Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
Make a Wish
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, such an honest and moving piece. The raw goodbye, the stark finality of βit wasnβt you,β and the bittersweet courage to release what could have been...it all carries a quiet power. Heartbreaking, but beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 23rd, 2025 07:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, such an honest and moving piece. The raw goodbye, the stark finality of βit wasnβt you,β and the bittersweet courage to release what could have been...it all carries a quiet power. Heartbreaking, but beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 23rd, 2025 07:54
Make a Wish
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a desired love that did not work out. Nicely written with a creative touch at the end. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 07:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a desired love that did not work out. Nicely written with a creative touch at the end. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 07:50
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this lands as truth. The opening advice reads like a card, but your Noted lines cut through it...βshattered remnantsβ becomes the poemβs wound, and I hear my own losses in that echo. Itβs raw, immediate, and true. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 22nd, 2025 20:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this lands as truth. The opening advice reads like a card, but your Noted lines cut through it...βshattered remnantsβ becomes the poemβs wound, and I hear my own losses in that echo. Itβs raw, immediate, and true. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 22nd, 2025 20:56
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sorenbarrett said:
Broken relationship, broken mental health both need healing. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:49
sorenbarrett said:
Broken relationship, broken mental health both need healing. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:49
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, Iβve sat with conversations like this ...where you name someone into safety and light. You turn everyday talk into a small liturgy, and it comforts me. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ Well done!
September 21st, 2025 18:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, Iβve sat with conversations like this ...where you name someone into safety and light. You turn everyday talk into a small liturgy, and it comforts me. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ Well done!
September 21st, 2025 18:44
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sorenbarrett said:
This seems in some way observational turned reflective. A most thought provoking poem
September 21st, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
This seems in some way observational turned reflective. A most thought provoking poem
September 21st, 2025 10:05
Short Stories Rated 18 +
orchidee said:
Dunno! Can\'t comment cos I have swooned reading this. lol.
September 21st, 2025 02:01
orchidee said:
Dunno! Can\'t comment cos I have swooned reading this. lol.
September 21st, 2025 02:01
Short Stories Rated 18 +
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like sitting with a story told straight β no soft edges, just the ride from eyes meeting, to laughter, to fire. That honesty is what gives it weight. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 20th, 2025 19:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like sitting with a story told straight β no soft edges, just the ride from eyes meeting, to laughter, to fire. That honesty is what gives it weight. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 20th, 2025 19:42
Short Stories Rated 18 +
sorenbarrett said:
Strong passion displayed in this poem that lead to a physical relationship that only time will tell whether it is love and or spiritual. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
Strong passion displayed in this poem that lead to a physical relationship that only time will tell whether it is love and or spiritual. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 15:40
Itβs Completely Completed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this one is both tender and mysterious. The way you weave fairytales, angels, and the unknown gives it a dreamlike pullβ¦like friendship, yes, but also something more spiritual and imaginative. I think it can live comfortably in βfriendship,β though it also carries a surreal, otherworldly edge. And youβre rightβ¦itβs for everyone to read. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 19th, 2025 15:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this one is both tender and mysterious. The way you weave fairytales, angels, and the unknown gives it a dreamlike pullβ¦like friendship, yes, but also something more spiritual and imaginative. I think it can live comfortably in βfriendship,β though it also carries a surreal, otherworldly edge. And youβre rightβ¦itβs for everyone to read. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 19th, 2025 15:41
Itβs Completely Completed
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with a feeling of the intangible and that things unseen can still be strong in feelings unseen. A lovely write
September 19th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with a feeling of the intangible and that things unseen can still be strong in feelings unseen. A lovely write
September 19th, 2025 06:20
Signature Neededπ₯
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am a firm believer that humans are spiritual beings and, therefore, our expression are spiritual too. Keyara, this glows with contrast...signatures, timers, meadows, infinity. It breaks free of categoryβ¦but it certainly carries a spiritual pulse throughout it. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 18th, 2025 18:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am a firm believer that humans are spiritual beings and, therefore, our expression are spiritual too. Keyara, this glows with contrast...signatures, timers, meadows, infinity. It breaks free of categoryβ¦but it certainly carries a spiritual pulse throughout it. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 18th, 2025 18:17
Signature Neededπ₯
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ethereal visions where dreams exist. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ethereal visions where dreams exist. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 09:11
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FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This piece reads like a stream-of-consciousness letter or reflection, mixing vulnerability, encouragement, and existential questioning. Itβs a combination of self-reflection, reassurance, and poetic stylization. Nicely writtenπ«
