Comments received on poems by Friendship
Understanding, Not Repair
arqios said:
An apt read. Thank you for sharing dear Friendship 🕊️🙏
April 3rd, 2026 20:13
arqios said:
An apt read. Thank you for sharing dear Friendship 🕊️🙏
April 3rd, 2026 20:13
Understanding, Not Repair
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a steady wisdom running through this…that shift from tools and fixing into presence and understanding. That mirror line anchors it, and the ending rests exactly where it should…not repaired, just seen. Well done, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a steady wisdom running through this…that shift from tools and fixing into presence and understanding. That mirror line anchors it, and the ending rests exactly where it should…not repaired, just seen. Well done, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:13
Therapy vs. Death – The Choice of the Unquiet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a quiet, unflinching weight to this…those two doors set the whole piece in motion, and everything narrows toward that final step. The stillness you end in doesn’t resolve…it settles. This one lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a quiet, unflinching weight to this…those two doors set the whole piece in motion, and everything narrows toward that final step. The stillness you end in doesn’t resolve…it settles. This one lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:47
Understanding, Not Repair
sorenbarrett said:
I hear this message of a need to be heard, understood, listened to. It is well spoken in the piece where the emphasis lies on understanding not mending. Very nicely written a fave
April 3rd, 2026 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
I hear this message of a need to be heard, understood, listened to. It is well spoken in the piece where the emphasis lies on understanding not mending. Very nicely written a fave
April 3rd, 2026 07:04
The Weight of Light
NafisaSB said:
wonderful message - let\'s care and share, and we will definitely benefit, and receive in return
April 1st, 2026 00:27
NafisaSB said:
wonderful message - let\'s care and share, and we will definitely benefit, and receive in return
April 1st, 2026 00:27
Can a Friend Turn Good?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s a steady grace in this that really lands. The way you hold space for change, while also carrying the weight of what it costs to keep believing in others, gives it a deeper honesty. That question of whether expecting the best is too much…or exactly what makes a true friend…sits right at the heart of this. Beautifully done, my friend...and from what I can tell, you are not a selfish person in the slightest, nor is it selfish to put up boundaries and protect yourself from harm. That\'s not selfish, that is prudent and wise. Much love and hugs coming your way, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s a steady grace in this that really lands. The way you hold space for change, while also carrying the weight of what it costs to keep believing in others, gives it a deeper honesty. That question of whether expecting the best is too much…or exactly what makes a true friend…sits right at the heart of this. Beautifully done, my friend...and from what I can tell, you are not a selfish person in the slightest, nor is it selfish to put up boundaries and protect yourself from harm. That\'s not selfish, that is prudent and wise. Much love and hugs coming your way, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:46
Can a Friend Turn Good?
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem that asks the question of can friends change for the better. It gives the feeling that they can and that in the process so can we that it is a two way street. This is a most positive viewpoint that we all can improve. Nicely said
March 29th, 2026 18:01
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem that asks the question of can friends change for the better. It gives the feeling that they can and that in the process so can we that it is a two way street. This is a most positive viewpoint that we all can improve. Nicely said
March 29th, 2026 18:01
Can a Friend Turn Good?
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
It feels like we expect the same things and have the same disappointment… great question and great poem
March 29th, 2026 16:22
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
It feels like we expect the same things and have the same disappointment… great question and great poem
March 29th, 2026 16:22
When the Heart Knits Its Own Wound
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me hard…there’s such a quiet ache here that never tries to force itself louder than it needs to be. It just sits…breathes…hurts. The tenderness you carry through this is steady and real, and that closing line lands like a gentle resolve. Beautifully done, friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me hard…there’s such a quiet ache here that never tries to force itself louder than it needs to be. It just sits…breathes…hurts. The tenderness you carry through this is steady and real, and that closing line lands like a gentle resolve. Beautifully done, friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:13
When the Heart Knits Its Own Wound
sorenbarrett said:
Such a heartfelt poem of pain and hurt that watered with tomorrow may still have life to grow. Hopeful is the feeling that I am left with. Very nicely done Friendship
March 27th, 2026 12:01
sorenbarrett said:
Such a heartfelt poem of pain and hurt that watered with tomorrow may still have life to grow. Hopeful is the feeling that I am left with. Very nicely done Friendship
March 27th, 2026 12:01
Hidden Like Rubbish
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this carries both hurt and resolve… what’s hidden and dismissed becomes the very thing that grows. The movement from being pushed aside to pushing through is strong and steady. I love this because it speaks to me and my experience of that very thing. Well done, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this carries both hurt and resolve… what’s hidden and dismissed becomes the very thing that grows. The movement from being pushed aside to pushing through is strong and steady. I love this because it speaks to me and my experience of that very thing. Well done, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:05
Hidden Like Rubbish
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of taking the discarded, ignored and forgotten and recycling it into something that will be remembered and seen. Well done my friend
March 26th, 2026 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of taking the discarded, ignored and forgotten and recycling it into something that will be remembered and seen. Well done my friend
March 26th, 2026 20:14
The Weight of Light
Vipassana said:
What law—written in habit, whispered in prayer—
declares that joy is a gift to be given,
not a right to be claimed?
amen, sister
March 25th, 2026 01:31
Vipassana said:
What law—written in habit, whispered in prayer—
declares that joy is a gift to be given,
not a right to be claimed?
amen, sister
March 25th, 2026 01:31
\"A Hollow Heart\"
RSM0812 said:
This says to me a lonly man looking for love but unable to find it. It used to be easy. U meet someone at work or in a class or in a bar. But now you have to trust srrangers on the internet. Between you and me i have probably had over 5000 dollars stolen from me from internet dating scams so i gave up. Im hoping yet to meet the right girl but time is ticking. Its hard to be alone.
