Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
It’s Completely Completed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this one is both tender and mysterious. The way you weave fairytales, angels, and the unknown gives it a dreamlike pull…like friendship, yes, but also something more spiritual and imaginative. I think it can live comfortably in “friendship,” though it also carries a surreal, otherworldly edge. And you’re right…it’s for everyone to read. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this one is both tender and mysterious. The way you weave fairytales, angels, and the unknown gives it a dreamlike pull…like friendship, yes, but also something more spiritual and imaginative. I think it can live comfortably in “friendship,” though it also carries a surreal, otherworldly edge. And you’re right…it’s for everyone to read. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:41
It’s Completely Completed
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with a feeling of the intangible and that things unseen can still be strong in feelings unseen. A lovely write
September 19th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with a feeling of the intangible and that things unseen can still be strong in feelings unseen. A lovely write
September 19th, 2025 06:20
Signature Needed🔥
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am a firm believer that humans are spiritual beings and, therefore, our expression are spiritual too. Keyara, this glows with contrast...signatures, timers, meadows, infinity. It breaks free of category…but it certainly carries a spiritual pulse throughout it. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am a firm believer that humans are spiritual beings and, therefore, our expression are spiritual too. Keyara, this glows with contrast...signatures, timers, meadows, infinity. It breaks free of category…but it certainly carries a spiritual pulse throughout it. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:17
Signature Needed🔥
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ethereal visions where dreams exist. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ethereal visions where dreams exist. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 09:11
𝔊𝔬𝔬𝔡 ℜ𝔦𝔡𝔢
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece reads like a stream-of-consciousness letter or reflection, mixing vulnerability, encouragement, and existential questioning. It’s a combination of self-reflection, reassurance, and poetic stylization. Nicely written💫
September 17th, 2025 15:28
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece reads like a stream-of-consciousness letter or reflection, mixing vulnerability, encouragement, and existential questioning. It’s a combination of self-reflection, reassurance, and poetic stylization. Nicely written💫
September 17th, 2025 15:28
𝔊𝔬𝔬𝔡 ℜ𝔦𝔡𝔢
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lingers…it’s raw and confessional, but yes, absolutely love. The line “I’m not okay…but it’s okay?” carries ache and resilience together...love wrestling to steady itself. Honest and strong. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lingers…it’s raw and confessional, but yes, absolutely love. The line “I’m not okay…but it’s okay?” carries ache and resilience together...love wrestling to steady itself. Honest and strong. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:08
𝔊𝔬𝔬𝔡 ℜ𝔦𝔡𝔢
sorenbarrett said:
Love yourself is in fact the beginning. A word of identity seems necessary a name that is always you separating you from all others. Nicely done
September 17th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Love yourself is in fact the beginning. A word of identity seems necessary a name that is always you separating you from all others. Nicely done
September 17th, 2025 07:20
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is tender and vivid at once, my friend…gleams, breeze, evergreen, all bound in the image of sealing the deal. A fleeting yet infinite moment, beautifully captured. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 16th, 2025 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is tender and vivid at once, my friend…gleams, breeze, evergreen, all bound in the image of sealing the deal. A fleeting yet infinite moment, beautifully captured. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 16th, 2025 15:34
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Demar Desu said:
Difficult to read the third word because of font.
September 16th, 2025 08:13
Demar Desu said:
Difficult to read the third word because of font.
September 16th, 2025 08:13
Unknown
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem set beautifully in imagery and I loved the play on the word light as a noun and adjective.
September 16th, 2025 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem set beautifully in imagery and I loved the play on the word light as a noun and adjective.
September 16th, 2025 08:01
Satisfy your soul, not society.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully spoken, Keyara. The rhythm of soul over society, joy over role, lands true. And the gratitude reflection ties it all together with warmth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully spoken, Keyara. The rhythm of soul over society, joy over role, lands true. And the gratitude reflection ties it all together with warmth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:59
Satisfy your soul, not society.
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice anyway you look at it. Gratitude a key to happiness. Well done
September 15th, 2025 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice anyway you look at it. Gratitude a key to happiness. Well done
September 15th, 2025 10:18
𝔚𝔬𝔲𝔩𝔡 𝔶𝔬𝔲 𝔏𝔦𝔨𝔢 𝔱𝔬 𝔎𝔫𝔬𝔴?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever grading system. I have seen other grading systems each with their point of view. This one is cute.
September 14th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Clever grading system. I have seen other grading systems each with their point of view. This one is cute.
