Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels both prayer and commission...steady, heartfelt, and true. You remind us that faith isnβt comfort; itβs calling. It fits either category, but leans more spiritual, imho. Beautifully said, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 21st, 2025 07:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels both prayer and commission...steady, heartfelt, and true. You remind us that faith isnβt comfort; itβs calling. It fits either category, but leans more spiritual, imho. Beautifully said, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 21st, 2025 07:10
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sorenbarrett said:
A writing challenging those that believe to follow. A well penned piece
October 20th, 2025 20:55
sorenbarrett said:
A writing challenging those that believe to follow. A well penned piece
October 20th, 2025 20:55
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
This piece moves like a spell...champagne bubbles over tears. Itβs a letter, a lament, and a little bit of magic. Youβve wrapped loss in glitter and made it shimmer again, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ Well done, dearest Kiki!
October 19th, 2025 11:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This piece moves like a spell...champagne bubbles over tears. Itβs a letter, a lament, and a little bit of magic. Youβve wrapped loss in glitter and made it shimmer again, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ Well done, dearest Kiki!
October 19th, 2025 11:16
Listened to Chosen One κ¨βΆοΈβοΈοΈ
sorenbarrett said:
This poem made up of divergent thoughts each a positive in its own way. It seems a type of collage. Very nice
October 19th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem made up of divergent thoughts each a positive in its own way. It seems a type of collage. Very nice
October 19th, 2025 04:27
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is tender and true. You turned stormlight into solace, finding grace in the gray. Beautifully penned, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 18th, 2025 08:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is tender and true. You turned stormlight into solace, finding grace in the gray. Beautifully penned, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 18th, 2025 08:03
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem I feel close to somehow and identify with. but beyond that is the reflected metaphor of life\'s storms can be taken as giving a sense of comfort as well as we weather them from inside our own place of internal safety. Very nicely done and a fave
October 18th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem I feel close to somehow and identify with. but beyond that is the reflected metaphor of life\'s storms can be taken as giving a sense of comfort as well as we weather them from inside our own place of internal safety. Very nicely done and a fave
October 18th, 2025 04:20
Just A Kiss Awayπ₯°
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Poetry vibez back to you, my friend, who has one of the coolest vibez here! Mean that! Kiki, this is dream and devotion intertwined. βA love that shines like a starβ...thatβs exactly how it reads. Romantic without pretense, just honest warmth. Beautifully done! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 17th, 2025 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Poetry vibez back to you, my friend, who has one of the coolest vibez here! Mean that! Kiki, this is dream and devotion intertwined. βA love that shines like a starβ...thatβs exactly how it reads. Romantic without pretense, just honest warmth. Beautifully done! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 17th, 2025 10:29
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one shines...half vow, half vibe. The gothic flair, the emojis, the wink at the endβ¦you brought poetry into the digital pulse beautifully. Love it, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 17th, 2025 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one shines...half vow, half vibe. The gothic flair, the emojis, the wink at the endβ¦you brought poetry into the digital pulse beautifully. Love it, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 17th, 2025 10:23
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sorenbarrett said:
Enchanted is the word for the place this poem describes that type of mesmerized enchantment that comes with infatuation when one is enamored and what is called young love. A wonderful world where everything is right. Nicely written
October 17th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Enchanted is the word for the place this poem describes that type of mesmerized enchantment that comes with infatuation when one is enamored and what is called young love. A wonderful world where everything is right. Nicely written
October 17th, 2025 04:28
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sorenbarrett said:
If one is speaking of a lover romantic, if one is speaking of a god religious, if one is speaking of nature or one\'s own self belief it is spiritual. Nicely said
October 16th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
If one is speaking of a lover romantic, if one is speaking of a god religious, if one is speaking of nature or one\'s own self belief it is spiritual. Nicely said
October 16th, 2025 04:17
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is chaotic brilliance, my friendβ¦a meltdown turned manifesto. The way you lean into the font and frustration makes it feel alive, like the WiFi itself is haunted. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ As for classification, I almost always leave unclassified because I would rather not box it in to a specific classification, as poems often fit into many. Some poems, of course, demand a classification; however, not all. I think leaving this one unclassified was wise as it allows the reader to feel it without prejudgment. Anywho, well done, dear friend!