March 24th, 2026 22:36
RSM0812 said:
This says to me a lonly man looking for love but unable to find it. It used to be easy. U meet someone at work or in a class or in a bar. But now you have to trust srrangers on the internet. Between you and me i have probably had over 5000 dollars stolen from me from internet dating scams so i gave up. Im hoping yet to meet the right girl but time is ticking. Its hard to be alone.
March 24th, 2026 22:36
My Independent Little Girl
RSM0812 said:
Your writing is both elegant and provocative. It explores unanswered questions of the human soul and the words unuse to entangle your poetic webs are both masterful and like a muse of poetic beauty. I miss your interpretations friendship. They always, always always made my day. Keep writing. :)
March 24th, 2026 22:33
RSM0812 said:
Your writing is both elegant and provocative. It explores unanswered questions of the human soul and the words unuse to entangle your poetic webs are both masterful and like a muse of poetic beauty. I miss your interpretations friendship. They always, always always made my day. Keep writing. :)
March 24th, 2026 22:33
The Weight of Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this moves beautifully between outward care and inward need…holding both without dismissing either. “A lamp to be lit from within” and that final promise of shared joy really bring it together. It’s not about choosing one over the other…it’s about balance. Thoughtful and grounded, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this moves beautifully between outward care and inward need…holding both without dismissing either. “A lamp to be lit from within” and that final promise of shared joy really bring it together. It’s not about choosing one over the other…it’s about balance. Thoughtful and grounded, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:44
The Weight of Light
Neville said:
I note you have this classified as unclassified .. well I would argue and re-classify it as incredibly beautiful .. but don\'t say a word, its classified information .. Neville
March 24th, 2026 01:31
Neville said:
I note you have this classified as unclassified .. well I would argue and re-classify it as incredibly beautiful .. but don\'t say a word, its classified information .. Neville
March 24th, 2026 01:31
The Weight of Light
Kurt Philip Behm said:
If I was still teaching poetry I would say ... \'Here Is Your Poem\'
\"Let the world be happy, and let me be too—
not as a selfish plea, but as a quiet promise
that the joy we sow elsewhere is the very seed
that will bloom in the garden of our own soul.\"
March 23rd, 2026 20:46
Kurt Philip Behm said:
If I was still teaching poetry I would say ... \'Here Is Your Poem\'
\"Let the world be happy, and let me be too—
not as a selfish plea, but as a quiet promise
that the joy we sow elsewhere is the very seed
that will bloom in the garden of our own soul.\"
March 23rd, 2026 20:46
The Weight of Light
sorenbarrett said:
A most marvelous poem that drips with goodness. It speaks of giving and the joy of giving and that all is circular the good one gives comes back. Love this not that it happens directly but indirectly a type of karma. Very nicely written it carries me with it and is a fave
March 23rd, 2026 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
A most marvelous poem that drips with goodness. It speaks of giving and the joy of giving and that all is circular the good one gives comes back. Love this not that it happens directly but indirectly a type of karma. Very nicely written it carries me with it and is a fave
March 23rd, 2026 14:13
When the Ledger Is Closed.
NafisaSB said:
Winding down and letting go brings a lot of peace for sure. 👍
March 16th, 2026 23:57
NafisaSB said:
Winding down and letting go brings a lot of peace for sure. 👍
March 16th, 2026 23:57
When the Ledger Is Closed.
Neville said:
when the ledger is well and truly closed, surely it is time for something else to open up countless opportunities .. perhaps .. Neville
March 14th, 2026 11:23
Neville said:
when the ledger is well and truly closed, surely it is time for something else to open up countless opportunities .. perhaps .. Neville
March 14th, 2026 11:23
When the Ledger Is Closed.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s something quietly powerful about this piece. The images of coins in a river and paper boats sinking carry that sense of a life measured in moments that slip away…yet the tone never feels bitter. It feels settled…like someone closing a book they have finally finished reading. And the ending lingers beautifully: “and in that darkness, finally, find the peace of a story that has reached its end.” A strong, reflective piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 10th, 2026 09:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s something quietly powerful about this piece. The images of coins in a river and paper boats sinking carry that sense of a life measured in moments that slip away…yet the tone never feels bitter. It feels settled…like someone closing a book they have finally finished reading. And the ending lingers beautifully: “and in that darkness, finally, find the peace of a story that has reached its end.” A strong, reflective piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 10th, 2026 09:46
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