Comments received on poems by David Welch
A NATURAL STATE OF TENSION
demieeex said:
very profound! I love this perspective!
August 7th, 2026 19:23
demieeex said:
very profound! I love this perspective!
August 7th, 2026 19:23
A NATURAL STATE OF TENSION
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with good rhyme David
August 7th, 2026 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with good rhyme David
August 7th, 2026 18:41
THE TEXAS TREASURE TRAGEDY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what an ambitious and thoroughly engaging tale! I was drawn into the mystery immediately, but Gil’s response to devastating loss is what stayed with me. He cannot recover what vanished, so he devotes himself to ensuring that other lives are remembered. I deeply appreciate that reverence for human stories. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what an ambitious and thoroughly engaging tale! I was drawn into the mystery immediately, but Gil’s response to devastating loss is what stayed with me. He cannot recover what vanished, so he devotes himself to ensuring that other lives are remembered. I deeply appreciate that reverence for human stories. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:18
THE TEXAS TREASURE TRAGEDY
sorenbarrett said:
A great poetic story told in style. Well done
August 6th, 2026 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
A great poetic story told in style. Well done
August 6th, 2026 08:16
WHAT\'S MINE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what a fiercely charged piece! I felt the speaker’s fear and resentment hardening into defiance as every possibility of dialogue disappeared. The repeated warning keeps tightening the pressure until that final invitation to conflict feels inevitable. One powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what a fiercely charged piece! I felt the speaker’s fear and resentment hardening into defiance as every possibility of dialogue disappeared. The repeated warning keeps tightening the pressure until that final invitation to conflict feels inevitable. One powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:04
WHAT\'S MINE
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge for what appears to be a show down and fight. Well done
August 5th, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge for what appears to be a show down and fight. Well done
August 5th, 2026 09:59
WHO WAS THAT GUY?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this really moved me. Looking across the distance between each version of yourself carries such tenderness, humor, and honest bewilderment. One heck of a reflective piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this really moved me. Looking across the distance between each version of yourself carries such tenderness, humor, and honest bewilderment. One heck of a reflective piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:45
WHO WAS THAT GUY?
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and in my mind I extend it to my age of seventy five and I still ask who was that guy
August 4th, 2026 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and in my mind I extend it to my age of seventy five and I still ask who was that guy
August 4th, 2026 08:03
DEATH GIVES HIS WORD
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful meditation, David. The speaker begins as something terrifying but gradually reveals a compassionate purpose...transforming mortality from an enemy into part of our passage home. As a person of faith, that reached me deeply. Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful meditation, David. The speaker begins as something terrifying but gradually reveals a compassionate purpose...transforming mortality from an enemy into part of our passage home. As a person of faith, that reached me deeply. Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:02
DEATH GIVES HIS WORD
sorenbarrett said:
Death comes for all nature\'s justice that none escape. No one gets out of this life alive. Well done
August 4th, 2026 02:58
sorenbarrett said:
Death comes for all nature\'s justice that none escape. No one gets out of this life alive. Well done
August 4th, 2026 02:58
ODE TO THE INTROVERT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, you got me with this one. I was smiling all the way through. It’s funny, thoughtful, and unapologetic in defending something that’s so often misunderstood. That closing made me laugh out loud. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 15:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, you got me with this one. I was smiling all the way through. It’s funny, thoughtful, and unapologetic in defending something that’s so often misunderstood. That closing made me laugh out loud. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 15:12
ODE TO THE INTROVERT
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that causes one to pause and think about people and what they contribute despite being the way they are.
August 2nd, 2026 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that causes one to pause and think about people and what they contribute despite being the way they are.
