Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this reads like a vow whispered to the self...honest, stripped down, and beautifully human. You made โmy lifeโ sound like both burden and blessing. I can relate, my friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 8th, 2025 08:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this reads like a vow whispered to the self...honest, stripped down, and beautifully human. You made โmy lifeโ sound like both burden and blessing. I can relate, my friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 8th, 2025 08:50
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sorenbarrett said:
Others may act as though they own your life but only each person owns their own and each makes their own choices as to what they do. Nicely expressed.
November 8th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Others may act as though they own your life but only each person owns their own and each makes their own choices as to what they do. Nicely expressed.
November 8th, 2025 03:52
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this made me smileโฆyou turned technical chaos into art. Even your test lines carry a kind of rhythm and self-awareness. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 7th, 2025 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this made me smileโฆyou turned technical chaos into art. Even your test lines carry a kind of rhythm and self-awareness. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 7th, 2025 08:44
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sorenbarrett said:
A poem of just because I suppose. A most interesting approach.
November 7th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of just because I suppose. A most interesting approach.
November 7th, 2025 08:37
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, Kiki, I felt the ache of needing to keep moving just to stay alive. You put that instinct into rhythm beautifully. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 6th, 2025 22:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, Kiki, I felt the ache of needing to keep moving just to stay alive. You put that instinct into rhythm beautifully. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 6th, 2025 22:06
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sorenbarrett said:
Shakes are wonderful and so it the poem that melts into a love poem
November 6th, 2025 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
Shakes are wonderful and so it the poem that melts into a love poem
November 6th, 2025 15:32
The Best Quality One Can Possess
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A digital confessional wrapped in aesthetic armorโฆfun, fierce, and intentionally unreadable at points. Youโve built a whole vibe here, and it hits. Well done, Kiki!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 6th, 2025 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A digital confessional wrapped in aesthetic armorโฆfun, fierce, and intentionally unreadable at points. Youโve built a whole vibe here, and it hits. Well done, Kiki!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 6th, 2025 09:40
The Best Quality One Can Possess
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and thought provoking. Would a person really know their best quality?
November 5th, 2025 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and thought provoking. Would a person really know their best quality?
November 5th, 2025 18:09
*Gratitude HUGS AND KISSES DAY*
sorenbarrett said:
This poem shows its color in a bouquet of wildflower lines. Nicely done leaving a sweet fragrance behind.
November 4th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem shows its color in a bouquet of wildflower lines. Nicely done leaving a sweet fragrance behind.
November 4th, 2025 04:14
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is elegant, raw, and celestial. The fonts and flow make it shimmer like thought itselfโฆhalf dream, half devotion. Love it, my friend!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
November 2nd, 2025 13:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is elegant, raw, and celestial. The fonts and flow make it shimmer like thought itselfโฆhalf dream, half devotion. Love it, my friend!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
November 2nd, 2025 13:20
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sorenbarrett said:
Worry a sensation that all get from time to time but how we handle it makes all the difference. Nicely said.
November 2nd, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Worry a sensation that all get from time to time but how we handle it makes all the difference. Nicely said.
November 2nd, 2025 05:13
Listened to What An Awesome God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Know the song well and love it. My friend, I love how you fuse sacred awe with your signature glamour...itโs fearless, alive, and unmistakably you. This song clearly lit something divine in your creative spark and I am certainly glad for it. Well don. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 1st, 2025 05:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Know the song well and love it. My friend, I love how you fuse sacred awe with your signature glamour...itโs fearless, alive, and unmistakably you. This song clearly lit something divine in your creative spark and I am certainly glad for it. Well don. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 1st, 2025 05:58
Listened to What An Awesome God
sorenbarrett said:
Three echoing thoughts bounce through these lines. Very good
November 1st, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Three echoing thoughts bounce through these lines. Very good
November 1st, 2025 04:16
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Rocky Lagou said:
Look at how you ate that.
November 1st, 2025 01:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Look at how you ate that.
November 1st, 2025 01:24
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, Queen Beeโs Sting is pure ritual glam...poison and perfume in equal measure. Every line hums like a neon prayer. You make language shimmer, bite, and bloom. Love it lots!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 31st, 2025 20:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, Queen Beeโs Sting is pure ritual glam...poison and perfume in equal measure. Every line hums like a neon prayer. You make language shimmer, bite, and bloom. Love it lots!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 31st, 2025 20:16
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sorenbarrett said:
This one seems a possessive poem of ownership. Most interesting.
