Comments received on poems by David Welch
THE MEMORY OF GLENORE
sorenbarrett said:
Another good old west tale told in poetic narrative style. Filled with great imagery and good rhyme and meter. Well told
November 25th, 2025 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
Another good old west tale told in poetic narrative style. Filled with great imagery and good rhyme and meter. Well told
November 25th, 2025 19:49
TURNING TRICKS
arqios said:
To each their own reasons and motivations. A kind of symbiosis.
November 24th, 2025 23:23
arqios said:
To each their own reasons and motivations. A kind of symbiosis.
November 24th, 2025 23:23
TURNING TRICKS
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and bleak is reality hid behind a cloud of fantasy. We all live in an imagined world until we don\'t. Nicely written
November 24th, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and bleak is reality hid behind a cloud of fantasy. We all live in an imagined world until we don\'t. Nicely written
November 24th, 2025 20:05
SHOWDOWN AT HELLER RANCH
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read from the old west. Set in good rhyme and solid flow it met the standard for a good story in good poetic terms. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 18:22
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read from the old west. Set in good rhyme and solid flow it met the standard for a good story in good poetic terms. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 18:22
TAINTED EMOTION
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:02
TAINTED EMOTION
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and love lost. Well written
November 22nd, 2025 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and love lost. Well written
November 22nd, 2025 19:46
OLD FRIENDS WHO MADE YOU
sorenbarrett said:
People from all walks of life introduced into this poem with the same refrain. We are all the same. We all spurn others. Nicely done
November 21st, 2025 17:56
sorenbarrett said:
People from all walks of life introduced into this poem with the same refrain. We are all the same. We all spurn others. Nicely done
November 21st, 2025 17:56
YOU\'RE A NAZI!!!
sorenbarrett said:
Why are the only two choices Nazi or Communist? What ever happened to good old boy? I guess it depends on what crowd you run with. A fun read
November 20th, 2025 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
Why are the only two choices Nazi or Communist? What ever happened to good old boy? I guess it depends on what crowd you run with. A fun read
November 20th, 2025 19:14
THE TRAGEDY FADES
sorenbarrett said:
A love lost and another gained. Live has its ways of returning what it takes. Nicely written
November 19th, 2025 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
A love lost and another gained. Live has its ways of returning what it takes. Nicely written
November 19th, 2025 19:43
ONLY RACISTS DRINK HERE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this piece carries grit and truth…the music, the characters, the warmth of the bar, and the sting of judgment from those who never step inside. You told the story with humor, weight, and heart. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 19th, 2025 10:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
David, this piece carries grit and truth…the music, the characters, the warmth of the bar, and the sting of judgment from those who never step inside. You told the story with humor, weight, and heart. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 19th, 2025 10:30
ONLY RACISTS DRINK HERE
Mutley Ravishes said:
An acquaintance of mine who is in a mixed \"race\" relationship lives in a small country town with his wife. He said they never get any hassle when they go out and about together in the town. However, when they go to the big city, a different story unfolds. I\'ll let you fill in the blanks as to who does the hassling.
November 18th, 2025 21:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
An acquaintance of mine who is in a mixed \"race\" relationship lives in a small country town with his wife. He said they never get any hassle when they go out and about together in the town. However, when they go to the big city, a different story unfolds. I\'ll let you fill in the blanks as to who does the hassling.
November 18th, 2025 21:40
ONLY RACISTS DRINK HERE
sorenbarrett said:
Moral of the story never judge a book by its cover and there are more than one kind of racist when it comes down to it. Fun read
November 18th, 2025 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
Moral of the story never judge a book by its cover and there are more than one kind of racist when it comes down to it. Fun read
November 18th, 2025 19:45
UNCLE TOM
Demar Desu said:
I like the tempo and pattern… it’s a story that every black American has to deal with unfortunately. We are a traumatized people… still we are also forgiving. Don’t let name calling or fleeting feelings be the end of relationships to each other.
November 18th, 2025 05:03
Demar Desu said:
I like the tempo and pattern… it’s a story that every black American has to deal with unfortunately. We are a traumatized people… still we are also forgiving. Don’t let name calling or fleeting feelings be the end of relationships to each other.
November 18th, 2025 05:03
UNCLE TOM
sorenbarrett said:
A great social commentary in the story of a man. Nicely written in a rhymed narrative style. Well done
November 17th, 2025 20:50
sorenbarrett said:
A great social commentary in the story of a man. Nicely written in a rhymed narrative style. Well done
November 17th, 2025 20:50
THE SCARLET HUSSY
Samuel Maximilian said:
An enjoyable read. Thank you for posting it!
November 16th, 2025 12:07
Samuel Maximilian said:
An enjoyable read. Thank you for posting it!
