Comments received on poems by Friendship
When the Heart Races the Clock
sorenbarrett said:
A hurricane indeed the question becomes cat one, two, three, four or five. The fear is always a five where nothing survives and inner tornadoes take off roofs and carry people away. It is hard to breath in a hurricane the air pressure changes and one has to worry about flying objects. Tidal surge also a problem where one could drown. They say seek safe shelter before it hits but before weather forecasting how would one know? Oh if one could only forecast the panic. A vivid imagery is presented in this poem tying the two together. \"White knuckled waves\" also noted in the lines of tide receding and pulling finger from one\'s throat. A marvelous description of such attacks. This poem presents the whole cycle from beginning to end of the storm. Very nice
January 23rd, 2026 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
A hurricane indeed the question becomes cat one, two, three, four or five. The fear is always a five where nothing survives and inner tornadoes take off roofs and carry people away. It is hard to breath in a hurricane the air pressure changes and one has to worry about flying objects. Tidal surge also a problem where one could drown. They say seek safe shelter before it hits but before weather forecasting how would one know? Oh if one could only forecast the panic. A vivid imagery is presented in this poem tying the two together. \"White knuckled waves\" also noted in the lines of tide receding and pulling finger from one\'s throat. A marvelous description of such attacks. This poem presents the whole cycle from beginning to end of the storm. Very nice
January 23rd, 2026 09:19
Butterflies Fly Free
orchidee said:
A fine write F. I must fly like a butterfly, not like The Birdman, cos I keep crashing! lol.
January 22nd, 2026 10:11
orchidee said:
A fine write F. I must fly like a butterfly, not like The Birdman, cos I keep crashing! lol.
January 22nd, 2026 10:11
Butterflies Fly Free
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest friend, and I feel honored to call you that, reading this feels like permission. Permission to loosen the grip, to stop measuring worth by weight carried. That idea of release as wisdom resonates deeply with me. Thank you for that, Friendship. Well done, indeed, and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 22nd, 2026 09:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest friend, and I feel honored to call you that, reading this feels like permission. Permission to loosen the grip, to stop measuring worth by weight carried. That idea of release as wisdom resonates deeply with me. Thank you for that, Friendship. Well done, indeed, and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 22nd, 2026 09:46
Butterflies Fly Free
Paul Bell said:
Certainly when I was a child, butterflies were abundant, not anymore sadly.
Such a gracious creature, one of natures miracles.
January 22nd, 2026 09:11
Paul Bell said:
Certainly when I was a child, butterflies were abundant, not anymore sadly.
Such a gracious creature, one of natures miracles.
January 22nd, 2026 09:11
Butterflies Fly Free
Soman Ragavan said:
\"We are the moment, bright and brief....\" This sums up the life of the butterfly. A fragile, delicate life, brief as well. It spreads the spendours of its wings. In its brief life it has to do what it must do.
January 22nd, 2026 08:00
Soman Ragavan said:
\"We are the moment, bright and brief....\" This sums up the life of the butterfly. A fragile, delicate life, brief as well. It spreads the spendours of its wings. In its brief life it has to do what it must do.
January 22nd, 2026 08:00
Butterflies Fly Free
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just external beauty but that inside that allows us to fly free. It seems that the beauty of the butterfly is a metaphor for the beauty of the soul in each of us. The air that is there for all is free as well and can lift our wings without restriction. A lovely poem that has many details that reinforce this theme. Nicely done my friend.
January 22nd, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just external beauty but that inside that allows us to fly free. It seems that the beauty of the butterfly is a metaphor for the beauty of the soul in each of us. The air that is there for all is free as well and can lift our wings without restriction. A lovely poem that has many details that reinforce this theme. Nicely done my friend.
January 22nd, 2026 07:40
\"Voices Unbound\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this reminds me how often we confuse volume with voice. The way you honor presence, gesture, touch, and design as language feels grounding…it calls for listening that’s active, not passive. Beautiful job, dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this reminds me how often we confuse volume with voice. The way you honor presence, gesture, touch, and design as language feels grounding…it calls for listening that’s active, not passive. Beautiful job, dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:49
\"Voices Unbound\"
Cheeky Missy said:
Autism, in addition to dyslexia, is only one of a couple of my features which cause me difficulty but are simply a fact of life.
January 21st, 2026 18:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Autism, in addition to dyslexia, is only one of a couple of my features which cause me difficulty but are simply a fact of life.
January 21st, 2026 18:45
\"Voices Unbound\"
Paul Bell said:
Autistic people are usually good artists, but give them a computer and ask them to show you something, you will see speed at work.
I know this from asking my nephew for a bit of help on the computer. Sadly, I don\'t do speed learning.
Everyone has their strengths out there, and dumb words hinder advancement.
January 21st, 2026 15:43
Paul Bell said:
Autistic people are usually good artists, but give them a computer and ask them to show you something, you will see speed at work.
I know this from asking my nephew for a bit of help on the computer. Sadly, I don\'t do speed learning.
Everyone has their strengths out there, and dumb words hinder advancement.
January 21st, 2026 15:43
\"Voices Unbound\"
sorenbarrett said:
A well written piece with a good message. It would be nice if we focused on peoples strengths not weaknesses and the message is heard. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
A well written piece with a good message. It would be nice if we focused on peoples strengths not weaknesses and the message is heard. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 10:46
Perseverance in My Life
Mutley Ravishes said:
He who endures to the end will receive the prize!
