THE MAN THAT HE ONCE WAS
sorenbarrett said:

A great narrative poem of redemption. Nicely done David

October 4th, 2026 12:31

ONLY FREE SPEECH
sorenbarrett said:

I tend to agree and feel that people should be held responsible for the consequences of their speech, yelling fire in a crowded theater or he\'s a pedophile to an innocent man deserves punishment as does irresponsible news coverage that incites the public. Free speech yes with responsibility. Nicely written

October 2nd, 2026 17:56

THE DAY GUY MONTREAUX DIED
arqios said:

Survivor’s guilt is a real thing and cannot be suppressed. Life is what it it, though.

October 1st, 2026 07:12

THE MESSED-UP MULESKINNER
sorenbarrett said:

Fun read. Sometimes things are not what they appear.

September 29th, 2026 18:45

FUR TRAPPER
sorenbarrett said:

There is something peaceful and fulfilling in solitude and wild nature. Nicely written

September 27th, 2026 09:41

RED PILL POEM
sorenbarrett said:

We all need a scape goat and women are no different. I once had a old female psychology teacher that proclaimed no differences in males and females except physical and I could see why. She was shaped like a man and even had some whiskers and that was before transexual issues were popular. I told her that I couldn\'t accept that that women are better at some things and men at others. I believed in equal rights but equal meant equal. If a job required a certain strength or skill all should be measured the same. She gave me a C.

September 26th, 2026 09:25

TO SEE MARLENA
Tony Grannell said:

Hello, David,

I love story poetry especially expressed in the old traditional style which you have achived with this fine poem. A tale of woe in the old west and told beautifully. Well done indeed.

Kind regards,

Tony.

September 25th, 2026 17:49

HUNTING IN HOLLYWOOD
sorenbarrett said:

Implications well written and the metaphor inserted at the end. Well done David

September 23rd, 2026 18:29

MORAL MCCOY
sorenbarrett said:

Every one has a breaking point just don\'t cross the line. Nicely written David

September 21st, 2026 20:21

THE BEST FRIENDS YOU HAVE
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting write and moderation in all things is good advice

September 20th, 2026 20:14

AIN\'T GONNA HAPPEN, BABE
sorenbarrett said:

An assertion that being masculine is fine and that there is no need to change nature. Well said

September 18th, 2026 16:44

UNEARNED SELF-ESTEEM
sorenbarrett said:

They say earning something is just too damn hard and they need to be paid in advance. A good read David

September 16th, 2026 19:42

FOR HONOR
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous

September 15th, 2026 08:00

GONE BEFORE TOO LONG
sorenbarrett said:

Thrill seeker hedonist and a bit narcissistic it seems. Carpe diem they say. Well done

September 14th, 2026 03:51

MALE SPACE
Mutley Ravishes said:

I see zero hostility in this rhyme, David. Beautiful work. Yes, all of youse read that right.

September 12th, 2026 07:00