Comments received on poems by Friendship
You can\'t help me!
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a slow decline can often lead a slow rise again
July 19th, 2026 11:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a slow decline can often lead a slow rise again
July 19th, 2026 11:41
You can\'t help me!
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem reminds us that we may feel fragile, but we are stronger than the despair it describes. The very fact that you could express such vulnerability with such beauty is proof that your humanity is enduring, not broken.
July 19th, 2026 11:21
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem reminds us that we may feel fragile, but we are stronger than the despair it describes. The very fact that you could express such vulnerability with such beauty is proof that your humanity is enduring, not broken.
July 19th, 2026 11:21
You can\'t help me!
peto said:
I can\'t help you
Wish I could
Your writing is phenomenal friendship
I always feel like I\'ve learned something of YOU when I read
The:deliberate \" in the last line really caught my eye.
Emotional and brilliant
July 19th, 2026 11:18
peto said:
I can\'t help you
Wish I could
Your writing is phenomenal friendship
I always feel like I\'ve learned something of YOU when I read
The:deliberate \" in the last line really caught my eye.
Emotional and brilliant
July 19th, 2026 11:18
You can\'t help me!
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a personal entropy that they feel beyond the help of others to stay. Well written with good rhyme and flow it sends its sad message of demise.
July 19th, 2026 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a personal entropy that they feel beyond the help of others to stay. Well written with good rhyme and flow it sends its sad message of demise.
July 19th, 2026 11:16
I am done.
soheil khodaparasti said:
You have expressed the cycle of a person\'s life beautifully, beginning with finding a voice, enduring hardship, facing exhaustion and surrender, letting go with dignity, and finally reaching acceptance. I like the strong opening, which immediately draws the reader into the speaker\'s struggle. I also like the powerful metaphors and vivid imagery, such as stones, shifting sands, iron tides, rusting armor, and the shore, which vividly mirror the speaker\'s emotional and spiritual journey. What makes the poem especially relatable is its realization that there comes a time when we must recognize our limits and let go with dignity.
July 19th, 2026 03:26
soheil khodaparasti said:
You have expressed the cycle of a person\'s life beautifully, beginning with finding a voice, enduring hardship, facing exhaustion and surrender, letting go with dignity, and finally reaching acceptance. I like the strong opening, which immediately draws the reader into the speaker\'s struggle. I also like the powerful metaphors and vivid imagery, such as stones, shifting sands, iron tides, rusting armor, and the shore, which vividly mirror the speaker\'s emotional and spiritual journey. What makes the poem especially relatable is its realization that there comes a time when we must recognize our limits and let go with dignity.
July 19th, 2026 03:26
I am done.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know this pain...and honestly, I feel myself in a similar place lately. There comes a point when continually fighting to be understood costs more than silence. This reached me where I live. My heart and prayers are with you, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know this pain...and honestly, I feel myself in a similar place lately. There comes a point when continually fighting to be understood costs more than silence. This reached me where I live. My heart and prayers are with you, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:15
I am done.
mylastwrites said:
We reach a point, where we just get too tired to care anymore. In so many ways I relate to this poem. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2026 14:39
mylastwrites said:
We reach a point, where we just get too tired to care anymore. In so many ways I relate to this poem. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2026 14:39
I am done.
sorenbarrett said:
I hear exhaustion in this write where good rhyme reinforces the feeling of having spent all one\'s energy and reserves to get to where one is and one is simply spent. Very well written.
July 16th, 2026 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
I hear exhaustion in this write where good rhyme reinforces the feeling of having spent all one\'s energy and reserves to get to where one is and one is simply spent. Very well written.
July 16th, 2026 14:30
Forgiveness
soheil khodaparasti said:
Insightful: Forgiveness as an act of self-protection while recognizing that the pain still remains.
July 16th, 2026 10:53
soheil khodaparasti said:
Insightful: Forgiveness as an act of self-protection while recognizing that the pain still remains.
July 16th, 2026 10:53
Forgiveness
cellinic said:
Deep and integrally penned lyrics with overtones of both conflict and harmony in its meaningful basics. Best wishes, my fave.
July 16th, 2026 06:18
cellinic said:
Deep and integrally penned lyrics with overtones of both conflict and harmony in its meaningful basics. Best wishes, my fave.
