Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
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sorenbarrett said:
Well done in a spirit of faith and belief.
October 7th, 2025 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
Well done in a spirit of faith and belief.
October 7th, 2025 13:36
. . . . . . . B.T.F.U.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this moves like dream logic in motionโฆsurreal, rhythmic, and personal all at once. It feels like youโre stitching emotion and memory into something infinite. The surrealist tag fitsโฆitโs language bending around feeling. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 11:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this moves like dream logic in motionโฆsurreal, rhythmic, and personal all at once. It feels like youโre stitching emotion and memory into something infinite. The surrealist tag fitsโฆitโs language bending around feeling. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 11:56
๐๐ฅ๐ข ๐๐ข๐ข๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ก
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this piece beats like a mixtape of memoryโsong, soul, and spark colliding. Not a haiku but a heartbeat. A haikuโs more of a quiet moment in motionโthree short lines, usually around 5, 7, and 5 syllablesโcapturing one clear image or feeling. Yours flows freer, like a melody spilling past the frame. i wouldnโt rate this 18+โฆitโs all heart and creative pulse. Keep that originality glowing, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this piece beats like a mixtape of memoryโsong, soul, and spark colliding. Not a haiku but a heartbeat. A haikuโs more of a quiet moment in motionโthree short lines, usually around 5, 7, and 5 syllablesโcapturing one clear image or feeling. Yours flows freer, like a melody spilling past the frame. i wouldnโt rate this 18+โฆitโs all heart and creative pulse. Keep that originality glowing, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 10:52
. . . . . . . B.T.F.U.
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely true and to be used with caution. Well said
October 6th, 2025 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely true and to be used with caution. Well said
October 6th, 2025 05:59
๐๐ฅ๐ข ๐๐ข๐ข๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ก
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure what part was a haiku but a beautiful message it was. Nicely done
October 5th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure what part was a haiku but a beautiful message it was. Nicely done
October 5th, 2025 08:42
๐๐ฏ๐ฌ๐ช๐ญ๐ฑ ๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ช \"๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ฑ๐ฏ๐ถ ๐๐ฉ๐๐ช๐ฐ\"
sorenbarrett said:
Since it is about God I would say religious but that is my interpretation. A lovely poem about one\'s faith. Nicely done.
October 4th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Since it is about God I would say religious but that is my interpretation. A lovely poem about one\'s faith. Nicely done.
October 4th, 2025 09:26
๐๐ฏ๐ฌ๐ช๐ญ๐ฑ ๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ช \"๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ฑ๐ฏ๐ถ ๐๐ฉ๐๐ช๐ฐ\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you lit the stage with thisโฆa prompt that becomes a pulse, a poem that sounds like a slam warming up. Charged, inviting, ready to roar. Grateful for this one. Great to start the day with indeed! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 4th, 2025 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you lit the stage with thisโฆa prompt that becomes a pulse, a poem that sounds like a slam warming up. Charged, inviting, ready to roar. Grateful for this one. Great to start the day with indeed! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 4th, 2025 08:53
Untitled
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is pure youโฆbold, rhythmic, layered with play and punch. That aim-and-fire line especially lands strong. Always grateful for your work and presence, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 3rd, 2025 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is pure youโฆbold, rhythmic, layered with play and punch. That aim-and-fire line especially lands strong. Always grateful for your work and presence, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 3rd, 2025 07:29
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Wise to gain information on someone and not rely entirely on intuition but at the same time realize that social rumors are not always correct. A most interesting write
October 3rd, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Wise to gain information on someone and not rely entirely on intuition but at the same time realize that social rumors are not always correct. A most interesting write
October 3rd, 2025 04:58
๐โฏ๐ป๐พ๐โฏ๐น
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one breathes celebration of poetry itself...flowing, imaginative, full of spirit. I think it would land best in Reflection since itโs about the essence of writing and creativity. If that doesnโt feel quite right, Unclassified always works too. Always grateful for your energy, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 2nd, 2025 16:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one breathes celebration of poetry itself...flowing, imaginative, full of spirit. I think it would land best in Reflection since itโs about the essence of writing and creativity. If that doesnโt feel quite right, Unclassified always works too. Always grateful for your energy, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 2nd, 2025 16:58
