Comments received on poems by David Welch
VAGABOND SOUL
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fave. A lovely narrative write tells its story well.
November 1st, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fave. A lovely narrative write tells its story well.
November 1st, 2025 12:13
HOT TUB INTERLUDE
Rocky Lagou said:
The rhythm in this poem is so snappy it’s infectious!
November 1st, 2025 01:33
Rocky Lagou said:
The rhythm in this poem is so snappy it’s infectious!
November 1st, 2025 01:33
HOT TUB INTERLUDE
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual and seductive it is playful and a fun read.
October 31st, 2025 17:18
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual and seductive it is playful and a fun read.
October 31st, 2025 17:18
DOOM PASSES...
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
What a way to put it! The cycle continues, whether we like it or not. Great choice of words.
October 31st, 2025 10:06
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
What a way to put it! The cycle continues, whether we like it or not. Great choice of words.
October 31st, 2025 10:06
ORIGINAL CUTS
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
I feel the deep strong desire for justice. And I second it!
October 31st, 2025 10:02
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
I feel the deep strong desire for justice. And I second it!
October 31st, 2025 10:02
ORIGINAL CUTS
sorenbarrett said:
Dramatic and full of anger this poem is one of revenge and pain. It is well written and conveys the story well ending before the story is finished but just implied. Very nice.
October 30th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
Dramatic and full of anger this poem is one of revenge and pain. It is well written and conveys the story well ending before the story is finished but just implied. Very nice.
October 30th, 2025 19:34
MIDNIGHT LADY
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful psychological display in poetic form. The suspicion confirmed in the mind against denials becomes real. True or not a sense of paranoia develops and envelops the person who thinks of revenge and uses it to justify their own behavior. Well composed and nicely rhymed a story well told
October 30th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful psychological display in poetic form. The suspicion confirmed in the mind against denials becomes real. True or not a sense of paranoia develops and envelops the person who thinks of revenge and uses it to justify their own behavior. Well composed and nicely rhymed a story well told
October 30th, 2025 03:54
THE GHOST OF YELLOW-JOHN MATTHEWS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this is such a fun, full-circle tale...classic sea shanty spirit meets modern myth. It reads like a ballad told by firelight. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2025 18:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this is such a fun, full-circle tale...classic sea shanty spirit meets modern myth. It reads like a ballad told by firelight. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2025 18:27
THE GHOST OF YELLOW-JOHN MATTHEWS
sorenbarrett said:
A fun ghost story of a pirate drifting into modern day. Nicely told in poetic form.
October 28th, 2025 18:27
sorenbarrett said:
A fun ghost story of a pirate drifting into modern day. Nicely told in poetic form.
October 28th, 2025 18:27
DOOM PASSES...
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this poem. We may often misinterpret or even anticipate things to be final, or worse than they turn out to be. They all end as some point and a new day begins. Lovely
October 28th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this poem. We may often misinterpret or even anticipate things to be final, or worse than they turn out to be. They all end as some point and a new day begins. Lovely
October 28th, 2025 03:44
STAY
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a loss of all one holds dear. The idea of leaving this world as well. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 21:21
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a loss of all one holds dear. The idea of leaving this world as well. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 21:21
CREOLE WOMAN
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read based on reality in human nature. Well written
October 25th, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read based on reality in human nature. Well written
October 25th, 2025 16:46
WHEN GOOD FOLKS GET MAD...
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the story with a moral to it. Well done
October 24th, 2025 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the story with a moral to it. Well done
October 24th, 2025 17:44
ONES
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the differences between the individual and the group. there are many nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the differences between the individual and the group. there are many nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 20:23
EQUAL, NOT THE SAME
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point made in this poem. The same goes for any physical difference in people, size, strength, speed athletic ability, practice and desire mean a lot but nature makes the difference that can not be made up for. A wonderful write.
October 22nd, 2025 17:56
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point made in this poem. The same goes for any physical difference in people, size, strength, speed athletic ability, practice and desire mean a lot but nature makes the difference that can not be made up for. A wonderful write.
October 22nd, 2025 17:56
THE WRITER\'S HIGH
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that illustrates the point well. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that illustrates the point well. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 18:15
THE VULTURE CIRCLE
Doggerel Dave said:
I get your drift... Wait \'til the traffic eases?
