Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
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sorenbarrett said:
The first lines ones of vowing to live on the edge while in the body of the text a love poem for a love searched for. Very nice Keyara
December 3rd, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
The first lines ones of vowing to live on the edge while in the body of the text a love poem for a love searched for. Very nice Keyara
December 3rd, 2025 03:57
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kiki, my friend, this is vibrant and full of heartโฆthe angel energy, the affirmations, the soft intensity woven through your style. You turned worthiness into a pulse. Beautiful. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 2nd, 2025 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kiki, my friend, this is vibrant and full of heartโฆthe angel energy, the affirmations, the soft intensity woven through your style. You turned worthiness into a pulse. Beautiful. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 2nd, 2025 10:48
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sorenbarrett said:
Only we ourselves can say that. Nicely stated
December 2nd, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Only we ourselves can say that. Nicely stated
December 2nd, 2025 08:21
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is vibrantโฆthe symbols, the soft confessions, the little coded affirmations woven through. You turned a simple message into something textured and alive. Brilliant as always, dearest Kiki! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 1st, 2025 18:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is vibrantโฆthe symbols, the soft confessions, the little coded affirmations woven through. You turned a simple message into something textured and alive. Brilliant as always, dearest Kiki! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 1st, 2025 18:12
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sorenbarrett said:
To me going above and beyond words means action and actions speak louder than words. Nicely written. Keyara
December 1st, 2025 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
To me going above and beyond words means action and actions speak louder than words. Nicely written. Keyara
December 1st, 2025 11:09
๐ผ๐๐ฃ๐๐ช ๐๐ ๐ฃ๐๐๐๐๐ค: ๐ฏ๐ฝโฏ โฌโฏ๐๐โฏ๐ ๐ฏ๐ฝโฏ ๐ฏ๐พ๐โฏ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, I know this feelingโฆthe swirl of early-morning words, the rush, the trance of lines forming faster than you can catch them. You wrote that energy with real joy. Love it, my friend! Hope your weekend has been beautiful thus far! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 30th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, I know this feelingโฆthe swirl of early-morning words, the rush, the trance of lines forming faster than you can catch them. You wrote that energy with real joy. Love it, my friend! Hope your weekend has been beautiful thus far! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 30th, 2025 08:51
๐ผ๐๐ฃ๐๐ช ๐๐ ๐ฃ๐๐๐๐๐ค: ๐ฏ๐ฝโฏ โฌโฏ๐๐โฏ๐ ๐ฏ๐ฝโฏ ๐ฏ๐พ๐โฏ
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful poem of putting emotions into verse. A lovely write Keyara
November 30th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful poem of putting emotions into verse. A lovely write Keyara
November 30th, 2025 08:49
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this feels like driftingโฆsoft, dreamy, a little chaotic in that sweet way your pieces often carry. Itโs playful and vulnerable all at once. A beautiful work, my dearest friend, ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 29th, 2025 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this feels like driftingโฆsoft, dreamy, a little chaotic in that sweet way your pieces often carry. Itโs playful and vulnerable all at once. A beautiful work, my dearest friend, ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 29th, 2025 09:23
๐๐ซ๐ก๐ฉ๐ข๐ฐ๐ฐ~ ๐๐ข๐ณ๐ข๐ฏ ๐๐ซ๐ก๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค
sorenbarrett said:
Your keyboard like my brain deletes the past and moves on to the present. A good write
November 29th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
Your keyboard like my brain deletes the past and moves on to the present. A good write
November 29th, 2025 08:41
Question of the Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is quietly steadyโฆthe โglimmer of hopeโ moment really stayed with me, and Iโve lived those ups and downs myself. You wrote it with a soft honesty that lands well, my dear friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 28th, 2025 11:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is quietly steadyโฆthe โglimmer of hopeโ moment really stayed with me, and Iโve lived those ups and downs myself. You wrote it with a soft honesty that lands well, my dear friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 28th, 2025 11:06
Question of the Day
sorenbarrett said:
A belief that everything will turn out for the best always leave the believer feeling good even in the worst tragedies. A lovely thought
November 28th, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
A belief that everything will turn out for the best always leave the believer feeling good even in the worst tragedies. A lovely thought
November 28th, 2025 07:34
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kikiโฆ the frost, the encryption, the ache beneath the glyphsโฆThis one feels like breath on cold glassโฆintimate and honest at once. Loved this. ๐ฅ๐คญโค๏ธโ๐ฅ๐ฅ
November 27th, 2025 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kikiโฆ the frost, the encryption, the ache beneath the glyphsโฆThis one feels like breath on cold glassโฆintimate and honest at once. Loved this. ๐ฅ๐คญโค๏ธโ๐ฅ๐ฅ
November 27th, 2025 10:38
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sorenbarrett said:
Dimming of love and cooling of sentiment is a sad feel. Well written
November 27th, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
Dimming of love and cooling of sentiment is a sad feel. Well written
November 27th, 2025 08:46
Powerful ... ๐ฏโด๐น๐ถ๐, ๐โด๐น๐ถ๐ ๐พ๐... Powerful
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful affirmation nicely stated. Well done
November 26th, 2025 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful affirmation nicely stated. Well done
November 26th, 2025 14:11
๐๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ข ๐ฑ๐ฌ ๐๐ข๐ข ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฑ ๐๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐๐ถ ๐๐ฆ๐ฃ๐ข
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kiki, this moves like an opened windowโฆ soft, honest, a little raw, full of those truths you only whisper. You let the feeling lead the form and it works beautifully. Wonderful job, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 25th, 2025 23:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kiki, this moves like an opened windowโฆ soft, honest, a little raw, full of those truths you only whisper. You let the feeling lead the form and it works beautifully. Wonderful job, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 25th, 2025 23:29
