Rest ,sweet child.
NafisaSB said:

a tender ode to a beautiful soul expressed in a lovely way....great write - hope she rests in peace...

August 25th, 2026 00:27

Rest ,sweet child.
arqios said:

There can be some really sad times all around us and within us. Your poetry has brought us toward a more bearable pain. Thanks for sharing.

August 21st, 2026 20:22

Rest ,sweet child.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh, Friendship...I am so deeply sorry. Sixteen is heartbreakingly young, and the additional news about your neighbor is so much grief to receive at once. Holding you and both families in my heart. May she rest peacefully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 21st, 2026 16:46

Rest ,sweet child.
Paul Bell said:

This is a sad one.
Always devastating when its children.
Happened to a friend of mine, his lad fell off a roof.
You never forget them.
Sorry for your neighbour too.

August 21st, 2026 11:49

Rest ,sweet child.
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem and even sadder author\'s note. Very nicely written in good rhyme and meter it has good flow and the story is most engaging Well done Friendship

August 21st, 2026 10:34

God, can you hear me?
Princesslove said:

Awesome write

August 17th, 2026 23:45

The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Kevin Hulme said:

Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this.
The lines about Mother is so Touching. Heartfelt. A fave.

August 9th, 2026 14:50

The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

August 9th, 2026 07:49

The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
turningpoint said:

very heartfelt sad could happen

August 7th, 2026 16:37

The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a heartbreaking honesty here that never lets up. What stays with me most is the tragedy of believing we have to carry our deepest wounds alone until the silence becomes its own prison. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 5th, 2026 20:16

The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
MendedFences27 said:

Beautiful poetry. Secrets of the mind that we carry with us through life, along the hard road of destiny. We look back and recall all of the sadness and joy. Loved your poem.- Phil A.

August 4th, 2026 22:28

The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
sorenbarrett said:

Sad and tragic isolation in this poem bring darkness and resignation. Very well written and most compelling.

August 4th, 2026 09:31

God, can you hear me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Friendship, what a heartfelt prayer. The vulnerability throughout is matched by a quiet trust that keeps reaching toward God, even in the darkest moments. That combination of honesty and hope is something I deeply appreciate and relate to. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 3rd, 2026 16:57

God, can you hear me?
soheil khodaparasti said:

This moving, sincere, and relatable poem reminds us that even in life\'s darkest moments, faith can provide strength, comfort, and hope.

August 3rd, 2026 02:52

God, can you hear me?
arqios said:

from the very heart prayers are heard and answered 🙏🕊️

August 3rd, 2026 01:04