Comments received on poems by satishverma



The Syntax
willyweed said:

deep and mysterious as usual. ww

May 4th, 2018 20:48

The Syntax
onepauly said:

the only thing I can see is try.

May 4th, 2018 20:37

On Unknown Track
Laura🌻 said:

Death is a certainty!

May 3rd, 2018 19:16

Nowheres
onepauly said:

i\'d like a few more days in the sun.

April 29th, 2018 20:50

This Was Love
onepauly said:

just open the door.

April 28th, 2018 00:19

This Was Love
Laura🌻 said:

The door of the unknown will lead us to the known!

April 27th, 2018 21:44

Unthinking
Lorna said:

How quiet and lovely!

April 26th, 2018 07:24

Unthinking
Laura🌻 said:

Formidable!

April 25th, 2018 20:30

Different Renderings
Nicholas Browning said:

Seems to me like a discarded person looking for his lover. I like it.

April 23rd, 2018 22:45

Song At The End Of The Road
onepauly said:

no comment

April 22nd, 2018 07:34

Blackness Of Moon
onepauly said:

I think it is great!

April 20th, 2018 11:32

Blackness Of Moon
Laura🌻 said:

Fatality...an embrace of Deceit and Despair!

April 19th, 2018 19:08

A Snaky Path
Nicholas Browning said:

Awesome to read.

April 17th, 2018 22:26

Questioning Again
Nicholas Browning said:

I sense some dark inscription from this, and I must say that I enjoy it. Well done.

April 17th, 2018 05:28

Sacrifice
onepauly said:

the true meaning of love is sacrifice

April 12th, 2018 03:22

Sacrifice
onepauly said:

I need someone to explain it to me.

April 12th, 2018 03:21

Sacrifice
kevin browne said:

I completely understand where you are in the well penned poem. made me think and I like that. great write, my friend.

April 11th, 2018 19:38

Climbing Up
kevin browne said:

we need to reclaim not just our integrity but our dignity towards the respect of the meaning I perceive behind your work here. I love the way you end on a positive note. good work.

April 10th, 2018 20:09

Climbing Up
Nicholas Browning said:

Almost eerie in a way. I like it though.

April 10th, 2018 20:01

Thinking Off •••
kevin browne said:

of course, I\'d help to think through the meanings with you and help guide each towards a better life. hand in hand of course. great writing, my friend.

March 29th, 2018 12:08

A Poem
Nicholas Browning said:

Very nice, and spiritual indeed.

March 16th, 2018 22:52

Under The Cloud
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i especially love the first few lines and your reference to the sing song teapot .. i just love the wording in this poem. truly enjoyed

February 16th, 2018 02:19

The Gift Of Abandonment
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i love this :-)

February 16th, 2018 02:16

Thousand Moons
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

really lovely , i especially love this line .. \'\' the lone tree always waits for the dipping moon to give a parting kiss ;;

February 16th, 2018 02:11

Blue Valley
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

\'\' a slice of moon will heal \'\' some very interesting lines here, i enjoyed reading this

February 16th, 2018 02:05

Endless Search
Lorna said:

Lovely and haunting..........

February 12th, 2018 09:38

Not Holding
Cynthia said:

\"I am going to cross the river,
of flames\" just feed back, I think it\'d be better if it said \"I am going to cross the river of flames\" instead of the comma between river and of. again just my feedback but great poem

February 8th, 2018 20:26

The Living Death
draculazy said:

Beautiful work! - b

January 11th, 2018 19:14

The Living Death
KR said:

I love this. Surreal in a way, calamity personified.

January 11th, 2018 18:41

Scrutinizing
Fay Slimm. said:

A clever assessment of what humans can be when herded together Satish - - thanks for sharing the meaning of fear too.

January 2nd, 2018 10:42



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