Comments received on poems by Keyara S Trotman
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one breathes celebration of poetry itself...flowing, imaginative, full of spirit. I think it would land best in Reflection since itβs about the essence of writing and creativity. If that doesnβt feel quite right, Unclassified always works too. Always grateful for your energy, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 2nd, 2025 16:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this one breathes celebration of poetry itself...flowing, imaginative, full of spirit. I think it would land best in Reflection since itβs about the essence of writing and creativity. If that doesnβt feel quite right, Unclassified always works too. Always grateful for your energy, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 2nd, 2025 16:58
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sorenbarrett said:
The focus of a poem on a single word and through it to convey a message. Nicely done
October 2nd, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
The focus of a poem on a single word and through it to convey a message. Nicely done
October 2nd, 2025 09:32
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is wild and beautiful. The way you weave style, music, and feeling together hits like a cascadeβ¦raw and alive, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 1st, 2025 19:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this is wild and beautiful. The way you weave style, music, and feeling together hits like a cascadeβ¦raw and alive, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 1st, 2025 19:50
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sorenbarrett said:
An implanted acrostic message of love makes this poem one that a reader pays attention to. A good read with a positive message.
October 1st, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
An implanted acrostic message of love makes this poem one that a reader pays attention to. A good read with a positive message.
October 1st, 2025 04:19
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for this blessing, Kiki...heart-surgery grace, angels watching, hope rising. Itβs a quiet prayer and a strong reminder all at once. I love the image you chose too! All around, a wonderful expression indeed. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 30th, 2025 17:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for this blessing, Kiki...heart-surgery grace, angels watching, hope rising. Itβs a quiet prayer and a strong reminder all at once. I love the image you chose too! All around, a wonderful expression indeed. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 30th, 2025 17:47
Cheated on a test or exam edition
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you blended forms hereβpoetic reflection laced with advice, playful but serious underneath. Iβd place it as \"Reflection\", even with that advisory edge still intact. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 30th, 2025 17:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, you blended forms hereβpoetic reflection laced with advice, playful but serious underneath. Iβd place it as \"Reflection\", even with that advisory edge still intact. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 30th, 2025 17:37
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sorenbarrett said:
I see in this poem a plea to other to surrender to something greater to be grateful for what is given and acknowledge it. Nicely written with a sense of belief and conviction.
September 30th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
I see in this poem a plea to other to surrender to something greater to be grateful for what is given and acknowledge it. Nicely written with a sense of belief and conviction.
September 30th, 2025 04:02
Cheated on a test or exam edition
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice. One that cheats today lack the knowledge tomorrow. A great read
September 29th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice. One that cheats today lack the knowledge tomorrow. A great read
September 29th, 2025 06:54
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
A Jesusaholic, now that is the kind of βaholicβ I can dig being! This shines with your signature style, Kikiβ¦faith poured into rhythm, heartbeat pulsing with fire, laughter lighting the way. Sacred and playful, bold and alive. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 28th, 2025 16:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A Jesusaholic, now that is the kind of βaholicβ I can dig being! This shines with your signature style, Kikiβ¦faith poured into rhythm, heartbeat pulsing with fire, laughter lighting the way. Sacred and playful, bold and alive. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 28th, 2025 16:34
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FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Wow this piece is vivid, exuberant, and overflowing with emotion and imagery.
September 28th, 2025 13:35
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
Wow this piece is vivid, exuberant, and overflowing with emotion and imagery.
September 28th, 2025 13:35
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sorenbarrett said:
Another poem open to interpretation religious or not. A good read
September 28th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem open to interpretation religious or not. A good read
September 28th, 2025 09:42
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this shines with love and humor encrypted in your style. From the heartbeat line to the reminder of laughter binding us, you turn the page into celebration itself. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 27th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kiki, this shines with love and humor encrypted in your style. From the heartbeat line to the reminder of laughter binding us, you turn the page into celebration itself. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 27th, 2025 07:55
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sorenbarrett said:
I do believe and have experienced that laughter is good medicine for physical and mental pain. It is healthy and costs nothing. It brings people together. A lovely write
September 27th, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
I do believe and have experienced that laughter is good medicine for physical and mental pain. It is healthy and costs nothing. It brings people together. A lovely write
September 27th, 2025 05:30
P.E.A.C.E
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is spiritual through and through. From silence as a doorway to peace, to kindness and empathy shaping lifeβ¦it all speaks like scripture written in your own hand. Whether one calls it spiritual or religious, it reflects a truth that endures. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 26th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this is spiritual through and through. From silence as a doorway to peace, to kindness and empathy shaping lifeβ¦it all speaks like scripture written in your own hand. Whether one calls it spiritual or religious, it reflects a truth that endures. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 26th, 2025 09:11
P.E.A.C.E
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice to all and the world would be a better place if people listened and acted on it. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice to all and the world would be a better place if people listened and acted on it. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 08:05
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece moves with strengthβ¦the surrender, the boldness, the Spirit leading into light. Itβs both a reminder and a charge, wrapped in warmth and hope. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ I love that you\'ve written it as a prayer for people read/meditate on. Powerful and practical. You are a blessing and a gift, my friend. βοΈ
September 25th, 2025 16:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this piece moves with strengthβ¦the surrender, the boldness, the Spirit leading into light. Itβs both a reminder and a charge, wrapped in warmth and hope. Beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ I love that you\'ve written it as a prayer for people read/meditate on. Powerful and practical. You are a blessing and a gift, my friend. βοΈ
September 25th, 2025 16:27
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William Hromada said:
To have a Comforter!!
