Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
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sorenbarrett said:
If one is speaking of a lover romantic, if one is speaking of a god religious, if one is speaking of nature or one\'s own self belief it is spiritual. Nicely said
October 16th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
If one is speaking of a lover romantic, if one is speaking of a god religious, if one is speaking of nature or one\'s own self belief it is spiritual. Nicely said
October 16th, 2025 04:17
Title
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is chaotic brilliance, my friendโฆa meltdown turned manifesto. The way you lean into the font and frustration makes it feel alive, like the WiFi itself is haunted. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ As for classification, I almost always leave unclassified because I would rather not box it in to a specific classification, as poems often fit into many. Some poems, of course, demand a classification; however, not all. I think leaving this one unclassified was wise as it allows the reader to feel it without prejudgment. Anywho, well done, dear friend!
October 15th, 2025 13:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is chaotic brilliance, my friendโฆa meltdown turned manifesto. The way you lean into the font and frustration makes it feel alive, like the WiFi itself is haunted. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ As for classification, I almost always leave unclassified because I would rather not box it in to a specific classification, as poems often fit into many. Some poems, of course, demand a classification; however, not all. I think leaving this one unclassified was wise as it allows the reader to feel it without prejudgment. Anywho, well done, dear friend!
October 15th, 2025 13:51
Title
sorenbarrett said:
Anger noted, there is a carefree attitude to this and a matter of fact flavor. A most interesting write
October 15th, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
Anger noted, there is a carefree attitude to this and a matter of fact flavor. A most interesting write
October 15th, 2025 06:44
๐๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ข๐ซ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this radiates your signature...the mix of mystery, sensuality, and sacred. The texture, the font, the whispered devotionโฆthey all become performance art in ink. Youโre magic, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ Iโm with you on the fontโitโs wild but so you. It pulls the reader into your atmosphere before a single word lands. And yesโฆI love writing, even the typosโtheyโre just proof the handโs alive (and sometimes confused ๐คฃ). You definitely made it worthwhile, my friend. ๐ฅโจ๐ฅ
October 14th, 2025 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this radiates your signature...the mix of mystery, sensuality, and sacred. The texture, the font, the whispered devotionโฆthey all become performance art in ink. Youโre magic, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ Iโm with you on the fontโitโs wild but so you. It pulls the reader into your atmosphere before a single word lands. And yesโฆI love writing, even the typosโtheyโre just proof the handโs alive (and sometimes confused ๐คฃ). You definitely made it worthwhile, my friend. ๐ฅโจ๐ฅ
October 14th, 2025 08:09
๐๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ข๐ซ
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking this piece makes me wonder about meaning and I feel in some way I am looking at a Jackson Pollock painting.
October 14th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking this piece makes me wonder about meaning and I feel in some way I am looking at a Jackson Pollock painting.
October 14th, 2025 03:49
STORY OF MY LIFE
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem conveys a deep sense of loyalty, love, and longing. It reflects on the emotional turmoil of being unable to control the feelings of others while firmly committing to oneโs own devotion. The speaker expresses a yearning for reconnection and the hope of a reunion, emphasizing the strength of their feelings across distance and time.
October 13th, 2025 18:45
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem conveys a deep sense of loyalty, love, and longing. It reflects on the emotional turmoil of being unable to control the feelings of others while firmly committing to oneโs own devotion. The speaker expresses a yearning for reconnection and the hope of a reunion, emphasizing the strength of their feelings across distance and time.
October 13th, 2025 18:45
STORY OF MY LIFE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a love spell caught between dream and devotionโฆtender, hopeful, and haunted. The heartache glows even through the stylized veil. Beautifully expressed. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 13th, 2025 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a love spell caught between dream and devotionโฆtender, hopeful, and haunted. The heartache glows even through the stylized veil. Beautifully expressed. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 13th, 2025 09:35
STORY OF MY LIFE
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic loss where time is the only barrier to reunification. A lovely write
October 13th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic loss where time is the only barrier to reunification. A lovely write
October 13th, 2025 03:56
โญ๐ฌ๐ซ๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ข๐ซ๐ ๐ถ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, โneedless to sayโ but Iโll say it anyway...this one glows. โDusted in yellow,โ โthere goes mine babyโโฆ itโs fragile, fearless, and so very you. Your language is pure electricity. I love the emphasis on colors.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ My feedback: I love it. A fave from me! ๐ฅฐ
October 12th, 2025 07:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, โneedless to sayโ but Iโll say it anyway...this one glows. โDusted in yellow,โ โthere goes mine babyโโฆ itโs fragile, fearless, and so very you. Your language is pure electricity. I love the emphasis on colors.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ My feedback: I love it. A fave from me! ๐ฅฐ
October 12th, 2025 07:23
Am I the Only One ?
sorenbarrett said:
Did I miss something? I have been on web sites that have gone down for weeks and others that went away but have had no recent troubles here. I must have been dozing. Well said though would hate to see it go.
