Comments received on poems by satishverma
OUTRAGEOUS
Dolphine29 said:
The moon comes as an image reflection and then it was gone covered… I am trying to visualize the feeling of despair, as we stop to care what is around us. The feeling that the poem gives to me is this, Evoking and powerful.
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February 17th, 2012 11:24
Dolphine29 said:
The moon comes as an image reflection and then it was gone covered… I am trying to visualize the feeling of despair, as we stop to care what is around us. The feeling that the poem gives to me is this, Evoking and powerful.
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February 17th, 2012 11:24
ENORMOUS GUILT
if_you are a women_kiss me said:
MY DEAR LADY END GREAT POET YOUR WORDS
COME TO LIFE AND GIVES A GLINSE OF WHAT A
HEART IS CAPABLE TO WRITE WHEN IT COMES TO
GIVE THE BEST IN POETRY THANK YOU THANK YOU
MY DEAR POET
December 14th, 2011 17:48
if_you are a women_kiss me said:
MY DEAR LADY END GREAT POET YOUR WORDS
COME TO LIFE AND GIVES A GLINSE OF WHAT A
HEART IS CAPABLE TO WRITE WHEN IT COMES TO
GIVE THE BEST IN POETRY THANK YOU THANK YOU
MY DEAR POET
December 14th, 2011 17:48
GOLD-TIPPED
Bokononsense said:
I can't fault this poem! I'd love to leave some helpful feedback, but frankly I'm intimidated by its quality. It's so sweet and sorrowful, and creates such a beautiful sense of yearning in the reader. If I'm reading the themes correctly, the entwined motifs of natural beauty and remembered sensual love, and in particular the metaphors used, put me in mind of all the best qualities of Pablo Neruda, yet the poet's own voice remains clearly identifiable throughout. An absolute pleasure to read.
November 3rd, 2011 12:15
Bokononsense said:
I can't fault this poem! I'd love to leave some helpful feedback, but frankly I'm intimidated by its quality. It's so sweet and sorrowful, and creates such a beautiful sense of yearning in the reader. If I'm reading the themes correctly, the entwined motifs of natural beauty and remembered sensual love, and in particular the metaphors used, put me in mind of all the best qualities of Pablo Neruda, yet the poet's own voice remains clearly identifiable throughout. An absolute pleasure to read.
November 3rd, 2011 12:15
FOR THE CLOTTING
Dolphine29 said:
I am not sure, I have a feeling of resentment.... but still acceptence.
:)
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October 22nd, 2011 12:15
Dolphine29 said:
I am not sure, I have a feeling of resentment.... but still acceptence.
:)
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October 22nd, 2011 12:15
IN CHAINS
Dolphine29 said:
It makes me think about the overwhelming sense of abandonment, as the despair we hold into is more palpable than the lessons life teaches us, I guess that many times that is what we feel.
I congratulate you for keeping the search!
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Dolphine
September 13th, 2011 12:50
Dolphine29 said:
It makes me think about the overwhelming sense of abandonment, as the despair we hold into is more palpable than the lessons life teaches us, I guess that many times that is what we feel.
I congratulate you for keeping the search!
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Dolphine
September 13th, 2011 12:50
FOR ANYTHING
Cheeky Missy said:
Weird, Intriguing poetic description of......life?.....??
January 25th, 2011 23:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Weird, Intriguing poetic description of......life?.....??
January 25th, 2011 23:38
DANCING ON LEASH
Cheeky Missy said:
As usual, a fascinating and intriguing foray into metaphors describing......struggles in life? Unfortunately I don't really understand it.
January 20th, 2011 22:15
Cheeky Missy said:
As usual, a fascinating and intriguing foray into metaphors describing......struggles in life? Unfortunately I don't really understand it.
January 20th, 2011 22:15
HEALED LANDSCAPE
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting, especially as usual with your curious metaphors. Again, it almost seems to make sense.....You are expressing aging and the entirety of this life? Fascinating, very.
January 17th, 2011 00:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting, especially as usual with your curious metaphors. Again, it almost seems to make sense.....You are expressing aging and the entirety of this life? Fascinating, very.
January 17th, 2011 00:14
INTEGRITY AT LARGE
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. I like this one....seems more readily understandable than usual and....almost a cry against destroyers of culture and call for,...preserving it?
January 15th, 2011 22:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. I like this one....seems more readily understandable than usual and....almost a cry against destroyers of culture and call for,...preserving it?
January 15th, 2011 22:23
BURNING
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting....indeed....it is "deep" and unfortunately I do not quite make sense of it....yet almost seem to....without succeeding. Fascinating. Will you please explain it to me?
January 14th, 2011 22:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting....indeed....it is "deep" and unfortunately I do not quite make sense of it....yet almost seem to....without succeeding. Fascinating. Will you please explain it to me?
January 14th, 2011 22:52
THE PRESENCE
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating description.....I can't quite pinpoint exactly what of...but definitely. poetically describes.....???
January 13th, 2011 22:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating description.....I can't quite pinpoint exactly what of...but definitely. poetically describes.....???
January 13th, 2011 22:46
THE CANDLE BURNS
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting. Sounds like love that didn't make it? As in the age-old disappointment where one loves and the other does not really?
January 6th, 2011 22:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting. Sounds like love that didn't make it? As in the age-old disappointment where one loves and the other does not really?
January 6th, 2011 22:32
ADDING TO WOES
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting. Who or what is the "you"? Fascinating poetic look at something....what?
January 1st, 2011 22:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting. Who or what is the "you"? Fascinating poetic look at something....what?
January 1st, 2011 22:44
GHOST TOWN
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting, from the title through the conclusion.....is the giant hunger? And the poor are poor because they do not receive correction, and starve because they do not hear His Word, they do not know the truth, and that is the descent? I begin to think intelligent design is rather an insult on the truth, to say the least.
January 1st, 2011 21:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting, from the title through the conclusion.....is the giant hunger? And the poor are poor because they do not receive correction, and starve because they do not hear His Word, they do not know the truth, and that is the descent? I begin to think intelligent design is rather an insult on the truth, to say the least.
January 1st, 2011 21:19
PLASMA FLOATS
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very interesting....I don't quite understand it.
December 30th, 2010 21:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very interesting....I don't quite understand it.
December 30th, 2010 21:47
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