Comments received on poems by satishverma



Metaphysics Of Shrine
Tony36 said:

Excellent

November 19th, 2024 08:21

In Your Own Temple
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

November 15th, 2024 10:28

To End The Poem
Tony36 said:

Excellent

November 9th, 2024 07:20

Defaulter
Lil said:

Love the poem!!!!!!

November 6th, 2024 19:41

Virginity
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 6th, 2024 07:17

I Am Not Changing Myself
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 26th, 2024 07:47

Who Was Yogi?
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 20th, 2024 20:49

Too Proud To Bend
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 17th, 2024 07:21

Pain Of Pain
Dan Williams said:

Bloodless murder can be the cruelest kind. Nicely done.

October 13th, 2024 00:01

To Tell The Truth
ztaysimple said:

Love the way this flows

September 24th, 2024 20:55

Scoliosis
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 23rd, 2024 06:40

Anchor Buried In Clouds
sorenbarrett said:

Anger and violence is felt in this poem. Powerful write.

August 13th, 2024 20:27

Hope Dies Daily
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice don\'t drop names in poems and shutting the book of life before reading it is not a good idea. Nice write

August 9th, 2024 20:24

Analysing Myself
sorenbarrett said:

I again came to read lines of wisdom in the foolish. Beautiful thoughts provoked by the poke of a stick.

August 7th, 2024 03:54

Beauty Of Truth
sorenbarrett said:

\"Let me unlock the
known. Knowing too much
was curse of unknown.\"
Loved this stanza.

August 6th, 2024 04:58

Moonwhite Heart
sorenbarrett said:

Unexpected questions shake reality and leave the reader pondering deeper issues. Very nice

August 4th, 2024 20:35

It Was Not Your Refusal
sorenbarrett said:

Again being spoken to through short stanzas of wisdom.

August 3rd, 2024 05:36

Fire Game
sorenbarrett said:

Look outside oneself and you will find. Look inside oneself for wisdom

August 2nd, 2024 05:08

Chained Love
sorenbarrett said:

many messages sent in discreet stanzas some of questions. Each deserves pondering

August 1st, 2024 05:23

Pink Bruises
sorenbarrett said:

Thought provoking and is sticks in the brain like an arrow.

July 31st, 2024 05:59

Waning Moon
sorenbarrett said:

Questions that make one stop and think and then move on to the next question. A good write.

July 29th, 2024 09:26

Sea Will Drag Me
sorenbarrett said:

As always enigmatic and mind twisting words that one may place their own wisdom in. Nicely done

July 28th, 2024 05:45

There Was Ample Pain
sorenbarrett said:

It gives one pause and causes one to ponder. Mind boggling.

July 26th, 2024 20:54

If You Are A Human Being
sorenbarrett said:

Here religious belief is a metaphor for love and relationships. Many great lines and parallels

July 25th, 2024 06:26

Equality
sorenbarrett said:

The depth of this poem is beyond my vision but its beauty shines in reflections on its surface.

July 24th, 2024 06:48

Sun Was Cooling
sorenbarrett said:

Here the metaphors are astounding only to be overshadowed by the imagery. I loved this poem which I had to read multiple times getting something new each time. Brilliant

July 23rd, 2024 06:12

Sun Was Cooling
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

July 22nd, 2024 22:19

Lost In Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:

This poem had a personal feel to it as if being spoken directly too. Very direct and accusatory it ends just as abruptly. I liked it

July 21st, 2024 07:45

Smoking Guns
sorenbarrett said:

Enigmatic in its metaphor it shines with depth as two mirrors juxtaposed. Nicely done

July 19th, 2024 05:37

Come To Me As You Are?
Weep little lion girl said:

This is amazing!

July 17th, 2024 20:13

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