Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman at My poetic side

Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman

𝕼𝔲𝔢𝔢𝔫 𝔅𝔢𝔢\'𝔰 𝔖𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤
Rocky Lagou said:

Look at how you ate that.

November 1st, 2025 01:24

𝕼𝔲𝔢𝔢𝔫 𝔅𝔢𝔢\'𝔰 𝔖𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kiki, Queen Bee’s Sting is pure ritual glam...poison and perfume in equal measure. Every line hums like a neon prayer. You make language shimmer, bite, and bloom. Love it lots!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 31st, 2025 20:16

𝕼𝔲𝔢𝔢𝔫 𝔅𝔢𝔢\'𝔰 𝔖𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤
sorenbarrett said:

This one seems a possessive poem of ownership. Most interesting.

October 31st, 2025 17:21

𝔗𝔞𝔦𝔫𝔱𝔢𝔡 𝔇𝔬 𝔜𝔬𝔲𝔯 𝔖𝔢𝔩𝔣 𝔞 𝔉𝔞𝔳𝔬𝔯 (𝔏.𝔬.𝔳.𝔢)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, I can almost smell the syrup and spark through the screen…this feels like creative intoxication itself. Looking forward to your story. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 31st, 2025 08:06

𝔗𝔞𝔦𝔫𝔱𝔢𝔡 𝔇𝔬 𝔜𝔬𝔲𝔯 𝔖𝔢𝔩𝔣 𝔞 𝔉𝔞𝔳𝔬𝔯 (𝔏.𝔬.𝔳.𝔢)
sorenbarrett said:

A recipe of sweetness and pleasure. Well done

October 30th, 2025 16:57

A Final Word
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kiki, this glows with curiosity and confidence. The fonts, emojis, and rhythm make it part poem, part spell...a declaration of being wholly yourself. Beautiful energy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 29th, 2025 20:38

A Final Word
sorenbarrett said:

Exploring different fonts is a way to express different moods in a poem but I have had a few readers complain that they can\'t read some of the fonts that I used so I had to change them. Fortunately I can read yours and found this a fun read

October 29th, 2025 16:23

Entertwined
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kiki, this one feels like a drifting heartbeat…soft, reflective, almost cinematic. There’s vulnerability hiding inside the glitter, and it’s beautiful. Love is a fitting category. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 28th, 2025 07:41

Entertwined
sorenbarrett said:

This one is open enough that it may be applied to love Nicely done

October 28th, 2025 03:39

𝒞ℴ𝓂ℯ𝓈 𝒜𝓃ℴ𝓉𝒽ℯ𝓇 𝒦𝒾𝓈𝓈
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, I feel the joy and self-acceptance pulsing through this. Love as authenticity, not performance...that’s a message the world needs more of. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 27th, 2025 18:07

𝒞ℴ𝓂ℯ𝓈 𝒜𝓃ℴ𝓉𝒽ℯ𝓇 𝒦𝒾𝓈𝓈
sorenbarrett said:

Love a very simple word for a very complex set of emotions. Nicely done

October 27th, 2025 17:43

Tire
sorenbarrett said:

Encouragement to write is a good thing. It stimulates the brain, opens the soul and cleanses the heart. Nicely done

October 26th, 2025 04:14

“Nevertheless you said”
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this feels like a secret whispered between worlds…half prose, half pulse. There’s a haunting tenderness in the space between what’s said and unsaid. Wonderfully penned, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️

October 25th, 2025 10:35

“Nevertheless you said”
sorenbarrett said:

Encouragement at times can prevail and lead to a change in heart. Nicely written

October 25th, 2025 03:58

Ink on paper, words come to life, A script unfolds, a story rife, Characters dance, in black and white, Guided by the playwright\'s insight.
sorenbarrett said:

Short yet to the point. Love such a divergent and all encompassing word and yet all is meaningful. Well done

October 24th, 2025 04:54

𝒞𝒶𝓂ℯ 𝒲𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝒩ℴ 𝒮𝓅𝒶𝒸ℯ 𝒻ℴ𝓇 𝒶 𝒯𝒾𝓉𝓁ℯ
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kiki, what a digital reliquary...half poem, half incantation. “Heaven 🥂🙈” becomes code for devotion’s chaos; every symbol carries heartbeat and hurt in equal measure. It’s love written as myth, and memory refusing to fade. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 23rd, 2025 18:54

𝒞𝒶𝓂ℯ 𝒲𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝒩ℴ 𝒮𝓅𝒶𝒸ℯ 𝒻ℴ𝓇 𝒶 𝒯𝒾𝓉𝓁ℯ
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful declaration of friendship it calls out as a monument to the elements that make such a relationship dependability, trust and love. Nicely done

