Comments received on poems by Fred1794
Faux
NafisaSB said:
the trauma is well depicted in a veiled manner - well done..
September 23rd, 2025 00:04
NafisaSB said:
the trauma is well depicted in a veiled manner - well done..
September 23rd, 2025 00:04
Acceptance (3)
sorenbarrett said:
Three is a magic number, the number of the trinity, the triangle of stability, a good write
September 20th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
Three is a magic number, the number of the trinity, the triangle of stability, a good write
September 20th, 2025 19:34
Faux
Paul Bell said:
I suppose life is the greatest role we play, and how we interact with others and how others perceive us.
Closeness to acquaintances who in essence we spend as much time with loved ones.
I like how you go darker, asking questions.
September 18th, 2025 14:49
Paul Bell said:
I suppose life is the greatest role we play, and how we interact with others and how others perceive us.
Closeness to acquaintances who in essence we spend as much time with loved ones.
I like how you go darker, asking questions.
September 18th, 2025 14:49
Faux
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning work. Don\'t know what else to say.
September 18th, 2025 09:53
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning work. Don\'t know what else to say.
September 18th, 2025 09:53
Faux
sorenbarrett said:
Tension can be felt in this poem that speaks of past trauma and loss. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Tension can be felt in this poem that speaks of past trauma and loss. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:39
Faux
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
A compelling exploration of memory, identity, and unease. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 20:56
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
A compelling exploration of memory, identity, and unease. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 20:56
Birdsong
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what ifs and regrets or maybe nots but still a lingering memory that does not resolve. Nicely done
September 16th, 2025 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what ifs and regrets or maybe nots but still a lingering memory that does not resolve. Nicely done
September 16th, 2025 09:48
Angels
NafisaSB said:
it is always the close people who hurt us invariably - hope you are over the trauma, and put it behind you
September 16th, 2025 00:59
NafisaSB said:
it is always the close people who hurt us invariably - hope you are over the trauma, and put it behind you
September 16th, 2025 00:59
Opaque
sorenbarrett said:
Colors distinct in our names for them blend in reality as nothing more than wavelengths that merge with no distinct dividing line. And so with people as well there is no dividing line between race, personality or even gender. A lovely write
September 15th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Colors distinct in our names for them blend in reality as nothing more than wavelengths that merge with no distinct dividing line. And so with people as well there is no dividing line between race, personality or even gender. A lovely write
September 15th, 2025 05:58
Tom Riddles Grave
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is set up as a haunting experience. Nicely done with good flow and build up.
September 14th, 2025 16:58
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is set up as a haunting experience. Nicely done with good flow and build up.
September 14th, 2025 16:58
\"Brother Fred\"
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the questioning of one\'s image and even gender in this poem the uncertainty that like the physical body that it is associated with needs to be firmed and exercised. A wonderful poem of reflection
September 13th, 2025 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the questioning of one\'s image and even gender in this poem the uncertainty that like the physical body that it is associated with needs to be firmed and exercised. A wonderful poem of reflection
September 13th, 2025 06:46
Angels
Teddy.15 said:
You could well be describing your first love here, and extraordinary read. And of course Angels one of my fave subjects. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 08:00
Teddy.15 said:
You could well be describing your first love here, and extraordinary read. And of course Angels one of my fave subjects. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 08:00
Angels
sorenbarrett said:
It is the manner in which this poem is written and the story told the vacillation between yesterday and today the tentative nature of speech and all as if going back and forth between images that makes this one great. It shows the inner workings of the mind and is innocent in its form and typical of trauma and its return from the past to the present. I is shattered. Very well done a fave
September 12th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
It is the manner in which this poem is written and the story told the vacillation between yesterday and today the tentative nature of speech and all as if going back and forth between images that makes this one great. It shows the inner workings of the mind and is innocent in its form and typical of trauma and its return from the past to the present. I is shattered. Very well done a fave
September 12th, 2025 05:05
