Comments received on poems by satishverma



Becoming Oneself
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 14th, 2017 10:13

Heart Of The Matter
willyweed said:

another good one old friend .ww

January 11th, 2017 22:52

Time-Lapse
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 10th, 2017 08:50

In Private
willyweed said:

Yes God is within
excellent work

January 7th, 2017 23:00

Mni Poems
willyweed said:

Wonderful work I love the first two couplets. ww

January 2nd, 2017 20:28

Ironbound
willyweed said:

this is deep and thought provoking.
nice work. peace ww

January 1st, 2017 08:55

What Went Wrong?
willyweed said:

I really like this, excellent poem. ww

December 31st, 2016 08:03

Strangely
willyweed said:

Wonderful write my friend. People are very strange indeed! we need to check our self\'s .ww

December 29th, 2016 10:12

Strangely
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 29th, 2016 08:45

A Spiritual Rage
willyweed said:

very nicely crafted with good flow and deep insight. well done my friend! ww

December 27th, 2016 19:33

What A Life?
willyweed said:

This is deep and wonderful very thoughtful. very cool poem. write on and happy holidays! ww

December 25th, 2016 08:20

Rugged Frontiers
Quemis said:

This is mysterious and amazing.

December 10th, 2016 00:32

Humbled
Elegant_Style said:

wow!! so amazing!!

December 3rd, 2016 22:36

The Iron Gate
Tony36 said:

Awesome and great write

November 24th, 2016 09:24

Summer’s Fault
willyweed said:

a wonderful poem my friend. ww

November 19th, 2016 13:14

Summer’s Fault
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Absolutely amazing work, as usual

November 18th, 2016 23:42

Unsinking In Depth
Augustus said:

I take it that you are not inviting this person to stay. Provoking.

November 8th, 2016 23:11

Irreverent
Oneyedtoad said:

Very nice poem, great use of metaphor, the words also contain a strong visual component which I think makes them really tangible. \"yellow paper\" for example, can be understood in a primal way. I love stream-of-consciousness style poetry and feel that this is of that style. Nice work.

November 4th, 2016 17:20

Grief Unspoken
Summersounds68 said:

An abstract poem which reads profoundly. All the best with your creative writing.
~ Sonia

October 21st, 2016 13:07

A Call To Murder
Kash13 said:

I like this.

October 16th, 2016 09:34

Tracking Down
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 11th, 2016 14:00

Recklessly
Tony36 said:

Lovely write

October 9th, 2016 09:30

Here Lies The Queen
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 4th, 2016 11:59

Black Sun
Jeff said:

Very well done....a great write


October 1st, 2016 05:46

Salvaging
Tinkdust said:

Beauty of curiosity in words.

September 27th, 2016 22:42

Freaking Out
Augustus said:

I would love if you would share your thoughts on crafting this poem. I am thrown off at the end--"we were made for each other". Thought provoking.

September 24th, 2016 09:34

Concreteness
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

This is sooo amazing...

September 20th, 2016 23:34

Bouquet Garni
Shahla Latifi said:

Adorable.

September 18th, 2016 10:06

Forecast
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Love it

September 10th, 2016 12:41

Sheela-Na-Gig
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

September 8th, 2016 07:04



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