Comments received on poems by Friendship
Six Months, 23 Days, 14 Hours, 33 Minutes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is bleeding in its rawness. It is a masterpiece of self revelation a baring of the soul not just to the world but to oneself. Nicely crafted it reveals what eyes do not want to see us stuck in time beyond our choice. A most lovely write and a fave
February 17th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is bleeding in its rawness. It is a masterpiece of self revelation a baring of the soul not just to the world but to oneself. Nicely crafted it reveals what eyes do not want to see us stuck in time beyond our choice. A most lovely write and a fave
February 17th, 2026 04:51
Six Months, 23 Days, 14 Hours, 33 Minutes
orchidee said:
Good write F - a personal experience of yours?
February 17th, 2026 03:28
orchidee said:
Good write F - a personal experience of yours?
February 17th, 2026 03:28
Just Another Beautiful Monday
David Wakeling said:
This is real poetry. I like the rhyme and the mixture of common ordinary with the divine.Thats superb.Well done
February 16th, 2026 18:56
David Wakeling said:
This is real poetry. I like the rhyme and the mixture of common ordinary with the divine.Thats superb.Well done
February 16th, 2026 18:56
Just Another Beautiful Monday
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem beautifully reframes an ordinary Monday as something sacred and full of quiet wonder. No day is “just another” if we choose to truly see it.
February 16th, 2026 12:16
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem beautifully reframes an ordinary Monday as something sacred and full of quiet wonder. No day is “just another” if we choose to truly see it.
February 16th, 2026 12:16
Just Another Beautiful Monday
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve given mad Monday a brighter outlook, and the girl was really nice this morning, telling me my train was cancelled.
Still, the sun did pop its head out, so all is good with the world.
February 16th, 2026 09:40
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve given mad Monday a brighter outlook, and the girl was really nice this morning, telling me my train was cancelled.
Still, the sun did pop its head out, so all is good with the world.
February 16th, 2026 09:40
Just Another Beautiful Monday
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for brightening the day and a beautiful poem that beams with positive glow. Most lovely
February 16th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for brightening the day and a beautiful poem that beams with positive glow. Most lovely
February 16th, 2026 06:48
My Dearest Dad—My World Has Crumbled Around Me.
aDarkerMind said:
if we gather the courage to rise from the scars.
a most beautiful poem.
one to fave for sure.
February 15th, 2026 09:43
aDarkerMind said:
if we gather the courage to rise from the scars.
a most beautiful poem.
one to fave for sure.
February 15th, 2026 09:43
Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a warm pulse in this—no cheap roses, just real fellowship poured like good coffee.
You make love bigger than a couple’s whisper; you make it a table where everyone’s got a seat.
February 15th, 2026 09:05
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a warm pulse in this—no cheap roses, just real fellowship poured like good coffee.
You make love bigger than a couple’s whisper; you make it a table where everyone’s got a seat.
February 15th, 2026 09:05
Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends
Paul Bell said:
Nice to see a site cuddle on love day and hopefully many more to come.
February 14th, 2026 13:25
Paul Bell said:
Nice to see a site cuddle on love day and hopefully many more to come.
February 14th, 2026 13:25
Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a communal embrace. From coffee-warm hands to playlists that spin our world…you turn Valentine’s Day into something broader and kinder. The tone is celebratory without being sugary. It honors connection in a grounded way. Lovely piece, dearest Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a communal embrace. From coffee-warm hands to playlists that spin our world…you turn Valentine’s Day into something broader and kinder. The tone is celebratory without being sugary. It honors connection in a grounded way. Lovely piece, dearest Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:52
Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written a friendly wish sent to all. Well done
February 14th, 2026 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written a friendly wish sent to all. Well done
February 14th, 2026 06:44
My Dearest Dad—My World Has Crumbled Around Me.
