Comments received on poems by David Welch
NO SAFE SPACES
sorenbarrett said:
True it is there is no safe space here. A good read David
July 24th, 2026 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
True it is there is no safe space here. A good read David
July 24th, 2026 14:48
HUMAN NATURE DOESN\'T CHANGE (I-IV)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One hell of an ambitious and provocative piece, David! The extended structure gives your argument considerable force, and I understand exactly where its cynicism comes from. I found myself resisting some of its broader assumptions, especially where complex human behavior becomes fixed categories…but poetry that creates genuine disagreement also creates genuine engagement. You certainly accomplished that here, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One hell of an ambitious and provocative piece, David! The extended structure gives your argument considerable force, and I understand exactly where its cynicism comes from. I found myself resisting some of its broader assumptions, especially where complex human behavior becomes fixed categories…but poetry that creates genuine disagreement also creates genuine engagement. You certainly accomplished that here, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:06
HUMAN NATURE DOESN\'T CHANGE (I-IV)
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of the immutable nature of the human organism. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 18:57
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of the immutable nature of the human organism. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 18:57
CAMPFIRE, CAMPFIRE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what a wonderful poem! This captures everything I love about camping...the laughter, the stories, the quiet reflection, and that unmistakable feeling of being fully alive outdoors. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, what a wonderful poem! This captures everything I love about camping...the laughter, the stories, the quiet reflection, and that unmistakable feeling of being fully alive outdoors. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:19
CAMPFIRE, CAMPFIRE
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem that makes one think of family camp outs or at least picknicks in the wild. A great read
July 22nd, 2026 18:03
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem that makes one think of family camp outs or at least picknicks in the wild. A great read
July 22nd, 2026 18:03
THE OUTLAW\'S ANGEL
sorenbarrett said:
Another good western story with some rhyme it reminded me of the old western serials on the radio. Well done
July 21st, 2026 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
Another good western story with some rhyme it reminded me of the old western serials on the radio. Well done
July 21st, 2026 19:05
COOL ELECTRIC
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful seductive write yet one with the innocence of a siren. Well done
July 20th, 2026 18:03
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful seductive write yet one with the innocence of a siren. Well done
July 20th, 2026 18:03
EARLY SNOW
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Read. And you are not Wrong about Christmas Decorations in August. Halloween as well for Heaven\'s Sake.
July 19th, 2026 20:44
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Read. And you are not Wrong about Christmas Decorations in August. Halloween as well for Heaven\'s Sake.
July 19th, 2026 20:44
EARLY SNOW
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery in this poem of a season I grew up with and know all too well. Favor the warmer clime now. Nicely written
July 19th, 2026 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery in this poem of a season I grew up with and know all too well. Favor the warmer clime now. Nicely written
July 19th, 2026 10:16
COWBOYS ARE HEROES
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message sent in this poem of a culture that has been dumbed down by politics and the politically correct. Where justice takes second seat to protocol. The free spirit is seen as a thorn in society\'s side. Modern cowboys take the form of vigilantes frowned on by the law and applauded in the theater as batman, V, a Jason Bourn or Equalizer, or John Wick. All for entertainment but not for real life where one must wait in line and stand by while someone is shot or rapped so as not to be accused of stepping out of line. A wonderful write with good rhyme and near rhyme and good meter it sends its message powerfully
July 18th, 2026 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message sent in this poem of a culture that has been dumbed down by politics and the politically correct. Where justice takes second seat to protocol. The free spirit is seen as a thorn in society\'s side. Modern cowboys take the form of vigilantes frowned on by the law and applauded in the theater as batman, V, a Jason Bourn or Equalizer, or John Wick. All for entertainment but not for real life where one must wait in line and stand by while someone is shot or rapped so as not to be accused of stepping out of line. A wonderful write with good rhyme and near rhyme and good meter it sends its message powerfully
