Comments received on poems by Vanna
It’s not a Dream
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw in a way that doesn’t let you look away…that constant circling, trying to push something back that won’t go. It feels immediate and unfiltered, and that’s what makes it land so hard. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw in a way that doesn’t let you look away…that constant circling, trying to push something back that won’t go. It feels immediate and unfiltered, and that’s what makes it land so hard. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:56
It’s not a Dream
sorenbarrett said:
When reality becomes too horrible the mind sometimes makes it a dream. A sand poem of trauma
April 9th, 2026 02:19
sorenbarrett said:
When reality becomes too horrible the mind sometimes makes it a dream. A sand poem of trauma
April 9th, 2026 02:19
Slaughter
freyaaa said:
The rhyming is amazing, beautiful words that illustrate the unrest in this poem!!
April 8th, 2026 21:22
freyaaa said:
The rhyming is amazing, beautiful words that illustrate the unrest in this poem!!
April 8th, 2026 21:22
Fall
freyaaa said:
This is so beautiful lovely poetic king you are doing amazing
April 8th, 2026 21:21
freyaaa said:
This is so beautiful lovely poetic king you are doing amazing
April 8th, 2026 21:21
I Thought I Knew my Home
freyaaa said:
“I never thought my home could be one of those homes” hits so hard twin this is amazing
April 8th, 2026 21:20
freyaaa said:
“I never thought my home could be one of those homes” hits so hard twin this is amazing
April 8th, 2026 21:20
Scream
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, there’s a relentless energy in this that really carries through. The repetition builds that sense of strain, and that final line grounds it in something real and unignorable. It stays with you. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, there’s a relentless energy in this that really carries through. The repetition builds that sense of strain, and that final line grounds it in something real and unignorable. It stays with you. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:56
Scream
sorenbarrett said:
This poem conveys a sense of being caught in a nightmare of being used and helpless at the whims of the world where things are real. Nicely written
March 30th, 2026 03:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem conveys a sense of being caught in a nightmare of being used and helpless at the whims of the world where things are real. Nicely written
March 30th, 2026 03:06
Unheard
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, this comes through loud and urgent…like a chant that refuses to quiet down. The repetition builds that sense of frustration and being unheard, and it hits with a steady, insistent force. It sticks. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, this comes through loud and urgent…like a chant that refuses to quiet down. The repetition builds that sense of frustration and being unheard, and it hits with a steady, insistent force. It sticks. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:38
Slaughter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, there’s real force in this…a repeated cry that builds and refuses to fade. That stark imagery, especially the line about being slaughtered, cuts deep, and the return to prayer keeps it grounded in something hopeful even as it aches. It feels urgent, necessary, and honest. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, there’s real force in this…a repeated cry that builds and refuses to fade. That stark imagery, especially the line about being slaughtered, cuts deep, and the return to prayer keeps it grounded in something hopeful even as it aches. It feels urgent, necessary, and honest. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:14
Unheard
sorenbarrett said:
Valliant soldiers under the command of arrogant and ignorant generals underfunded and who\'s hands are tied by a commander in chief that sees the army as way down the list. For there is no personal gold in educating others that might just see through the veil of deceit that keeps the poor poor and the rich rich. Well written
March 28th, 2026 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
Valliant soldiers under the command of arrogant and ignorant generals underfunded and who\'s hands are tied by a commander in chief that sees the army as way down the list. For there is no personal gold in educating others that might just see through the veil of deceit that keeps the poor poor and the rich rich. Well written
March 28th, 2026 10:49
Slaughter
Allie561 said:
Part of me fears the day will never come, but I hope I can make a change. Great poem Vanna.
March 27th, 2026 18:18
Allie561 said:
Part of me fears the day will never come, but I hope I can make a change. Great poem Vanna.
March 27th, 2026 18:18
Slaughter
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write about a sad subject that begs the reader to understand. Well executed.
