Comments received on poems by Friendship
When the Last Page Turns
Neville said:
You can beat an egg etc etc but you can\'t beat what sorenbarrett said .. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💛🌻👍
March 7th, 2026 02:29
Neville said:
You can beat an egg etc etc but you can\'t beat what sorenbarrett said .. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💛🌻👍
March 7th, 2026 02:29
When the Last Page Turns
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about Death as the final curtain.We should and some people do look forward to Death because as the Tarot cards say it is a new beginning.An excellent poem.Well done
March 6th, 2026 17:26
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about Death as the final curtain.We should and some people do look forward to Death because as the Tarot cards say it is a new beginning.An excellent poem.Well done
March 6th, 2026 17:26
When the Last Page Turns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Friendship, this speaks to something I’ve felt many times…how endings can bring both relief and a quiet ache at the same moment. The way you frame that space between what was and what might be feels honest and comforting. That last thought stays with me gently…“hand in hand, waiting for the next line to begin.” Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Friendship, this speaks to something I’ve felt many times…how endings can bring both relief and a quiet ache at the same moment. The way you frame that space between what was and what might be feels honest and comforting. That last thought stays with me gently…“hand in hand, waiting for the next line to begin.” Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:31
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries such a tender ache…that childlike call for Papa to fix what feels broken inside. The memory of learning to repair the bike is a beautiful anchor for the whole poem. It turns the heart itself into something laid on the workbench…hoping for steady hands to make it right again. A deeply moving and relatable piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 12:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries such a tender ache…that childlike call for Papa to fix what feels broken inside. The memory of learning to repair the bike is a beautiful anchor for the whole poem. It turns the heart itself into something laid on the workbench…hoping for steady hands to make it right again. A deeply moving and relatable piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 12:17
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
Sphinx said:
Very deep and heartwarming. Some pain being reflected here. Well written
March 6th, 2026 10:57
Sphinx said:
Very deep and heartwarming. Some pain being reflected here. Well written
March 6th, 2026 10:57
When the Last Page Turns
orchidee said:
Good write F. Yes, Let\'s read the last page of a book first. It could make sense. save us reading maybe hundreds of pages before we get to the end! lol. But then we know the ending before the beginning. Doh!
March 6th, 2026 09:03
orchidee said:
Good write F. Yes, Let\'s read the last page of a book first. It could make sense. save us reading maybe hundreds of pages before we get to the end! lol. But then we know the ending before the beginning. Doh!
March 6th, 2026 09:03
When the Last Page Turns
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful write of endings and beginnings a cycle of life. So nicely done
March 6th, 2026 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful write of endings and beginnings a cycle of life. So nicely done
March 6th, 2026 08:06
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
orchidee said:
Good wishes to get well soon F. :) A sensitive write.
March 6th, 2026 03:27
orchidee said:
Good wishes to get well soon F. :) A sensitive write.
March 6th, 2026 03:27
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you checked out any of Sapien Medicine\'s audio- videos (free on Youtube)? Hope you get well soon.
March 5th, 2026 23:08
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you checked out any of Sapien Medicine\'s audio- videos (free on Youtube)? Hope you get well soon.
March 5th, 2026 23:08
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
sorenbarrett said:
As children in times of trouble we looked to our father to fix our situation now as adults we often wish we could return and have our father fix things for us. Nicely voiced in this poem that speaks out of a child like heart. Well written
March 5th, 2026 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
As children in times of trouble we looked to our father to fix our situation now as adults we often wish we could return and have our father fix things for us. Nicely voiced in this poem that speaks out of a child like heart. Well written
March 5th, 2026 19:32
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautiful.Filled with nostalgia.Good old Papa was able to fix most things.It could be a metaphor for JC as well.Just sayin.
March 5th, 2026 18:12
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautiful.Filled with nostalgia.Good old Papa was able to fix most things.It could be a metaphor for JC as well.Just sayin.
March 5th, 2026 18:12
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. The motion is endless and ends with life itself.
March 5th, 2026 11:45
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. The motion is endless and ends with life itself.
March 5th, 2026 11:45
When the Body Turns on Itself
orchidee said:
Get well soon if you are unwell :)
March 3rd, 2026 12:03
orchidee said:
Get well soon if you are unwell :)
March 3rd, 2026 12:03
When the Body Turns on Itself
sorenbarrett said:
To fight the battle against all odds, to make a last stand in defiance is what legendes are mad of. It is the resolve of the warriors that carry the battle not the numbers of the foe. To have the courage to die on one\'s feet rather than serve on one\'s knees sets the tone of victory. A lovely poem that in its reality is a metaphor for life itself. Well done and a fave
March 3rd, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
To fight the battle against all odds, to make a last stand in defiance is what legendes are mad of. It is the resolve of the warriors that carry the battle not the numbers of the foe. To have the courage to die on one\'s feet rather than serve on one\'s knees sets the tone of victory. A lovely poem that in its reality is a metaphor for life itself. Well done and a fave
March 3rd, 2026 06:54
Happy Birthday, Dr. Seuss
David Wakeling said:
A great poem.It is a wonderful tribute to an amazing writer. An enjoyable read.
March 2nd, 2026 23:50
David Wakeling said:
A great poem.It is a wonderful tribute to an amazing writer. An enjoyable read.
