Comments received on poems by Friendship
When the Empath Stops Pleasing Everyone.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is fierce and freeing…each line strikes like a hammer shattering glass, breaking illusion after illusion. That moment of closing the empath’s front door tight is vivid, and it makes the final bloom into light feel all the more powerful. A radiant step into strength reclaimed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ You are a brilliant poet and a beautiful soul, my friend. A fave from me.
September 7th, 2025 18:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is fierce and freeing…each line strikes like a hammer shattering glass, breaking illusion after illusion. That moment of closing the empath’s front door tight is vivid, and it makes the final bloom into light feel all the more powerful. A radiant step into strength reclaimed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ You are a brilliant poet and a beautiful soul, my friend. A fave from me.
September 7th, 2025 18:48
When the Empath Stops Pleasing Everyone.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of using ones perceived deficits as strengths turning weakness into a tool and weapon. A lovely write my friend
September 7th, 2025 15:46
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of using ones perceived deficits as strengths turning weakness into a tool and weapon. A lovely write my friend
September 7th, 2025 15:46
My words are consistently misconstrued?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful. The strength in your voice comes through clear...naming what it’s like to be misread and pushed against when you already know your own truth. I relate deeply; I know that terrain all too well. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us...many will find strength in themselves from it. Anywho, dear poet, I am glad to be on here with you and to call you a friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful. The strength in your voice comes through clear...naming what it’s like to be misread and pushed against when you already know your own truth. I relate deeply; I know that terrain all too well. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us...many will find strength in themselves from it. Anywho, dear poet, I am glad to be on here with you and to call you a friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:09
My words are consistently misconstrued?
sorenbarrett said:
Words so nicely penned and easily understood. Friendship is not the problem but merely getting along. A wonderful poem of misunderstanding that seems easily overcome in conversation. Nicely done Friendship
September 5th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
Words so nicely penned and easily understood. Friendship is not the problem but merely getting along. A wonderful poem of misunderstanding that seems easily overcome in conversation. Nicely done Friendship
September 5th, 2025 08:08
A Father\'s Lesson on Trust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is heartfelt. A father’s wisdom passed down with love and caution feels steady and true. That line...“each broken word, a heavy stone”...I could fee its weight, showing how betrayal lingers heavy. Beautifully done…a lantern lit for the road ahead. 🌹💜🙏🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is heartfelt. A father’s wisdom passed down with love and caution feels steady and true. That line...“each broken word, a heavy stone”...I could fee its weight, showing how betrayal lingers heavy. Beautifully done…a lantern lit for the road ahead. 🌹💜🙏🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:12
my world.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is haunting. The loneliness breathes through every line, and that image...“alone, carved deep within my head”...cut especially deep. Beautifully written…stark, true, and lingering. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 16:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is haunting. The loneliness breathes through every line, and that image...“alone, carved deep within my head”...cut especially deep. Beautifully written…stark, true, and lingering. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 16:28
A Father\'s Lesson on Trust
sorenbarrett said:
A truly wonderful message set in splendid rhyme that carries the story forward. Loved the pacing of the words and the flow. Very nicely done self reliance and trust is the most secure.
September 4th, 2025 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
A truly wonderful message set in splendid rhyme that carries the story forward. Loved the pacing of the words and the flow. Very nicely done self reliance and trust is the most secure.
September 4th, 2025 07:57
A Father\'s Lesson on Trust
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, friendship. Good Dad.
September 4th, 2025 07:40
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, friendship. Good Dad.
September 4th, 2025 07:40
my world.
sorenbarrett said:
To feel alien in one\'s own world. Like a puzzle piece without the rest of the puzzle. this poem speaks of fear and alienation in a dark world. There seems little hope and a feeling of directionlessness. Nicely worded it in a most poetic manner looks for answers that are not available leaving a feeling of loneliness and confusion. Well done
September 3rd, 2025 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
To feel alien in one\'s own world. Like a puzzle piece without the rest of the puzzle. this poem speaks of fear and alienation in a dark world. There seems little hope and a feeling of directionlessness. Nicely worded it in a most poetic manner looks for answers that are not available leaving a feeling of loneliness and confusion. Well done
September 3rd, 2025 19:55
At harmony with the rain.