October 15th, 2025 13:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is chaotic brilliance, my friendβ¦a meltdown turned manifesto. The way you lean into the font and frustration makes it feel alive, like the WiFi itself is haunted. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ As for classification, I almost always leave unclassified because I would rather not box it in to a specific classification, as poems often fit into many. Some poems, of course, demand a classification; however, not all. I think leaving this one unclassified was wise as it allows the reader to feel it without prejudgment. Anywho, well done, dear friend!
October 15th, 2025 13:51
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sorenbarrett said:
Anger noted, there is a carefree attitude to this and a matter of fact flavor. A most interesting write
October 15th, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
Anger noted, there is a carefree attitude to this and a matter of fact flavor. A most interesting write
October 15th, 2025 06:44
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this radiates your signature...the mix of mystery, sensuality, and sacred. The texture, the font, the whispered devotionβ¦they all become performance art in ink. Youβre magic, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ Iβm with you on the fontβitβs wild but so you. It pulls the reader into your atmosphere before a single word lands. And yesβ¦I love writing, even the typosβtheyβre just proof the handβs alive (and sometimes confused π€£). You definitely made it worthwhile, my friend. π₯β¨π₯
October 14th, 2025 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this radiates your signature...the mix of mystery, sensuality, and sacred. The texture, the font, the whispered devotionβ¦they all become performance art in ink. Youβre magic, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ Iβm with you on the fontβitβs wild but so you. It pulls the reader into your atmosphere before a single word lands. And yesβ¦I love writing, even the typosβtheyβre just proof the handβs alive (and sometimes confused π€£). You definitely made it worthwhile, my friend. π₯β¨π₯
October 14th, 2025 08:09
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sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking this piece makes me wonder about meaning and I feel in some way I am looking at a Jackson Pollock painting.
October 14th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking this piece makes me wonder about meaning and I feel in some way I am looking at a Jackson Pollock painting.
October 14th, 2025 03:49
STORY OF MY LIFE
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem conveys a deep sense of loyalty, love, and longing. It reflects on the emotional turmoil of being unable to control the feelings of others while firmly committing to oneβs own devotion. The speaker expresses a yearning for reconnection and the hope of a reunion, emphasizing the strength of their feelings across distance and time.
October 13th, 2025 18:45
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem conveys a deep sense of loyalty, love, and longing. It reflects on the emotional turmoil of being unable to control the feelings of others while firmly committing to oneβs own devotion. The speaker expresses a yearning for reconnection and the hope of a reunion, emphasizing the strength of their feelings across distance and time.
October 13th, 2025 18:45
STORY OF MY LIFE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a love spell caught between dream and devotionβ¦tender, hopeful, and haunted. The heartache glows even through the stylized veil. Beautifully expressed. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 13th, 2025 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a love spell caught between dream and devotionβ¦tender, hopeful, and haunted. The heartache glows even through the stylized veil. Beautifully expressed. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 13th, 2025 09:35
STORY OF MY LIFE
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic loss where time is the only barrier to reunification. A lovely write
October 13th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic loss where time is the only barrier to reunification. A lovely write
October 13th, 2025 03:56
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, βneedless to sayβ but Iβll say it anyway...this one glows. βDusted in yellow,β βthere goes mine babyββ¦ itβs fragile, fearless, and so very you. Your language is pure electricity. I love the emphasis on colors.πΉπ€ππ―οΈ My feedback: I love it. A fave from me! π₯°
October 12th, 2025 07:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, βneedless to sayβ but Iβll say it anyway...this one glows. βDusted in yellow,β βthere goes mine babyββ¦ itβs fragile, fearless, and so very you. Your language is pure electricity. I love the emphasis on colors.πΉπ€ππ―οΈ My feedback: I love it. A fave from me! π₯°
October 12th, 2025 07:23
Am I the Only One ?
sorenbarrett said:
Did I miss something? I have been on web sites that have gone down for weeks and others that went away but have had no recent troubles here. I must have been dozing. Well said though would hate to see it go.
