Comments received on poems by Friendship
Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
Paul Bell said:
Somedays you don\'t want to be seen and it seems you can\'t hide no matter how hard you try.
Then there\'s the other days when you want the world to acknowledge you, but for some reason you\'re invisible to everyone.
April 15th, 2026 04:07
Paul Bell said:
Somedays you don\'t want to be seen and it seems you can\'t hide no matter how hard you try.
Then there\'s the other days when you want the world to acknowledge you, but for some reason you\'re invisible to everyone.
April 15th, 2026 04:07
Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
NinjaGirl said:
So beautiful
Even when they don\'t see, don\'t hear...scream until your truth is made known.
April 14th, 2026 22:54
NinjaGirl said:
So beautiful
Even when they don\'t see, don\'t hear...scream until your truth is made known.
April 14th, 2026 22:54
Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Nice rhyme and a great last 4 lines.
April 14th, 2026 19:30
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Nice rhyme and a great last 4 lines.
April 14th, 2026 19:30
Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the anguish of being unseen. hidden in dark and mist. How does one make oneself seen? With a different dialect to communicate a different voice. Well written I feel it
April 14th, 2026 19:25
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the anguish of being unseen. hidden in dark and mist. How does one make oneself seen? With a different dialect to communicate a different voice. Well written I feel it
April 14th, 2026 19:25
Monday
RSM0812 said:
This is hinestly one of the most amazing reads i have read. Your poetry blows my mind. Your artistic talent is immaculate and beautiful.
April 14th, 2026 12:42
RSM0812 said:
This is hinestly one of the most amazing reads i have read. Your poetry blows my mind. Your artistic talent is immaculate and beautiful.
April 14th, 2026 12:42
Monday
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read that is upbeat and perfect for a Monday morning. The rhyme itself carries on on their way in a cheerful mood. Nicely done Friendship
April 13th, 2026 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read that is upbeat and perfect for a Monday morning. The rhyme itself carries on on their way in a cheerful mood. Nicely done Friendship
April 13th, 2026 14:11
Monday
MendedFences27 said:
Why must everything have a beginning and an end? External forces drive us to live within the norms of society. Your poem raised these questions as I read it. Got me to think why everyone hates Mondays. Then you closed with the answer, \"spinning time.\" The clock is ticking, time to respond. These days I hardly know what day it is, but I surely know the end is coming, It\'s a beautiful sunny Spring day here, why worry about tomorrow? -Phil A.
April 13th, 2026 12:22
MendedFences27 said:
Why must everything have a beginning and an end? External forces drive us to live within the norms of society. Your poem raised these questions as I read it. Got me to think why everyone hates Mondays. Then you closed with the answer, \"spinning time.\" The clock is ticking, time to respond. These days I hardly know what day it is, but I surely know the end is coming, It\'s a beautiful sunny Spring day here, why worry about tomorrow? -Phil A.
April 13th, 2026 12:22
Monday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this carries that steady transition into the week…quiet giving way to responsibility without any rush. It feels real and familiar, like stepping into something that just keeps moving. You held that balance really well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this carries that steady transition into the week…quiet giving way to responsibility without any rush. It feels real and familiar, like stepping into something that just keeps moving. You held that balance really well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:42
Because you believed.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this hit me hard…there’s a quiet strength in this that just stays with you. It feels steady, like something meant to be held onto. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this hit me hard…there’s a quiet strength in this that just stays with you. It feels steady, like something meant to be held onto. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:27
Existing
Joseph M Marion said:
This is beautiful very well written definitely from the heart
April 13th, 2026 07:27
Joseph M Marion said:
This is beautiful very well written definitely from the heart
April 13th, 2026 07:27
Because you believed.
Katie B. said:
It is amazing the confidence that grows in us when someone believes in us. This poem flows well and leaves you waiting for the next line. I love it and believe it. Absolutely beautiful. Excellent write my friend. a FAVE!
Katie
April 12th, 2026 07:00
Katie B. said:
It is amazing the confidence that grows in us when someone believes in us. This poem flows well and leaves you waiting for the next line. I love it and believe it. Absolutely beautiful. Excellent write my friend. a FAVE!
Katie
April 12th, 2026 07:00
Because you believed.
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice this poem speaks of a spark igniting into a flame and finally light and fire. Metaphoric it speaks clearly
April 12th, 2026 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice this poem speaks of a spark igniting into a flame and finally light and fire. Metaphoric it speaks clearly
April 12th, 2026 06:51
I have no control.
NinjaGirl said:
Maybe we have to fall into the sea to realize what we\'re chasing on boat isn\'t worth it.
Very well done, I do love your writing style.
April 11th, 2026 20:23
NinjaGirl said:
Maybe we have to fall into the sea to realize what we\'re chasing on boat isn\'t worth it.
Very well done, I do love your writing style.
April 11th, 2026 20:23
I have no control.
sorenbarrett said:
A most metaphoric depiction of the body. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 18:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most metaphoric depiction of the body. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 18:54
I have no control.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really stays with me…that unraveling where control just slips away and you’re left drifting. And…as I see it…none of us really have control. We just think we do until something proves otherwise. Control is an illusion. Your poem\'s imagery carries that all the way through. Heavy, honest, and it lands. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really stays with me…that unraveling where control just slips away and you’re left drifting. And…as I see it…none of us really have control. We just think we do until something proves otherwise. Control is an illusion. Your poem\'s imagery carries that all the way through. Heavy, honest, and it lands. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:24
I have no control.
arqios said:
Drifting darkness and a wait for freedom, classic debacle 🕊️🙏🏻
April 11th, 2026 09:41
arqios said:
Drifting darkness and a wait for freedom, classic debacle 🕊️🙏🏻
April 11th, 2026 09:41
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