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sorenbarrett said:
The focus of a poem on a single word and through it to convey a message. Nicely done
October 2nd, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
The focus of a poem on a single word and through it to convey a message. Nicely done
October 2nd, 2025 09:32
โญ๐ฌ๐ช๐ญ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ช๐ข๐ซ๐ฑ๐ฐ ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ ๐ฃ๐ฌ๐ฏ ๐๐ฌ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค ... ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฐ ๐๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฑ๐ฅ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is wild and beautiful. The way you weave style, music, and feeling together hits like a cascadeโฆraw and alive, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 1st, 2025 19:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is wild and beautiful. The way you weave style, music, and feeling together hits like a cascadeโฆraw and alive, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 1st, 2025 19:50
โญ๐ฌ๐ช๐ญ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ช๐ข๐ซ๐ฑ๐ฐ ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ ๐ฃ๐ฌ๐ฏ ๐๐ฌ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ซ๐ค ... ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฐ ๐๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฑ๐ฅ
sorenbarrett said:
An implanted acrostic message of love makes this poem one that a reader pays attention to. A good read with a positive message.
October 1st, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
An implanted acrostic message of love makes this poem one that a reader pays attention to. A good read with a positive message.
October 1st, 2025 04:19
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for this blessing, Kiki...heart-surgery grace, angels watching, hope rising. Itโs a quiet prayer and a strong reminder all at once. I love the image you chose too! All around, a wonderful expression indeed. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 30th, 2025 17:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for this blessing, Kiki...heart-surgery grace, angels watching, hope rising. Itโs a quiet prayer and a strong reminder all at once. I love the image you chose too! All around, a wonderful expression indeed. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 30th, 2025 17:47
Cheated on a test or exam edition
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you blended forms hereโpoetic reflection laced with advice, playful but serious underneath. Iโd place it as \"Reflection\", even with that advisory edge still intact. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 30th, 2025 17:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you blended forms hereโpoetic reflection laced with advice, playful but serious underneath. Iโd place it as \"Reflection\", even with that advisory edge still intact. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 30th, 2025 17:37
๐๐๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ข๐ฏ ๐๐ฑ ๐๐ฒ๐ฏ๐ค๐ข๐ฏ๐ถ
sorenbarrett said:
I see in this poem a plea to other to surrender to something greater to be grateful for what is given and acknowledge it. Nicely written with a sense of belief and conviction.
September 30th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
I see in this poem a plea to other to surrender to something greater to be grateful for what is given and acknowledge it. Nicely written with a sense of belief and conviction.
September 30th, 2025 04:02
Cheated on a test or exam edition
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice. One that cheats today lack the knowledge tomorrow. A great read
September 29th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice. One that cheats today lack the knowledge tomorrow. A great read
September 29th, 2025 06:54
๐๐ซ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ ๐ข๐ก ๐๐ถ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ \"๐๐ซ๐ข\" ๐๐ข๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ฐ~ ๐๐ฅ๐ข ๐๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ค๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ข๐ก
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A Jesusaholic, now that is the kind of โaholicโ I can dig being! This shines with your signature style, Kikiโฆfaith poured into rhythm, heartbeat pulsing with fire, laughter lighting the way. Sacred and playful, bold and alive. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 28th, 2025 16:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A Jesusaholic, now that is the kind of โaholicโ I can dig being! This shines with your signature style, Kikiโฆfaith poured into rhythm, heartbeat pulsing with fire, laughter lighting the way. Sacred and playful, bold and alive. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 28th, 2025 16:34
๐๐ซ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ ๐ข๐ก ๐๐ถ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ \"๐๐ซ๐ข\" ๐๐ข๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ฐ~ ๐๐ฅ๐ข ๐๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ค๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ข๐ก
Fรญna Elara ๐ Petra Patrice said:
Wow this piece is vivid, exuberant, and overflowing with emotion and imagery.