March 27th, 2026 17:16
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write about a sad subject that begs the reader to understand. Well executed.
March 27th, 2026 17:16
Fall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, this holds that conflict between control and longing… what begins as intrusion becomes something you can’t release. The emotional swing from resistance to dependence feels honest and heavy. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, this holds that conflict between control and longing… what begins as intrusion becomes something you can’t release. The emotional swing from resistance to dependence feels honest and heavy. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:06
Fall
Allie561 said:
These are questions I catch myself asking. How is it that I hate but can love at the same time? Lovely and relatable poem Vanna, keep writing.
March 26th, 2026 22:56
Allie561 said:
These are questions I catch myself asking. How is it that I hate but can love at the same time? Lovely and relatable poem Vanna, keep writing.
March 26th, 2026 22:56
Fall
sorenbarrett said:
Clever writing of the last line makes the poem both meaningful and humorous. Loved it
March 26th, 2026 20:16
sorenbarrett said:
Clever writing of the last line makes the poem both meaningful and humorous. Loved it
March 26th, 2026 20:16
Fall
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complex emotions associated with love, desire, and attachment. It portrays the struggle of recognizing the duality of a relationship—how it can bring both joy and pain.
March 26th, 2026 19:23
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complex emotions associated with love, desire, and attachment. It portrays the struggle of recognizing the duality of a relationship—how it can bring both joy and pain.
March 26th, 2026 19:23
Hate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, I’ve felt that kind of contradiction…where something pulls at you even when you’re trying to resist it. That mix of nerves, care, and wanting to shut it down all at once…yeah, that’s real. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, I’ve felt that kind of contradiction…where something pulls at you even when you’re trying to resist it. That mix of nerves, care, and wanting to shut it down all at once…yeah, that’s real. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:13
Hate
sorenbarrett said:
So much hate even hating hate. I loved how this turned around at the end. Well done
March 25th, 2026 18:57
sorenbarrett said:
So much hate even hating hate. I loved how this turned around at the end. Well done
March 25th, 2026 18:57
I Thought I Knew my Home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, this carries a painful unraveling…home shifting from something safe into something uncertain and heavy. The repetition of “I thought I knew my home” builds that loss with each line, and the image of becoming a shield really holds the center. It’s honest, difficult, and it lands. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, this carries a painful unraveling…home shifting from something safe into something uncertain and heavy. The repetition of “I thought I knew my home” builds that loss with each line, and the image of becoming a shield really holds the center. It’s honest, difficult, and it lands. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:45
I Thought I Knew my Home
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of when that familiar banter that makes a home turns to chaos and disorder. Nicely written the continued use of \"I thought I knew my home\" echoes throughout redirecting one\'s attention back to the theme. Well done
March 24th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of when that familiar banter that makes a home turns to chaos and disorder. Nicely written the continued use of \"I thought I knew my home\" echoes throughout redirecting one\'s attention back to the theme. Well done
March 24th, 2026 04:09
Nothing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, this hit me hard…that sense of emotional exhaustion where even sadness fades into something heavier and quieter. The way you describe the gray in-between place feels painfully real. It lingers long after reading. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vanna, this hit me hard…that sense of emotional exhaustion where even sadness fades into something heavier and quieter. The way you describe the gray in-between place feels painfully real. It lingers long after reading. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:41
Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition as to the difference between the two not in the sensation but the duration of that sensation and in the return to normal. Well written
March 15th, 2026 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition as to the difference between the two not in the sensation but the duration of that sensation and in the return to normal. Well written
March 15th, 2026 20:51
Nothing
freyaaa said:
So raw and deep, emotional in the best way. Literally amazing. Ts is so tuff you have so much aura big dawg.
March 15th, 2026 20:32
freyaaa said:
So raw and deep, emotional in the best way. Literally amazing. Ts is so tuff you have so much aura big dawg.
March 15th, 2026 20:32
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