Comments received on poems by Friendship
He has only hate in his heart for me.
Neville said:
May I respectfully suggest you take a few deep breaths, sit back and write 500 times I will never make out with a narcissist ever again .. This is well crafted but dreadfully sad .. I additionally hope it is the product of a very gifted imagination and not autobiographical .. Neville
May 27th, 2026 01:45
Neville said:
May I respectfully suggest you take a few deep breaths, sit back and write 500 times I will never make out with a narcissist ever again .. This is well crafted but dreadfully sad .. I additionally hope it is the product of a very gifted imagination and not autobiographical .. Neville
May 27th, 2026 01:45
Tried.
NafisaSB said:
this poem is so heart rending and touching - it moved me with its beautiful depiction
May 27th, 2026 00:24
NafisaSB said:
this poem is so heart rending and touching - it moved me with its beautiful depiction
May 27th, 2026 00:24
He has only hate in his heart for me.
David Wakeling said:
Amazing.This is very well constructed.I like the rhyme.For me it is a sad reflection on a relationship that has a toxic partner.Really quite viscious.Very well written
May 27th, 2026 00:11
David Wakeling said:
Amazing.This is very well constructed.I like the rhyme.For me it is a sad reflection on a relationship that has a toxic partner.Really quite viscious.Very well written
May 27th, 2026 00:11
Lust
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:27
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:27
Lust
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:24
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:24
You are free.
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a man stepping out of his own wreckage and finally letting someone else walk free too.
There’s a hard mercy in it—owning the damage, then closing the door without asking to be remembered.
May 26th, 2026 07:17
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a man stepping out of his own wreckage and finally letting someone else walk free too.
There’s a hard mercy in it—owning the damage, then closing the door without asking to be remembered.
May 26th, 2026 07:17
I fear you.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful poem, Friendship. This unfolds like a slow realization turning into horror…the kind that hurts because it comes from love and familiarity rather than strangers or shadows. “I do not fear the darkness anymore— / I only fear the monster you create” is an absolutely devastating close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful poem, Friendship. This unfolds like a slow realization turning into horror…the kind that hurts because it comes from love and familiarity rather than strangers or shadows. “I do not fear the darkness anymore— / I only fear the monster you create” is an absolutely devastating close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 08:01
You are free.
David Wakeling said:
For me this reads like a divorce or some kind of breakup.It certainly is a civilised and beautiful attempt at moving on.Well constructed read here.Enjoyable
May 25th, 2026 06:51
David Wakeling said:
For me this reads like a divorce or some kind of breakup.It certainly is a civilised and beautiful attempt at moving on.Well constructed read here.Enjoyable
May 25th, 2026 06:51
You are free.
arqios said:
The depth of release is quite like an algebraic equation. Something significant happens on both sides of the equation🙏🕊️
May 25th, 2026 06:18
arqios said:
The depth of release is quite like an algebraic equation. Something significant happens on both sides of the equation🙏🕊️
May 25th, 2026 06:18
Tried.
mohammad ali said:
So nicely rhymic composition of aging leading to the final death. A well organized description, dear!
May 24th, 2026 21:44
mohammad ali said:
So nicely rhymic composition of aging leading to the final death. A well organized description, dear!
May 24th, 2026 21:44
I fear you.
David Wakeling said:
Wow wow wow.We can all elate to this .From a fear of death or a fear of old age or a fear of a partner.Fear takes many forms and none of them are pretty.The secret is to rise above.What a thoughtful poem.Excellent
May 24th, 2026 18:12
David Wakeling said:
Wow wow wow.We can all elate to this .From a fear of death or a fear of old age or a fear of a partner.Fear takes many forms and none of them are pretty.The secret is to rise above.What a thoughtful poem.Excellent
May 24th, 2026 18:12
Just a wish.
David Wakeling said:
Yes I think we all share that wish for a understanding companion.Beautifully expressed.I hope you find that person
May 23rd, 2026 18:17
David Wakeling said:
Yes I think we all share that wish for a understanding companion.Beautifully expressed.I hope you find that person
May 23rd, 2026 18:17
Just a wish.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish for what should be not too much to ask. Well written in clarity and good flow with good rhyme it seems a reasonable request. In an imperfect world it is as rare as hen\'s teeth. Very nicely written and a fave
May 23rd, 2026 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish for what should be not too much to ask. Well written in clarity and good flow with good rhyme it seems a reasonable request. In an imperfect world it is as rare as hen\'s teeth. Very nicely written and a fave
May 23rd, 2026 10:44
Tried.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me hard. There’s no performance in this...just exhaustion finally speaking plainly after carrying too much for too long. The closing line lands like someone setting down a weight they’ve dragged for miles. Powerful and deeply human piece, my friend. On another note, is your profile picture a self-portrait or portrait of any kind you\'ve done. I know you\'\'re quite the artist, so I had to ask! ☺️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me hard. There’s no performance in this...just exhaustion finally speaking plainly after carrying too much for too long. The closing line lands like someone setting down a weight they’ve dragged for miles. Powerful and deeply human piece, my friend. On another note, is your profile picture a self-portrait or portrait of any kind you\'ve done. I know you\'\'re quite the artist, so I had to ask! ☺️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:29
Farts 🤣
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, hahaha...you took something utterly ridiculous and somehow made it genuinely poetic. The playful seriousness of the tone all the way through absolutely got me. “The quiet ghost of belly craft” is one heck of an opening. This made me laugh out loud, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, hahaha...you took something utterly ridiculous and somehow made it genuinely poetic. The playful seriousness of the tone all the way through absolutely got me. “The quiet ghost of belly craft” is one heck of an opening. This made me laugh out loud, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:11
Tried.
Neville said:
This is pretty much perfect in my book .. well in any book if you ask me .. Neville 🌻
May 23rd, 2026 03:04
Neville said:
This is pretty much perfect in my book .. well in any book if you ask me .. Neville 🌻
May 23rd, 2026 03:04
Tried.
David Wakeling said:
Wow for me this is someone struggling to climb a mountain.It is so much more however.A lot to unpack here trembling hands to I can\'t try anymore.Very masterly done.Enjoyable read
May 22nd, 2026 20:18
David Wakeling said:
Wow for me this is someone struggling to climb a mountain.It is so much more however.A lot to unpack here trembling hands to I can\'t try anymore.Very masterly done.Enjoyable read
May 22nd, 2026 20:18
Tried.
Fränz Müller said:
I felt this poem in the marrow of my bones. Excellent!
May 22nd, 2026 19:22
Fränz Müller said:
I felt this poem in the marrow of my bones. Excellent!
May 22nd, 2026 19:22
Tried.
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of giving in and throwing in the towel after a life of strife. Some simply wonderful lines in this poem \"I poured the river’s weight into a glass,
And watched the steady hours turn to sand\" The next two lines equally good, as is the next stanza. So I come close to citing the whole poem. Very nicely done my friend
May 22nd, 2026 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of giving in and throwing in the towel after a life of strife. Some simply wonderful lines in this poem \"I poured the river’s weight into a glass,
And watched the steady hours turn to sand\" The next two lines equally good, as is the next stanza. So I come close to citing the whole poem. Very nicely done my friend
May 22nd, 2026 12:18
Farts 🤣
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun read. Well written to lighten the tension
May 21st, 2026 19:20
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun read. Well written to lighten the tension
May 21st, 2026 19:20
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