March 2nd, 2026 23:50
Happy Birthday, Dr. Seuss
sorenbarrett said:
Early exposure to Dr. Suess was some of my fond memories of my mother reading them to us at bed time. His whimsical rhymes probably started my love of poetry. Nicely done Friendship
March 2nd, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Early exposure to Dr. Suess was some of my fond memories of my mother reading them to us at bed time. His whimsical rhymes probably started my love of poetry. Nicely done Friendship
March 2nd, 2026 11:35
Happy Birthday, Dr. Seuss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! Wonderful tribute and, indeed, Happy Birthday Dr. Suess! I\'m vegetarian and I still love Green Eggs and Ham! 🤣
March 2nd, 2026 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! Wonderful tribute and, indeed, Happy Birthday Dr. Suess! I\'m vegetarian and I still love Green Eggs and Ham! 🤣
March 2nd, 2026 10:50
Pray for Peace in the Middle East
orchidee said:
A sensitive and thoughtful write F.
March 1st, 2026 11:27
orchidee said:
A sensitive and thoughtful write F.
March 1st, 2026 11:27
Pray for Peace in the Middle East
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer, a wish, a hope that should be shared by all. A past rift too old for any to remember the cause led to blood feud killing the innocent and leaving the guilty to rule. A sad measure of what each believe. A wonderful write that earns a fave
March 1st, 2026 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer, a wish, a hope that should be shared by all. A past rift too old for any to remember the cause led to blood feud killing the innocent and leaving the guilty to rule. A sad measure of what each believe. A wonderful write that earns a fave
March 1st, 2026 08:57
Pray for Peace in the Middle East
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is expansive and heartfelt. The shared sky, the olive trees, the calls to prayer rising as hope…all build steadily. “for a Middle East that sings, at last, a single, peaceful hymn.” lands as both plea and promise. It feels sincere and necessary. I say, amen...it is more than just ending conflicts...but rather gaining understanding so that we avoid conflicts at all, if possible. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is expansive and heartfelt. The shared sky, the olive trees, the calls to prayer rising as hope…all build steadily. “for a Middle East that sings, at last, a single, peaceful hymn.” lands as both plea and promise. It feels sincere and necessary. I say, amen...it is more than just ending conflicts...but rather gaining understanding so that we avoid conflicts at all, if possible. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:43
When the Cipher Fades
Paul Bell said:
Words are so powerful, and you\'re right, put them in the wrong order and all hell is let loose.
You can see why relationships breakdown never to be retrieved now.
Love and rage, that\'s a poem in itself.
March 1st, 2026 06:54
Paul Bell said:
Words are so powerful, and you\'re right, put them in the wrong order and all hell is let loose.
You can see why relationships breakdown never to be retrieved now.
Love and rage, that\'s a poem in itself.
March 1st, 2026 06:54
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
Poetic Licence said:
This is very nicely written, as with all things in life,it is not the final result that really matters, it is what what we did or how we arrived at that result that matter\'s. Enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:28
Poetic Licence said:
This is very nicely written, as with all things in life,it is not the final result that really matters, it is what what we did or how we arrived at that result that matter\'s. Enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:28
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. Starts out strong \"a breath caught in the hinge of a half‑opened door.\" and gets better. You could have stopped after \"but forgets the stones that never fell.\" and it would still shine. Then the conclusion, always leaving only to return, closes grandly Very nice.
February 28th, 2026 22:37
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. Starts out strong \"a breath caught in the hinge of a half‑opened door.\" and gets better. You could have stopped after \"but forgets the stones that never fell.\" and it would still shine. Then the conclusion, always leaving only to return, closes grandly Very nice.
February 28th, 2026 22:37
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this feels expansive… like standing inside a thought as it breathes. The movement between arrival and departure never feels rushed. It’s reflective without losing warmth. That closing sense of endless turning lingers beautifully. Well done, my friend. Happy Saturday to you! 55 here in PA, hopefully much warmer for you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this feels expansive… like standing inside a thought as it breathes. The movement between arrival and departure never feels rushed. It’s reflective without losing warmth. That closing sense of endless turning lingers beautifully. Well done, my friend. Happy Saturday to you! 55 here in PA, hopefully much warmer for you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:37
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
orchidee said:
I ask myself the same thing, as I met myself coming back from town while I was on the way there! Eh? Me talking rubbish again! lol.
February 28th, 2026 10:21
orchidee said:
I ask myself the same thing, as I met myself coming back from town while I was on the way there! Eh? Me talking rubbish again! lol.
February 28th, 2026 10:21
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a process that has enough ambiguity that one can not tell where one is within it. There is confusion and simply the awareness that one is. Well written
February 28th, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a process that has enough ambiguity that one can not tell where one is within it. There is confusion and simply the awareness that one is. Well written
February 28th, 2026 09:59
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
2781 said:
As Solomon said - All is vanity
February 28th, 2026 09:58
2781 said:
As Solomon said - All is vanity
February 28th, 2026 09:58
When the Cipher Fades
MendedFences27 said:
The danger of vulnerability. Whether machine or human, everything has an Achilles Heel, a breaking point, or a flash point. No matter the safeguards employed someone will find the weakness. The result could be a broken mainframe or a broken heart. - Beautiful poetry. - Phil A.
February 25th, 2026 22:10
MendedFences27 said:
The danger of vulnerability. Whether machine or human, everything has an Achilles Heel, a breaking point, or a flash point. No matter the safeguards employed someone will find the weakness. The result could be a broken mainframe or a broken heart. - Beautiful poetry. - Phil A.
February 25th, 2026 22:10
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