Comments received on poems by Friendship
When the Ledger Is Closed.
NafisaSB said:
Winding down and letting go brings a lot of peace for sure. 👍
March 16th, 2026 23:57
NafisaSB said:
Winding down and letting go brings a lot of peace for sure. 👍
March 16th, 2026 23:57
When the Ledger Is Closed.
Neville said:
when the ledger is well and truly closed, surely it is time for something else to open up countless opportunities .. perhaps .. Neville
March 14th, 2026 11:23
Neville said:
when the ledger is well and truly closed, surely it is time for something else to open up countless opportunities .. perhaps .. Neville
March 14th, 2026 11:23
When the Ledger Is Closed.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s something quietly powerful about this piece. The images of coins in a river and paper boats sinking carry that sense of a life measured in moments that slip away…yet the tone never feels bitter. It feels settled…like someone closing a book they have finally finished reading. And the ending lingers beautifully: “and in that darkness, finally, find the peace of a story that has reached its end.” A strong, reflective piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 10th, 2026 09:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s something quietly powerful about this piece. The images of coins in a river and paper boats sinking carry that sense of a life measured in moments that slip away…yet the tone never feels bitter. It feels settled…like someone closing a book they have finally finished reading. And the ending lingers beautifully: “and in that darkness, finally, find the peace of a story that has reached its end.” A strong, reflective piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 10th, 2026 09:46
When the Ledger Is Closed.
sorenbarrett said:
This is the story of winding down. Seen as the finish and the acceptance that the race is run. Nicely written.
March 10th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
This is the story of winding down. Seen as the finish and the acceptance that the race is run. Nicely written.
March 10th, 2026 05:02
A Purpose without a Purpose .
RSM0812 said:
This us a very interesting ✍️. The traveler and their quest. With a thirst of knowlede to portray to mankind. Loved it.
March 10th, 2026 03:50
RSM0812 said:
This us a very interesting ✍️. The traveler and their quest. With a thirst of knowlede to portray to mankind. Loved it.
March 10th, 2026 03:50
A Purpose without a Purpose .
David Wakeling said:
I great question is asked here.What is the purpose of Life? Obviously the answer is either personal or general. If it is personal each one of us sees there own purpose in life different from their neighbours.If it is general we are here by accident without a purpose.take your pick.Nice poem made me think
March 9th, 2026 16:56
David Wakeling said:
I great question is asked here.What is the purpose of Life? Obviously the answer is either personal or general. If it is personal each one of us sees there own purpose in life different from their neighbours.If it is general we are here by accident without a purpose.take your pick.Nice poem made me think
March 9th, 2026 16:56
A Purpose without a Purpose .
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s a strong philosophical current here…purpose portrayed not as a fixed destination but as something mysterious and unfolding. The spinning compass, the wandering traveler, the lantern in darkness all work together to create that sense of searching. It leaves the reader reflecting on the journey itself. Powerful poem, my friend, and a fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s a strong philosophical current here…purpose portrayed not as a fixed destination but as something mysterious and unfolding. The spinning compass, the wandering traveler, the lantern in darkness all work together to create that sense of searching. It leaves the reader reflecting on the journey itself. Powerful poem, my friend, and a fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:34
When the World Sleeps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reminds me of those rare moments when the world finally quiets and nature is all one can hear. The poem captures that peaceful solitude so well…just listening while everything else sleeps. A lovely reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 8th, 2026 07:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reminds me of those rare moments when the world finally quiets and nature is all one can hear. The poem captures that peaceful solitude so well…just listening while everything else sleeps. A lovely reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 8th, 2026 07:24
When the World Sleeps
sorenbarrett said:
Night talk the best of conversations. Nature tells its bedtime tales to a listening child. A most lovely and quieting write
March 8th, 2026 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Night talk the best of conversations. Nature tells its bedtime tales to a listening child. A most lovely and quieting write
March 8th, 2026 06:09
Scars of the Unseen Fire, I almost lost my best friend.
