Comments received on poems by satishverma
Tracking
rrodriguez said:
Your poems are intriguing and enigmatic. Do yo write them in your tongue and them translate them, or do you write them in English? They are quite enigmatic and give you thought.
August 10th, 2016 06:41
rrodriguez said:
Your poems are intriguing and enigmatic. Do yo write them in your tongue and them translate them, or do you write them in English? They are quite enigmatic and give you thought.
August 10th, 2016 06:41
You Will Not Create Death
Leah Sharp said:
Ohhhhh my how intense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
July 31st, 2016 21:59
Leah Sharp said:
Ohhhhh my how intense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
July 31st, 2016 21:59
Rampage
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Woe..very deep and great usage of words...I like it s lot!
July 21st, 2016 00:29
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Woe..very deep and great usage of words...I like it s lot!
July 21st, 2016 00:29
Carnality
rrodriguez said:
The departure of death... death hangs around looking for an opportunity. I read it twice.
July 20th, 2016 23:58
rrodriguez said:
The departure of death... death hangs around looking for an opportunity. I read it twice.
July 20th, 2016 23:58
Carnality
willyweed said:
the misery of live V. death
very interesting piece of work. ww
July 11th, 2016 12:38
willyweed said:
the misery of live V. death
very interesting piece of work. ww
July 11th, 2016 12:38
Tasting Blood
almostdead said:
Deep, I just threw some bread out for the birds it's night time, am I wrong?
June 25th, 2016 00:27
almostdead said:
Deep, I just threw some bread out for the birds it's night time, am I wrong?
June 25th, 2016 00:27
Wounded Path
JustABird said:
I have read two of your poems and it saddens me that more people haven't seen them. Your words are beautiful and difficult and deserve a much larger audience.
June 5th, 2016 01:41
JustABird said:
I have read two of your poems and it saddens me that more people haven't seen them. Your words are beautiful and difficult and deserve a much larger audience.
June 5th, 2016 01:41
Otherness
lysistrata said:
"Fear hauls you up on the
brazen rocks, you stand
alone in sun to find your toes
breaking the sound waves."
This is superb.Thank you.
May 31st, 2016 10:51
lysistrata said:
"Fear hauls you up on the
brazen rocks, you stand
alone in sun to find your toes
breaking the sound waves."
This is superb.Thank you.
May 31st, 2016 10:51
Visualization
lysistrata said:
"The misty moon has scattered your shadow over my cage
Watch how this drowned bird would turn into a passionate wave."
That's my poetic answer to your "Visualization"...
I like it.
May 29th, 2016 04:58
lysistrata said:
"The misty moon has scattered your shadow over my cage
Watch how this drowned bird would turn into a passionate wave."
That's my poetic answer to your "Visualization"...
I like it.
May 29th, 2016 04:58
Degenerating
W. G. Simms said:
Truly beautiful imagery that really made me stop and think, exceedingly well done, look forward to seeing more.
-W. G. Simms
April 18th, 2016 14:37
W. G. Simms said:
Truly beautiful imagery that really made me stop and think, exceedingly well done, look forward to seeing more.
-W. G. Simms
April 18th, 2016 14:37
Snake Charming
Severus Alexander said:
Angels have four wings~
With two they hide their faces...
And with two they fly!
March 29th, 2016 10:53
Severus Alexander said:
Angels have four wings~
With two they hide their faces...
And with two they fly!
March 29th, 2016 10:53
Options
Vicky A Chai-Brocato said:
Real cool poem, I just felt I was robbed. Waiting and waiting on the end that never came. Great poem though. VaV-VOOM!
February 14th, 2016 12:39
Vicky A Chai-Brocato said:
Real cool poem, I just felt I was robbed. Waiting and waiting on the end that never came. Great poem though. VaV-VOOM!
February 14th, 2016 12:39
Glitches
Vicky A Chai-Brocato said:
Just an awesome read! The imagery brought me to a point of such joyful enthusiasm; then in an instance, I saw it? (Damn) There was nothing left on my plate! Great read thanks. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
February 7th, 2016 02:49
Vicky A Chai-Brocato said:
Just an awesome read! The imagery brought me to a point of such joyful enthusiasm; then in an instance, I saw it? (Damn) There was nothing left on my plate! Great read thanks. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
February 7th, 2016 02:49
Metaphysical View
germanamericanchurch said:
Black currants are amazing so it is the the descriptive power of these words, your voice is unique
January 13th, 2016 22:24
germanamericanchurch said:
Black currants are amazing so it is the the descriptive power of these words, your voice is unique
January 13th, 2016 22:24
Listening To Rwanda Genocide
grange_m said:
Very moving an excellent piece of work.
November 22nd, 2015 10:59
grange_m said:
Very moving an excellent piece of work.
November 22nd, 2015 10:59
Eternal Drift
Yorke said:
As beautiful as it is , I rarely understand your work. This piece however is more direct I feel, possibly about recent life experiences, maybe cathartic or an acceptance of illness?
Whatever the meaning your words themselves always hold an abstract beauty, always a joy to read.
November 21st, 2015 04:05
Yorke said:
As beautiful as it is , I rarely understand your work. This piece however is more direct I feel, possibly about recent life experiences, maybe cathartic or an acceptance of illness?
Whatever the meaning your words themselves always hold an abstract beauty, always a joy to read.
November 21st, 2015 04:05
 Heterosexuality
ChicagoSojourner said:
I like the feel and the mystery of the poem.
I would add a question mark in the first stanza, after "harpoons."
October 24th, 2015 13:11
ChicagoSojourner said:
I like the feel and the mystery of the poem.
I would add a question mark in the first stanza, after "harpoons."
October 24th, 2015 13:11
Stripping to the Bones
Dolphine29 said:
I could listen to chaotic cries and dwelling in a hollowness that makes the particles’ shrivel and collapse, a feeling to share and a feeling to lose the fear of the seeds within… that will set one free, when the voices become music. :)
May 29th, 2014 11:55
Dolphine29 said:
I could listen to chaotic cries and dwelling in a hollowness that makes the particles’ shrivel and collapse, a feeling to share and a feeling to lose the fear of the seeds within… that will set one free, when the voices become music. :)
May 29th, 2014 11:55
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