September 17th, 2025 15:28
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This piece reads like a stream-of-consciousness letter or reflection, mixing vulnerability, encouragement, and existential questioning. Itβs a combination of self-reflection, reassurance, and poetic stylization. Nicely writtenπ«
September 17th, 2025 15:28
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lingersβ¦itβs raw and confessional, but yes, absolutely love. The line βIβm not okayβ¦but itβs okay?β carries ache and resilience together...love wrestling to steady itself. Honest and strong. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2025 11:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lingersβ¦itβs raw and confessional, but yes, absolutely love. The line βIβm not okayβ¦but itβs okay?β carries ache and resilience together...love wrestling to steady itself. Honest and strong. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2025 11:08
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sorenbarrett said:
Love yourself is in fact the beginning. A word of identity seems necessary a name that is always you separating you from all others. Nicely done
September 17th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Love yourself is in fact the beginning. A word of identity seems necessary a name that is always you separating you from all others. Nicely done
September 17th, 2025 07:20
Unknown
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is tender and vivid at once, my friendβ¦gleams, breeze, evergreen, all bound in the image of sealing the deal. A fleeting yet infinite moment, beautifully captured. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
September 16th, 2025 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is tender and vivid at once, my friendβ¦gleams, breeze, evergreen, all bound in the image of sealing the deal. A fleeting yet infinite moment, beautifully captured. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
September 16th, 2025 15:34
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Demar Desu said:
Difficult to read the third word because of font.
September 16th, 2025 08:13
Demar Desu said:
Difficult to read the third word because of font.
September 16th, 2025 08:13
Unknown
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem set beautifully in imagery and I loved the play on the word light as a noun and adjective.
September 16th, 2025 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem set beautifully in imagery and I loved the play on the word light as a noun and adjective.
September 16th, 2025 08:01
Satisfy your soul, not society.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully spoken, Keyara. The rhythm of soul over society, joy over role, lands true. And the gratitude reflection ties it all together with warmth. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 15th, 2025 12:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully spoken, Keyara. The rhythm of soul over society, joy over role, lands true. And the gratitude reflection ties it all together with warmth. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 15th, 2025 12:59
Satisfy your soul, not society.
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice anyway you look at it. Gratitude a key to happiness. Well done
September 15th, 2025 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice anyway you look at it. Gratitude a key to happiness. Well done
September 15th, 2025 10:18
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sorenbarrett said:
Clever grading system. I have seen other grading systems each with their point of view. This one is cute.
September 14th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Clever grading system. I have seen other grading systems each with their point of view. This one is cute.
September 14th, 2025 04:54
Particularly Any in Particular
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece is a glowing midnight neon prayer...playful script, eternal heartbeat, and a pulse that feels both intimate and performative. Itβs alive on the page. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2025 01:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece is a glowing midnight neon prayer...playful script, eternal heartbeat, and a pulse that feels both intimate and performative. Itβs alive on the page. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2025 01:04
Particularly Any in Particular
sorenbarrett said:
Love some say distorts the view others say it clarifies vision I say enjoy it for what it is. A lovely write
September 13th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Love some say distorts the view others say it clarifies vision I say enjoy it for what it is. A lovely write
September 13th, 2025 06:54
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FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
βIs there ever a stop sign that says go either way?
Shall we sing hymns, poems, and haikus along the road?β Love this
September 12th, 2025 11:01
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
βIs there ever a stop sign that says go either way?
Shall we sing hymns, poems, and haikus along the road?β Love this
September 12th, 2025 11:01
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a dream-song...playful, chaotic, yet deeply searching. The bend in time, the cries of love, the glitter dust and angelsβ¦itβs a cosmic whirl where memory and belief collide. Alive, restless, and magnetic. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 12th, 2025 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a dream-song...playful, chaotic, yet deeply searching. The bend in time, the cries of love, the glitter dust and angelsβ¦itβs a cosmic whirl where memory and belief collide. Alive, restless, and magnetic. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 12th, 2025 09:47
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sorenbarrett said:
Love is a dance in many ways and this poem puts it in metaphor. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Love is a dance in many ways and this poem puts it in metaphor. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 07:56
Prayersπ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, Keyaraβ¦I know the power of leaning into grace and asking to be restored. Youβve voiced it with honesty and faith. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 11th, 2025 21:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, Keyaraβ¦I know the power of leaning into grace and asking to be restored. Youβve voiced it with honesty and faith. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 11th, 2025 21:04
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