July 16th, 2026 06:18
Forgiveness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a compelling piece, Friendship. I appreciate how you explore forgiveness through the lens of self-preservation rather than easy resolution. The emotional honesty carries the poem, and the closing leaves the reader lingering in that unresolved space. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a compelling piece, Friendship. I appreciate how you explore forgiveness through the lens of self-preservation rather than easy resolution. The emotional honesty carries the poem, and the closing leaves the reader lingering in that unresolved space. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:44
Forgiveness
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of truth in what you say.
A good Write.
July 15th, 2026 20:20
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of truth in what you say.
A good Write.
July 15th, 2026 20:20
Forgiveness
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting point of view Friendship. Well written
July 15th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting point of view Friendship. Well written
July 15th, 2026 13:40
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
mylastwrites said:
I related to your poem very deeply. Losing someone I loved after 18 years together. The one thing I learned, the loving doesn’t stop with their passing. You wrote an absolutely beautiful poem. Thank you.
July 13th, 2026 12:11
mylastwrites said:
I related to your poem very deeply. Losing someone I loved after 18 years together. The one thing I learned, the loving doesn’t stop with their passing. You wrote an absolutely beautiful poem. Thank you.
July 13th, 2026 12:11
Just Bullshit.
NafisaSB said:
Good decision spelt out in clear terms. Never let anyone take advantage if you are right✌️
July 12th, 2026 21:42
NafisaSB said:
Good decision spelt out in clear terms. Never let anyone take advantage if you are right✌️
July 12th, 2026 21:42
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Paul Bell said:
Great epitaph, maybe open a bottle and drink a toast to a fine fellow.
Thoughts with you.
July 7th, 2026 13:51
Paul Bell said:
Great epitaph, maybe open a bottle and drink a toast to a fine fellow.
Thoughts with you.
July 7th, 2026 13:51
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Syd said:
Such a personal heartfelt piece.
Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 7th, 2026 13:32
Syd said:
Such a personal heartfelt piece.
Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 7th, 2026 13:32
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Kevin Hulme said:
I read this on what would have been my Mother\'s 98th Birthday. Yes we still miss our Loved Ones that have gone . And think of them every day.
A touching Poem.
July 7th, 2026 08:26
Kevin Hulme said:
I read this on what would have been my Mother\'s 98th Birthday. Yes we still miss our Loved Ones that have gone . And think of them every day.
A touching Poem.
July 7th, 2026 08:26
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a deep tenderness here, a love that refuses to end even when someone is gone.
The birthday candles become a beautiful symbol of memory, carrying warmth across the distance between two hearts.
July 7th, 2026 07:57
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a deep tenderness here, a love that refuses to end even when someone is gone.
The birthday candles become a beautiful symbol of memory, carrying warmth across the distance between two hearts.
July 7th, 2026 07:57
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartfelt tribute, Friendship. You honor both the life you shared and the love that still remains, and that balance gives this such quiet strength. It\'s tender without ever feeling sentimental, and it left me sitting with it long after I finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 16:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartfelt tribute, Friendship. You honor both the life you shared and the love that still remains, and that balance gives this such quiet strength. It\'s tender without ever feeling sentimental, and it left me sitting with it long after I finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 16:42
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a powerful piece. I appreciate that you let the questions remain questions instead of rushing toward resolution...and especially college-aged. The contrast between being told you carry a divine spark and then being wounded by those claiming to defend that same light is deeply affecting. This one stayed with me. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 15:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a powerful piece. I appreciate that you let the questions remain questions instead of rushing toward resolution...and especially college-aged. The contrast between being told you carry a divine spark and then being wounded by those claiming to defend that same light is deeply affecting. This one stayed with me. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 15:05
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the emotion shines through
July 6th, 2026 13:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the emotion shines through
July 6th, 2026 13:27
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice commemorative poem of one loved and lost. Very nicely done I can feel the missing of them in the words.
July 6th, 2026 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice commemorative poem of one loved and lost. Very nicely done I can feel the missing of them in the words.
July 6th, 2026 13:04
A broken mirror.
NafisaSB said:
Heartbreaking and heart rending😔sometimes the very people one trusts implicitly are the ones who betray and hurt us.
July 6th, 2026 11:37
NafisaSB said:
Heartbreaking and heart rending😔sometimes the very people one trusts implicitly are the ones who betray and hurt us.
July 6th, 2026 11:37
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