Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman



π”π”žπ”°π”±π”’π”― 𝔄𝔱 𝔖𝔲𝔯𝔀𝔒𝔯𝔢
sorenbarrett said:

I see in this poem a plea to other to surrender to something greater to be grateful for what is given and acknowledge it. Nicely written with a sense of belief and conviction.

September 30th, 2025 04:02

Cheated on a test or exam edition
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice. One that cheats today lack the knowledge tomorrow. A great read

September 29th, 2025 06:54

π”ˆπ”«π”±π”¦π” π”’π”‘ π”Ÿπ”Ά 𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔰 \"𝔒𝔫𝔒\" 𝔍𝔒𝔰𝔲𝔰~ 𝔗π”₯𝔒 𝔇𝔦𝔰𝔀𝔲𝔦𝔰𝔒𝔑
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A Jesusaholic, now that is the kind of β€œaholic” I can dig being! This shines with your signature style, Kiki…faith poured into rhythm, heartbeat pulsing with fire, laughter lighting the way. Sacred and playful, bold and alive. Beautifully done. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 28th, 2025 16:34



β„Œπ”žπ”―π”ͺ𝔬𝔫𝔦𝔠
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kiki, this shines with love and humor encrypted in your style. From the heartbeat line to the reminder of laughter binding us, you turn the page into celebration itself. Beautifully done. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 27th, 2025 07:55

β„Œπ”žπ”―π”ͺ𝔬𝔫𝔦𝔠
sorenbarrett said:

I do believe and have experienced that laughter is good medicine for physical and mental pain. It is healthy and costs nothing. It brings people together. A lovely write

September 27th, 2025 05:30

P.E.A.C.E
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Keyara, this is spiritual through and through. From silence as a doorway to peace, to kindness and empathy shaping life…it all speaks like scripture written in your own hand. Whether one calls it spiritual or religious, it reflects a truth that endures. Beautifully done. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 26th, 2025 09:11

P.E.A.C.E
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice to all and the world would be a better place if people listened and acted on it. Nicely written

September 26th, 2025 08:05

π’Ÿβ„―π“‹β„΄π“‰π’Ύβ„΄π“ƒπ’Άπ“π“ˆ
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Keyara, this piece moves with strength…the surrender, the boldness, the Spirit leading into light. It’s both a reminder and a charge, wrapped in warmth and hope. Beautifully done. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬› I love that you\'ve written it as a prayer for people read/meditate on. Powerful and practical. You are a blessing and a gift, my friend. ✝️

September 25th, 2025 16:27


π’Ÿβ„―π“‹β„΄π“‰π’Ύβ„΄π“ƒπ’Άπ“π“ˆ
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful wish and belief voiced in this poem. Nicely done

September 25th, 2025 03:59

The Whispers, The Shadows
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Keyara, this carries the fire of intimacy and the warmth of devotion…from β€œbeacon in the darkness” to β€œfire does what it’s supposed to do…burn.” It straddles love and desire more than friendship, and yes, the +18 label makes sense. It’s bold, layered, and unapologetically alive. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬› well done!

September 24th, 2025 07:20

The Whispers, The Shadows
sorenbarrett said:

A love poem where sugar heated and burnt coats and flavors the poem. Nothing like burnt sugar coating make a delightful sweet. Nicely written

September 24th, 2025 04:44

The Whispers, The Shadows
Paul Bell said:

Sounds like someone has found the one.
Not sure if it merits an 18, but the more love the better.

September 24th, 2025 04:08

Make a Wish
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Keyara, such an honest and moving piece. The raw goodbye, the stark finality of β€œit wasn’t you,” and the bittersweet courage to release what could have been...it all carries a quiet power. Heartbreaking, but beautifully done. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 23rd, 2025 07:54

Make a Wish
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of a desired love that did not work out. Nicely written with a creative touch at the end. Well done

September 23rd, 2025 07:50

β„Œπ”’π”―π”’ 𝔦𝔰 \"𝔬𝔫𝔒\'𝔰 𝔴𝔬𝔯𝔑𝔰❀️‍πŸ”₯
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Keyara, this lands as truth. The opening advice reads like a card, but your Noted lines cut through it...β€œshattered remnants” becomes the poem’s wound, and I hear my own losses in that echo. It’s raw, immediate, and true. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 22nd, 2025 20:56


𝒲𝒽𝒾𝓁ℯ ℴ𝓃 𝒢 𝒸𝒢𝓁𝓁 π“Œπ’Ύπ“‰π’½ β„‹.β„°.β„›
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, I’ve sat with conversations like this ...where you name someone into safety and light. You turn everyday talk into a small liturgy, and it comforts me. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈ Well done!

September 21st, 2025 18:44

𝒲𝒽𝒾𝓁ℯ ℴ𝓃 𝒢 𝒸𝒢𝓁𝓁 π“Œπ’Ύπ“‰π’½ β„‹.β„°.β„›
sorenbarrett said:

This seems in some way observational turned reflective. A most thought provoking poem

September 21st, 2025 10:05

Short Stories Rated 18 +
orchidee said:

Dunno! Can\'t comment cos I have swooned reading this. lol.

September 21st, 2025 02:01

Short Stories Rated 18 +
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Reading this felt like sitting with a story told straight β€” no soft edges, just the ride from eyes meeting, to laughter, to fire. That honesty is what gives it weight. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 20th, 2025 19:42

Short Stories Rated 18 +
sorenbarrett said:

Strong passion displayed in this poem that lead to a physical relationship that only time will tell whether it is love and or spiritual. Nicely done

September 20th, 2025 15:40

It’s Completely Completed
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Keyara, this one is both tender and mysterious. The way you weave fairytales, angels, and the unknown gives it a dreamlike pull…like friendship, yes, but also something more spiritual and imaginative. I think it can live comfortably in β€œfriendship,” though it also carries a surreal, otherworldly edge. And you’re right…it’s for everyone to read. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 19th, 2025 15:41

It’s Completely Completed
sorenbarrett said:

This poem leaves me with a feeling of the intangible and that things unseen can still be strong in feelings unseen. A lovely write

September 19th, 2025 06:20

PrayersπŸ‘‘
Keeter C said:

Beautifully humble. Nice.

September 19th, 2025 01:23

Signature NeededπŸ”₯
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I am a firm believer that humans are spiritual beings and, therefore, our expression are spiritual too. Keyara, this glows with contrast...signatures, timers, meadows, infinity. It breaks free of category…but it certainly carries a spiritual pulse throughout it. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 18th, 2025 18:17

Signature NeededπŸ”₯
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of ethereal visions where dreams exist. Nicely done

September 18th, 2025 09:11

π”Šπ”¬π”¬π”‘ β„œπ”¦π”‘π”’
FΓ­na Elara πŸŒ™ Petra Patrice said:

This piece reads like a stream-of-consciousness letter or reflection, mixing vulnerability, encouragement, and existential questioning. It’s a combination of self-reflection, reassurance, and poetic stylization. Nicely writtenπŸ’«

September 17th, 2025 15:28

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