Comments received on poems by Friendship
Apology in the Language of Stars
Nyra M said:
A deeply moving apology. The imagery of stars and light makes the regret feel sincere and earned, and the closing lines are especially powerful. Beautifully written and emotionally honest.
February 21st, 2026 13:31
Nyra M said:
A deeply moving apology. The imagery of stars and light makes the regret feel sincere and earned, and the closing lines are especially powerful. Beautifully written and emotionally honest.
February 21st, 2026 13:31
My Independent Little Girl
Mutley Ravishes said:
A beautiful write by your Mom, , Friendship. I used to listen to an album called \"Misplaced Childhood\" when I was a teenager.
February 20th, 2026 17:20
Mutley Ravishes said:
A beautiful write by your Mom, , Friendship. I used to listen to an album called \"Misplaced Childhood\" when I was a teenager.
February 20th, 2026 17:20
My Independent Little Girl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures the sacred ache of watching independence bloom. The parent voice isn’t possessive…it’s reverent. That letting-go energy feels real. I was fine at the beginning. By the end I’m staring at the wall reconsidering my entire emotional stability. How powerful to know it was your mom\'s poem about you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures the sacred ache of watching independence bloom. The parent voice isn’t possessive…it’s reverent. That letting-go energy feels real. I was fine at the beginning. By the end I’m staring at the wall reconsidering my entire emotional stability. How powerful to know it was your mom\'s poem about you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:21
My Independent Little Girl
Paul Bell said:
Trees to conquer, and the world was your oyster.
Sort of feel sorry for kids today, I feel they\'re missing out on lives adventures now.
The computer has stolen them it seems.
February 20th, 2026 07:57
Paul Bell said:
Trees to conquer, and the world was your oyster.
Sort of feel sorry for kids today, I feel they\'re missing out on lives adventures now.
The computer has stolen them it seems.
February 20th, 2026 07:57
My Independent Little Girl
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of stubbornness turned resolution of childhood rebellion becoming independence. It reveals a childlike view growing to an adult vision. Innocence becoming wisdom. With wonderful metaphoric images it paints the picture in color. Very nice and a fave
February 20th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of stubbornness turned resolution of childhood rebellion becoming independence. It reveals a childlike view growing to an adult vision. Innocence becoming wisdom. With wonderful metaphoric images it paints the picture in color. Very nice and a fave
February 20th, 2026 06:39
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Friendship, may those shadows merge into the love of all.
Andy
February 20th, 2026 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Friendship, may those shadows merge into the love of all.
Andy
February 20th, 2026 02:51
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this moves from fracture to invitation with such quiet strength. The imagery is delicate, but the resolve underneath it is firm. It doesn’t rush healing…it chooses it. There’s humility, hope, and maturity woven together here. Beautifully crafted. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this moves from fracture to invitation with such quiet strength. The imagery is delicate, but the resolve underneath it is firm. It doesn’t rush healing…it chooses it. There’s humility, hope, and maturity woven together here. Beautifully crafted. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:43
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
Neville said:
Extraordinarily moving if you don\'t mind me stating a fact .. 10/10 ma\'am & that\'s another fact .. fact is, how can this not be liked or loved .. Neville 💛🌻👍
February 19th, 2026 13:56
Neville said:
Extraordinarily moving if you don\'t mind me stating a fact .. 10/10 ma\'am & that\'s another fact .. fact is, how can this not be liked or loved .. Neville 💛🌻👍
February 19th, 2026 13:56
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautiful wording a great read
February 19th, 2026 08:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautiful wording a great read
February 19th, 2026 08:17
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem that reaches out a hand and awaits someone to reach back. It is a call of hope that someone will respond with something that can be trusted and grow. Well done and most hopeful. It is raw as well as soft and a fave
February 19th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem that reaches out a hand and awaits someone to reach back. It is a call of hope that someone will respond with something that can be trusted and grow. Well done and most hopeful. It is raw as well as soft and a fave
February 19th, 2026 07:40
Six Months, 23 Days, 14 Hours, 33 Minutes
Tonya Titus said:
A soul wrenching & consuming read. Beautifully worded.
February 17th, 2026 12:36
Tonya Titus said:
A soul wrenching & consuming read. Beautifully worded.