October 12th, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Did I miss something? I have been on web sites that have gone down for weeks and others that went away but have had no recent troubles here. I must have been dozing. Well said though would hate to see it go.
October 12th, 2025 06:57
โญ๐ฌ๐ซ๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ข๐ซ๐ ๐ถ
sorenbarrett said:
Colors the major emphasis in this poem it leaves the feeling of a festival. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
Colors the major emphasis in this poem it leaves the feeling of a festival. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 20:08
๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ซ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข๐ฏ๐ข ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐๐ซ๐ข ๐๐ฏ๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ช... ๐๐ฌ๐ด๐ข๐ฏ ๐๐ฒ๐ฑ๐๐ค๐ข
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is morning madness turned art...humor, exasperation, and that signature spark only you can pull off. Power may go out, but your personality never dims. Yes, this was humorous! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 11th, 2025 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is morning madness turned art...humor, exasperation, and that signature spark only you can pull off. Power may go out, but your personality never dims. Yes, this was humorous! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 11th, 2025 08:42
๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ซ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข๐ฏ๐ข ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐๐ซ๐ข ๐๐ฏ๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ช... ๐๐ฌ๐ด๐ข๐ฏ ๐๐ฒ๐ฑ๐๐ค๐ข
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem revolves around the chaos and unpredictability of life, particularly in the context of experiencing power outages and the ensuing frustrations. It juxtaposes the challenge of daily life with moments of silence and reflection, suggesting that within chaos, there can be an opportunity for introspection and a break from routine.
October 10th, 2025 10:48
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem revolves around the chaos and unpredictability of life, particularly in the context of experiencing power outages and the ensuing frustrations. It juxtaposes the challenge of daily life with moments of silence and reflection, suggesting that within chaos, there can be an opportunity for introspection and a break from routine.
October 10th, 2025 10:48
๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ซ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข๐ฏ๐ข ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐๐ซ๐ข ๐๐ฏ๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ช... ๐๐ฌ๐ด๐ข๐ฏ ๐๐ฒ๐ฑ๐๐ค๐ข
sorenbarrett said:
Little things become big things when our routine is interrupted. A lovely write
October 10th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Little things become big things when our routine is interrupted. A lovely write
October 10th, 2025 04:43
๐ฏ๐พ๐๐โฏ \"๐ฆ๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐๐ถ\" *โฑ๐โด๐ ๐ถ ๐ซ๐โฏ๐ โฌโดโด๐*
David Hopkins said:
I loved your poem but it was harder to read because of the font you chose perhaps consider another Less involved font for easier reading aside from
That a great poem . Congratulations !
October 9th, 2025 20:53
David Hopkins said:
I loved your poem but it was harder to read because of the font you chose perhaps consider another Less involved font for easier reading aside from
That a great poem . Congratulations !
October 9th, 2025 20:53
๐ฏ๐พ๐๐โฏ \"๐ฆ๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐๐ถ\" *โฑ๐โด๐ ๐ถ ๐ซ๐โฏ๐ โฌโดโด๐*
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one hums with mystic passion...divine love rendered through mortal hunger. The โspiritualโ label fits; youโve written transcendence that still bleeds human. Absolutely radiant work. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 9th, 2025 20:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one hums with mystic passion...divine love rendered through mortal hunger. The โspiritualโ label fits; youโve written transcendence that still bleeds human. Absolutely radiant work. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 9th, 2025 20:01
๐ฏ๐พ๐๐โฏ \"๐ฆ๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐๐ถ\" *โฑ๐โด๐ ๐ถ ๐ซ๐โฏ๐ โฌโดโด๐*
sorenbarrett said:
I love the pairing of Krishna god of love with the second piece that talks of carnal love a great pairing. Nicely done
October 9th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
I love the pairing of Krishna god of love with the second piece that talks of carnal love a great pairing. Nicely done
October 9th, 2025 06:52
B.U.T.T.E.R.F.L.Y
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this glows like sunlight through glass...each section fluttering in its own hue. The wordplay, the emotion, the heart behind it allโฆpure transformation. And since you asked for Scripture, this came to mind: โDear children, let us not love with words or speech but with actions and in truthโ (1 John 3:18). Fits your message perfectly me thinks. Well done, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 8th, 2025 20:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this glows like sunlight through glass...each section fluttering in its own hue. The wordplay, the emotion, the heart behind it allโฆpure transformation. And since you asked for Scripture, this came to mind: โDear children, let us not love with words or speech but with actions and in truthโ (1 John 3:18). Fits your message perfectly me thinks. Well done, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 8th, 2025 20:03
B.U.T.T.E.R.F.L.Y
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful depiction of nature in her grandeur and her painted world. Lovely and loved it
October 8th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful depiction of nature in her grandeur and her painted world. Lovely and loved it
October 8th, 2025 14:38
๐ฎ๐ธ๐๐พ๐
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sorenbarrett said:
Well done in a spirit of faith and belief.