๐๐น๐๐พ๐โฏ ๐โฏ ๐ฉโด๐
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you got me with this oneโฆ the softness, the switch-ups, the little emotional reveals hiding in the styling. Itโs tender and confident at the same timeโฆ you write with your whole spirit here. No advising here. Just admiration, my dear friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 25th, 2025 15:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you got me with this oneโฆ the softness, the switch-ups, the little emotional reveals hiding in the styling. Itโs tender and confident at the same timeโฆ you write with your whole spirit here. No advising here. Just admiration, my dear friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 25th, 2025 15:43
๐๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ข ๐ฑ๐ฌ ๐๐ข๐ข ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฑ ๐๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐๐ถ ๐๐ฆ๐ฃ๐ข
sorenbarrett said:
here I hear a poem of demur, caution, fear of discovery and the hiding of a word. Time brings self assurance. Well written
November 25th, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
here I hear a poem of demur, caution, fear of discovery and the hiding of a word. Time brings self assurance. Well written
November 25th, 2025 11:30
๐๐น๐๐พ๐โฏ ๐โฏ ๐ฉโด๐
sorenbarrett said:
We are many and all are one. A good thought and wonderful poem
November 24th, 2025 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
We are many and all are one. A good thought and wonderful poem
November 24th, 2025 15:43
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kikiโฆthis feels like frozen time cracking open into sugar, shadow, and skyโฆyou let the chaos stay honest, and thatโs what hits me. You write the in-between better than anyone. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 23rd, 2025 16:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kikiโฆthis feels like frozen time cracking open into sugar, shadow, and skyโฆyou let the chaos stay honest, and thatโs what hits me. You write the in-between better than anyone. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 23rd, 2025 16:05
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sorenbarrett said:
Time may freeze from time to time and between time. In dreams, between extremes of fear, anger or joy. It may freeze. Nicely done
November 23rd, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Time may freeze from time to time and between time. In dreams, between extremes of fear, anger or joy. It may freeze. Nicely done
November 23rd, 2025 04:32
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dearest Kiki, the ornate script and the raw confession make a striking mixโฆ beauty on top, truth underneath. The rose image blooms through the whole piece. . I love it, friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 22nd, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dearest Kiki, the ornate script and the raw confession make a striking mixโฆ beauty on top, truth underneath. The rose image blooms through the whole piece. . I love it, friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 22nd, 2025 08:25
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sorenbarrett said:
Keyara here you leave a welcome feeling as words fall onto the page. Nicely worded it speaks to the reader. Well done
November 22nd, 2025 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
Keyara here you leave a welcome feeling as words fall onto the page. Nicely worded it speaks to the reader. Well done
November 22nd, 2025 03:27
Listened to Boone Self Meditation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem bounces from one area to another while still hanging onto a single thread. Well done
November 21st, 2025 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem bounces from one area to another while still hanging onto a single thread. Well done
November 21st, 2025 14:17
Listened to Boone Self Meditation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this whole piece feels like someone trying to steady their own pulse while the world spinsโฆthereโs softness here, but also a real ache. Well written! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 21st, 2025 11:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this whole piece feels like someone trying to steady their own pulse while the world spinsโฆthereโs softness here, but also a real ache. Well written! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 21st, 2025 11:31
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, reading this felt like listening to someone talk in the darkโฆquiet, hurting, but still holding onto a star. You captured that mix of missing and enduring beautifully. Well done dearest friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 20th, 2025 12:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, reading this felt like listening to someone talk in the darkโฆquiet, hurting, but still holding onto a star. You captured that mix of missing and enduring beautifully. Well done dearest friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 20th, 2025 12:14
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Demar Desu said:
The tone and pace is very nice. Great poem
November 20th, 2025 09:02
Demar Desu said:
The tone and pace is very nice. Great poem
November 20th, 2025 09:02
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem of reflection pours out of words of metaphor. Well done
November 20th, 2025 08:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of reflection pours out of words of metaphor. Well done
November 20th, 2025 08:11
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one is wild in the best wayโฆthe swirl, the glitch, the myth, the power-outage chaos. You always write like lightning inside a prism. Loved this. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 19th, 2025 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one is wild in the best wayโฆthe swirl, the glitch, the myth, the power-outage chaos. You always write like lightning inside a prism. Loved this. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 19th, 2025 09:52
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sorenbarrett said:
A power outage now days is a disaster but one could make it into a romantic outing if one so wished. A good read Keyara
November 19th, 2025 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
A power outage now days is a disaster but one could make it into a romantic outing if one so wished. A good read Keyara
November 19th, 2025 03:28
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this feels like one of those days where thoughts loop and you just try to keep pace. Iโve been in that spaceโฆyou caught the feeling perfectly. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 17th, 2025 12:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this feels like one of those days where thoughts loop and you just try to keep pace. Iโve been in that spaceโฆyou caught the feeling perfectly. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 17th, 2025 12:40
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