February 17th, 2026 12:36
Six Months, 23 Days, 14 Hours, 33 Minutes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this holds trauma and resilience in perfect tension. “The syllabus of darkness” gives it structure, and “a precise stanza etched in my bones” makes the time tangible. It’s not about spectacle…it’s about survival and awareness. The mind never truly rests indeed. A moving, disciplined piece, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this holds trauma and resilience in perfect tension. “The syllabus of darkness” gives it structure, and “a precise stanza etched in my bones” makes the time tangible. It’s not about spectacle…it’s about survival and awareness. The mind never truly rests indeed. A moving, disciplined piece, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:35
Just Another Beautiful Monday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this breathes calm from the first line. There’s something steady and reassuring in the way you frame the ordinary as luminous. It doesn’t strain for beauty…it simply notices it. That closing reminder feels grounded and sincere. Lovely piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this breathes calm from the first line. There’s something steady and reassuring in the way you frame the ordinary as luminous. It doesn’t strain for beauty…it simply notices it. That closing reminder feels grounded and sincere. Lovely piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:14
Six Months, 23 Days, 14 Hours, 33 Minutes
Paul Bell said:
Always wondered what a comatose state would feel like.
The dreams and the stillness of time just waiting to awake.
They do say some survive drowning this way, the human mechanism of survival.
February 17th, 2026 07:44
Paul Bell said:
Always wondered what a comatose state would feel like.
The dreams and the stillness of time just waiting to awake.
They do say some survive drowning this way, the human mechanism of survival.
February 17th, 2026 07:44
Six Months, 23 Days, 14 Hours, 33 Minutes
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An easy choice to make - fave.
February 17th, 2026 07:24
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An easy choice to make - fave.
February 17th, 2026 07:24
Six Months, 23 Days, 14 Hours, 33 Minutes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is bleeding in its rawness. It is a masterpiece of self revelation a baring of the soul not just to the world but to oneself. Nicely crafted it reveals what eyes do not want to see us stuck in time beyond our choice. A most lovely write and a fave
February 17th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is bleeding in its rawness. It is a masterpiece of self revelation a baring of the soul not just to the world but to oneself. Nicely crafted it reveals what eyes do not want to see us stuck in time beyond our choice. A most lovely write and a fave
February 17th, 2026 04:51
Six Months, 23 Days, 14 Hours, 33 Minutes
orchidee said:
Good write F - a personal experience of yours?
February 17th, 2026 03:28
orchidee said:
Good write F - a personal experience of yours?
February 17th, 2026 03:28
Just Another Beautiful Monday
David Wakeling said:
This is real poetry. I like the rhyme and the mixture of common ordinary with the divine.Thats superb.Well done
February 16th, 2026 18:56
David Wakeling said:
This is real poetry. I like the rhyme and the mixture of common ordinary with the divine.Thats superb.Well done
February 16th, 2026 18:56
Just Another Beautiful Monday
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem beautifully reframes an ordinary Monday as something sacred and full of quiet wonder. No day is “just another” if we choose to truly see it.
February 16th, 2026 12:16
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem beautifully reframes an ordinary Monday as something sacred and full of quiet wonder. No day is “just another” if we choose to truly see it.
February 16th, 2026 12:16
Just Another Beautiful Monday
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve given mad Monday a brighter outlook, and the girl was really nice this morning, telling me my train was cancelled.
Still, the sun did pop its head out, so all is good with the world.
February 16th, 2026 09:40
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve given mad Monday a brighter outlook, and the girl was really nice this morning, telling me my train was cancelled.
Still, the sun did pop its head out, so all is good with the world.
February 16th, 2026 09:40
Just Another Beautiful Monday
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for brightening the day and a beautiful poem that beams with positive glow. Most lovely
February 16th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for brightening the day and a beautiful poem that beams with positive glow. Most lovely
February 16th, 2026 06:48
My Dearest Dad—My World Has Crumbled Around Me.
aDarkerMind said:
if we gather the courage to rise from the scars.
a most beautiful poem.
one to fave for sure.
February 15th, 2026 09:43
aDarkerMind said:
if we gather the courage to rise from the scars.
a most beautiful poem.
one to fave for sure.
February 15th, 2026 09:43
Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a warm pulse in this—no cheap roses, just real fellowship poured like good coffee.
You make love bigger than a couple’s whisper; you make it a table where everyone’s got a seat.
February 15th, 2026 09:05
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a warm pulse in this—no cheap roses, just real fellowship poured like good coffee.
You make love bigger than a couple’s whisper; you make it a table where everyone’s got a seat.
February 15th, 2026 09:05
Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends
Paul Bell said:
Nice to see a site cuddle on love day and hopefully many more to come.
February 14th, 2026 13:25
Paul Bell said:
Nice to see a site cuddle on love day and hopefully many more to come.
February 14th, 2026 13:25
Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a communal embrace. From coffee-warm hands to playlists that spin our world…you turn Valentine’s Day into something broader and kinder. The tone is celebratory without being sugary. It honors connection in a grounded way. Lovely piece, dearest Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a communal embrace. From coffee-warm hands to playlists that spin our world…you turn Valentine’s Day into something broader and kinder. The tone is celebratory without being sugary. It honors connection in a grounded way. Lovely piece, dearest Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:52
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