October 31st, 2025 17:21
sorenbarrett said:
This one seems a possessive poem of ownership. Most interesting.
October 31st, 2025 17:21
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I can almost smell the syrup and spark through the screenโฆthis feels like creative intoxication itself. Looking forward to your story. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 31st, 2025 08:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I can almost smell the syrup and spark through the screenโฆthis feels like creative intoxication itself. Looking forward to your story. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 31st, 2025 08:06
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sorenbarrett said:
A recipe of sweetness and pleasure. Well done
October 30th, 2025 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
A recipe of sweetness and pleasure. Well done
October 30th, 2025 16:57
A Final Word
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this glows with curiosity and confidence. The fonts, emojis, and rhythm make it part poem, part spell...a declaration of being wholly yourself. Beautiful energy. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 29th, 2025 20:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this glows with curiosity and confidence. The fonts, emojis, and rhythm make it part poem, part spell...a declaration of being wholly yourself. Beautiful energy. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 29th, 2025 20:38
A Final Word
sorenbarrett said:
Exploring different fonts is a way to express different moods in a poem but I have had a few readers complain that they can\'t read some of the fonts that I used so I had to change them. Fortunately I can read yours and found this a fun read
October 29th, 2025 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
Exploring different fonts is a way to express different moods in a poem but I have had a few readers complain that they can\'t read some of the fonts that I used so I had to change them. Fortunately I can read yours and found this a fun read
October 29th, 2025 16:23
Entertwined
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one feels like a drifting heartbeatโฆsoft, reflective, almost cinematic. Thereโs vulnerability hiding inside the glitter, and itโs beautiful. Love is a fitting category. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 28th, 2025 07:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one feels like a drifting heartbeatโฆsoft, reflective, almost cinematic. Thereโs vulnerability hiding inside the glitter, and itโs beautiful. Love is a fitting category. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 28th, 2025 07:41
Entertwined
sorenbarrett said:
This one is open enough that it may be applied to love Nicely done
October 28th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
This one is open enough that it may be applied to love Nicely done
October 28th, 2025 03:39
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I feel the joy and self-acceptance pulsing through this. Love as authenticity, not performance...thatโs a message the world needs more of. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 27th, 2025 18:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I feel the joy and self-acceptance pulsing through this. Love as authenticity, not performance...thatโs a message the world needs more of. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 27th, 2025 18:07
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sorenbarrett said:
Love a very simple word for a very complex set of emotions. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 17:43
sorenbarrett said:
Love a very simple word for a very complex set of emotions. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 17:43
Tire
sorenbarrett said:
Encouragement to write is a good thing. It stimulates the brain, opens the soul and cleanses the heart. Nicely done
October 26th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Encouragement to write is a good thing. It stimulates the brain, opens the soul and cleanses the heart. Nicely done
October 26th, 2025 04:14
โNevertheless you saidโ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a secret whispered between worldsโฆhalf prose, half pulse. Thereโs a haunting tenderness in the space between whatโs said and unsaid. Wonderfully penned, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
October 25th, 2025 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a secret whispered between worldsโฆhalf prose, half pulse. Thereโs a haunting tenderness in the space between whatโs said and unsaid. Wonderfully penned, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
October 25th, 2025 10:35
โNevertheless you saidโ
sorenbarrett said:
Encouragement at times can prevail and lead to a change in heart. Nicely written
October 25th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Encouragement at times can prevail and lead to a change in heart. Nicely written
October 25th, 2025 03:58
Ink on paper, words come to life, A script unfolds, a story rife, Characters dance, in black and white, Guided by the playwright\'s insight.
sorenbarrett said:
Short yet to the point. Love such a divergent and all encompassing word and yet all is meaningful. Well done
October 24th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Short yet to the point. Love such a divergent and all encompassing word and yet all is meaningful. Well done
October 24th, 2025 04:54
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, what a digital reliquary...half poem, half incantation. โHeaven ๐ฅ๐โ becomes code for devotionโs chaos; every symbol carries heartbeat and hurt in equal measure. Itโs love written as myth, and memory refusing to fade. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 23rd, 2025 18:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, what a digital reliquary...half poem, half incantation. โHeaven ๐ฅ๐โ becomes code for devotionโs chaos; every symbol carries heartbeat and hurt in equal measure. Itโs love written as myth, and memory refusing to fade. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 23rd, 2025 18:54
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sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful declaration of friendship it calls out as a monument to the elements that make such a relationship dependability, trust and love. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful declaration of friendship it calls out as a monument to the elements that make such a relationship dependability, trust and love. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 06:38
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