RSM0812 said:
I lost my dad a year ago from terminal cancer. He was a good man. Hard working. Loyal, generous and tboughtful. Unfortunately in the end he went terribly bad. I can relate to the feeling of loss in this piem. Losing a Father is like losing a guidance and love only he could truly provide. Very emotional write. Great pen.
February 13th, 2026 22:11
RSM0812 said:
I lost my dad a year ago from terminal cancer. He was a good man. Hard working. Loyal, generous and tboughtful. Unfortunately in the end he went terribly bad. I can relate to the feeling of loss in this piem. Losing a Father is like losing a guidance and love only he could truly provide. Very emotional write. Great pen.
February 13th, 2026 22:11
Dual-purpose poem
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Friendship, this has to be a fave. This reminds me, immediately, of the TV show, The Traitors, where one has to read \"between\" the lines to figure out hidden truths and deception (except in this case it doesn\'t end in being backstabbed for a loss of money. 🤣) So, I mean this in the best possible way. You’ve created a voice that sounds undeniably earnest, yet the invitation to question sincerity turns it into a game of perception. Is the despair real… or staged? The steady hope thread keeps us invested. “To breathe the air, to feel the sun\'s warm burns.” feels like both truth and bait. Intriguing work, nay fantastic work! Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Friendship, this has to be a fave. This reminds me, immediately, of the TV show, The Traitors, where one has to read \"between\" the lines to figure out hidden truths and deception (except in this case it doesn\'t end in being backstabbed for a loss of money. 🤣) So, I mean this in the best possible way. You’ve created a voice that sounds undeniably earnest, yet the invitation to question sincerity turns it into a game of perception. Is the despair real… or staged? The steady hope thread keeps us invested. “To breathe the air, to feel the sun\'s warm burns.” feels like both truth and bait. Intriguing work, nay fantastic work! Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:34
Dual-purpose poem
Paul Bell said:
I know you said it was cold in Florida, and that would keep you indoors. (Walked out to snow this morning, brutal.)
Hoping the burning sun sets you free soon. Actully hope we see the bloody thing this year.
February 13th, 2026 04:29
Paul Bell said:
I know you said it was cold in Florida, and that would keep you indoors. (Walked out to snow this morning, brutal.)
Hoping the burning sun sets you free soon. Actully hope we see the bloody thing this year.
February 13th, 2026 04:29
Dual-purpose poem
orchidee said:
Good write F. Good wishes, if it\'s a poem personal to you.
February 13th, 2026 04:15
orchidee said:
Good write F. Good wishes, if it\'s a poem personal to you.
February 13th, 2026 04:15
Dual-purpose poem
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a prison of darkness in clear and most poetic terms. It has good rhyme and good flow and ends with that spark of hope that turns this poem from dark to a glimmer of light. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a prison of darkness in clear and most poetic terms. It has good rhyme and good flow and ends with that spark of hope that turns this poem from dark to a glimmer of light. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2026 04:14
Dual-purpose poem
Demar Desu said:
This poem reminds me of just hope… great write
February 13th, 2026 02:06
Demar Desu said:
This poem reminds me of just hope… great write
February 13th, 2026 02:06
Abandoned by humans.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a hymn to small miracles. An abandoned can becomes a celestial vault, holding stars, vows, and shimmer. The ordinary turned extraordinary…that’s the heart of it. Gentle, bright, and sincerely celebratory. I love this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a hymn to small miracles. An abandoned can becomes a celestial vault, holding stars, vows, and shimmer. The ordinary turned extraordinary…that’s the heart of it. Gentle, bright, and sincerely celebratory. I love this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:24
Abandoned by humans.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of taking the discarded and unwanted and transforming them into something useful and a piece of art to be displayed. The process itself is pleasurable and fulfilling and elevates the artist as well. Nicely written
February 12th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of taking the discarded and unwanted and transforming them into something useful and a piece of art to be displayed. The process itself is pleasurable and fulfilling and elevates the artist as well. Nicely written
February 12th, 2026 08:17
When the Nickname Fades
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautifully reflective. There’s such tenderness in the way you handle identity here…no drama, just slow, honest evolution. It feels like standing in that quiet after something small but formative has ended. Deeply resonant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 01:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautifully reflective. There’s such tenderness in the way you handle identity here…no drama, just slow, honest evolution. It feels like standing in that quiet after something small but formative has ended. Deeply resonant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 01:27
When the Nickname Fades
NinjaGirl said:
I love that you wrote about this, it\'s so creative. I have lost several nicknames over the years, but I like to think I can flip back a few pages to reread those chapters when needed.
