Comments received on poems by Friendship
Mother Nature tends to her own.
Michael Edwards said:
Your kind comment on my latest post prompted me to look up your work and I\'m not dissappointed. - this is such a soper crafted piece and an enjoyable read - I\'ll look out for your future posts .
October 1st, 2025 08:28
Michael Edwards said:
Your kind comment on my latest post prompted me to look up your work and I\'m not dissappointed. - this is such a soper crafted piece and an enjoyable read - I\'ll look out for your future posts .
October 1st, 2025 08:28
Mother Nature tends to her own.
sorenbarrett said:
Yes my friend she does indeed. A most wonderful poem of nature taking care of what needs to be done. Often not what man would do she does a better job than me or you. Loved the rhyme and the unfolding of the poem in good meter and flow it speaks to the majesty of nature and her wisdom. Well written
October 1st, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Yes my friend she does indeed. A most wonderful poem of nature taking care of what needs to be done. Often not what man would do she does a better job than me or you. Loved the rhyme and the unfolding of the poem in good meter and flow it speaks to the majesty of nature and her wisdom. Well written
October 1st, 2025 08:15
Stop saying the word I can\'t.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful, Friendship...the “I can’t” as a fence, the tongue retrained, the sky opening. A poem of language becoming liberation. Beautiful work, my dear friend. Very relatable. We can all plop that wall down in front of us and this is such an empowering write for people, myself included, to read. Thank you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 18:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful, Friendship...the “I can’t” as a fence, the tongue retrained, the sky opening. A poem of language becoming liberation. Beautiful work, my dear friend. Very relatable. We can all plop that wall down in front of us and this is such an empowering write for people, myself included, to read. Thank you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 18:07
Stop saying the word I can\'t.
sorenbarrett said:
What an amazing poem, I think your best, not just in concept and theme which is great but in wording that indicates the understanding of the concept. Well don my friend
September 30th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
What an amazing poem, I think your best, not just in concept and theme which is great but in wording that indicates the understanding of the concept. Well don my friend
September 30th, 2025 08:59
Opened mind.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this flows with clarity…the open mind here feels less like concept and more like lived freedom. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2025 15:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this flows with clarity…the open mind here feels less like concept and more like lived freedom. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2025 15:21
Opened mind.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of opening the mind to differences that are not part of you. This is a seeing of things from other perspectives. A freeing of the soul. Nicely written my wriend
September 29th, 2025 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of opening the mind to differences that are not part of you. This is a seeing of things from other perspectives. A freeing of the soul. Nicely written my wriend
September 29th, 2025 15:18
My Mother.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My mother is my rock too. This is so relatable and can only imagine missing the one who brought me into this world and cared for me so. Friendship, this is a full heart laid open. The crafted sonnet, the 8:00 ritual, the compass spinning, the vow to carry her light. It grieves and honors at once. Beautifully written and deeply felt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Oh…and what a beautiful picture. Trust me friend, you will find your courage to create again, you already have in your poetry. Crafting will come too, and when that happens, your mother will be right their with you! Again, well done!
September 28th, 2025 16:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My mother is my rock too. This is so relatable and can only imagine missing the one who brought me into this world and cared for me so. Friendship, this is a full heart laid open. The crafted sonnet, the 8:00 ritual, the compass spinning, the vow to carry her light. It grieves and honors at once. Beautifully written and deeply felt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Oh…and what a beautiful picture. Trust me friend, you will find your courage to create again, you already have in your poetry. Crafting will come too, and when that happens, your mother will be right their with you! Again, well done!
September 28th, 2025 16:32
life\'s a journey.
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Extended Metaphor: The river as time is carried through consistently and beautifully. Lines like “You cannot touch the self-same stream, / Nor recreate a waking dream” echo Heraclitus’ philosophy, grounding the piece in timeless wisdom. Nicely written.
September 28th, 2025 13:45
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Extended Metaphor: The river as time is carried through consistently and beautifully. Lines like “You cannot touch the self-same stream, / Nor recreate a waking dream” echo Heraclitus’ philosophy, grounding the piece in timeless wisdom. Nicely written.
September 28th, 2025 13:45
I\'m just finished.