July 18th, 2026 10:53
MERE ENTERTAINMENT
sorenbarrett said:
Would have to agree there is a place for simple entertainment and a balance is always best. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Would have to agree there is a place for simple entertainment and a balance is always best. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 03:40
AN OUTSIDER WITH PRIDE
sorenbarrett said:
Compliance, cooperation and unity are the answer to an overpopulated world where sacrifice of the self for the good of the whole is the ultimate mandate. Loss of individual identity is a logical consequence and independence is the greatest threat. True communism becomes the goal. A great write
July 17th, 2026 03:15
sorenbarrett said:
Compliance, cooperation and unity are the answer to an overpopulated world where sacrifice of the self for the good of the whole is the ultimate mandate. Loss of individual identity is a logical consequence and independence is the greatest threat. True communism becomes the goal. A great write
July 17th, 2026 03:15
DVORAK\'S LIVING HELL
sorenbarrett said:
A story of horror in this poem with rhyme and good flow it tells its tale. Well written my friend
July 14th, 2026 20:17
sorenbarrett said:
A story of horror in this poem with rhyme and good flow it tells its tale. Well written my friend
July 14th, 2026 20:17
THE PEG-LEGGED PATRIOT
sorenbarrett said:
A good narrative poem David. Well done
July 13th, 2026 18:34
sorenbarrett said:
A good narrative poem David. Well done
July 13th, 2026 18:34
SOCIALISM KILLS
sorenbarrett said:
A very strong political point made in this poem. Quite powerful
December 16th, 2025 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
A very strong political point made in this poem. Quite powerful
December 16th, 2025 19:33
YOUR PERFECT MAN
sorenbarrett said:
How perspectives change from eye to eye. A lovely write and a fun read. Well composed and with good rhyme it sings out to all us married men but maybe not so much to the women.
December 15th, 2025 20:34
sorenbarrett said:
How perspectives change from eye to eye. A lovely write and a fun read. Well composed and with good rhyme it sings out to all us married men but maybe not so much to the women.
December 15th, 2025 20:34
WHAT A SOUL GOES FOR
sorenbarrett said:
Another great narrative tale told in poetic form. Well done
December 14th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Another great narrative tale told in poetic form. Well done
December 14th, 2025 13:31
THE MAN WHO WOULD TAKE DOWN SHAKESPEARE
sorenbarrett said:
Love the way that Shakespearian characteristics were listed as this persons weak spots in the poem. A great build up to the last lines. Nicely done
December 13th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Love the way that Shakespearian characteristics were listed as this persons weak spots in the poem. A great build up to the last lines. Nicely done
December 13th, 2025 04:02
THE DEVIL CAME TO ASPEN
sorenbarrett said:
Another good narrative tale in poetic form of good versus evil and the defeat of the devil. Well done
December 11th, 2025 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Another good narrative tale in poetic form of good versus evil and the defeat of the devil. Well done
December 11th, 2025 20:10
PUT SOME COUNTRY BACK IN COUNTRY
sorenbarrett said:
Well done David, the message is clear and sent in poetic style. Lovely
December 10th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
Well done David, the message is clear and sent in poetic style. Lovely
December 10th, 2025 20:43
RAISING THE GIRL RIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
A great narrative poem with a lesson about prejudice. Nicely done
December 9th, 2025 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great narrative poem with a lesson about prejudice. Nicely done
December 9th, 2025 19:42
GOOD BORN OF TRAGEDY
sorenbarrett said:
Compensation for a kindness done and what I would call the love of one\'s fellow and lover. Nicely written
December 6th, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
Compensation for a kindness done and what I would call the love of one\'s fellow and lover. Nicely written
December 6th, 2025 15:05
BURNING AFTER MIDNIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
An emotional poem that speaks of spending of the night. A lovely song that has a haunted feel to it.
December 5th, 2025 18:26
sorenbarrett said:
An emotional poem that speaks of spending of the night. A lovely song that has a haunted feel to it.
December 5th, 2025 18:26
AMERICA, MADE OF AWESOME
Lorenz said:
The awesome dark side of the freedom...
December 5th, 2025 05:49
Lorenz said:
The awesome dark side of the freedom...
December 5th, 2025 05:49
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