August 2nd, 2026 08:36
PHD IN REDNECK
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what a fiercely entertaining piece. The mounting catalogue gives tremendous weight to its celebration of practical wisdom...and I absolutely loved the sly turn at the end. Smart, spirited, and wonderfully sharp, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what a fiercely entertaining piece. The mounting catalogue gives tremendous weight to its celebration of practical wisdom...and I absolutely loved the sly turn at the end. Smart, spirited, and wonderfully sharp, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:41
WORLDS COLLIDE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this really grabbed me. It feels like two opposing worldviews locked in a head-on collision, each convinced its path is the stronger one. There’s a driving confidence to it that never lets up. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this really grabbed me. It feels like two opposing worldviews locked in a head-on collision, each convinced its path is the stronger one. There’s a driving confidence to it that never lets up. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:31
PHD IN REDNECK
sorenbarrett said:
Two life styles the old and the new, the natural and the artificial, one of rock and wood one of Styrofoam and plastic. I\'m for the first but to each their own. Good write
August 1st, 2026 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
Two life styles the old and the new, the natural and the artificial, one of rock and wood one of Styrofoam and plastic. I\'m for the first but to each their own. Good write
August 1st, 2026 09:34
WORLDS COLLIDE
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of contrasts and opposites that fit somehow. Well done
July 31st, 2026 17:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of contrasts and opposites that fit somehow. Well done
July 31st, 2026 17:33
THE BARREN TIMES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, I absolutely love this. You take a neglected pocket of the year and reveal why it deserves our attention. Quiet, contemplative, and beautifully atmospheric. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, I absolutely love this. You take a neglected pocket of the year and reveal why it deserves our attention. Quiet, contemplative, and beautifully atmospheric. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:10
THE BARREN TIMES
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images in this write make for a wonderful write. Well done
July 30th, 2026 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images in this write make for a wonderful write. Well done
July 30th, 2026 19:24
THE BADASS YODELER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this is fucking hilarious! I love a tall tale that commits completely to its own ridiculous logic, and this plays like an old Western directed by Mel Brooks. The narrator treating such absurdly specialized knowledge as another hard-earned life lesson makes the ending absolutely perfect. Tremendously fun write, my friend! 😂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this is fucking hilarious! I love a tall tale that commits completely to its own ridiculous logic, and this plays like an old Western directed by Mel Brooks. The narrator treating such absurdly specialized knowledge as another hard-earned life lesson makes the ending absolutely perfect. Tremendously fun write, my friend! 😂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:55
THE BADASS YODELER
flyingfish said:
Put this to music It is a great song. Fantastic lyrics. Suno.com baby. let\'s all sing along!!!!!!!!!!
July 30th, 2026 02:39
flyingfish said:
Put this to music It is a great song. Fantastic lyrics. Suno.com baby. let\'s all sing along!!!!!!!!!!
July 30th, 2026 02:39
TORCHLIGHT SKIERS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this is absolutely magical! The anticipation builds beautifully, then erupts into a celebration that feels both ancient and wonderfully communal. Terrific poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 21:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this is absolutely magical! The anticipation builds beautifully, then erupts into a celebration that feels both ancient and wonderfully communal. Terrific poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 21:10
NIGHT, NORTH WOODS DEER CAMP
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, what a wonderful poem, David! This brought back that childhood thrill when the world felt ancient, mysterious, and wonderfully untamed. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, what a wonderful poem, David! This brought back that childhood thrill when the world felt ancient, mysterious, and wonderfully untamed. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:43
TORCHLIGHT SKIERS
sorenbarrett said:
Well imaged this poem paints a vivid picture. Well done
July 28th, 2026 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
Well imaged this poem paints a vivid picture. Well done
July 28th, 2026 19:02
NIGHT, NORTH WOODS DEER CAMP
sorenbarrett said:
Myths, legends, tall tales all fill this poem that runs well in rhyme. Nicely done David.
July 27th, 2026 17:57
sorenbarrett said:
Myths, legends, tall tales all fill this poem that runs well in rhyme. Nicely done David.
July 27th, 2026 17:57
TRAPPER DAN\'S MAMMOUTH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what one heck of an adventure! This has danger, folklore, humor, and the irresistible madness of a man pursuing riches despite every warning offered. Thoroughly enjoyed this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what one heck of an adventure! This has danger, folklore, humor, and the irresistible madness of a man pursuing riches despite every warning offered. Thoroughly enjoyed this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:14
RIVER-DRIVER BLUES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what one heck of a folk ballad! The wit keeps it lively, but there is real sorrow beneath it...especially when a dangerous, hard-earned vocation survives only as fashion and entertainment. Funny, rugged, and deeply human. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 17:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what one heck of a folk ballad! The wit keeps it lively, but there is real sorrow beneath it...especially when a dangerous, hard-earned vocation survives only as fashion and entertainment. Funny, rugged, and deeply human. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 17:59
TRAPPER DAN\'S MAMMOUTH
sorenbarrett said:
A great fanciful story blending western and sci-fi a good read
July 26th, 2026 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
A great fanciful story blending western and sci-fi a good read
July 26th, 2026 11:17
NO SAFE SPACES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what a brutally powerful piece. The recurring warning grows heavier with every return...from adulthood and employment to society and existence itself. I may still insist upon creating whatever refuge I can, but I certainly recognize the unforgiving reality you confront here. Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what a brutally powerful piece. The recurring warning grows heavier with every return...from adulthood and employment to society and existence itself. I may still insist upon creating whatever refuge I can, but I certainly recognize the unforgiving reality you confront here. Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:11
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