September 25th, 2025 04:49
William Hromada said:
To have a Comforter!!
September 25th, 2025 04:49
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sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish and belief voiced in this poem. Nicely done
September 25th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish and belief voiced in this poem. Nicely done
September 25th, 2025 03:59
The Whispers, The Shadows
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this carries the fire of intimacy and the warmth of devotionβ¦from βbeacon in the darknessβ to βfire does what itβs supposed to doβ¦burn.β It straddles love and desire more than friendship, and yes, the +18 label makes sense. Itβs bold, layered, and unapologetically alive. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ well done!
September 24th, 2025 07:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this carries the fire of intimacy and the warmth of devotionβ¦from βbeacon in the darknessβ to βfire does what itβs supposed to doβ¦burn.β It straddles love and desire more than friendship, and yes, the +18 label makes sense. Itβs bold, layered, and unapologetically alive. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ well done!
September 24th, 2025 07:20
The Whispers, The Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem where sugar heated and burnt coats and flavors the poem. Nothing like burnt sugar coating make a delightful sweet. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem where sugar heated and burnt coats and flavors the poem. Nothing like burnt sugar coating make a delightful sweet. Nicely written
September 24th, 2025 04:44
The Whispers, The Shadows
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like someone has found the one.
Not sure if it merits an 18, but the more love the better.
September 24th, 2025 04:08
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like someone has found the one.
Not sure if it merits an 18, but the more love the better.
September 24th, 2025 04:08
Make a Wish
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, such an honest and moving piece. The raw goodbye, the stark finality of βit wasnβt you,β and the bittersweet courage to release what could have been...it all carries a quiet power. Heartbreaking, but beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 23rd, 2025 07:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, such an honest and moving piece. The raw goodbye, the stark finality of βit wasnβt you,β and the bittersweet courage to release what could have been...it all carries a quiet power. Heartbreaking, but beautifully done. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 23rd, 2025 07:54
Make a Wish
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a desired love that did not work out. Nicely written with a creative touch at the end. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 07:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a desired love that did not work out. Nicely written with a creative touch at the end. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 07:50
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this lands as truth. The opening advice reads like a card, but your Noted lines cut through it...βshattered remnantsβ becomes the poemβs wound, and I hear my own losses in that echo. Itβs raw, immediate, and true. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 22nd, 2025 20:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Keyara, this lands as truth. The opening advice reads like a card, but your Noted lines cut through it...βshattered remnantsβ becomes the poemβs wound, and I hear my own losses in that echo. Itβs raw, immediate, and true. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 22nd, 2025 20:56
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sorenbarrett said:
Broken relationship, broken mental health both need healing. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:49
sorenbarrett said:
Broken relationship, broken mental health both need healing. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:49
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, Iβve sat with conversations like this ...where you name someone into safety and light. You turn everyday talk into a small liturgy, and it comforts me. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ Well done!
September 21st, 2025 18:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, Iβve sat with conversations like this ...where you name someone into safety and light. You turn everyday talk into a small liturgy, and it comforts me. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ Well done!
September 21st, 2025 18:44
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sorenbarrett said:
This seems in some way observational turned reflective. A most thought provoking poem
September 21st, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
This seems in some way observational turned reflective. A most thought provoking poem
September 21st, 2025 10:05
Short Stories Rated 18 +
orchidee said:
Dunno! Can\'t comment cos I have swooned reading this. lol.
September 21st, 2025 02:01
orchidee said:
Dunno! Can\'t comment cos I have swooned reading this. lol.
September 21st, 2025 02:01
Short Stories Rated 18 +
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like sitting with a story told straight β no soft edges, just the ride from eyes meeting, to laughter, to fire. That honesty is what gives it weight. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 20th, 2025 19:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like sitting with a story told straight β no soft edges, just the ride from eyes meeting, to laughter, to fire. That honesty is what gives it weight. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 20th, 2025 19:42
Short Stories Rated 18 +
sorenbarrett said:
Strong passion displayed in this poem that lead to a physical relationship that only time will tell whether it is love and or spiritual. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
Strong passion displayed in this poem that lead to a physical relationship that only time will tell whether it is love and or spiritual. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 15:40
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