Comments received on poems by Iris Nazarene
The Faintest Outline
freyaaa said:
Very well written and very relatable. Love the imaging — very descriptive and gives an inside look to this feeling. Well done!!
December 7th, 2025 15:33
freyaaa said:
Very well written and very relatable. Love the imaging — very descriptive and gives an inside look to this feeling. Well done!!
December 7th, 2025 15:33
The Faintest Outline
2781 said:
Don\'t listen to the lies, beauty is of the heart. And wisdom changes the face.
Youth is always attractive, and precious, and easily squandered.
Fortunately, as age creeps in, we have Wabi Sabi!
Don\'t listen to the lies.
December 6th, 2025 08:52
2781 said:
Don\'t listen to the lies, beauty is of the heart. And wisdom changes the face.
Youth is always attractive, and precious, and easily squandered.
Fortunately, as age creeps in, we have Wabi Sabi!
Don\'t listen to the lies.
December 6th, 2025 08:52
The Faintest Outline
Paul Bell said:
Repeat after me. I am the greatest.
The world is your oyster now.
Divide and conquer.
December 6th, 2025 06:51
Paul Bell said:
Repeat after me. I am the greatest.
The world is your oyster now.
Divide and conquer.
December 6th, 2025 06:51
The Faintest Outline
sorenbarrett said:
Self doubt creeps in and remains held within. What others say makes no difference. A sad but all to true write. Well done
December 6th, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Self doubt creeps in and remains held within. What others say makes no difference. A sad but all to true write. Well done
December 6th, 2025 05:31
Unfinished Us
sorenbarrett said:
There is a longing and wistfulness to this work and a sense of gentle sadness. Nicely worded
November 3rd, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is a longing and wistfulness to this work and a sense of gentle sadness. Nicely worded
November 3rd, 2025 20:46
The Lie She Loved More Than Me
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of anger, frustration, hurt, pain and desire ring out in this poem of feeling ignored and not believed. It is a cry for being accepted. Nicely expressed.
November 2nd, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of anger, frustration, hurt, pain and desire ring out in this poem of feeling ignored and not believed. It is a cry for being accepted. Nicely expressed.
November 2nd, 2025 08:28
The Lie She Loved More Than Me
2781 said:
I can feel your frustration. Its convicting me to side more with my wife!
November 2nd, 2025 08:02
2781 said:
I can feel your frustration. Its convicting me to side more with my wife!
November 2nd, 2025 08:02
The Silhouette Left Behind
Rocky Lagou said:
Wonderfully penned! The absence is the worst part 💔
November 1st, 2025 09:28
Rocky Lagou said:
Wonderfully penned! The absence is the worst part 💔
November 1st, 2025 09:28
The Silhouette Left Behind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sensitively and gently portrays loss in such a tender way that if feels okay even though sad. It has lovely wording and for this a fave
November 1st, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sensitively and gently portrays loss in such a tender way that if feels okay even though sad. It has lovely wording and for this a fave
November 1st, 2025 04:27
All That We Once Were Returns
Paul Bell said:
Tough one, always think, out with the old, replace with the new.
November 1st, 2025 04:18
Paul Bell said:
Tough one, always think, out with the old, replace with the new.
November 1st, 2025 04:18
The Silhouette Left Behind
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you could add five more to that list.
Sometimes in a way people go in body, but as you put in your poem, parts of them stay.
I think It\'s when people go suddenly, the grief is the hardest.
November 1st, 2025 04:16
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you could add five more to that list.
Sometimes in a way people go in body, but as you put in your poem, parts of them stay.
I think It\'s when people go suddenly, the grief is the hardest.
November 1st, 2025 04:16
Words Like Water
Rocky Lagou said:
As someone who can relate this hits hard. I am a neurodivergent person and what would take an average individual a day or two to finish any old chapter book could turn into a month or more for me! You worded this beautifully 🤍 “a page that turns its back on me” exquisite!
November 1st, 2025 01:31
Rocky Lagou said:
As someone who can relate this hits hard. I am a neurodivergent person and what would take an average individual a day or two to finish any old chapter book could turn into a month or more for me! You worded this beautifully 🤍 “a page that turns its back on me” exquisite!
November 1st, 2025 01:31
Words Like Water
sorenbarrett said:
Words strange creatures that often are hard to tell one from another and sometimes join together to make a hybrid. Some are hard to hold onto and slip through ones fingers and mind mutating into something totally different. A good read.
October 31st, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Words strange creatures that often are hard to tell one from another and sometimes join together to make a hybrid. Some are hard to hold onto and slip through ones fingers and mind mutating into something totally different. A good read.
October 31st, 2025 13:37
All That We Once Were Returns
sorenbarrett said:
Sad this poem speaks of a longing in the loss of a relationship yet with the recognition that we change and that pain is part of growing. Nicely written
October 31st, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Sad this poem speaks of a longing in the loss of a relationship yet with the recognition that we change and that pain is part of growing. Nicely written
October 31st, 2025 03:48