September 14th, 2025 04:54
Particularly Any in Particular
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece is a glowing midnight neon prayer...playful script, eternal heartbeat, and a pulse that feels both intimate and performative. It’s alive on the page. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2025 01:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece is a glowing midnight neon prayer...playful script, eternal heartbeat, and a pulse that feels both intimate and performative. It’s alive on the page. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2025 01:04
Particularly Any in Particular
sorenbarrett said:
Love some say distorts the view others say it clarifies vision I say enjoy it for what it is. A lovely write
September 13th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Love some say distorts the view others say it clarifies vision I say enjoy it for what it is. A lovely write
September 13th, 2025 06:54
𝔜𝔬𝔲𝔯 𝔉𝔦𝔯𝔰𝔱 𝔓𝔬𝔢𝔪
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
“Is there ever a stop sign that says go either way?
Shall we sing hymns, poems, and haikus along the road?” Love this
September 12th, 2025 11:01
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
“Is there ever a stop sign that says go either way?
Shall we sing hymns, poems, and haikus along the road?” Love this
September 12th, 2025 11:01
𝔜𝔬𝔲𝔯 𝔉𝔦𝔯𝔰𝔱 𝔓𝔬𝔢𝔪
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a dream-song...playful, chaotic, yet deeply searching. The bend in time, the cries of love, the glitter dust and angels…it’s a cosmic whirl where memory and belief collide. Alive, restless, and magnetic. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a dream-song...playful, chaotic, yet deeply searching. The bend in time, the cries of love, the glitter dust and angels…it’s a cosmic whirl where memory and belief collide. Alive, restless, and magnetic. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 09:47
𝔜𝔬𝔲𝔯 𝔉𝔦𝔯𝔰𝔱 𝔓𝔬𝔢𝔪
sorenbarrett said:
Love is a dance in many ways and this poem puts it in metaphor. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Love is a dance in many ways and this poem puts it in metaphor. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 07:56
Prayers👑
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, Keyara…I know the power of leaning into grace and asking to be restored. You’ve voiced it with honesty and faith. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 21:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, Keyara…I know the power of leaning into grace and asking to be restored. You’ve voiced it with honesty and faith. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 21:04
Prayers👑
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection, wish and prayer. Nicely worded in this poem.
September 11th, 2025 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection, wish and prayer. Nicely worded in this poem.
September 11th, 2025 13:02
Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is luminous…clouds carrying wishes, forests serene, fantasy interlaced with reality. It reads like a meditation wrapped in mist. Beautifully done and love the acrostic! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is luminous…clouds carrying wishes, forests serene, fantasy interlaced with reality. It reads like a meditation wrapped in mist. Beautifully done and love the acrostic! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:29
Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love the rhythm.
September 10th, 2025 18:23
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love the rhythm.
September 10th, 2025 18:23
Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely set in the first introductory piece it becomes acrostic at the end. Very nice
September 10th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely set in the first introductory piece it becomes acrostic at the end. Very nice
September 10th, 2025 04:14
STORY TIME (For the Babies)
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that enter in and disturb the flow of a peaceful embrace. A most interesting read
September 9th, 2025 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that enter in and disturb the flow of a peaceful embrace. A most interesting read
September 9th, 2025 07:10
𝔗𝔦𝔱𝔩𝔢𝔡 \"𝔄𝔴𝔞𝔶\" 𝔖𝔱𝔬𝔯𝔶 𝔗𝔦𝔪𝔢
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Your words carry such a soothing calm. I could feel the countryside peace as I read.
The mix of imagery and artistic fonts makes this feel like a living artwork. Beautiful
September 8th, 2025 10:42
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Your words carry such a soothing calm. I could feel the countryside peace as I read.
The mix of imagery and artistic fonts makes this feel like a living artwork. Beautiful
September 8th, 2025 10:42
𝔗𝔦𝔱𝔩𝔢𝔡 \"𝔄𝔴𝔞𝔶\" 𝔖𝔱𝔬𝔯𝔶 𝔗𝔦𝔪𝔢
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this breathes calm and renewal. Each line unfolds like morning light across dew-touched petals, carrying the hush of countryside stillness. It feels like a reminder to breathe and begin again. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2025 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this breathes calm and renewal. Each line unfolds like morning light across dew-touched petals, carrying the hush of countryside stillness. It feels like a reminder to breathe and begin again. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2025 07:02
𝔗𝔦𝔱𝔩𝔢𝔡 \"𝔄𝔴𝔞𝔶\" 𝔖𝔱𝔬𝔯𝔶 𝔗𝔦𝔪𝔢
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me on a deeper level of someone that has worries that they need to escape from and in this mental withdrawal to elysian fields they have found it provoking the question of what is the pain or worry so great that provokes this. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me on a deeper level of someone that has worries that they need to escape from and in this mental withdrawal to elysian fields they have found it provoking the question of what is the pain or worry so great that provokes this. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 05:05
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