Comments received on poems by Friendship
Existing
2781 said:
What was that that Bob Dylan wrote? Something about serving somebody..
April 11th, 2026 07:51
2781 said:
What was that that Bob Dylan wrote? Something about serving somebody..
April 11th, 2026 07:51
Please free me.
2781 said:
This sounds like the fate of a generation - the nursing home.
April 11th, 2026 07:31
2781 said:
This sounds like the fate of a generation - the nursing home.
April 11th, 2026 07:31
Please free me.
Dan Williams said:
And what a nice encore from \"Existing\". I tend to avoid rhyme, find it he need for suitable words sometimes exasperating, but you have navigated it wonderfully. \"The walls have tasted every silent plea, The bitter salt of what it costs to be.\", brilliant.
April 11th, 2026 01:31
Dan Williams said:
And what a nice encore from \"Existing\". I tend to avoid rhyme, find it he need for suitable words sometimes exasperating, but you have navigated it wonderfully. \"The walls have tasted every silent plea, The bitter salt of what it costs to be.\", brilliant.
April 11th, 2026 01:31
Existing
Dan Williams said:
What a fine summation of spiritual freedom.\" It is what it is—the stone and the stream\" is simple and accurate, as is the whole of it. Then \"Just the breath in my lungs and the ground at my feet\" polishes it. Nice, very nice.
April 11th, 2026 01:23
Dan Williams said:
What a fine summation of spiritual freedom.\" It is what it is—the stone and the stream\" is simple and accurate, as is the whole of it. Then \"Just the breath in my lungs and the ground at my feet\" polishes it. Nice, very nice.
April 11th, 2026 01:23
Existing
NafisaSB said:
yet to get there - so am glad you have found the peace and release...
April 11th, 2026 00:04
NafisaSB said:
yet to get there - so am glad you have found the peace and release...
April 11th, 2026 00:04
Please free me.
Paul Bell said:
Freedom these days come at a high price it seems.
Once upon a time we saw ourselves as free.
Now societies restraints hold us back.
April 10th, 2026 09:44
Paul Bell said:
Freedom these days come at a high price it seems.
Once upon a time we saw ourselves as free.
Now societies restraints hold us back.
April 10th, 2026 09:44
Please free me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s strength in this that doesn’t shout…it endures. You hold pain, accountability, and exhaustion all at once, but what rises through it is the right to be released. Not given…earned. That’s what makes this powerful. It stays with you long after. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s strength in this that doesn’t shout…it endures. You hold pain, accountability, and exhaustion all at once, but what rises through it is the right to be released. Not given…earned. That’s what makes this powerful. It stays with you long after. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:01
Please free me.
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the bonds in this poem and the yearning for freedom. It is heart felt and most expressive. Very well written
April 10th, 2026 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the bonds in this poem and the yearning for freedom. It is heart felt and most expressive. Very well written
April 10th, 2026 05:09
Existing
Kevin Hulme said:
Free from every thing Materialistic.
No distractions. Fine Poem.
April 9th, 2026 21:29
Kevin Hulme said:
Free from every thing Materialistic.
No distractions. Fine Poem.
April 9th, 2026 21:29
Existing
Neville said:
This is so chilled it makes this reader feel calm just taking it all in .. nice n slowly .. sigh .... 😎🌻👍
April 9th, 2026 17:09
Neville said:
This is so chilled it makes this reader feel calm just taking it all in .. nice n slowly .. sigh .... 😎🌻👍
April 9th, 2026 17:09
Existing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a calm that doesn’t need to argue for itself…just a steady sense of release and being. It feels grounded, clear, and unburdened in a way that sticks with you. Strong, centered work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a calm that doesn’t need to argue for itself…just a steady sense of release and being. It feels grounded, clear, and unburdened in a way that sticks with you. Strong, centered work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 08:16
Birthday in the Quiet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really lands…that quiet loneliness, especially in those images like the untouched cake and the silence around it, and then that turn inward at the end. It doesn’t force resolution, it just arrives at something real. There’s a lot of honesty here. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really lands…that quiet loneliness, especially in those images like the untouched cake and the silence around it, and then that turn inward at the end. It doesn’t force resolution, it just arrives at something real. There’s a lot of honesty here. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 08:15
Birthday in the Quiet
Katie B. said:
Excellent, beautiful piece!! Love \",trees that shed their leaves without apology\"
April 8th, 2026 05:17
Katie B. said:
Excellent, beautiful piece!! Love \",trees that shed their leaves without apology\"
April 8th, 2026 05:17
Understanding, Not Repair
arqios said:
An apt read. Thank you for sharing dear Friendship 🕊️🙏
April 3rd, 2026 20:13
arqios said:
An apt read. Thank you for sharing dear Friendship 🕊️🙏
April 3rd, 2026 20:13
Understanding, Not Repair
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a steady wisdom running through this…that shift from tools and fixing into presence and understanding. That mirror line anchors it, and the ending rests exactly where it should…not repaired, just seen. Well done, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a steady wisdom running through this…that shift from tools and fixing into presence and understanding. That mirror line anchors it, and the ending rests exactly where it should…not repaired, just seen. Well done, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:13
Therapy vs. Death – The Choice of the Unquiet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a quiet, unflinching weight to this…those two doors set the whole piece in motion, and everything narrows toward that final step. The stillness you end in doesn’t resolve…it settles. This one lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a quiet, unflinching weight to this…those two doors set the whole piece in motion, and everything narrows toward that final step. The stillness you end in doesn’t resolve…it settles. This one lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:47
Understanding, Not Repair
sorenbarrett said:
I hear this message of a need to be heard, understood, listened to. It is well spoken in the piece where the emphasis lies on understanding not mending. Very nicely written a fave
April 3rd, 2026 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
I hear this message of a need to be heard, understood, listened to. It is well spoken in the piece where the emphasis lies on understanding not mending. Very nicely written a fave
April 3rd, 2026 07:04
The Weight of Light
NafisaSB said:
wonderful message - let\'s care and share, and we will definitely benefit, and receive in return
April 1st, 2026 00:27
NafisaSB said:
wonderful message - let\'s care and share, and we will definitely benefit, and receive in return
April 1st, 2026 00:27
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