Comments received on poems by satishverma
Not Holding
Cynthia said:
\"I am going to cross the river,
of flames\" just feed back, I think it\'d be better if it said \"I am going to cross the river of flames\" instead of the comma between river and of. again just my feedback but great poem
February 8th, 2018 20:26
Cynthia said:
\"I am going to cross the river,
of flames\" just feed back, I think it\'d be better if it said \"I am going to cross the river of flames\" instead of the comma between river and of. again just my feedback but great poem
February 8th, 2018 20:26
The Living Death
KR said:
I love this. Surreal in a way, calamity personified.
January 11th, 2018 18:41
KR said:
I love this. Surreal in a way, calamity personified.
January 11th, 2018 18:41
Scrutinizing
Fay Slimm. said:
A clever assessment of what humans can be when herded together Satish - - thanks for sharing the meaning of fear too.
January 2nd, 2018 10:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A clever assessment of what humans can be when herded together Satish - - thanks for sharing the meaning of fear too.
January 2nd, 2018 10:42
Myth Of Suicide
space_girl said:
I enjoyed reading it :) thank you for sharing .
December 21st, 2017 21:31
space_girl said:
I enjoyed reading it :) thank you for sharing .
December 21st, 2017 21:31
The Clan
poelove said:
molarity without molars, good wordplay. enjoyed this
December 20th, 2017 06:59
poelove said:
molarity without molars, good wordplay. enjoyed this
December 20th, 2017 06:59
Disoriented
Seven said:
...\"abduction-of a mystic\"...was a great use with the former line. I understand that phrase on several levels. So much more to say, too little space to write.
December 3rd, 2017 20:43
Seven said:
...\"abduction-of a mystic\"...was a great use with the former line. I understand that phrase on several levels. So much more to say, too little space to write.
December 3rd, 2017 20:43
Still Alive
FredPeyer said:
satishverma, I have read your excellent poem already four times, but I think I need a few more readings as well as some time to think. But am not sure if I will understand it.
November 8th, 2017 00:26
FredPeyer said:
satishverma, I have read your excellent poem already four times, but I think I need a few more readings as well as some time to think. But am not sure if I will understand it.
November 8th, 2017 00:26
A Whirlwind Romance
FredPeyer said:
satishverma, I wish only two things: One, that I could accept myself now, and two, that I could write as well as you do.
November 8th, 2017 00:23
FredPeyer said:
satishverma, I wish only two things: One, that I could accept myself now, and two, that I could write as well as you do.
November 8th, 2017 00:23
The Hostage
PotbellyPleb said:
I really like this. You used very powerful imagery and force your reader to think about their meaning.
November 2nd, 2017 01:42
PotbellyPleb said:
I really like this. You used very powerful imagery and force your reader to think about their meaning.
November 2nd, 2017 01:42
The Stinging Withdrawl
Gary Edward Geraci said:
What is your philosophical bend satish?
August 8th, 2017 22:59
Gary Edward Geraci said:
What is your philosophical bend satish?
August 8th, 2017 22:59
For Nothing
Nicholas Browning said:
A little sad, it feels. Certainly exquisite in both flow and scheme. Well done.
July 15th, 2017 01:24
Nicholas Browning said:
A little sad, it feels. Certainly exquisite in both flow and scheme. Well done.
July 15th, 2017 01:24
Disaster
Nicholas Browning said:
This is very cryptic. I\'ve read the story of Icarus. Nice stuff, well done.
July 11th, 2017 22:57
Nicholas Browning said:
This is very cryptic. I\'ve read the story of Icarus. Nice stuff, well done.
July 11th, 2017 22:57
The Blues
Nicholas Browning said:
This almost sounds like a transition from a memory to the present. I like it. It says quite a bit. Good work.
July 8th, 2017 07:54
Nicholas Browning said:
This almost sounds like a transition from a memory to the present. I like it. It says quite a bit. Good work.
July 8th, 2017 07:54
Ritualism
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In my own faith tradition, this would be a lovely poem written to Our Lady.
June 29th, 2017 22:37
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In my own faith tradition, this would be a lovely poem written to Our Lady.
June 29th, 2017 22:37
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