October 23rd, 2025 06:38

𝒜𝓈 𝒾𝓉𝓈 𝓌𝓇𝒾𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓃: ℳ𝒶𝓁𝒾ℊ𝓃𝒶𝓃𝓉 ℰ𝓃𝒸𝓇𝓎𝓅𝓉ℯ𝒹
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is alchemy on the page...grief, risk, and lust blending into a surreal confession. You turn pain into performance art, Kiki, and it glows. Beautifully done, my friend! You know I am a fan. 🙂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 22nd, 2025 20:35

𝒜𝓈 𝒾𝓉𝓈 𝓌𝓇𝒾𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓃: ℳ𝒶𝓁𝒾ℊ𝓃𝒶𝓃𝓉 ℰ𝓃𝒸𝓇𝓎𝓅𝓉ℯ𝒹
sorenbarrett said:

A poem about loss and hope. The darkness of fear and the brightness of life. A lovely write

October 22nd, 2025 14:26

~~~~~~~~𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔱𝔬 (𝕼𝔲𝔬𝔱𝔢) \"𝔅𝔢𝔰𝔱 --- 𝔖𝔢𝔩𝔩𝔦𝔫𝔤\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kiki, this feels like a spell in motion…half love letter, half lightning storm. Every symbol hums with chaotic beauty, like language melting into emotion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️

October 22nd, 2025 13:52

~~~~~~~~𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔱𝔬 (𝕼𝔲𝔬𝔱𝔢) \"𝔅𝔢𝔰𝔱 --- 𝔖𝔢𝔩𝔩𝔦𝔫𝔤\"
sorenbarrett said:

A series of separate thoughts not connected compose this write. A celebration to party games. Most interesting

October 22nd, 2025 04:08

𝒟ℯ𝓈𝒸𝒾𝓅𝓁ℯ𝓈𝒽𝒾𝓅
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This feels both prayer and commission...steady, heartfelt, and true. You remind us that faith isn’t comfort; it’s calling. It fits either category, but leans more spiritual, imho. Beautifully said, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 21st, 2025 07:10

𝒟ℯ𝓈𝒸𝒾𝓅𝓁ℯ𝓈𝒽𝒾𝓅
sorenbarrett said:

A writing challenging those that believe to follow. A well penned piece

October 20th, 2025 20:55

Listened to Chosen One ꨄ➶︎∞︎︎
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This piece moves like a spell...champagne bubbles over tears. It’s a letter, a lament, and a little bit of magic. You’ve wrapped loss in glitter and made it shimmer again, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛ Well done, dearest Kiki!

October 19th, 2025 11:16

Listened to Chosen One ꨄ➶︎∞︎︎
sorenbarrett said:

This poem made up of divergent thoughts each a positive in its own way. It seems a type of collage. Very nice

October 19th, 2025 04:27

𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔄𝔱𝔱𝔯𝔞𝔠𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫𝔰 𝔬𝔣 𝔇𝔞𝔯𝔨 𝔚𝔢𝔞𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kiki, this is tender and true. You turned stormlight into solace, finding grace in the gray. Beautifully penned, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 18th, 2025 08:03

𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔄𝔱𝔱𝔯𝔞𝔠𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫𝔰 𝔬𝔣 𝔇𝔞𝔯𝔨 𝔚𝔢𝔞𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯
sorenbarrett said:

This poem I feel close to somehow and identify with. but beyond that is the reflected metaphor of life\'s storms can be taken as giving a sense of comfort as well as we weather them from inside our own place of internal safety. Very nicely done and a fave

October 18th, 2025 04:20

Just A Kiss Away🥰
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Poetry vibez back to you, my friend, who has one of the coolest vibez here! Mean that! Kiki, this is dream and devotion intertwined. “A love that shines like a star”...that’s exactly how it reads. Romantic without pretense, just honest warmth. Beautifully done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 17th, 2025 10:29

𝔊𝔞𝔪𝔢𝔯\'𝔰 𝔏𝔬𝔳𝔢 𝓍𝓍𝓍 𝔓𝔩𝔞𝔶𝔢𝔯𝔰
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kiki, this one shines...half vow, half vibe. The gothic flair, the emojis, the wink at the end…you brought poetry into the digital pulse beautifully. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 17th, 2025 10:23

Just A Kiss Away🥰
sorenbarrett said:

Enchanted is the word for the place this poem describes that type of mesmerized enchantment that comes with infatuation when one is enamored and what is called young love. A wonderful world where everything is right. Nicely written

October 17th, 2025 04:28

Page 3 of 7«1 234 5 6 7 »

« Return to the profile of Keyara S Trotman