Comments received on poems by David Welch
SOCIALISM KILLS
sorenbarrett said:
A very strong political point made in this poem. Quite powerful
December 16th, 2025 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
A very strong political point made in this poem. Quite powerful
December 16th, 2025 19:33
YOUR PERFECT MAN
sorenbarrett said:
How perspectives change from eye to eye. A lovely write and a fun read. Well composed and with good rhyme it sings out to all us married men but maybe not so much to the women.
December 15th, 2025 20:34
sorenbarrett said:
How perspectives change from eye to eye. A lovely write and a fun read. Well composed and with good rhyme it sings out to all us married men but maybe not so much to the women.
December 15th, 2025 20:34
WHAT A SOUL GOES FOR
sorenbarrett said:
Another great narrative tale told in poetic form. Well done
December 14th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Another great narrative tale told in poetic form. Well done
December 14th, 2025 13:31
THE MAN WHO WOULD TAKE DOWN SHAKESPEARE
sorenbarrett said:
Love the way that Shakespearian characteristics were listed as this persons weak spots in the poem. A great build up to the last lines. Nicely done
December 13th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Love the way that Shakespearian characteristics were listed as this persons weak spots in the poem. A great build up to the last lines. Nicely done
December 13th, 2025 04:02
THE DEVIL CAME TO ASPEN
sorenbarrett said:
Another good narrative tale in poetic form of good versus evil and the defeat of the devil. Well done
December 11th, 2025 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Another good narrative tale in poetic form of good versus evil and the defeat of the devil. Well done
December 11th, 2025 20:10
PUT SOME COUNTRY BACK IN COUNTRY
sorenbarrett said:
Well done David, the message is clear and sent in poetic style. Lovely
December 10th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
Well done David, the message is clear and sent in poetic style. Lovely
December 10th, 2025 20:43
RAISING THE GIRL RIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
A great narrative poem with a lesson about prejudice. Nicely done
December 9th, 2025 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great narrative poem with a lesson about prejudice. Nicely done
December 9th, 2025 19:42
GOOD BORN OF TRAGEDY
sorenbarrett said:
Compensation for a kindness done and what I would call the love of one\'s fellow and lover. Nicely written
December 6th, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
Compensation for a kindness done and what I would call the love of one\'s fellow and lover. Nicely written
December 6th, 2025 15:05
BURNING AFTER MIDNIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
An emotional poem that speaks of spending of the night. A lovely song that has a haunted feel to it.
December 5th, 2025 18:26
sorenbarrett said:
An emotional poem that speaks of spending of the night. A lovely song that has a haunted feel to it.
December 5th, 2025 18:26
AMERICA, MADE OF AWESOME
Lorenz said:
The awesome dark side of the freedom...
December 5th, 2025 05:49
Lorenz said:
The awesome dark side of the freedom...
December 5th, 2025 05:49
AMERICA, MADE OF AWESOME
sorenbarrett said:
A rather complex set of assertions and conclusions. Nicely written David
December 4th, 2025 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
A rather complex set of assertions and conclusions. Nicely written David
December 4th, 2025 19:14
A COWBOY POET SHOT IN THE SHIN
sorenbarrett said:
The humor of the p instead of o where a missed aim does the damage this time on the keyboard instead of the shot is genius. It caused me to think a bit to begin with but sunk in as I read. To be shot in the shin must really hurt. I have banged my shin before and that was bad enough I can\'t imagine a shot there. As a poet I have taken a shot or two but one to the shin and a missed one at that makes me wonder what they were shooting at. The culprit never named remains anonymous. You the cowboy poet did you ever find out who shot you in the shin? Hope it was just an accidental misfire. Good write David
December 4th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
The humor of the p instead of o where a missed aim does the damage this time on the keyboard instead of the shot is genius. It caused me to think a bit to begin with but sunk in as I read. To be shot in the shin must really hurt. I have banged my shin before and that was bad enough I can\'t imagine a shot there. As a poet I have taken a shot or two but one to the shin and a missed one at that makes me wonder what they were shooting at. The culprit never named remains anonymous. You the cowboy poet did you ever find out who shot you in the shin? Hope it was just an accidental misfire. Good write David
December 4th, 2025 03:56
A COWBOY POET SHOT IN THE SHIN
Doggerel Dave said:
CPWBOY?
Change if I haven\'t missed something of special significance, then delete this. .