NafisaSB said:
such a soft and gentle verse - truly inspired - it\'s raining here too, but very heavily, and we tend to seek shelter, rather than enjoy the downpour, since lots of epidemics start at this time...
September 2nd, 2025 01:44
NafisaSB said:
such a soft and gentle verse - truly inspired - it\'s raining here too, but very heavily, and we tend to seek shelter, rather than enjoy the downpour, since lots of epidemics start at this time...
September 2nd, 2025 01:44
Words of destiny.
arqios said:
The poem \"Remember\" reflects on a once-deep friendship forged through shared creativity, where silent understanding and acceptance flourished as two friends shaped clay and stories together. Time’s passage has replaced that warmth with distance, leaving the speaker feeling unseen and unaccepted for who they’ve become. Holding onto the vivid, bittersweet memory of those golden moments, they now walk a solitary path, carrying both the beauty of what was and the ache of what’s been lost.
August 29th, 2025 19:20
arqios said:
The poem \"Remember\" reflects on a once-deep friendship forged through shared creativity, where silent understanding and acceptance flourished as two friends shaped clay and stories together. Time’s passage has replaced that warmth with distance, leaving the speaker feeling unseen and unaccepted for who they’ve become. Holding onto the vivid, bittersweet memory of those golden moments, they now walk a solitary path, carrying both the beauty of what was and the ache of what’s been lost.
August 29th, 2025 19:20
Soon to be Home.
Keeter C said:
Beautiful but we won’t rest for he has a job for us. He never gets tired and never stops working and we won’t as well.
August 28th, 2025 17:05
Keeter C said:
Beautiful but we won’t rest for he has a job for us. He never gets tired and never stops working and we won’t as well.
August 28th, 2025 17:05
Words of destiny.
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Beautifully written —it is gentle, reflective, and full of meaning. It speaks to the idea that every encounter in life has a purpose, and it does so with grace and warmth. Lovely work. A fave ❤️
August 27th, 2025 20:58
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Beautifully written —it is gentle, reflective, and full of meaning. It speaks to the idea that every encounter in life has a purpose, and it does so with grace and warmth. Lovely work. A fave ❤️
August 27th, 2025 20:58
Words of destiny.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is luminous, my friend. Every stanza glows with purpose and interconnectedness…the sense that nothing is wasted, no encounter meaningless. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2025 14:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is luminous, my friend. Every stanza glows with purpose and interconnectedness…the sense that nothing is wasted, no encounter meaningless. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2025 14:12
Words of destiny.
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, forsooth. That\'s what I\'ve cherished about the varied individuals I\'ve known through the years and circumstances in which we\'ve engaged, each giving my perspective a wealth or otherwise would have lacked enhancing my little sphere. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, forsooth. That\'s what I\'ve cherished about the varied individuals I\'ve known through the years and circumstances in which we\'ve engaged, each giving my perspective a wealth or otherwise would have lacked enhancing my little sphere. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:31
At harmony with the rain.
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, with this beauty you recalled my joy years ago when I occasionally could be in the rain, caught accidentally. There\'s a charming beauty in this piece, though, the alteration in perspective from youth to age offering wisdom. Very lovely, excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, with this beauty you recalled my joy years ago when I occasionally could be in the rain, caught accidentally. There\'s a charming beauty in this piece, though, the alteration in perspective from youth to age offering wisdom. Very lovely, excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:28
Words of destiny.
sorenbarrett said:
For those that believe in destiny this poem speaks, telling of how everyone you encounter has a purpose and shapes you in your journey. Very nicely crafted with rhyme this poem speaks of being transformed. Well done my friend
August 27th, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
For those that believe in destiny this poem speaks, telling of how everyone you encounter has a purpose and shapes you in your journey. Very nicely crafted with rhyme this poem speaks of being transformed. Well done my friend
August 27th, 2025 09:08
At harmony with the rain.
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of the hymn “All things bright and beautiful”. We need the soft refreshing rain for growth. It is indeed a blessing. A lovely poem Friendship. Have a beautiful day.
August 27th, 2025 05:50
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of the hymn “All things bright and beautiful”. We need the soft refreshing rain for growth. It is indeed a blessing. A lovely poem Friendship. Have a beautiful day.
