Comments received on poems by satishverma



What Went Wrong?
willyweed said:

I really like this, excellent poem. ww

December 31st, 2016 08:03

Strangely
willyweed said:

Wonderful write my friend. People are very strange indeed! we need to check our self\'s .ww

December 29th, 2016 10:12

Strangely
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 29th, 2016 08:45

A Spiritual Rage
willyweed said:

very nicely crafted with good flow and deep insight. well done my friend! ww

December 27th, 2016 19:33

What A Life?
willyweed said:

This is deep and wonderful very thoughtful. very cool poem. write on and happy holidays! ww

December 25th, 2016 08:20

Rugged Frontiers
Quemis said:

This is mysterious and amazing.

December 10th, 2016 00:32

Humbled
Elegant_Style said:

wow!! so amazing!!

December 3rd, 2016 22:36

The Iron Gate
Tony36 said:

Awesome and great write

November 24th, 2016 09:24

Summer’s Fault
willyweed said:

a wonderful poem my friend. ww

November 19th, 2016 13:14

Summer’s Fault
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Absolutely amazing work, as usual

November 18th, 2016 23:42

Unsinking In Depth
Augustus said:

I take it that you are not inviting this person to stay. Provoking.

November 8th, 2016 23:11

Irreverent
Oneyedtoad said:

Very nice poem, great use of metaphor, the words also contain a strong visual component which I think makes them really tangible. \"yellow paper\" for example, can be understood in a primal way. I love stream-of-consciousness style poetry and feel that this is of that style. Nice work.

November 4th, 2016 17:20

Grief Unspoken
Summersounds68 said:

An abstract poem which reads profoundly. All the best with your creative writing.
~ Sonia

October 21st, 2016 13:07

A Call To Murder
Kash13 said:

I like this.

October 16th, 2016 09:34

Tracking Down
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 11th, 2016 14:00

Recklessly
Tony36 said:

Lovely write

October 9th, 2016 09:30

Here Lies The Queen
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 4th, 2016 11:59

Black Sun
Jeff said:

Very well done....a great write


October 1st, 2016 05:46

Salvaging
Tinkdust said:

Beauty of curiosity in words.

September 27th, 2016 22:42

Freaking Out
Augustus said:

I would love if you would share your thoughts on crafting this poem. I am thrown off at the end--"we were made for each other". Thought provoking.

September 24th, 2016 09:34

Concreteness
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

This is sooo amazing...

September 20th, 2016 23:34

Bouquet Garni
Shahla Latifi said:

Adorable.

September 18th, 2016 10:06

Forecast
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Love it

September 10th, 2016 12:41

Sheela-Na-Gig
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

September 8th, 2016 07:04

Sheela-Na-Gig
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

You are a very unique writer and deep...This one I like very much...

September 8th, 2016 01:09

Rambling Roses
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Wow!!AMAZING WORK HERE...I AM AT A LOSS FOR WORDS OTHER THAN WoW!!

September 2nd, 2016 03:06

Sunbeams
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 30th, 2016 06:18

Freedom
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 28th, 2016 12:41

Deception
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Very nice work

August 23rd, 2016 23:26

Tracking
rrodriguez said:

Your poems are intriguing and enigmatic. Do yo write them in your tongue and them translate them, or do you write them in English? They are quite enigmatic and give you thought.

August 10th, 2016 06:41



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