Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
Prayersπ
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection, wish and prayer. Nicely worded in this poem.
September 11th, 2025 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection, wish and prayer. Nicely worded in this poem.
September 11th, 2025 13:02
Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is luminousβ¦clouds carrying wishes, forests serene, fantasy interlaced with reality. It reads like a meditation wrapped in mist. Beautifully done and love the acrostic! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 10th, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is luminousβ¦clouds carrying wishes, forests serene, fantasy interlaced with reality. It reads like a meditation wrapped in mist. Beautifully done and love the acrostic! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 10th, 2025 18:29
Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love the rhythm.
September 10th, 2025 18:23
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love the rhythm.
September 10th, 2025 18:23
Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely set in the first introductory piece it becomes acrostic at the end. Very nice
September 10th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely set in the first introductory piece it becomes acrostic at the end. Very nice
September 10th, 2025 04:14
STORY TIME (For the Babies)
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that enter in and disturb the flow of a peaceful embrace. A most interesting read
September 9th, 2025 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that enter in and disturb the flow of a peaceful embrace. A most interesting read
September 9th, 2025 07:10
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FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Your words carry such a soothing calm. I could feel the countryside peace as I read.
The mix of imagery and artistic fonts makes this feel like a living artwork. Beautiful
September 8th, 2025 10:42
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Your words carry such a soothing calm. I could feel the countryside peace as I read.
The mix of imagery and artistic fonts makes this feel like a living artwork. Beautiful
September 8th, 2025 10:42
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this breathes calm and renewal. Each line unfolds like morning light across dew-touched petals, carrying the hush of countryside stillness. It feels like a reminder to breathe and begin again. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 8th, 2025 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this breathes calm and renewal. Each line unfolds like morning light across dew-touched petals, carrying the hush of countryside stillness. It feels like a reminder to breathe and begin again. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 8th, 2025 07:02
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me on a deeper level of someone that has worries that they need to escape from and in this mental withdrawal to elysian fields they have found it provoking the question of what is the pain or worry so great that provokes this. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me on a deeper level of someone that has worries that they need to escape from and in this mental withdrawal to elysian fields they have found it provoking the question of what is the pain or worry so great that provokes this. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 05:05
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FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This piece is breathtaking! The vivid imagery and flowing rhythm make the feeling of being lifted by inspiration almost tangible. I love how it captures the ecstasy of art while hinting at the inevitable return to reality truly immersive and passionate.
September 7th, 2025 09:47
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This piece is breathtaking! The vivid imagery and flowing rhythm make the feeling of being lifted by inspiration almost tangible. I love how it captures the ecstasy of art while hinting at the inevitable return to reality truly immersive and passionate.
September 7th, 2025 09:47
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sorenbarrett said:
A poem well written of the experiencing of extasy and the flight that goes with it. Lovely
September 7th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well written of the experiencing of extasy and the flight that goes with it. Lovely
September 7th, 2025 05:03
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem of love is surreal and fanciful taking one through clouds. It floats and hovers. Very nicely done
September 6th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of love is surreal and fanciful taking one through clouds. It floats and hovers. Very nicely done
September 6th, 2025 04:46
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sorenbarrett said:
A love poem raw in its presentation it yells out to a loved one for recognition. Lovely
September 6th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem raw in its presentation it yells out to a loved one for recognition. Lovely
September 6th, 2025 03:55
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