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Poetic Licence said:

A sad and touching write of the breakdown of a good friendship, you can feel the anger and pain, although sitting quietly now you sense it is close to boiling point, nicely expressed and written

June 21st, 2025 12:35

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sorenbarrett said:

I can feel the anger and resentment oozing from this piece. There is a sense of loathing here a seething rath bubbling in a covered pot where the removal of the lid burns the cook with steam. Well written

June 21st, 2025 04:13