January 20th, 2026 20:18
Mutley Ravishes said:
He who endures to the end will receive the prize!
January 20th, 2026 20:18
Perseverance in My Life
Paul Bell said:
Always think if you\'re true to yourself, perseverance will pay off.
Maybe not right away, the journey might be long, but worth the wait.
January 20th, 2026 15:02
Paul Bell said:
Always think if you\'re true to yourself, perseverance will pay off.
Maybe not right away, the journey might be long, but worth the wait.
January 20th, 2026 15:02
Perseverance in My Life
sorenbarrett said:
A good write. One step at a time, just one more step. If one focuses on just the next step one will get there. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
A good write. One step at a time, just one more step. If one focuses on just the next step one will get there. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 07:59
Echoes of a Fading Light
Paul Bell said:
Tried the garden today, it was calling for help.
Managed an hour before I gave up.
Life in winter is definitely for hibernating.
January 19th, 2026 11:30
Paul Bell said:
Tried the garden today, it was calling for help.
Managed an hour before I gave up.
Life in winter is definitely for hibernating.
January 19th, 2026 11:30
Crow\'s Gambit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is rich and mesmerizing. It feels intelligent, patient, and deeply attentive to the world it’s watching. The reverence you give the crows never slips into myth-making…it stays grounded and earned. Wonderful write, my dear friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is rich and mesmerizing. It feels intelligent, patient, and deeply attentive to the world it’s watching. The reverence you give the crows never slips into myth-making…it stays grounded and earned. Wonderful write, my dear friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:51
Crow\'s Gambit
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts slow and builds to a wonderful ending. The crow long maligned now realized to be far wiser than thought and a harbinger of not just evil but of seeing into a soul. Nicely written
January 19th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts slow and builds to a wonderful ending. The crow long maligned now realized to be far wiser than thought and a harbinger of not just evil but of seeing into a soul. Nicely written
January 19th, 2026 08:53
Echoes of a Fading Light
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a dark feeling of sadness and lack of hope. It sees a world that is infertile and painful leaving a sad feeling. Nicely crafted it casts a shadow without promise of a new sunrise. Well done
January 18th, 2026 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a dark feeling of sadness and lack of hope. It sees a world that is infertile and painful leaving a sad feeling. Nicely crafted it casts a shadow without promise of a new sunrise. Well done
January 18th, 2026 20:05
Echoes of a Fading Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I connect deeply with this landscape you’ve drawn. That feeling of being surrounded by color others can still see, while you stand somewhere muted and cold, feels painfully familiar. Thank you for this, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 19:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I connect deeply with this landscape you’ve drawn. That feeling of being surrounded by color others can still see, while you stand somewhere muted and cold, feels painfully familiar. Thank you for this, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 19:38
\"It\'s Okay to Love Yourself\"
xTattooingPaperx said:
This is honestly the most suitable piece I could have came across this morning. Thank you for writing this.
January 9th, 2026 07:50
xTattooingPaperx said:
This is honestly the most suitable piece I could have came across this morning. Thank you for writing this.
January 9th, 2026 07:50
I am so psychotic
NafisaSB said:
yes you are truly alive to all that is going in and around you..
wishing you a blessed and beautiful year ahead...
January 9th, 2026 00:16
NafisaSB said:
yes you are truly alive to all that is going in and around you..
wishing you a blessed and beautiful year ahead...
January 9th, 2026 00:16
The Magic of Santa, Seen Through My Father\'s Eyes
Dominic Windram said:
Beautiful metaphorical language deployed here which creates so many vivid impressions in my mind...another fave of mine.
January 7th, 2026 07:38
Dominic Windram said:
Beautiful metaphorical language deployed here which creates so many vivid impressions in my mind...another fave of mine.
January 7th, 2026 07:38
Totally Free
orchidee said:
We are \'free\' too, not to comment on poet\'s poems where they NEVER reply! I\'m not saying that we need to confirm a comment every time by saying \'You\'re welcome\', etc. though that\'s encouraging.
January 7th, 2026 03:21
orchidee said:
We are \'free\' too, not to comment on poet\'s poems where they NEVER reply! I\'m not saying that we need to confirm a comment every time by saying \'You\'re welcome\', etc. though that\'s encouraging.
January 7th, 2026 03:21
Totally Free
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this poem moves with grace. You strip away obligation and noise, then let presence take its place. The ending doesn’t shout liberation…it settles into it, and that’s what makes it convincing. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 6th, 2026 13:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this poem moves with grace. You strip away obligation and noise, then let presence take its place. The ending doesn’t shout liberation…it settles into it, and that’s what makes it convincing. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 6th, 2026 13:43
Totally Free
orchidee said:
Good write F. I was free as The Birdman, until me wings snapped after about 7 seconds. lol.
January 6th, 2026 09:48
orchidee said:
Good write F. I was free as The Birdman, until me wings snapped after about 7 seconds. lol.
January 6th, 2026 09:48
Totally Free
Katie B. said:
Always beautiful, always lovely Friendship. Thanks for sharing your talent.
January 6th, 2026 09:28
Katie B. said:
Always beautiful, always lovely Friendship. Thanks for sharing your talent.
January 6th, 2026 09:28
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