October 12th, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Did I miss something? I have been on web sites that have gone down for weeks and others that went away but have had no recent troubles here. I must have been dozing. Well said though would hate to see it go.
October 12th, 2025 06:57
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sorenbarrett said:
Colors the major emphasis in this poem it leaves the feeling of a festival. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
Colors the major emphasis in this poem it leaves the feeling of a festival. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 20:08
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is morning madness turned art...humor, exasperation, and that signature spark only you can pull off. Power may go out, but your personality never dims. Yes, this was humorous! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 11th, 2025 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is morning madness turned art...humor, exasperation, and that signature spark only you can pull off. Power may go out, but your personality never dims. Yes, this was humorous! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 11th, 2025 08:42
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Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem revolves around the chaos and unpredictability of life, particularly in the context of experiencing power outages and the ensuing frustrations. It juxtaposes the challenge of daily life with moments of silence and reflection, suggesting that within chaos, there can be an opportunity for introspection and a break from routine.
October 10th, 2025 10:48
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem revolves around the chaos and unpredictability of life, particularly in the context of experiencing power outages and the ensuing frustrations. It juxtaposes the challenge of daily life with moments of silence and reflection, suggesting that within chaos, there can be an opportunity for introspection and a break from routine.
October 10th, 2025 10:48
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sorenbarrett said:
Little things become big things when our routine is interrupted. A lovely write
October 10th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Little things become big things when our routine is interrupted. A lovely write
October 10th, 2025 04:43
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David Hopkins said:
I loved your poem but it was harder to read because of the font you chose perhaps consider another Less involved font for easier reading aside from
That a great poem . Congratulations !
October 9th, 2025 20:53
David Hopkins said:
I loved your poem but it was harder to read because of the font you chose perhaps consider another Less involved font for easier reading aside from
That a great poem . Congratulations !
October 9th, 2025 20:53
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one hums with mystic passion...divine love rendered through mortal hunger. The βspiritualβ label fits; youβve written transcendence that still bleeds human. Absolutely radiant work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 9th, 2025 20:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one hums with mystic passion...divine love rendered through mortal hunger. The βspiritualβ label fits; youβve written transcendence that still bleeds human. Absolutely radiant work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 9th, 2025 20:01
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sorenbarrett said:
I love the pairing of Krishna god of love with the second piece that talks of carnal love a great pairing. Nicely done
October 9th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
I love the pairing of Krishna god of love with the second piece that talks of carnal love a great pairing. Nicely done
October 9th, 2025 06:52
B.U.T.T.E.R.F.L.Y
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this glows like sunlight through glass...each section fluttering in its own hue. The wordplay, the emotion, the heart behind it allβ¦pure transformation. And since you asked for Scripture, this came to mind: βDear children, let us not love with words or speech but with actions and in truthβ (1 John 3:18). Fits your message perfectly me thinks. Well done, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 8th, 2025 20:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this glows like sunlight through glass...each section fluttering in its own hue. The wordplay, the emotion, the heart behind it allβ¦pure transformation. And since you asked for Scripture, this came to mind: βDear children, let us not love with words or speech but with actions and in truthβ (1 John 3:18). Fits your message perfectly me thinks. Well done, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 8th, 2025 20:03
B.U.T.T.E.R.F.L.Y
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful depiction of nature in her grandeur and her painted world. Lovely and loved it
October 8th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful depiction of nature in her grandeur and her painted world. Lovely and loved it
October 8th, 2025 14:38
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