Comments received on poems by Fred1794
Angels
Teddy.15 said:
You could well be describing your first love here, and extraordinary read. And of course Angels one of my fave subjects. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 08:00
Teddy.15 said:
You could well be describing your first love here, and extraordinary read. And of course Angels one of my fave subjects. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 08:00
Angels
C.W. Bleu said:
Well written poem about now and then. It\'s definitely relatable.
September 12th, 2025 07:22
C.W. Bleu said:
Well written poem about now and then. It\'s definitely relatable.
September 12th, 2025 07:22
Angels
sorenbarrett said:
It is the manner in which this poem is written and the story told the vacillation between yesterday and today the tentative nature of speech and all as if going back and forth between images that makes this one great. It shows the inner workings of the mind and is innocent in its form and typical of trauma and its return from the past to the present. I is shattered. Very well done a fave
September 12th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
It is the manner in which this poem is written and the story told the vacillation between yesterday and today the tentative nature of speech and all as if going back and forth between images that makes this one great. It shows the inner workings of the mind and is innocent in its form and typical of trauma and its return from the past to the present. I is shattered. Very well done a fave
September 12th, 2025 05:05
