Comments received on poems by Cam



December’s Lament
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful Christmas message that needs to be heard. True in what it says it opens the door for a more meaningful holiday. Lovely

December 16th, 2025 11:15

My Prayer to You
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of gratitude and a prayer as such as well. Nicely crafted and worded

December 12th, 2025 10:56

My Prayer to You
orchidee said:

Good write Cam. I think there may be some more to that prayer of the first stanza, but I forgot what it is! Unless it\'s another prayer with nearly, clearly, dearly in it - if you know what I\'m waffling on about! lol.

December 12th, 2025 09:45

Are you Scared
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

December 11th, 2025 18:00

Are you Scared
sorenbarrett said:

Being honest with oneself is paramount and and courageous enough to face the truth. Well written

December 11th, 2025 13:10

Am I Good Enough?
Friendship said:

Well written, your poem explores themes of self-doubt, love, and the desire for validation within a relationship. The speaker grapples with feelings of inadequacy and wonders whether they are fulfilling their partner\'s expectations, while simultaneously expressing a deep yearning to provide love and a future for the relationship.

September 23rd, 2025 11:17

Am I Good Enough?
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write about feeling worthy of someone else and doing enough to show them. Nicely written

September 18th, 2025 18:48

Relapse
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of what happens to so many where time cracks what was. A good poem.

August 26th, 2025 11:23

You Look Happier
sorenbarrett said:

We all fake our feelings from time to time to hide what we don\'t want others to see. A most emotional write

August 26th, 2025 04:38

You Look Happier
Cheeky Missy said:

Ambivalence and distraction help as well. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

August 25th, 2025 21:40