Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, youโve got this wild, swirling way of writingโฆsoft edges, hidden truths, a sudden sting of reality. This piece carries all of that at once. Loved reading it. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 17th, 2025 11:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, youโve got this wild, swirling way of writingโฆsoft edges, hidden truths, a sudden sting of reality. This piece carries all of that at once. Loved reading it. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 17th, 2025 11:31
๐๐ซ๐ก ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฑ\'๐ฐ ๐๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐๐๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ฑ โ๐ฑ
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts caught between what we think and what we say. Often it is not appropriate to say what we think but if so how appropriate is it to think it? An interesting reflection.
November 17th, 2025 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts caught between what we think and what we say. Often it is not appropriate to say what we think but if so how appropriate is it to think it? An interesting reflection.
November 17th, 2025 03:22
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sorenbarrett said:
Evergreens and flowers blooming a pretty sight. Well done
November 16th, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Evergreens and flowers blooming a pretty sight. Well done
November 16th, 2025 09:28
โฑ๐พโฏ๐๐ ๐ขโดโด๐น๐โฏ๐๐ โฐ๐๐ฟโด๐ โ๐
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this moves with your signature mix of beauty and warningโฆsoft lines carrying something deeper underneath. It reads like a whispered truth. Love it, Kiki.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 15th, 2025 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this moves with your signature mix of beauty and warningโฆsoft lines carrying something deeper underneath. It reads like a whispered truth. Love it, Kiki.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 15th, 2025 08:04
โฑ๐พโฏ๐๐ ๐ขโดโด๐น๐โฏ๐๐ โฐ๐๐ฟโด๐ โ๐
sorenbarrett said:
Different pieces combine in this poem where thoughts join they often meld. Well done
November 15th, 2025 03:25
sorenbarrett said:
Different pieces combine in this poem where thoughts join they often meld. Well done
November 15th, 2025 03:25
๐ ๐ช๐ฌ๐ช๐ข๐ซ๐ฑ ๐ฌ๐ฃ ๐๐ฌ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ก๐ข
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this has such a gentle quiet to itโฆlike the kind of solitude that actually fills instead of empties. Loved this. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 14th, 2025 14:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this has such a gentle quiet to itโฆlike the kind of solitude that actually fills instead of empties. Loved this. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 14th, 2025 14:30
๐ ๐ช๐ฌ๐ช๐ข๐ซ๐ฑ ๐ฌ๐ฃ ๐๐ฌ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ก๐ข
sorenbarrett said:
What struck me in reading this poem was that one could substitute hair here and the words still apply. It is often the pride and joy of its owner. Do we wear joy as we do our hair sometimes combed and sometimes care free? A good read
November 14th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
What struck me in reading this poem was that one could substitute hair here and the words still apply. It is often the pride and joy of its owner. Do we wear joy as we do our hair sometimes combed and sometimes care free? A good read
November 14th, 2025 04:20
๐ฎ๐โด๐ ๐๐๐น ๐ดโฏ๐ โ ๐ฏ๐๐
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one feels like someone standing in a doorwayโฆhalf afraid, half brave, but still showing up word by word. Beautiful little piece, Kiki. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 13th, 2025 15:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one feels like someone standing in a doorwayโฆhalf afraid, half brave, but still showing up word by word. Beautiful little piece, Kiki. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 13th, 2025 15:18
๐ฎ๐โด๐ ๐๐๐น ๐ดโฏ๐ โ ๐ฏ๐๐
sorenbarrett said:
I was taught not to say try but rather do or do not. It was considered a deterrent that tells the mind you won\'t be able to accomplish a task. I hear you though and I would list it as surreal and sad.
November 13th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
I was taught not to say try but rather do or do not. It was considered a deterrent that tells the mind you won\'t be able to accomplish a task. I hear you though and I would list it as surreal and sad.
November 13th, 2025 08:18
๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ฐ ๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ฑ๐ฏ๐ถ โ๐๐ณ๐ข ๐๐ข๐ญ๐ฑ๐ฅ? ๐๐ข๐ญ๐ฑ๐ฅ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries your signature...fluttery, bold, a little risky, a little sweetโฆlike youโre writing in candlelight and seeing what glows. Well done. Loved this. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 12th, 2025 21:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries your signature...fluttery, bold, a little risky, a little sweetโฆlike youโre writing in candlelight and seeing what glows. Well done. Loved this. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 12th, 2025 21:09
๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ฐ ๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ฑ๐ฏ๐ถ โ๐๐ณ๐ข ๐๐ข๐ญ๐ฑ๐ฅ? ๐๐ข๐ญ๐ฑ๐ฅ
sorenbarrett said:
Someone that brings good fortune or luck like a rabbits foot or a four leaf clover. A fun and light hearted read.
November 12th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Someone that brings good fortune or luck like a rabbits foot or a four leaf clover. A fun and light hearted read.