November 16th, 2025 12:07
THE SCARLET HUSSY
sorenbarrett said:
Another good narrative poem of the old west told in style of old novels like Zane Grey
November 16th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
Another good narrative poem of the old west told in style of old novels like Zane Grey
November 16th, 2025 11:38
TAKE IT BACK
Bragee said:
To be enough and not be enough at the same time will drive one crazy
November 15th, 2025 15:18
Bragee said:
To be enough and not be enough at the same time will drive one crazy
November 15th, 2025 15:18
TAKE IT BACK
sorenbarrett said:
There are some things that can\'t be taken back. A lovely write
November 15th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
There are some things that can\'t be taken back. A lovely write
November 15th, 2025 13:11
THE WISDOM OF FLAWED MEN
Doggerel Dave said:
Truths here to be taken on board. I particularly like to remember \"our children’s children will look back and the present age seek to disown\"
A wee bit hard to swallow slavery in any form though....
Great read.
November 15th, 2025 10:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Truths here to be taken on board. I particularly like to remember \"our children’s children will look back and the present age seek to disown\"
A wee bit hard to swallow slavery in any form though....
Great read.
November 15th, 2025 10:22
THE WISDOM OF FLAWED MEN
sorenbarrett said:
A good moral to this poem where do as I say not as I do is a good admonition. Nicely said.
November 15th, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
A good moral to this poem where do as I say not as I do is a good admonition. Nicely said.
November 15th, 2025 03:38
MORE
sorenbarrett said:
Only as old as you feel. Nothing is too old or young and this poem shows how passing years and opinions of others leave us feeling unable when we still long for more. Very nicely done
November 13th, 2025 21:22
sorenbarrett said:
Only as old as you feel. Nothing is too old or young and this poem shows how passing years and opinions of others leave us feeling unable when we still long for more. Very nicely done
November 13th, 2025 21:22
THE DAMNED GIRL
sorenbarrett said:
Another harrowing tale from the past. How fun a read and since truth is stranger than fiction it makes one wonder what stories we have buried without knowing.
November 12th, 2025 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
Another harrowing tale from the past. How fun a read and since truth is stranger than fiction it makes one wonder what stories we have buried without knowing.
November 12th, 2025 19:54
THE GOOD HORSE FRED
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful narrative poem that tells its story well. A fave
November 11th, 2025 19:18
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful narrative poem that tells its story well. A fave
November 11th, 2025 19:18
THE SOLDIER\'S REQUEST
Paul Bell said:
Fighting for you to go to college to protest against fighting.
Sounds reasonable to me and probably every other sane person in the world.
Sadly, the world is full of insane leaders, and we need our soldiers to protect us from them.
November 11th, 2025 04:59
Paul Bell said:
Fighting for you to go to college to protest against fighting.
Sounds reasonable to me and probably every other sane person in the world.
Sadly, the world is full of insane leaders, and we need our soldiers to protect us from them.
November 11th, 2025 04:59
THE SOLDIER\'S REQUEST
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that has a bit of biting irony written into it and can be taken either of two ways. Like the message given in the poem as long as there is diversity of thought there will be war. Here there may be diversity of opinion about the message of the poem itself. Are you patriotic or are you for one world for war or peace. There is a bit of sardonic humor here. Each side argues there own without seeing the other it is individualism and freedom vs collectivism and unity a type of free will vs determinism, value of the individual vs that of all. There is no right answer only from each point of view. A fave
November 11th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that has a bit of biting irony written into it and can be taken either of two ways. Like the message given in the poem as long as there is diversity of thought there will be war. Here there may be diversity of opinion about the message of the poem itself. Are you patriotic or are you for one world for war or peace. There is a bit of sardonic humor here. Each side argues there own without seeing the other it is individualism and freedom vs collectivism and unity a type of free will vs determinism, value of the individual vs that of all. There is no right answer only from each point of view. A fave
November 11th, 2025 04:20
MOMENTS OF MADNESS
sorenbarrett said:
Some really good lines in this poem and a topic that can be taken as dementia setting in or disillusionment with life in general and the way the world has progressed. Nicely written and highly identifiable
November 9th, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
Some really good lines in this poem and a topic that can be taken as dementia setting in or disillusionment with life in general and the way the world has progressed. Nicely written and highly identifiable
November 9th, 2025 03:38
QUESTIONS
sorenbarrett said:
Questions after questions follow each other in this poem it seems self inquiring and nicely done
November 7th, 2025 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
Questions after questions follow each other in this poem it seems self inquiring and nicely done
November 7th, 2025 19:33
COLD MORNING HUNT
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reminds me of my childhood when my father went deer hunting. The story is well told in a poem of good meter and flow a great narrative.
November 5th, 2025 18:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reminds me of my childhood when my father went deer hunting. The story is well told in a poem of good meter and flow a great narrative.
November 5th, 2025 18:13
THE END OF THE FEUD
sorenbarrett said:
Another great narrative poem with a great story and good rhyme as well. Loved it.
November 4th, 2025 21:11
sorenbarrett said:
Another great narrative poem with a great story and good rhyme as well. Loved it.
November 4th, 2025 21:11
THE S.E.A.L.S. OF RAGNAROK
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the evolving tale of war and warriors from beyond a fireside yarn for sure. Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the evolving tale of war and warriors from beyond a fireside yarn for sure. Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 19:29
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