:
Night keeps its secrets. A raw write of needing a mask under light. Well done
July 13th, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
Night keeps its secrets. A raw write of needing a mask under light. Well done
July 13th, 2025 07:47
My Closest Friend
sorenbarrett said:
I too find the night my best friend, comforting and nondemanding. It listens and holds one in its protecting arms. A lovely write
July 13th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I too find the night my best friend, comforting and nondemanding. It listens and holds one in its protecting arms. A lovely write
July 13th, 2025 04:46
Sleep Isn’t Rest
sorenbarrett said:
There are many possibilities sleep apnea, chronic fatigue syndrome, high levels of anxiety, depression among a few. Your should have your physician check it out.
July 11th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
There are many possibilities sleep apnea, chronic fatigue syndrome, high levels of anxiety, depression among a few. Your should have your physician check it out.
July 11th, 2025 05:18
Sleep Isn’t Rest
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write, relatable to many, when everything gets us down and evetything appears to be a struggle and we get tired of it all, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 01:23
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write, relatable to many, when everything gets us down and evetything appears to be a struggle and we get tired of it all, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 01:23
Invisible Bleeding
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with a familiar voice and the metaphor fits. Emotional wounds bleed and hurt but can not be seen. being invisible they can be denied. A hard read. Well done
July 9th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with a familiar voice and the metaphor fits. Emotional wounds bleed and hurt but can not be seen. being invisible they can be denied. A hard read. Well done
July 9th, 2025 04:08
The Sky Wasn’t Her
sorenbarrett said:
The analogies are great and it makes one wonder why. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
The analogies are great and it makes one wonder why. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 15:01
Helpless Witness
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful, but sad poem. You\'ve expressed your depiction of the situation in a lovely manner, straight-forward and yet poetic. The image of a melting candle will remain in the reader\'s eyes for a while. Good poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 19:43
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful, but sad poem. You\'ve expressed your depiction of the situation in a lovely manner, straight-forward and yet poetic. The image of a melting candle will remain in the reader\'s eyes for a while. Good poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 19:43
Helpless Witness
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of someone changing in front of you, for the worse and there is nothing you can do about it except watch, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 13:43
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of someone changing in front of you, for the worse and there is nothing you can do about it except watch, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 13:43
Helpless Witness
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of gravity pulling at melting wax as the candle bends under its weight of someone changing for what ever cause be it their need or the weight of others on someone too weak to resist. A very nice write of helplessness in a situation that they wish was different.
July 6th, 2025 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of gravity pulling at melting wax as the candle bends under its weight of someone changing for what ever cause be it their need or the weight of others on someone too weak to resist. A very nice write of helplessness in a situation that they wish was different.
July 6th, 2025 12:55
That’s Why
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of something happening that has caused alot of pain, anger and sadness, nicely expressed
July 5th, 2025 05:54
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of something happening that has caused alot of pain, anger and sadness, nicely expressed
July 5th, 2025 05:54
Dear Me
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write telling themselves in the future that everything will be alright and they would of healed, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write telling themselves in the future that everything will be alright and they would of healed, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 05:37
Dear Me
Aurora1 said:
This is a very touching poem, and I could related to every line here, you\'ve done an excellent job, good work! ❤️
July 5th, 2025 04:29
Aurora1 said:
This is a very touching poem, and I could related to every line here, you\'ve done an excellent job, good work! ❤️
July 5th, 2025 04:29
That’s Why
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of pain and hurt that caused a rupture. Well written
July 5th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of pain and hurt that caused a rupture. Well written
July 5th, 2025 04:27
Like Summer
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of where the sun calms the mind and allows some pressure to ease, nicely expressed and written
July 3rd, 2025 19:31
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of where the sun calms the mind and allows some pressure to ease, nicely expressed and written
July 3rd, 2025 19:31
Like Summer
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully expressed pent up feelings released and a lighter feeling where weather and sun relieves the soul. Well written
July 3rd, 2025 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully expressed pent up feelings released and a lighter feeling where weather and sun relieves the soul. Well written
July 3rd, 2025 16:09
I Didn’t Cry for You
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write over the loss of ones self, nicely expressed and written
July 3rd, 2025 00:09
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write over the loss of ones self, nicely expressed and written
July 3rd, 2025 00:09
I Didn’t Cry for You
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss not of another but of oneself and who one was. Well done
July 2nd, 2025 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss not of another but of oneself and who one was. Well done
July 2nd, 2025 13:40
Maze
sorenbarrett said:
A maze is confusing and meant to deceive. Here I hear the indecision of whether return or not is on the agenda. Well written with emotion.
July 1st, 2025 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
A maze is confusing and meant to deceive. Here I hear the indecision of whether return or not is on the agenda. Well written with emotion.
July 1st, 2025 16:21
So the Angel Won
sorenbarrett said:
The difference between forgiving and forgetting is an important one. Nicely done
July 1st, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
The difference between forgiving and forgetting is an important one. Nicely done
July 1st, 2025 05:00
So the Angel Won
Poetic Licence said:
A very good write in order to start the healing process we have to draw the line in the sand and move on, nicely expressed and written
July 1st, 2025 01:42
Poetic Licence said:
A very good write in order to start the healing process we have to draw the line in the sand and move on, nicely expressed and written
July 1st, 2025 01:42
Because I Trusted You
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of how those we trust impact how we think and feel, and sometimes that trust is abused, nicely expressed and written
June 30th, 2025 00:47
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of how those we trust impact how we think and feel, and sometimes that trust is abused, nicely expressed and written
June 30th, 2025 00:47
Because I Trusted You
sorenbarrett said:
Sad how those that we trust can influence our belief in ourselves. A sad but true effect. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
Sad how those that we trust can influence our belief in ourselves. A sad but true effect. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 14:05
Dear You
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of a broken heart and the pain unnoticed. Well written in letter form. Very nice
June 28th, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of a broken heart and the pain unnoticed. Well written in letter form. Very nice
June 28th, 2025 11:51
Invisible Things
sorenbarrett said:
Conflicting emotions that bash and bruise each other leaving only internal marks. A sad poem with a feeling of pain, regret and anger. Well worded
June 27th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
Conflicting emotions that bash and bruise each other leaving only internal marks. A sad poem with a feeling of pain, regret and anger. Well worded
June 27th, 2025 13:54
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