Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
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Demar Desu said:
Difficult to read the third word because of font.
September 16th, 2025 08:13
Demar Desu said:
Difficult to read the third word because of font.
September 16th, 2025 08:13
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sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem set beautifully in imagery and I loved the play on the word light as a noun and adjective.
September 16th, 2025 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem set beautifully in imagery and I loved the play on the word light as a noun and adjective.
September 16th, 2025 08:01
Satisfy your soul, not society.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully spoken, Keyara. The rhythm of soul over society, joy over role, lands true. And the gratitude reflection ties it all together with warmth. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 15th, 2025 12:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully spoken, Keyara. The rhythm of soul over society, joy over role, lands true. And the gratitude reflection ties it all together with warmth. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 15th, 2025 12:59
Satisfy your soul, not society.
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice anyway you look at it. Gratitude a key to happiness. Well done
September 15th, 2025 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice anyway you look at it. Gratitude a key to happiness. Well done
September 15th, 2025 10:18
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sorenbarrett said:
Clever grading system. I have seen other grading systems each with their point of view. This one is cute.
September 14th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Clever grading system. I have seen other grading systems each with their point of view. This one is cute.
September 14th, 2025 04:54
Particularly Any in Particular
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece is a glowing midnight neon prayer...playful script, eternal heartbeat, and a pulse that feels both intimate and performative. Itβs alive on the page. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2025 01:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece is a glowing midnight neon prayer...playful script, eternal heartbeat, and a pulse that feels both intimate and performative. Itβs alive on the page. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2025 01:04
Particularly Any in Particular
sorenbarrett said:
Love some say distorts the view others say it clarifies vision I say enjoy it for what it is. A lovely write
September 13th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Love some say distorts the view others say it clarifies vision I say enjoy it for what it is. A lovely write
September 13th, 2025 06:54
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FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
βIs there ever a stop sign that says go either way?
Shall we sing hymns, poems, and haikus along the road?β Love this
September 12th, 2025 11:01
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
βIs there ever a stop sign that says go either way?
Shall we sing hymns, poems, and haikus along the road?β Love this
September 12th, 2025 11:01
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a dream-song...playful, chaotic, yet deeply searching. The bend in time, the cries of love, the glitter dust and angelsβ¦itβs a cosmic whirl where memory and belief collide. Alive, restless, and magnetic. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 12th, 2025 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a dream-song...playful, chaotic, yet deeply searching. The bend in time, the cries of love, the glitter dust and angelsβ¦itβs a cosmic whirl where memory and belief collide. Alive, restless, and magnetic. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 12th, 2025 09:47
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sorenbarrett said:
Love is a dance in many ways and this poem puts it in metaphor. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Love is a dance in many ways and this poem puts it in metaphor. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 07:56
Prayersπ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, Keyaraβ¦I know the power of leaning into grace and asking to be restored. Youβve voiced it with honesty and faith. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 11th, 2025 21:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, Keyaraβ¦I know the power of leaning into grace and asking to be restored. Youβve voiced it with honesty and faith. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 11th, 2025 21:04
Prayersπ
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection, wish and prayer. Nicely worded in this poem.
September 11th, 2025 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection, wish and prayer. Nicely worded in this poem.
September 11th, 2025 13:02
Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is luminousβ¦clouds carrying wishes, forests serene, fantasy interlaced with reality. It reads like a meditation wrapped in mist. Beautifully done and love the acrostic! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 10th, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is luminousβ¦clouds carrying wishes, forests serene, fantasy interlaced with reality. It reads like a meditation wrapped in mist. Beautifully done and love the acrostic! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 10th, 2025 18:29
Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love the rhythm.
September 10th, 2025 18:23
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love the rhythm.
September 10th, 2025 18:23
Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely set in the first introductory piece it becomes acrostic at the end. Very nice
September 10th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely set in the first introductory piece it becomes acrostic at the end. Very nice
September 10th, 2025 04:14
STORY TIME (For the Babies)
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that enter in and disturb the flow of a peaceful embrace. A most interesting read
September 9th, 2025 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that enter in and disturb the flow of a peaceful embrace. A most interesting read
September 9th, 2025 07:10
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FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Your words carry such a soothing calm. I could feel the countryside peace as I read.
The mix of imagery and artistic fonts makes this feel like a living artwork. Beautiful
September 8th, 2025 10:42
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Your words carry such a soothing calm. I could feel the countryside peace as I read.
The mix of imagery and artistic fonts makes this feel like a living artwork. Beautiful
September 8th, 2025 10:42
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this breathes calm and renewal. Each line unfolds like morning light across dew-touched petals, carrying the hush of countryside stillness. It feels like a reminder to breathe and begin again. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 8th, 2025 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this breathes calm and renewal. Each line unfolds like morning light across dew-touched petals, carrying the hush of countryside stillness. It feels like a reminder to breathe and begin again. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 8th, 2025 07:02
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me on a deeper level of someone that has worries that they need to escape from and in this mental withdrawal to elysian fields they have found it provoking the question of what is the pain or worry so great that provokes this. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me on a deeper level of someone that has worries that they need to escape from and in this mental withdrawal to elysian fields they have found it provoking the question of what is the pain or worry so great that provokes this. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 05:05
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FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This piece is breathtaking! The vivid imagery and flowing rhythm make the feeling of being lifted by inspiration almost tangible. I love how it captures the ecstasy of art while hinting at the inevitable return to reality truly immersive and passionate.
September 7th, 2025 09:47
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This piece is breathtaking! The vivid imagery and flowing rhythm make the feeling of being lifted by inspiration almost tangible. I love how it captures the ecstasy of art while hinting at the inevitable return to reality truly immersive and passionate.
September 7th, 2025 09:47
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sorenbarrett said:
A poem well written of the experiencing of extasy and the flight that goes with it. Lovely
September 7th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well written of the experiencing of extasy and the flight that goes with it. Lovely
September 7th, 2025 05:03
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem of love is surreal and fanciful taking one through clouds. It floats and hovers. Very nicely done
September 6th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of love is surreal and fanciful taking one through clouds. It floats and hovers. Very nicely done
September 6th, 2025 04:46
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sorenbarrett said:
A love poem raw in its presentation it yells out to a loved one for recognition. Lovely
September 6th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem raw in its presentation it yells out to a loved one for recognition. Lovely
September 6th, 2025 03:55
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