Comments received on poems by satishverma



I Am Thinking
Abu Aeesh said:

It\'s beautiful.. rich too

January 25th, 2017 05:17

Tenderness
Pintu Mahakul said:

The space shrinks very amazingly here. Wisely penned poem!

January 20th, 2017 03:35

Unpouring Grief
Terry dailey said:

Well written great poem. The flowers in your poem bring life but show death. ... The invisible execution brough seen life to my day good job poet.

January 17th, 2017 01:14

Becoming Oneself
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 14th, 2017 10:13

Heart Of The Matter
willyweed said:

another good one old friend .ww

January 11th, 2017 22:52

Time-Lapse
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 10th, 2017 08:50

In Private
willyweed said:

Yes God is within
excellent work

January 7th, 2017 23:00

Mni Poems
willyweed said:

Wonderful work I love the first two couplets. ww

January 2nd, 2017 20:28

Ironbound
willyweed said:

this is deep and thought provoking.
nice work. peace ww

January 1st, 2017 08:55

What Went Wrong?
willyweed said:

I really like this, excellent poem. ww

December 31st, 2016 08:03

Strangely
willyweed said:

Wonderful write my friend. People are very strange indeed! we need to check our self\'s .ww

December 29th, 2016 10:12

Strangely
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 29th, 2016 08:45

A Spiritual Rage
willyweed said:

very nicely crafted with good flow and deep insight. well done my friend! ww

December 27th, 2016 19:33

What A Life?
willyweed said:

This is deep and wonderful very thoughtful. very cool poem. write on and happy holidays! ww

December 25th, 2016 08:20

Rugged Frontiers
Quemis said:

This is mysterious and amazing.

December 10th, 2016 00:32

Humbled
Elegant_Style said:

wow!! so amazing!!

December 3rd, 2016 22:36

The Iron Gate
Tony36 said:

Awesome and great write

November 24th, 2016 09:24

Summer’s Fault
willyweed said:

a wonderful poem my friend. ww

November 19th, 2016 13:14

Summer’s Fault
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Absolutely amazing work, as usual

November 18th, 2016 23:42

Unsinking In Depth
Augustus said:

I take it that you are not inviting this person to stay. Provoking.

November 8th, 2016 23:11

Irreverent
Oneyedtoad said:

Very nice poem, great use of metaphor, the words also contain a strong visual component which I think makes them really tangible. \"yellow paper\" for example, can be understood in a primal way. I love stream-of-consciousness style poetry and feel that this is of that style. Nice work.

November 4th, 2016 17:20

Grief Unspoken
Summersounds68 said:

An abstract poem which reads profoundly. All the best with your creative writing.
~ Sonia

October 21st, 2016 13:07

A Call To Murder
Kash13 said:

I like this.

October 16th, 2016 09:34

Tracking Down
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 11th, 2016 14:00

Recklessly
Tony36 said:

Lovely write

October 9th, 2016 09:30

Here Lies The Queen
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 4th, 2016 11:59

Black Sun
Jeff said:

Very well done....a great write


October 1st, 2016 05:46

Salvaging
Tinkdust said:

Beauty of curiosity in words.

September 27th, 2016 22:42

Freaking Out
Augustus said:

I would love if you would share your thoughts on crafting this poem. I am thrown off at the end--"we were made for each other". Thought provoking.

September 24th, 2016 09:34

Concreteness
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

This is sooo amazing...

September 20th, 2016 23:34



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