Comments received on poems by Anas Merchant
Textbook Seduction
sorenbarrett said:
Halves in opposites in this poem. Well written in rhyme as well nicely done
September 29th, 2025 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
Halves in opposites in this poem. Well written in rhyme as well nicely done
September 29th, 2025 14:40
A New Discovery
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of attraction it has some very good lines (There is a gathering of love, logic, lust and longing The topic is consumption, possession, hold and belonging) uses alliteration and the pairing of threes to make a great two lines. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of attraction it has some very good lines (There is a gathering of love, logic, lust and longing The topic is consumption, possession, hold and belonging) uses alliteration and the pairing of threes to make a great two lines. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 04:46
Manifesto Of A Poet
sorenbarrett said:
A proclamation indeed what each poet would wish to be able to do. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 18:19
sorenbarrett said:
A proclamation indeed what each poet would wish to be able to do. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 18:19