February 11th, 2026 22:11
NinjaGirl said:
I love that you wrote about this, it\'s so creative. I have lost several nicknames over the years, but I like to think I can flip back a few pages to reread those chapters when needed.
February 11th, 2026 22:11
When the Nickname Fades
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem so identifiable as a name changes as a person changes. it is incorporated in Native American cultures that change a persons name with new life events. I loved this poem that holds so much meaning in symbolic ways. A fave
February 11th, 2026 18:50
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem so identifiable as a name changes as a person changes. it is incorporated in Native American cultures that change a persons name with new life events. I loved this poem that holds so much meaning in symbolic ways. A fave
February 11th, 2026 18:50
My Dearest Dad—My World Has Crumbled Around Me.
Neville said:
I know exactly where you are coming from .. I have felt similarly for quite a number of years .. in fact from the moment I became an orphan .. I imagine and hope having been able to poem this splendid tribute you have experienced some sort of catharsis .. Neville 💜🌻👍
February 11th, 2026 12:00
Neville said:
I know exactly where you are coming from .. I have felt similarly for quite a number of years .. in fact from the moment I became an orphan .. I imagine and hope having been able to poem this splendid tribute you have experienced some sort of catharsis .. Neville 💜🌻👍
February 11th, 2026 12:00
When Home and Therapy No Longer Hold
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet hurt here that feels lived-in, not imagined. The loss of safety isn’t dramatic, it’s tender and disorienting, and that makes it land even deeper. Powerful, my friend. Powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 12:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet hurt here that feels lived-in, not imagined. The loss of safety isn’t dramatic, it’s tender and disorienting, and that makes it land even deeper. Powerful, my friend. Powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 12:54
When Home and Therapy No Longer Hold
Thomas W Case said:
You walk the cracks and bruised streets with courage,
finding refuge in whispers the world forgot.
February 10th, 2026 07:12
Thomas W Case said:
You walk the cracks and bruised streets with courage,
finding refuge in whispers the world forgot.
February 10th, 2026 07:12
When Home and Therapy No Longer Hold
RSM0812 said:
Unfortunaltkey feeling safe is a prime concern of all human beings. If a person does not feel safe, they subconciously fall into a defensive or offensive emotional existance. Its like being in a predicament you have no control of. Or being literaly in the control of other people you barley know. The world can be a scary place but there is still faith in people as there is always good somewhere within. U just have to bring out the good and bury the bad.
February 10th, 2026 06:08
RSM0812 said:
Unfortunaltkey feeling safe is a prime concern of all human beings. If a person does not feel safe, they subconciously fall into a defensive or offensive emotional existance. Its like being in a predicament you have no control of. Or being literaly in the control of other people you barley know. The world can be a scary place but there is still faith in people as there is always good somewhere within. U just have to bring out the good and bury the bad.
February 10th, 2026 06:08
Termination of a Promise
RSM0812 said:
This write is very well described. It seems to be almost a riddle of emotion and hope. I especially like the last line. We have to be careful before we speak. Words can be powerful. As one should always think before speaking. I thouroughly enjoyed it.
February 10th, 2026 06:03
RSM0812 said:
This write is very well described. It seems to be almost a riddle of emotion and hope. I especially like the last line. We have to be careful before we speak. Words can be powerful. As one should always think before speaking. I thouroughly enjoyed it.
February 10th, 2026 06:03
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