Comments received on poems by Anas Merchant
The time goes by ❤️🔥⏳️
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded this poem makes its point well in metaphor.
February 18th, 2026 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded this poem makes its point well in metaphor.
February 18th, 2026 16:13
O Parting Breeze 🔥🌹
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and sad at the same time this poem is most poetic in rhyme and with such good meter and flow it sings a sad song. A fave
February 9th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and sad at the same time this poem is most poetic in rhyme and with such good meter and flow it sings a sad song. A fave
February 9th, 2026 06:40
Torch The Temple Of Your Mind
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem where poetic license extends over land, sea and air and percentages are more than fair. It is powerful and dramatic where freeing minds slaves opens new possibilities. It is true that the mind is a rebel that does face a bed of nails. Well done
February 8th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem where poetic license extends over land, sea and air and percentages are more than fair. It is powerful and dramatic where freeing minds slaves opens new possibilities. It is true that the mind is a rebel that does face a bed of nails. Well done
February 8th, 2026 03:54
O God let me this time sin!!!
sorenbarrett said:
Some call it a drive others a weakness of the flesh but weak it is not, it is the most powerful drive in man next to survival. A good write
February 8th, 2026 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
Some call it a drive others a weakness of the flesh but weak it is not, it is the most powerful drive in man next to survival. A good write
February 8th, 2026 03:20
O God let me this time sin!!!
Doggerel Dave said:
Context is all here, and I find myself unsure of the relationship you have with this God to which you refer...
Read with interest.
February 7th, 2026 21:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Context is all here, and I find myself unsure of the relationship you have with this God to which you refer...
Read with interest.
February 7th, 2026 21:44
She\'ll love with doubt
sorenbarrett said:
Pens retire when we pass away. A good write and glad to see you are still writing. Well done
February 6th, 2026 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
Pens retire when we pass away. A good write and glad to see you are still writing. Well done
February 6th, 2026 19:39
Poisoned Grace
sorenbarrett said:
\"Parting tis such sweet sorrow\" someone once said. There is pain and at the same time nostalgia in this poem. Lovely
February 4th, 2026 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
\"Parting tis such sweet sorrow\" someone once said. There is pain and at the same time nostalgia in this poem. Lovely
February 4th, 2026 13:33
Artamsàr\'s Spell
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of a siren and seductress. Well written.
December 20th, 2025 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of a siren and seductress. Well written.
December 20th, 2025 12:17
Genocide of feelings
sorenbarrett said:
Heavily metaphoric this poem shows good rhyme and flows well. It is powerful especially in its last two lines:
Slit the throat of grace, in its blood take shower
And feel the pain of the plant, while its soul departs from a flower
November 7th, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Heavily metaphoric this poem shows good rhyme and flows well. It is powerful especially in its last two lines:
Slit the throat of grace, in its blood take shower
And feel the pain of the plant, while its soul departs from a flower
November 7th, 2025 11:43
Something Beautiful I Broke
sorenbarrett said:
I would call this poem (Having it my way) a strong and powerful write of making one\'s own choice. Nicely said with rhyme
October 5th, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
I would call this poem (Having it my way) a strong and powerful write of making one\'s own choice. Nicely said with rhyme
October 5th, 2025 07:47
Textbook Seduction
sorenbarrett said:
Halves in opposites in this poem. Well written in rhyme as well nicely done
September 29th, 2025 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
Halves in opposites in this poem. Well written in rhyme as well nicely done
September 29th, 2025 14:40
A New Discovery
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of attraction it has some very good lines (There is a gathering of love, logic, lust and longing The topic is consumption, possession, hold and belonging) uses alliteration and the pairing of threes to make a great two lines. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of attraction it has some very good lines (There is a gathering of love, logic, lust and longing The topic is consumption, possession, hold and belonging) uses alliteration and the pairing of threes to make a great two lines. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 04:46
Manifesto Of A Poet
sorenbarrett said:
A proclamation indeed what each poet would wish to be able to do. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 18:19
sorenbarrett said:
A proclamation indeed what each poet would wish to be able to do. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 18:19
