Comments received on poems by Friendship



So now you call me grossly insulting
Demar Desu said:

“And watch how the truth keeps me tethered to the ground”… great work

April 21st, 2026 06:21

So now you call me grossly insulting
Paul Bell said:

Relationships, who would have them.
The end sometimes plays out like a micro war, and the casualties can be high.
Definitely a learning curve for would be lovers.

April 21st, 2026 05:42

I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
NafisaSB said:

This requires great dedication, discipline and ability to remain firm inspite of all the barbs. Inspiring write ✍️

April 21st, 2026 03:22

They judge me as a failure.
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:

Very beautiful. It breathes despair. At least for me.

April 21st, 2026 00:20

They judge me as a failure.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this carries a sharp, unflinching confrontation…like truth being held up where it can’t be ignored. That image of the canvas being struck out stays with me…creation judged, then quietly kept. I’ve felt that same tension too, where what’s rejected isn’t truly let go. This lands as bold, reflective, and deeply honest. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 20th, 2026 10:31

They judge me as a failure.
orchidee said:

Good write F.

April 20th, 2026 08:23

Existing
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:



April 20th, 2026 07:36

Existing
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:

A great write!

April 20th, 2026 07:36

They judge me as a failure.
arqios said:

Powerful read, Friendship 🕊️🙏

April 20th, 2026 06:54

Just why?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Friendship, this carries a sharp, unflinching weight…like watching something delicate get shattered piece by piece. That image of the mind as glass stays with me…how easily it can be broken when struck the wrong way. I’ve seen how words can echo like that, long after they’re spoken. This lands as both devastating and real. Powerful write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 19th, 2026 09:16

Just why?
Thomas W Case said:

Superb

April 19th, 2026 08:33

Just why?
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem of destruction and devastation where direction is lost fills this poem. It speaks of pain and loss. Well expressed in poetic form.

April 19th, 2026 04:40

Existing
NafisaSB said:

wow - congrats - it is such a liberating feeling that has been portrayed -

April 17th, 2026 23:34

When collaborations with a higher power fail.
arqios said:

True friends at anytime and any occasion🙏🏻🕊️

April 17th, 2026 18:21

When collaborations with a higher power fail.
Katie B. said:

Powerful, love it!

April 17th, 2026 17:11

When collaborations with a higher power fail.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, there’s a clear emotional throughline here…moving from expectation to pressure to that final reclaiming of what friendship should be. It feels grounded, direct, and honest. And that image…that eye holding both intensity and vulnerability…fits this piece perfectly, like it’s seeing and being seen at the same time. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 17th, 2026 11:19

When collaborations with a higher power fail.
sorenbarrett said:

I hear a voice calling out for recognition of a friend that will not judge or attempt to change one in their misery but just be their and understand. Nicely written with very nice rhyme. A fave

April 17th, 2026 09:28

When collaborations with a higher power fail.
orchidee said:

Good write F.

April 17th, 2026 08:51

Aries is my soul.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Friendship, this comes in with real fire…confident, forward-moving, and fully owning its voice. It doesn’t hesitate, and that conviction carries the whole piece. Powerful write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 16th, 2026 16:29

I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Friendship, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it wiped me out a bit. Your poem stands firm in its own voice…calm, but unshaken. There’s strength here that doesn’t need to raise its volume to be felt. It holds its ground beautifully. Powerful write, my friend. Seriously. A fave, just for the title alone, but yeah...it all rocks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 16th, 2026 15:43

Aries is my soul.
orchidee said:

Good write F.

April 16th, 2026 13:42

Aries is my soul.
arqios said:

Signed poetically🕊️🙏🏻

April 16th, 2026 11:32

Aries is my soul.
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful description of the qualities under the sign nicely done my friend

April 16th, 2026 10:21

I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
arqios said:

Good write, Friendship

April 15th, 2026 16:19


Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
Poetic Licence said:

To me this is a wonderful write and i find it very very relatable, hidden among those words are many fears and reveals, pleasure to read.

April 15th, 2026 13:31

I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
sorenbarrett said:

This poem to me speaks of giving in a world that only takes, of power that always wins where gentleness is not valued. It speaks of there being strength in softness and the decision to stay as one is and count one\'s strength in that resilience. Well done

April 15th, 2026 13:29

I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
orchidee said:

Good write Rose, erm, Friendship!

April 15th, 2026 12:21

I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
NinjaGirl said:

Beautifully done!

April 15th, 2026 11:20

I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
Allie561 said:

We don’t give our children rocks when they ask to be fed. How often our good actions can be viewed warily as malicious intent.

April 15th, 2026 10:21



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