Comments received on poems by Vanna
Because I Trusted You
sorenbarrett said:
Sad how those that we trust can influence our belief in ourselves. A sad but true effect. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
Sad how those that we trust can influence our belief in ourselves. A sad but true effect. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 14:05
Dear You
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of a broken heart and the pain unnoticed. Well written in letter form. Very nice
June 28th, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of a broken heart and the pain unnoticed. Well written in letter form. Very nice
June 28th, 2025 11:51
Invisible Things
sorenbarrett said:
Conflicting emotions that bash and bruise each other leaving only internal marks. A sad poem with a feeling of pain, regret and anger. Well worded
June 27th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
Conflicting emotions that bash and bruise each other leaving only internal marks. A sad poem with a feeling of pain, regret and anger. Well worded
June 27th, 2025 13:54
My World of One
sorenbarrett said:
It takes time to heal and it always leaves scars. Good write
June 26th, 2025 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
It takes time to heal and it always leaves scars. Good write
June 26th, 2025 11:52
The Echo
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and a feeling of insignificance but not so you are the wind beneath their wings. A lovely write and a fave
June 25th, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and a feeling of insignificance but not so you are the wind beneath their wings. A lovely write and a fave
June 25th, 2025 14:44
The Echo
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone feeling like they are not seen as their own person and in their own right, overshadowed in everything by their friend. Sad and touching write nicely expressed
June 25th, 2025 13:32
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone feeling like they are not seen as their own person and in their own right, overshadowed in everything by their friend. Sad and touching write nicely expressed
June 25th, 2025 13:32
The Tree in My Yard
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of appearance\'s can be deceiving, as in with us all can look ok on the outside but inside we have died, nicely expressed and written
June 24th, 2025 22:48
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of appearance\'s can be deceiving, as in with us all can look ok on the outside but inside we have died, nicely expressed and written
June 24th, 2025 22:48
The Tree in My Yard
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that speaks about us as well. Nicely written with great images all that apply in this process of quiet rot. Nicely done
June 24th, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that speaks about us as well. Nicely written with great images all that apply in this process of quiet rot. Nicely done
June 24th, 2025 13:12
Why Didn’t You Just Kill Me
sorenbarrett said:
A painful poem of how we incorporate the feelings of more powerful people into our beliefs and how we become accustomed to abuse. Sad
June 23rd, 2025 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A painful poem of how we incorporate the feelings of more powerful people into our beliefs and how we become accustomed to abuse. Sad
June 23rd, 2025 13:22
The Girl in the mirror
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to me something I still do even though I don\'t like what I see and the pain it reminds me off, nicely expressed and written write
June 22nd, 2025 10:30
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to me something I still do even though I don\'t like what I see and the pain it reminds me off, nicely expressed and written write
June 22nd, 2025 10:30
The Girl in the mirror
sorenbarrett said:
We are our own worst critics and looking in the mirror whether real or mental can cause us the most pain. Good write
June 22nd, 2025 10:04
sorenbarrett said:
We are our own worst critics and looking in the mirror whether real or mental can cause us the most pain. Good write
June 22nd, 2025 10:04
The Girl in the mirror
Caring dove said:
We can see a lot when we look in the mirror and often see things we don’t like reflected .. back .
Sometimes I see a stranger in the mirror or I wander who I’m looking at
I like this writing
Guess we need to be loving towards ourselves
Or try
Self love ..
June 22nd, 2025 09:22
Caring dove said:
We can see a lot when we look in the mirror and often see things we don’t like reflected .. back .
Sometimes I see a stranger in the mirror or I wander who I’m looking at
I like this writing
Guess we need to be loving towards ourselves
Or try
Self love ..
June 22nd, 2025 09:22
The Pain of Letting You In
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write which could go to ways, someone hurting you or you beating yourself up and inflicting the emotional and mental pain, nicely expressed and written
June 21st, 2025 14:55
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write which could go to ways, someone hurting you or you beating yourself up and inflicting the emotional and mental pain, nicely expressed and written
June 21st, 2025 14:55
The Pain of Letting You In
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a poem that can be taken two ways. lovely write nicely penned.
June 21st, 2025 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a poem that can be taken two ways. lovely write nicely penned.
June 21st, 2025 13:02
I Watch
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of the breakdown of a good friendship, you can feel the anger and pain, although sitting quietly now you sense it is close to boiling point, nicely expressed and written
June 21st, 2025 12:35
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of the breakdown of a good friendship, you can feel the anger and pain, although sitting quietly now you sense it is close to boiling point, nicely expressed and written
June 21st, 2025 12:35
I Watch
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the anger and resentment oozing from this piece. There is a sense of loathing here a seething rath bubbling in a covered pot where the removal of the lid burns the cook with steam. Well written
June 21st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the anger and resentment oozing from this piece. There is a sense of loathing here a seething rath bubbling in a covered pot where the removal of the lid burns the cook with steam. Well written
June 21st, 2025 04:13
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