Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kiki, this reads like a private dedication wrapped in atmosphere. Music, mysticism, and intention fold inward, creating a small, complete circle that doesnโt need an audience to exist. Very well written, my dear friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 21st, 2025 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kiki, this reads like a private dedication wrapped in atmosphere. Music, mysticism, and intention fold inward, creating a small, complete circle that doesnโt need an audience to exist. Very well written, my dear friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 21st, 2025 11:24
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sorenbarrett said:
A private write shared only with the reader. A lovely write
December 20th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
A private write shared only with the reader. A lovely write
December 20th, 2025 09:34
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this reminds me how some poems arenโt meant for a room but for a moment. One voice, one listener, and no need to widen the circle beyond that. Excellent poem in its restraint, my friend. Beautifully done! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 20th, 2025 09:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this reminds me how some poems arenโt meant for a room but for a moment. One voice, one listener, and no need to widen the circle beyond that. Excellent poem in its restraint, my friend. Beautifully done! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 20th, 2025 09:27
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this feels instinctive and unapologetic. It moves by feeling rather than explanation, and that confidence gives it its charge. Thereโs no asking permission here. Wonderful job, my dear friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 20th, 2025 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this feels instinctive and unapologetic. It moves by feeling rather than explanation, and that confidence gives it its charge. Thereโs no asking permission here. Wonderful job, my dear friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 20th, 2025 09:10
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sorenbarrett said:
Love is the topic and it comes through clear. Well done Keyara
December 19th, 2025 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Love is the topic and it comes through clear. Well done Keyara
December 19th, 2025 16:21
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Friendship said:
The poem appears to explore themes of connection, intimacy, and the complexities of love. The title \"Fallen into deeply\" suggests a deep emotional experience, possibly one that is both fulfilling and challenging. The mention of \"the ever did you clasp the one on one to hold\" hints at the significance of personal relationships, while references to \"plum trees\" and \"much more joyousness\" evoke a sense of nature and growth, suggesting that love involves nurturing and flourishing.
December 19th, 2025 16:15
Friendship said:
The poem appears to explore themes of connection, intimacy, and the complexities of love. The title \"Fallen into deeply\" suggests a deep emotional experience, possibly one that is both fulfilling and challenging. The mention of \"the ever did you clasp the one on one to hold\" hints at the significance of personal relationships, while references to \"plum trees\" and \"much more joyousness\" evoke a sense of nature and growth, suggesting that love involves nurturing and flourishing.
December 19th, 2025 16:15
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sorenbarrett said:
True love as opposed to the love of only self and hypocrisy of the term itself. Nicely done
December 18th, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
True love as opposed to the love of only self and hypocrisy of the term itself. Nicely done
December 18th, 2025 08:04
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sorenbarrett said:
There it goes as it is and it is what it is. Well said Keyara
December 17th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
There it goes as it is and it is what it is. Well said Keyara
December 17th, 2025 12:12
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sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Keyara a thing to think about
December 16th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Keyara a thing to think about
December 16th, 2025 06:20
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Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Soren much much appreciate you for your read and comment and for taking the time to do such. โค๏ธ
December 15th, 2025 19:35
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Soren much much appreciate you for your read and comment and for taking the time to do such. โค๏ธ
December 15th, 2025 19:35
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sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Keyara a beautiful encapsulation of the being of a writer. Nicely said
December 15th, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Keyara a beautiful encapsulation of the being of a writer. Nicely said
December 15th, 2025 19:29
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is playful, devoted, and emotionally generous all at once. The visual flourishes and the direct declarations work together, not against each other, and the result feels sincere rather than performative. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 15th, 2025 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is playful, devoted, and emotionally generous all at once. The visual flourishes and the direct declarations work together, not against each other, and the result feels sincere rather than performative. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 15th, 2025 08:21
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sorenbarrett said:
A rendezvous of loves and nicely done
December 14th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
A rendezvous of loves and nicely done
December 14th, 2025 10:45
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is gentle and atmosphericโฆthe fluttering refrain, the airy movement, the hint of spice underneath the delicacy. It feels designed to be felt more than analyzed, and thatโs its strength. Lovely work, Kiki. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 13th, 2025 12:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is gentle and atmosphericโฆthe fluttering refrain, the airy movement, the hint of spice underneath the delicacy. It feels designed to be felt more than analyzed, and thatโs its strength. Lovely work, Kiki. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 13th, 2025 12:49
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sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and magic is the feel that I get from this poem Keyara. Well done