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This captures the quiet peace of being truly finished incredibly moving.
A powerful meditation on effort, surrender, and the liberation of completion.
Nicely written.
September 28th, 2025 13:44
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This captures the quiet peace of being truly finished incredibly moving.
A powerful meditation on effort, surrender, and the liberation of completion.
Nicely written.
September 28th, 2025 13:44
My Mother.
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
The poem balances love, gratitude, and vulnerability. Lines like “I stand before the world in trembling awe” and “I’m sorry, Mom, that I have only wept” convey raw, authentic emotion. This is a deeply heartfelt and profoundly moving poem, a beautiful tribute to a mother’s love, guidance, and the lasting impact she has on her child’s life. Beautifully written ✨
September 28th, 2025 13:40
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
The poem balances love, gratitude, and vulnerability. Lines like “I stand before the world in trembling awe” and “I’m sorry, Mom, that I have only wept” convey raw, authentic emotion. This is a deeply heartfelt and profoundly moving poem, a beautiful tribute to a mother’s love, guidance, and the lasting impact she has on her child’s life. Beautifully written ✨
September 28th, 2025 13:40
My Mother.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tribute to a mother deemed principle in promoting your strengths and virtues and contributing to building you into what you are. A most lovely homage to a most important person in your young life. Very nicely written.
September 28th, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tribute to a mother deemed principle in promoting your strengths and virtues and contributing to building you into what you are. A most lovely homage to a most important person in your young life. Very nicely written.
September 28th, 2025 09:28
I\'m just finished.
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the exhaustion in this poem of being fed up and disappointed over others not meeting adequate standards. Feeling that one does more and receives less. A time to desist. Well written and I feel the tiredness
September 27th, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the exhaustion in this poem of being fed up and disappointed over others not meeting adequate standards. Feeling that one does more and receives less. A time to desist. Well written and I feel the tiredness
September 27th, 2025 08:00
I\'m just finished.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This lands with a haunting stillness. Every line exhales...like the final release after holding too much for too long. Excellent job, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This lands with a haunting stillness. Every line exhales...like the final release after holding too much for too long. Excellent job, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:58
life\'s a journey.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This piece carries river and memory together, my friend…your dad’s saying flows right through each line, shaping both the beauty and the ache of passing time. It’s steady, wise, and deeply human. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2025 07:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This piece carries river and memory together, my friend…your dad’s saying flows right through each line, shaping both the beauty and the ache of passing time. It’s steady, wise, and deeply human. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2025 07:12
life\'s a journey.
jim56 said:
your poemi is totally amazing
it has rhyme flow epression
well written blown away
well done jim keep writing
September 23rd, 2025 17:17
jim56 said:
your poemi is totally amazing
it has rhyme flow epression
well written blown away
well done jim keep writing
September 23rd, 2025 17:17
life\'s a journey.
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of Heraclitus that a man can never step in the same river twice and carpe diem live for the day. So true it is. A lovely write and good advise. Nicely done Friendship
September 23rd, 2025 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of Heraclitus that a man can never step in the same river twice and carpe diem live for the day. So true it is. A lovely write and good advise. Nicely done Friendship
September 23rd, 2025 12:38
life\'s a journey.
Bella Shepard said:
The beautiful rhyme and cadence of this poem is superb, a message for all ages. Loved it!
September 23rd, 2025 12:14
Bella Shepard said:
The beautiful rhyme and cadence of this poem is superb, a message for all ages. Loved it!
September 23rd, 2025 12:14
We need to Stop the verbal abuse!
NafisaSB said:
I hear you loud and clear, and am in complete agreement
you couldn\'t have made it plainer, and so well...
September 23rd, 2025 00:09
NafisaSB said:
I hear you loud and clear, and am in complete agreement
you couldn\'t have made it plainer, and so well...
September 23rd, 2025 00:09
Yard work.
Dan Williams said:
Ah, twenty years ago this could be any number of three season days for me. Now my body demands of me \"go inside, sit down, pretend you got a lot done\". Oh well. Thanks for this.