August 27th, 2025 05:50
At harmony with the rain.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like being right there...eyes closed, rain soaking, peace in the simple act of being. A quiet joy runs through this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 08:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like being right there...eyes closed, rain soaking, peace in the simple act of being. A quiet joy runs through this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 08:23
At harmony with the rain.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of seeing what was seen as adversity as necessary for life and growth. The past rush to get in out of the rain now a recognition and excitement to experience its growing power. A positive view that more people need to feel. Wonderfully written in good meter and rhyme it puts a new face on the world and life a fave
August 26th, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of seeing what was seen as adversity as necessary for life and growth. The past rush to get in out of the rain now a recognition and excitement to experience its growing power. A positive view that more people need to feel. Wonderfully written in good meter and rhyme it puts a new face on the world and life a fave
August 26th, 2025 08:04
The Crying Tree
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing beneath that tree myself…where sorrow and love meet, and memory becomes a kind of shelter. A powerful and moving piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2025 07:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing beneath that tree myself…where sorrow and love meet, and memory becomes a kind of shelter. A powerful and moving piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2025 07:31
The Crying Tree
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that dedicates meaning to pleasant past memories and a sense of friendship. There is a feeling of loneliness and sense of a need for someone to lean on feeling lost and disoriented. There is a need for a guide. Memories may be the guide and strength to hold onto. Well written
August 24th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that dedicates meaning to pleasant past memories and a sense of friendship. There is a feeling of loneliness and sense of a need for someone to lean on feeling lost and disoriented. There is a need for a guide. Memories may be the guide and strength to hold onto. Well written
August 24th, 2025 20:43
The Crying Tree
Cheeky Missy said:
What a very, very beautiful dedication to an unknown/unidentified friend. The conclusion alluded to divergent paths whispers of an aching wound which remains a scar, yet how gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery, a delightful waltzing rhythm and rhyming, not to mention a tender poignancy. Thank you so much for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 19:39
Cheeky Missy said:
What a very, very beautiful dedication to an unknown/unidentified friend. The conclusion alluded to divergent paths whispers of an aching wound which remains a scar, yet how gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery, a delightful waltzing rhythm and rhyming, not to mention a tender poignancy. Thank you so much for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 19:39
Trapped.
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of when people say to \"choose happiness,\" or \"happiness is a choice.\" It\'s only a choice for some people..
August 24th, 2025 01:36
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of when people say to \"choose happiness,\" or \"happiness is a choice.\" It\'s only a choice for some people..
August 24th, 2025 01:36
Soon to be Home.
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a beautiful and comforting piece. It gently captures the journey of life and the hope of eternal peace with heartfelt grace. Wonderfully written!
August 23rd, 2025 07:20
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a beautiful and comforting piece. It gently captures the journey of life and the hope of eternal peace with heartfelt grace. Wonderfully written!
August 23rd, 2025 07:20
Soon to be Home.
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and soothing, albeit I must beg to differ with the first lines since Job and etc say quite the opposite and I concur with him since I\'ve known no better despite my proclivity for believing all is better than all know. Prettily rendered with seemingly delicate imagery and a poignancy which belies its weightiness. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2025 23:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and soothing, albeit I must beg to differ with the first lines since Job and etc say quite the opposite and I concur with him since I\'ve known no better despite my proclivity for believing all is better than all know. Prettily rendered with seemingly delicate imagery and a poignancy which belies its weightiness. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2025 23:52
Soon to be Home.
sorenbarrett said:
A long journey to a destination long anticipated. I have learned through many trips to enjoy the scenery along the way for it is often the best part. A most enchanting write my friend.
August 22nd, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
A long journey to a destination long anticipated. I have learned through many trips to enjoy the scenery along the way for it is often the best part. A most enchanting write my friend.
August 22nd, 2025 08:35
I am who I am!
NafisaSB said:
way to go dear - keep the \'me\' above all else always
August 21st, 2025 00:09
NafisaSB said:
way to go dear - keep the \'me\' above all else always
August 21st, 2025 00:09
To create something from scratch.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a beautiful vision, my friend…friendship crafted like starlight, blueprint by blueprint. It reads like a dream turned into poetry. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a beautiful vision, my friend…friendship crafted like starlight, blueprint by blueprint. It reads like a dream turned into poetry. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:01
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