November 12th, 2025 04:39
๐ฅโด๐๐๐๐ถ๐๐พ๐โ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, youโve written something deeply human here...a diary that slips into prayer. Itโs fragile, loving, and brave all at once. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 11th, 2025 09:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, youโve written something deeply human here...a diary that slips into prayer. Itโs fragile, loving, and brave all at once. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 11th, 2025 09:31
๐ฅโด๐๐๐๐ถ๐๐พ๐โ
sorenbarrett said:
The free flow of thought in this write takes me from journaling to baby boy nicely done
November 11th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
The free flow of thought in this write takes me from journaling to baby boy nicely done
November 11th, 2025 04:02
A Few Days
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this reads like a love note to languageโฆsuccinct, sensual, and alive. You made โtodayโ feel timeless. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 10th, 2025 21:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this reads like a love note to languageโฆsuccinct, sensual, and alive. You made โtodayโ feel timeless. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 10th, 2025 21:16
โโฏ๐โฏ\'๐ ๐ดโด๐๐ โฐ๐โฏ๐โ๐โฏโฏ๐.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is pure serenity...love entwined with earth, sky, and renewal. A poem that breathes and smiles all at once. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 9th, 2025 22:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is pure serenity...love entwined with earth, sky, and renewal. A poem that breathes and smiles all at once. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 9th, 2025 22:51
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sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sentiment expressed in a poem vivid in images and metaphor
November 9th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sentiment expressed in a poem vivid in images and metaphor
November 9th, 2025 11:42
๐๐๐น ๐ฏ๐ฝโฏ๐
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this reads like a vow whispered to the self...honest, stripped down, and beautifully human. You made โmy lifeโ sound like both burden and blessing. I can relate, my friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 8th, 2025 08:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this reads like a vow whispered to the self...honest, stripped down, and beautifully human. You made โmy lifeโ sound like both burden and blessing. I can relate, my friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 8th, 2025 08:50
๐๐๐น ๐ฏ๐ฝโฏ๐
sorenbarrett said:
Others may act as though they own your life but only each person owns their own and each makes their own choices as to what they do. Nicely expressed.
November 8th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Others may act as though they own your life but only each person owns their own and each makes their own choices as to what they do. Nicely expressed.
November 8th, 2025 03:52
......... ๐ฎโด ๐พ๐ ๐พ๐......... ๐ฏ๐ฝ๐พ๐ ๐ฒโฏ๐ท๐๐พ๐โฏ โ๐๐๐ โ๐๐โด ๐๐ โฐ๐๐โด๐
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this made me smileโฆyou turned technical chaos into art. Even your test lines carry a kind of rhythm and self-awareness. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 7th, 2025 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this made me smileโฆyou turned technical chaos into art. Even your test lines carry a kind of rhythm and self-awareness. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 7th, 2025 08:44
......... ๐ฎโด ๐พ๐ ๐พ๐......... ๐ฏ๐ฝ๐พ๐ ๐ฒโฏ๐ท๐๐พ๐โฏ โ๐๐๐ โ๐๐โด ๐๐ โฐ๐๐โด๐
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of just because I suppose. A most interesting approach.
November 7th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of just because I suppose. A most interesting approach.
November 7th, 2025 08:37
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, Kiki, I felt the ache of needing to keep moving just to stay alive. You put that instinct into rhythm beautifully. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 6th, 2025 22:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, Kiki, I felt the ache of needing to keep moving just to stay alive. You put that instinct into rhythm beautifully. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 6th, 2025 22:06
๐ฎ๐ฝโด๐๐ ๐ฎ๐โด๐๐ ๐ฎ๐ฝโด๐๐
sorenbarrett said:
Shakes are wonderful and so it the poem that melts into a love poem
November 6th, 2025 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
Shakes are wonderful and so it the poem that melts into a love poem
November 6th, 2025 15:32
The Best Quality One Can Possess
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A digital confessional wrapped in aesthetic armorโฆfun, fierce, and intentionally unreadable at points. Youโve built a whole vibe here, and it hits. Well done, Kiki!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 6th, 2025 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A digital confessional wrapped in aesthetic armorโฆfun, fierce, and intentionally unreadable at points. Youโve built a whole vibe here, and it hits. Well done, Kiki!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 6th, 2025 09:40
The Best Quality One Can Possess
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and thought provoking. Would a person really know their best quality?
November 5th, 2025 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and thought provoking. Would a person really know their best quality?
November 5th, 2025 18:09
*Gratitude HUGS AND KISSES DAY*
sorenbarrett said:
This poem shows its color in a bouquet of wildflower lines. Nicely done leaving a sweet fragrance behind.
November 4th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem shows its color in a bouquet of wildflower lines. Nicely done leaving a sweet fragrance behind.
November 4th, 2025 04:14
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is elegant, raw, and celestial. The fonts and flow make it shimmer like thought itselfโฆhalf dream, half devotion. Love it, my friend!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
November 2nd, 2025 13:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is elegant, raw, and celestial. The fonts and flow make it shimmer like thought itselfโฆhalf dream, half devotion. Love it, my friend!๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
November 2nd, 2025 13:20
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sorenbarrett said:
Worry a sensation that all get from time to time but how we handle it makes all the difference. Nicely said.
November 2nd, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Worry a sensation that all get from time to time but how we handle it makes all the difference. Nicely said.
November 2nd, 2025 05:13
Listened to What An Awesome God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Know the song well and love it. My friend, I love how you fuse sacred awe with your signature glamour...itโs fearless, alive, and unmistakably you. This song clearly lit something divine in your creative spark and I am certainly glad for it. Well don. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 1st, 2025 05:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Know the song well and love it. My friend, I love how you fuse sacred awe with your signature glamour...itโs fearless, alive, and unmistakably you. This song clearly lit something divine in your creative spark and I am certainly glad for it. Well don. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 1st, 2025 05:58
Listened to What An Awesome God
sorenbarrett said:
Three echoing thoughts bounce through these lines. Very good
November 1st, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Three echoing thoughts bounce through these lines. Very good
November 1st, 2025 04:16
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