September 22nd, 2025 23:22
Dan Williams said:
Ah, twenty years ago this could be any number of three season days for me. Now my body demands of me \"go inside, sit down, pretend you got a lot done\". Oh well. Thanks for this.
September 22nd, 2025 23:22
What would it be no siblings to talk too!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and lived...it is honest. That image of “absent love, an empty space” won’t leave me; it distills estrangement into one unforgettable wound. And in your telling, I hear shadows of my own losses, the kind that never fully heal. A powerful and resonant piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and lived...it is honest. That image of “absent love, an empty space” won’t leave me; it distills estrangement into one unforgettable wound. And in your telling, I hear shadows of my own losses, the kind that never fully heal. A powerful and resonant piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:53
What would it be no siblings to talk too!
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sad remorse and regret over loss and present isolation. This poem bleeds and won\'t heal from past injury. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sad remorse and regret over loss and present isolation. This poem bleeds and won\'t heal from past injury. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:30
Yard work.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this one is pure delight. You carry the strain straight through to its payoff, the body’s protest giving way to real pride. And paired with that totes adorbs little gardener, it just glows. 🌹🐒🪴🌻🐦⬛ Love this!
September 21st, 2025 18:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this one is pure delight. You carry the strain straight through to its payoff, the body’s protest giving way to real pride. And paired with that totes adorbs little gardener, it just glows. 🌹🐒🪴🌻🐦⬛ Love this!
September 21st, 2025 18:50
Yard work.
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully rendered both rhythmically and lyrically as I read aloud, the best way to enjoy this poem. It\'s truly amazing how working in tune with natural surroundings can be so satisfying and meaningful. I did feel your joy!
September 21st, 2025 16:44
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully rendered both rhythmically and lyrically as I read aloud, the best way to enjoy this poem. It\'s truly amazing how working in tune with natural surroundings can be so satisfying and meaningful. I did feel your joy!
September 21st, 2025 16:44
Yard work.
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed and metered poem about completing a task instead of procrastination and a feeling of contentment and joy at completion. Very nicely done.
September 21st, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed and metered poem about completing a task instead of procrastination and a feeling of contentment and joy at completion. Very nicely done.
September 21st, 2025 13:00
Just being happy with age.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love how you’ve turned the aches and silver hairs into celebration. That mix of honesty and humor is exactly what makes life’s journey bearable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Wonderful job!
September 20th, 2025 19:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love how you’ve turned the aches and silver hairs into celebration. That mix of honesty and humor is exactly what makes life’s journey bearable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Wonderful job!
September 20th, 2025 19:26
Just being happy with age.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message at the end and peppered with a self laughter at aging. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message at the end and peppered with a self laughter at aging. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 09:09
We need to Stop the verbal abuse!
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem speaks about verbal abuse and the personal decision to reclaim one’s own peace. Empowering & Resolute. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:12
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem speaks about verbal abuse and the personal decision to reclaim one’s own peace. Empowering & Resolute. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:12
We need to Stop the verbal abuse!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong and steady, Friendship…naming the abuse, drawing the line, and claiming your light. It reads like both warning and healing, and I admire that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 13:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong and steady, Friendship…naming the abuse, drawing the line, and claiming your light. It reads like both warning and healing, and I admire that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 13:24
If you had one thing to tell your inner child,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one cuts straight to the bone…that warning to the child self is heartbreakingly raw. The ache of guarded silence weighs heavy here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 17th, 2025 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one cuts straight to the bone…that warning to the child self is heartbreakingly raw. The ache of guarded silence weighs heavy here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 17th, 2025 10:28
We need to Stop the verbal abuse!
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful statement made in poetic form. Intended abuse is unacceptable in any form, physical, verbal or emotional. I think that we have all been guilty of such and with recognition and apology might be forgiven. Often words said may cause unintended harm and I agree it is not for us to judge but speak up when we are offended. A lovely and most poignant write.
September 17th, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful statement made in poetic form. Intended abuse is unacceptable in any form, physical, verbal or emotional. I think that we have all been guilty of such and with recognition and apology might be forgiven. Often words said may cause unintended harm and I agree it is not for us to judge but speak up when we are offended. A lovely and most poignant write.
September 17th, 2025 09:17
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