David Wakeling said:
this is a disturbing journey.Nothing worse than fire in Australia.We know the suffering only too well.A great poem of endurance
March 7th, 2026 17:51
David Wakeling said:
this is a disturbing journey.Nothing worse than fire in Australia.We know the suffering only too well.A great poem of endurance
March 7th, 2026 17:51
Scars of the Unseen Fire, I almost lost my best friend.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the metaphor of an unseen fire running through memory works beautifully here. The scars and third-degree burns become proof of how close that bond came to being lost…yet also how fiercely it endured. Walking through those “charred fields of our past” is such a haunting and powerful image. Strong, heartfelt work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the metaphor of an unseen fire running through memory works beautifully here. The scars and third-degree burns become proof of how close that bond came to being lost…yet also how fiercely it endured. Walking through those “charred fields of our past” is such a haunting and powerful image. Strong, heartfelt work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:56
Scars of the Unseen Fire, I almost lost my best friend.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a friendship one felt was almost lost but true friendship is never lost only misplaced and it is fire that makes the hardest steel and in the process of smelting all defects and scars are erased. Well written
March 7th, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a friendship one felt was almost lost but true friendship is never lost only misplaced and it is fire that makes the hardest steel and in the process of smelting all defects and scars are erased. Well written
March 7th, 2026 09:30
When the Last Page Turns
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Friendship, at the end of each line a new line awaits us to move forward.
Andy
March 7th, 2026 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Friendship, at the end of each line a new line awaits us to move forward.
Andy
March 7th, 2026 02:57
When the Last Page Turns
Neville said:
You can beat an egg etc etc but you can\'t beat what sorenbarrett said .. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💛🌻👍
March 7th, 2026 02:29
Neville said:
You can beat an egg etc etc but you can\'t beat what sorenbarrett said .. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💛🌻👍
March 7th, 2026 02:29
When the Last Page Turns
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about Death as the final curtain.We should and some people do look forward to Death because as the Tarot cards say it is a new beginning.An excellent poem.Well done
March 6th, 2026 17:26
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about Death as the final curtain.We should and some people do look forward to Death because as the Tarot cards say it is a new beginning.An excellent poem.Well done
March 6th, 2026 17:26
When the Last Page Turns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Friendship, this speaks to something I’ve felt many times…how endings can bring both relief and a quiet ache at the same moment. The way you frame that space between what was and what might be feels honest and comforting. That last thought stays with me gently…“hand in hand, waiting for the next line to begin.” Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Friendship, this speaks to something I’ve felt many times…how endings can bring both relief and a quiet ache at the same moment. The way you frame that space between what was and what might be feels honest and comforting. That last thought stays with me gently…“hand in hand, waiting for the next line to begin.” Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:31
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries such a tender ache…that childlike call for Papa to fix what feels broken inside. The memory of learning to repair the bike is a beautiful anchor for the whole poem. It turns the heart itself into something laid on the workbench…hoping for steady hands to make it right again. A deeply moving and relatable piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 12:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries such a tender ache…that childlike call for Papa to fix what feels broken inside. The memory of learning to repair the bike is a beautiful anchor for the whole poem. It turns the heart itself into something laid on the workbench…hoping for steady hands to make it right again. A deeply moving and relatable piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 12:17
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
_Doc_ said:
Very deep and heartwarming. Some pain being reflected here. Well written
March 6th, 2026 10:57
_Doc_ said:
Very deep and heartwarming. Some pain being reflected here. Well written
March 6th, 2026 10:57
When the Last Page Turns
orchidee said:
Good write F. Yes, Let\'s read the last page of a book first. It could make sense. save us reading maybe hundreds of pages before we get to the end! lol. But then we know the ending before the beginning. Doh!
March 6th, 2026 09:03
orchidee said:
Good write F. Yes, Let\'s read the last page of a book first. It could make sense. save us reading maybe hundreds of pages before we get to the end! lol. But then we know the ending before the beginning. Doh!
March 6th, 2026 09:03
When the Last Page Turns
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful write of endings and beginnings a cycle of life. So nicely done
March 6th, 2026 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful write of endings and beginnings a cycle of life. So nicely done
March 6th, 2026 08:06
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
orchidee said:
Good wishes to get well soon F. :) A sensitive write.
March 6th, 2026 03:27
orchidee said:
Good wishes to get well soon F. :) A sensitive write.
March 6th, 2026 03:27
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