October 20th, 2025 19:04
Doggerel Dave said:
I get your drift... Wait \'til the traffic eases?
October 20th, 2025 19:04
THE VULTURE CIRCLE
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that reminds me of a few years ago when thirty to forty vultures roosted on my neighbors roof. A fun read
October 20th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that reminds me of a few years ago when thirty to forty vultures roosted on my neighbors roof. A fun read
October 20th, 2025 17:11
CRAZY HARRY\'S DANCE
sorenbarrett said:
A great narrative poem that tells its tale in great poetic form
October 18th, 2025 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great narrative poem that tells its tale in great poetic form
October 18th, 2025 19:05
HATEFUL
Doggerel Dave said:
Stanza four- \'besrerk\' = berserk, I think..
After review, please feel free to delete this.
October 17th, 2025 05:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Stanza four- \'besrerk\' = berserk, I think..
After review, please feel free to delete this.
October 17th, 2025 05:17
HATEFUL
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed. A case study of the dynamics of ongoing disputation online, I would think. Your rhythms make for an easy read
October 17th, 2025 05:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed. A case study of the dynamics of ongoing disputation online, I would think. Your rhythms make for an easy read
October 17th, 2025 05:11
HATEFUL
sorenbarrett said:
A great satire where each side sees the other as hateful but fails to see their own behavior as such. A knee jerk reaction to conflict seeing their behavior as justified. Nicely presented.
October 16th, 2025 20:57
sorenbarrett said:
A great satire where each side sees the other as hateful but fails to see their own behavior as such. A knee jerk reaction to conflict seeing their behavior as justified. Nicely presented.
October 16th, 2025 20:57
A HOME OF HEAVEN AND HELL
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of opposites cleverly worded. Loved it a fave
October 13th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of opposites cleverly worded. Loved it a fave
October 13th, 2025 03:50
THE BREAK-IN
sorenbarrett said:
A poem written in short lines like short breaths taken in fear, it speeds the presentation like a racing heart. The poem turns violent when there is imminent threat and then subsequently ends. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem written in short lines like short breaths taken in fear, it speeds the presentation like a racing heart. The poem turns violent when there is imminent threat and then subsequently ends. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 03:46
HELLROARING HANK
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely wonderful entertaining read, from start to finish I was running all the way, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 20:21
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely wonderful entertaining read, from start to finish I was running all the way, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 20:21
HELLROARING HANK
Doggerel Dave said:
Galloped through that one, entertained to the hilt. Enjoyed every line. Thanks.
October 10th, 2025 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Galloped through that one, entertained to the hilt. Enjoyed every line. Thanks.
October 10th, 2025 18:45
HELLROARING HANK
sorenbarrett said:
Another great narrative poem. It was engaging and well told.
October 10th, 2025 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
Another great narrative poem. It was engaging and well told.
October 10th, 2025 18:17
I\'M A FREE MAN, OR I\'M NOTHING
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly written with good message in good rhyme and flowing meter. Lovely and a fave
October 9th, 2025 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly written with good message in good rhyme and flowing meter. Lovely and a fave
October 9th, 2025 20:25
AND YET...
Doggerel Dave said:
History provides the explanation, but often doesn\'t instil enough motivation to change for some parties. - “Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it.” could well be rephrased as \'Some who remember the past wish to repeat it\'
For me, History, while possibly the most contestable of the social sciences, contains truths all should note. (Believe it or not I have a bee in my bonnet when it comes to this topic.lol)
Great write.
October 8th, 2025 00:34
Doggerel Dave said:
History provides the explanation, but often doesn\'t instil enough motivation to change for some parties. - “Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it.” could well be rephrased as \'Some who remember the past wish to repeat it\'
For me, History, while possibly the most contestable of the social sciences, contains truths all should note. (Believe it or not I have a bee in my bonnet when it comes to this topic.lol)
Great write.
October 8th, 2025 00:34
AND YET...
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way that this poem is partitioned into stanzas that lead into the next. Nicely written
October 7th, 2025 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way that this poem is partitioned into stanzas that lead into the next. Nicely written
October 7th, 2025 18:17
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