December 13th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and magic is the feel that I get from this poem Keyara. Well done
December 13th, 2025 04:30
Interesting Write
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, I felt the encouragement hereโฆthe reminder to keep moving even when things feel rocky. Itโs the kind of voice that steadies you mid-stride. Grateful for this. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 12th, 2025 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, I felt the encouragement hereโฆthe reminder to keep moving even when things feel rocky. Itโs the kind of voice that steadies you mid-stride. Grateful for this. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 12th, 2025 09:51
Interesting Write
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement to drive one on to one potential, a lovely write
December 12th, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement to drive one on to one potential, a lovely write
December 12th, 2025 06:44
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of gold and love two intrinsically linked images. Well worded and nicely presented
December 11th, 2025 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of gold and love two intrinsically linked images. Well worded and nicely presented
December 11th, 2025 10:25
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this pours out with real feelingโฆthe drift, the love, the ache. It reads like someone holding on through all the shimmer and fracture. Honest and raw, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 11th, 2025 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this pours out with real feelingโฆthe drift, the love, the ache. It reads like someone holding on through all the shimmer and fracture. Honest and raw, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 11th, 2025 10:16
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dearest friend, this piece glowsโฆthe softness, the finding of beauty, the way love is spoken without weight. It lands like a warm breath in cold air. Beautifully done, Kiki. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 10th, 2025 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dearest friend, this piece glowsโฆthe softness, the finding of beauty, the way love is spoken without weight. It lands like a warm breath in cold air. Beautifully done, Kiki. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 10th, 2025 09:39
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sorenbarrett said:
It had not occurred to me that beauty and love were interdependent but maybe related in that beauty is in the eye of the beholder and love is blind. Well written Keyara
December 10th, 2025 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
It had not occurred to me that beauty and love were interdependent but maybe related in that beauty is in the eye of the beholder and love is blind. Well written Keyara
December 10th, 2025 03:33
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kiki, the warmth of your opening lines and the imagery that follows blend into something really gentle here. It reads like a little lantern you hand to someone who needs it. Well done, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 8th, 2025 21:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kiki, the warmth of your opening lines and the imagery that follows blend into something really gentle here. It reads like a little lantern you hand to someone who needs it. Well done, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 8th, 2025 21:11
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! Agreed! Love this insightful piece, dearest Kiki! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 8th, 2025 13:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! Agreed! Love this insightful piece, dearest Kiki! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 8th, 2025 13:04
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sorenbarrett said:
It is so interesting that men and women have differing views on passion but as people we have one view on love. Nicely done Keyara
December 8th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
It is so interesting that men and women have differing views on passion but as people we have one view on love. Nicely done Keyara
December 8th, 2025 04:21
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kikiโฆthereโs a quiet courage running through this piece. You hold space for hurt, for dreams, for blooming againโฆand you do it with such a soft touch. It makes the whole thing feel like an affirmation you whisper to yourself. Truly lovely. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 6th, 2025 11:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Kikiโฆthereโs a quiet courage running through this piece. You hold space for hurt, for dreams, for blooming againโฆand you do it with such a soft touch. It makes the whole thing feel like an affirmation you whisper to yourself. Truly lovely. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 6th, 2025 11:00
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sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought that is well said. Nicely done
December 6th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought that is well said. Nicely done
December 6th, 2025 07:20
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, that moment where the words โstart writingโ shift into this whole scene of movement and confidenceโฆthat stood out to me. The way you frame beauty as both emotional and embodied is strong. Well done, my friend!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 5th, 2025 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, that moment where the words โstart writingโ shift into this whole scene of movement and confidenceโฆthat stood out to me. The way you frame beauty as both emotional and embodied is strong. Well done, my friend!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 5th, 2025 11:04
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sorenbarrett said:
Yes write so as to remember and so as to express. Well done
December 5th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Yes write so as to remember and so as to express. Well done
December 5th, 2025 04:32
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kikiโฆ your words rise like a simple offeringโฆsteady and heartfelt. Beautiful, my friend. Spiritual is the perfect place for this. You trusted your instinctโฆand I am glad you did. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 4th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kikiโฆ your words rise like a simple offeringโฆsteady and heartfelt. Beautiful, my friend. Spiritual is the perfect place for this. You trusted your instinctโฆand I am glad you did. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 4th, 2025 10:50
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