Comments received on poems by Algendhir



Departure
sorenbarrett said:

Separation and its pain represented in this poem of loss. Nicely worded

January 10th, 2026 13:59

Outbound
sorenbarrett said:

Wow! deeply philosophical and harshly true. We dicotomize everything with us on the right side and everyone else on the wrong. Well written

January 8th, 2026 10:11

What remains, lessons learned
sorenbarrett said:

Injury to pain to anger to letting to. The process outlined in this poem. Nicely done

January 6th, 2026 14:20

As dawn glides
sorenbarrett said:

With repeated chorus\' in this poem it could well be a song. Very nicely written

January 5th, 2026 12:13

The pit
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful set of lines that fall on the ear as an admonishment and warning. Nicely done

December 23rd, 2025 07:49