October 7th, 2025 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
Well done in a spirit of faith and belief.
October 7th, 2025 13:36
. . . . . . . B.T.F.U.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this moves like dream logic in motionโฆsurreal, rhythmic, and personal all at once. It feels like youโre stitching emotion and memory into something infinite. The surrealist tag fitsโฆitโs language bending around feeling. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 11:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this moves like dream logic in motionโฆsurreal, rhythmic, and personal all at once. It feels like youโre stitching emotion and memory into something infinite. The surrealist tag fitsโฆitโs language bending around feeling. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 11:56
๐๐ฅ๐ข ๐๐ข๐ข๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ก
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this piece beats like a mixtape of memoryโsong, soul, and spark colliding. Not a haiku but a heartbeat. A haikuโs more of a quiet moment in motionโthree short lines, usually around 5, 7, and 5 syllablesโcapturing one clear image or feeling. Yours flows freer, like a melody spilling past the frame. i wouldnโt rate this 18+โฆitโs all heart and creative pulse. Keep that originality glowing, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this piece beats like a mixtape of memoryโsong, soul, and spark colliding. Not a haiku but a heartbeat. A haikuโs more of a quiet moment in motionโthree short lines, usually around 5, 7, and 5 syllablesโcapturing one clear image or feeling. Yours flows freer, like a melody spilling past the frame. i wouldnโt rate this 18+โฆitโs all heart and creative pulse. Keep that originality glowing, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 10:52
. . . . . . . B.T.F.U.
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely true and to be used with caution. Well said
October 6th, 2025 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely true and to be used with caution. Well said
October 6th, 2025 05:59
๐๐ฅ๐ข ๐๐ข๐ข๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ก
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure what part was a haiku but a beautiful message it was. Nicely done
October 5th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure what part was a haiku but a beautiful message it was. Nicely done
October 5th, 2025 08:42
๐๐ฏ๐ฌ๐ช๐ญ๐ฑ ๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ช \"๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ฑ๐ฏ๐ถ ๐๐ฉ๐๐ช๐ฐ\"
sorenbarrett said:
Since it is about God I would say religious but that is my interpretation. A lovely poem about one\'s faith. Nicely done.
October 4th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Since it is about God I would say religious but that is my interpretation. A lovely poem about one\'s faith. Nicely done.
October 4th, 2025 09:26
๐๐ฏ๐ฌ๐ช๐ญ๐ฑ ๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ช \"๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ฑ๐ฏ๐ถ ๐๐ฉ๐๐ช๐ฐ\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you lit the stage with thisโฆa prompt that becomes a pulse, a poem that sounds like a slam warming up. Charged, inviting, ready to roar. Grateful for this one. Great to start the day with indeed! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 4th, 2025 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you lit the stage with thisโฆa prompt that becomes a pulse, a poem that sounds like a slam warming up. Charged, inviting, ready to roar. Grateful for this one. Great to start the day with indeed! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 4th, 2025 08:53
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is pure youโฆbold, rhythmic, layered with play and punch. That aim-and-fire line especially lands strong. Always grateful for your work and presence, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 3rd, 2025 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is pure youโฆbold, rhythmic, layered with play and punch. That aim-and-fire line especially lands strong. Always grateful for your work and presence, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 3rd, 2025 07:29
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sorenbarrett said:
Wise to gain information on someone and not rely entirely on intuition but at the same time realize that social rumors are not always correct. A most interesting write
October 3rd, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Wise to gain information on someone and not rely entirely on intuition but at the same time realize that social rumors are not always correct. A most interesting write
October 3rd, 2025 04:58
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