Comments received on poems by Algendhir
Letter to myself
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a call out stating to me we all are a product of our own actions and thoughts. Nicely written
February 13th, 2026 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a call out stating to me we all are a product of our own actions and thoughts. Nicely written
February 13th, 2026 11:32
Hollow
sorenbarrett said:
The reinvigoration of hope inspired by someone else is evident in this piece nicely written
February 11th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
The reinvigoration of hope inspired by someone else is evident in this piece nicely written
February 11th, 2026 04:36
First sight, deep love
RSM0812 said:
True love and the memories.of. eyes meeting,.lips softly kissing,.hands lost in feeling and a mind of a.lost sense of everything else except the other person. Lost ilike a beating heart of desire and want. These are the reactions of falling in love. Your poem was a really good 👍
February 10th, 2026 06:13
RSM0812 said:
True love and the memories.of. eyes meeting,.lips softly kissing,.hands lost in feeling and a mind of a.lost sense of everything else except the other person. Lost ilike a beating heart of desire and want. These are the reactions of falling in love. Your poem was a really good 👍
February 10th, 2026 06:13
First sight, deep love
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderfully woven pattern of rhyme, rhythm, meter in this poem that carries a romantic message as well. It is charming in the way it unfolds and a fave
February 10th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderfully woven pattern of rhyme, rhythm, meter in this poem that carries a romantic message as well. It is charming in the way it unfolds and a fave
February 10th, 2026 04:23
Prayer of a bruised heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for honesty, loyalty, unity. Nicely written
February 9th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for honesty, loyalty, unity. Nicely written
February 9th, 2026 04:36
Crossroads
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written the questions posed and to know that in the wind there is no answer. Nicely done
February 6th, 2026 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written the questions posed and to know that in the wind there is no answer. Nicely done
February 6th, 2026 11:56
Ghost of a future
sorenbarrett said:
There is deception in this poem that lacks common sense. Nicely done
February 5th, 2026 13:09
sorenbarrett said:
There is deception in this poem that lacks common sense. Nicely done
February 5th, 2026 13:09
Ghost of a future
AuburnScribbler said:
Fine wordings here; Algendhir, a powerful message written with succinct impact!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 5th, 2026 12:52
AuburnScribbler said:
Fine wordings here; Algendhir, a powerful message written with succinct impact!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 5th, 2026 12:52
Shattered vows
sorenbarrett said:
Here death and hell symbolic and metaphoric represent the relationship itself when betrayal becomes an issue of trust that the relationship is built upon. Well written
February 4th, 2026 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Here death and hell symbolic and metaphoric represent the relationship itself when betrayal becomes an issue of trust that the relationship is built upon. Well written
February 4th, 2026 04:57
Rapture
sorenbarrett said:
Time passing in this poem. Nothing better than to leave with a smile. Lovely
February 3rd, 2026 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Time passing in this poem. Nothing better than to leave with a smile. Lovely
February 3rd, 2026 08:18
Departure
sorenbarrett said:
Separation and its pain represented in this poem of loss. Nicely worded
January 10th, 2026 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
Separation and its pain represented in this poem of loss. Nicely worded
January 10th, 2026 13:59
Outbound
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! deeply philosophical and harshly true. We dicotomize everything with us on the right side and everyone else on the wrong. Well written
January 8th, 2026 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! deeply philosophical and harshly true. We dicotomize everything with us on the right side and everyone else on the wrong. Well written
January 8th, 2026 10:11
What remains, lessons learned
sorenbarrett said:
Injury to pain to anger to letting to. The process outlined in this poem. Nicely done
January 6th, 2026 14:20
sorenbarrett said:
Injury to pain to anger to letting to. The process outlined in this poem. Nicely done
January 6th, 2026 14:20
As dawn glides
sorenbarrett said:
With repeated chorus\' in this poem it could well be a song. Very nicely written
January 5th, 2026 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
With repeated chorus\' in this poem it could well be a song. Very nicely written
January 5th, 2026 12:13
The pit
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful set of lines that fall on the ear as an admonishment and warning. Nicely done
December 23rd, 2025 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful set of lines that fall on the ear as an admonishment and warning. Nicely done
December 23rd, 2025 07:49