December 3rd, 2025 23:22
Doggerel Dave said:
CPWBOY?
Change if I haven\'t missed something of special significance, then delete this. .
December 3rd, 2025 23:22
DESERT WALK
sorenbarrett said:
A story of desert survival and a narrow escape. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
A story of desert survival and a narrow escape. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 20:10
JUSTIFY MY RAGE, or A YOUNG MAN DYING ANGRY
sorenbarrett said:
If I were terminal (and we all are) I would be damn angry too. A thought provoking write
December 1st, 2025 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
If I were terminal (and we all are) I would be damn angry too. A thought provoking write
December 1st, 2025 20:51
THE STEADY HAND
sorenbarrett said:
The foolishness of youth in this poem. Nicely worded it tells of the intemperance and passion that is tempered into the iron and steel of age. Well done
November 30th, 2025 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
The foolishness of youth in this poem. Nicely worded it tells of the intemperance and passion that is tempered into the iron and steel of age. Well done
November 30th, 2025 12:45
THOROUGHBRED BLUES
Katie B. said:
Nice write! Very clever and captures the scene well!
November 29th, 2025 11:45
Katie B. said:
Nice write! Very clever and captures the scene well!
November 29th, 2025 11:45
THOROUGHBRED BLUES
sorenbarrett said:
It takes all kinds but we are at home where we don\'t have to put on pretentions and an air. Well done David
November 29th, 2025 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
It takes all kinds but we are at home where we don\'t have to put on pretentions and an air. Well done David
November 29th, 2025 11:10
THE BLOOD OF JEB O\'HEARN
sorenbarrett said:
Another saga with a meaning. All happens for a reason and for those that survive all\'s well that ends well. A great read
November 29th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Another saga with a meaning. All happens for a reason and for those that survive all\'s well that ends well. A great read
November 29th, 2025 03:52
HISTORY\'S BUFFET
Doggerel Dave said:
Any argument which might remind that it is history which provides explanations for world events gets a thumbs up👍from me - even in this jokey rollicking format.
November 28th, 2025 01:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Any argument which might remind that it is history which provides explanations for world events gets a thumbs up👍from me - even in this jokey rollicking format.
November 28th, 2025 01:17
HISTORY\'S BUFFET
sorenbarrett said:
A smorgasbord of ages in this poem each with its flavor. Nicely crafted it offers a little for everyone.
November 27th, 2025 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
A smorgasbord of ages in this poem each with its flavor. Nicely crafted it offers a little for everyone.
November 27th, 2025 20:40
I\'D RATHER BE...
sorenbarrett said:
Upon reading this the cadence and content brought to mind the song El condor passa as arranged and words by Simon and Garfunkel (I\'d rather be a hammer than a nail) It has a feel of choice even if only in the mind and in this poem for the more traditional -except in the case of the snowflake- and the more rugged. Nicely written it has the feel of a song.
November 27th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Upon reading this the cadence and content brought to mind the song El condor passa as arranged and words by Simon and Garfunkel (I\'d rather be a hammer than a nail) It has a feel of choice even if only in the mind and in this poem for the more traditional -except in the case of the snowflake- and the more rugged. Nicely written it has the feel of a song.
November 27th, 2025 03:48
THE MEMORY OF GLENORE
sorenbarrett said:
Another good old west tale told in poetic narrative style. Filled with great imagery and good rhyme and meter. Well told
November 25th, 2025 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
Another good old west tale told in poetic narrative style. Filled with great imagery and good rhyme and meter. Well told
November 25th, 2025 19:49
TURNING TRICKS
arqios said:
To each their own reasons and motivations. A kind of symbiosis.
November 24th, 2025 23:23
arqios said:
To each their own reasons and motivations. A kind of symbiosis.
November 24th, 2025 23:23
TURNING TRICKS
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and bleak is reality hid behind a cloud of fantasy. We all live in an imagined world until we don\'t. Nicely written
November 24th, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and bleak is reality hid behind a cloud of fantasy. We all live in an imagined world until we don\'t. Nicely written
November 24th, 2025 20:05
SHOWDOWN AT HELLER RANCH
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read from the old west. Set in good rhyme and solid flow it met the standard for a good story in good poetic terms. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 18:22
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read from the old west. Set in good rhyme and solid flow it met the standard for a good story in good poetic terms. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 18:22
TAINTED EMOTION
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:02
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