September 28th, 2025 13:35
Fรญna Elara ๐ Petra Patrice said:
Wow this piece is vivid, exuberant, and overflowing with emotion and imagery.
September 28th, 2025 13:35
๐๐ซ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ ๐ข๐ก ๐๐ถ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ \"๐๐ซ๐ข\" ๐๐ข๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ฐ~ ๐๐ฅ๐ข ๐๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ค๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ข๐ก
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem open to interpretation religious or not. A good read
September 28th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem open to interpretation religious or not. A good read
September 28th, 2025 09:42
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this shines with love and humor encrypted in your style. From the heartbeat line to the reminder of laughter binding us, you turn the page into celebration itself. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 27th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this shines with love and humor encrypted in your style. From the heartbeat line to the reminder of laughter binding us, you turn the page into celebration itself. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 27th, 2025 07:55
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sorenbarrett said:
I do believe and have experienced that laughter is good medicine for physical and mental pain. It is healthy and costs nothing. It brings people together. A lovely write
September 27th, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
I do believe and have experienced that laughter is good medicine for physical and mental pain. It is healthy and costs nothing. It brings people together. A lovely write
September 27th, 2025 05:30
P.E.A.C.E
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is spiritual through and through. From silence as a doorway to peace, to kindness and empathy shaping lifeโฆit all speaks like scripture written in your own hand. Whether one calls it spiritual or religious, it reflects a truth that endures. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 26th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is spiritual through and through. From silence as a doorway to peace, to kindness and empathy shaping lifeโฆit all speaks like scripture written in your own hand. Whether one calls it spiritual or religious, it reflects a truth that endures. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 26th, 2025 09:11
P.E.A.C.E
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice to all and the world would be a better place if people listened and acted on it. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice to all and the world would be a better place if people listened and acted on it. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 08:05
๐โฏ๐โด๐๐พโด๐๐ถ๐๐
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece moves with strengthโฆthe surrender, the boldness, the Spirit leading into light. Itโs both a reminder and a charge, wrapped in warmth and hope. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ I love that you\'ve written it as a prayer for people read/meditate on. Powerful and practical. You are a blessing and a gift, my friend. โ๏ธ
September 25th, 2025 16:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece moves with strengthโฆthe surrender, the boldness, the Spirit leading into light. Itโs both a reminder and a charge, wrapped in warmth and hope. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ I love that you\'ve written it as a prayer for people read/meditate on. Powerful and practical. You are a blessing and a gift, my friend. โ๏ธ
September 25th, 2025 16:27
๐โฏ๐โด๐๐พโด๐๐ถ๐๐
William Hromada said:
To have a Comforter!!
September 25th, 2025 04:49
William Hromada said:
To have a Comforter!!
September 25th, 2025 04:49
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sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish and belief voiced in this poem. Nicely done
September 25th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish and belief voiced in this poem. Nicely done
September 25th, 2025 03:59
The Whispers, The Shadows
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this carries the fire of intimacy and the warmth of devotionโฆfrom โbeacon in the darknessโ to โfire does what itโs supposed to doโฆburn.โ It straddles love and desire more than friendship, and yes, the +18 label makes sense. Itโs bold, layered, and unapologetically alive. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ well done!
September 24th, 2025 07:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this carries the fire of intimacy and the warmth of devotionโฆfrom โbeacon in the darknessโ to โfire does what itโs supposed to doโฆburn.โ It straddles love and desire more than friendship, and yes, the +18 label makes sense. Itโs bold, layered, and unapologetically alive. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ well done!
September 24th, 2025 07:20
The Whispers, The Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem where sugar heated and burnt coats and flavors the poem. Nothing like burnt sugar coating make a delightful sweet. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem where sugar heated and burnt coats and flavors the poem. Nothing like burnt sugar coating make a delightful sweet. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 04:44
The Whispers, The Shadows
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like someone has found the one.
Not sure if it merits an 18, but the more love the better.
September 24th, 2025 04:08
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like someone has found the one.
Not sure if it merits an 18, but the more love the better.
September 24th, 2025 04:08
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