Comments received on poems by David Welch
MACK THE KILLER
sorenbarrett said:
The rolling rhythm and rhyme of this short saga is engaging while the story itself is simple it is perfect for the poem. Loved this one and a fave
September 25th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
The rolling rhythm and rhyme of this short saga is engaging while the story itself is simple it is perfect for the poem. Loved this one and a fave
September 25th, 2025 03:46
A WORLD OF FLUX & SPAM
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with the return to the beginning lines at the end. Very nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with the return to the beginning lines at the end. Very nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 19:16
MUCH LESS TO FALL
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting point of view. Society call that type of person antisocial but I have always questioned whether that is just because they are compared to the norm where most people experience feelings of passion and love. A most thought provoking poem well written in poetic style with rhyme as well.
September 22nd, 2025 18:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting point of view. Society call that type of person antisocial but I have always questioned whether that is just because they are compared to the norm where most people experience feelings of passion and love. A most thought provoking poem well written in poetic style with rhyme as well.
September 22nd, 2025 18:42
THE CLICKER
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one. One only needs to know where the power lies be in control. A marvelous poem
September 21st, 2025 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one. One only needs to know where the power lies be in control. A marvelous poem
September 21st, 2025 13:20
IN ORDER TO BE SANE
sorenbarrett said:
A masterful work. Not sure but it seems that the word (heard instead of head) on the first line of the second stanza might be a typo. Loved the meter as well as the message. A fave
September 20th, 2025 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
A masterful work. Not sure but it seems that the word (heard instead of head) on the first line of the second stanza might be a typo. Loved the meter as well as the message. A fave
September 20th, 2025 15:36
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