Comments received on poems by satishverma
Pain Of Pain
Dan Williams said:
Bloodless murder can be the cruelest kind. Nicely done.
October 13th, 2024 00:01
Dan Williams said:
Bloodless murder can be the cruelest kind. Nicely done.
October 13th, 2024 00:01
Anchor Buried In Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
Anger and violence is felt in this poem. Powerful write.
August 13th, 2024 20:27
sorenbarrett said:
Anger and violence is felt in this poem. Powerful write.
August 13th, 2024 20:27
Hope Dies Daily
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice don\'t drop names in poems and shutting the book of life before reading it is not a good idea. Nice write
August 9th, 2024 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice don\'t drop names in poems and shutting the book of life before reading it is not a good idea. Nice write
August 9th, 2024 20:24
Analysing Myself
sorenbarrett said:
I again came to read lines of wisdom in the foolish. Beautiful thoughts provoked by the poke of a stick.
August 7th, 2024 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
I again came to read lines of wisdom in the foolish. Beautiful thoughts provoked by the poke of a stick.
August 7th, 2024 03:54
Beauty Of Truth
sorenbarrett said:
\"Let me unlock the
known. Knowing too much
was curse of unknown.\"
Loved this stanza.
August 6th, 2024 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
\"Let me unlock the
known. Knowing too much
was curse of unknown.\"
Loved this stanza.
August 6th, 2024 04:58
Moonwhite Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Unexpected questions shake reality and leave the reader pondering deeper issues. Very nice
August 4th, 2024 20:35
sorenbarrett said:
Unexpected questions shake reality and leave the reader pondering deeper issues. Very nice
August 4th, 2024 20:35
It Was Not Your Refusal
sorenbarrett said:
Again being spoken to through short stanzas of wisdom.
August 3rd, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
Again being spoken to through short stanzas of wisdom.
August 3rd, 2024 05:36
Fire Game
sorenbarrett said:
Look outside oneself and you will find. Look inside oneself for wisdom
August 2nd, 2024 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Look outside oneself and you will find. Look inside oneself for wisdom
August 2nd, 2024 05:08
Chained Love
sorenbarrett said:
many messages sent in discreet stanzas some of questions. Each deserves pondering
August 1st, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
many messages sent in discreet stanzas some of questions. Each deserves pondering
August 1st, 2024 05:23
Pink Bruises
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking and is sticks in the brain like an arrow.
July 31st, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking and is sticks in the brain like an arrow.
July 31st, 2024 05:59
Waning Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that make one stop and think and then move on to the next question. A good write.
July 29th, 2024 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that make one stop and think and then move on to the next question. A good write.
July 29th, 2024 09:26
Sea Will Drag Me
sorenbarrett said:
As always enigmatic and mind twisting words that one may place their own wisdom in. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
As always enigmatic and mind twisting words that one may place their own wisdom in. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 05:45
There Was Ample Pain
sorenbarrett said:
It gives one pause and causes one to ponder. Mind boggling.
July 26th, 2024 20:54
sorenbarrett said:
It gives one pause and causes one to ponder. Mind boggling.
July 26th, 2024 20:54
If You Are A Human Being
sorenbarrett said:
Here religious belief is a metaphor for love and relationships. Many great lines and parallels
July 25th, 2024 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Here religious belief is a metaphor for love and relationships. Many great lines and parallels
July 25th, 2024 06:26
Equality
sorenbarrett said:
The depth of this poem is beyond my vision but its beauty shines in reflections on its surface.
July 24th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
The depth of this poem is beyond my vision but its beauty shines in reflections on its surface.
July 24th, 2024 06:48
Sun Was Cooling
sorenbarrett said:
Here the metaphors are astounding only to be overshadowed by the imagery. I loved this poem which I had to read multiple times getting something new each time. Brilliant
July 23rd, 2024 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
Here the metaphors are astounding only to be overshadowed by the imagery. I loved this poem which I had to read multiple times getting something new each time. Brilliant
July 23rd, 2024 06:12
Lost In Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
This poem had a personal feel to it as if being spoken directly too. Very direct and accusatory it ends just as abruptly. I liked it
July 21st, 2024 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem had a personal feel to it as if being spoken directly too. Very direct and accusatory it ends just as abruptly. I liked it
July 21st, 2024 07:45
Smoking Guns
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic in its metaphor it shines with depth as two mirrors juxtaposed. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic in its metaphor it shines with depth as two mirrors juxtaposed. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:37
« Return to the profile of satishverma