Comments received on poems by Creator of Mystery
Another World
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem with a great surprise ending. When I was a child I too was bullied by one particular guy. It lasted years and finally I fought him and even though I lost, after that we were good friends.
February 7th, 2026 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem with a great surprise ending. When I was a child I too was bullied by one particular guy. It lasted years and finally I fought him and even though I lost, after that we were good friends.
February 7th, 2026 11:13
A swept up heart
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely statement of recognition of love. Nicely written
February 6th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely statement of recognition of love. Nicely written
February 6th, 2026 05:08
Items of Skin
sorenbarrett said:
This has layers and at the bottom level is the physical and there I must agree one should not get cut, there is the emotional and there too one should not be cut, the mental then the social all areas where being cut is not a good thing. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
This has layers and at the bottom level is the physical and there I must agree one should not get cut, there is the emotional and there too one should not be cut, the mental then the social all areas where being cut is not a good thing. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 04:54
More than a Day
sorenbarrett said:
Patience is a rarer and rarer comodity in todays society of fast everything from food to data processing. A lovely write to be patient.
February 4th, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Patience is a rarer and rarer comodity in todays society of fast everything from food to data processing. A lovely write to be patient.
February 4th, 2026 04:42
The Shaking
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last stanza that evokes the aftermath feeling of fear. Nicely written
February 3rd, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last stanza that evokes the aftermath feeling of fear. Nicely written
February 3rd, 2026 04:18
Ants of the Universe
Vipassana said:
actually the universe is trying to help you, guide you to letting the ants be and not be a part of this fear-based society we live in. it is difficult to get out of one\'s own way--we are very conditioned to crush the ants. sorry to go on so long. I do like your poem.
February 3rd, 2026 02:23
Vipassana said:
actually the universe is trying to help you, guide you to letting the ants be and not be a part of this fear-based society we live in. it is difficult to get out of one\'s own way--we are very conditioned to crush the ants. sorry to go on so long. I do like your poem.
February 3rd, 2026 02:23
The Shaking
2781 said:
If you know how to pray, pray.
And let the peace of God, which surpasses all understand, guard your heart.
I didn\'t like it not because I didn\'t like it, but because of your situation. x
February 3rd, 2026 01:39
2781 said:
If you know how to pray, pray.
And let the peace of God, which surpasses all understand, guard your heart.
I didn\'t like it not because I didn\'t like it, but because of your situation. x
February 3rd, 2026 01:39
The Poets
sorenbarrett said:
You wouldn\'t want poetry in your blood because you would have to cut yourself to write and I hear that it is hard to get the stains out. I like your poem we all have wishes that poems flowed more easily but at times the tend to coagulate and scab over before they are done bleeding.
February 2nd, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
You wouldn\'t want poetry in your blood because you would have to cut yourself to write and I hear that it is hard to get the stains out. I like your poem we all have wishes that poems flowed more easily but at times the tend to coagulate and scab over before they are done bleeding.
February 2nd, 2026 03:44
Chocolates
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor here. Taste varies and can not be criticized be it food, art, poetry, beauty itself a matter of taste. Well done
February 1st, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor here. Taste varies and can not be criticized be it food, art, poetry, beauty itself a matter of taste. Well done
February 1st, 2026 03:54
The Problems
sorenbarrett said:
There must be opposition in all things, a yin and a yang, the two faces of Janus, day and night no wrong without a right. A wonderful poem
January 31st, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
There must be opposition in all things, a yin and a yang, the two faces of Janus, day and night no wrong without a right. A wonderful poem
January 31st, 2026 03:57
The Lighthouse
sorenbarrett said:
My first thought the sun, next light is associated with God, then truth and then I thought they all are kind of broke by the ozone layer and weather change, by modern scientific disbelief, by changing values and new scientific discoveries. Makes sense. Nicely done
January 30th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
My first thought the sun, next light is associated with God, then truth and then I thought they all are kind of broke by the ozone layer and weather change, by modern scientific disbelief, by changing values and new scientific discoveries. Makes sense. Nicely done
January 30th, 2026 03:57
Ants of the Universe
ariaa said:
hi! its a really good poem btw!! keep going!! its aria from school btw
January 29th, 2026 18:01
ariaa said:
hi! its a really good poem btw!! keep going!! its aria from school btw
January 29th, 2026 18:01
The #1 Follower
Friendship said:
Beautifully said. Your poem is to convey appreciation for a significant friendship and to articulate the importance of having someone who understands and supports one emotionally
January 29th, 2026 13:17
Friendship said:
Beautifully said. Your poem is to convey appreciation for a significant friendship and to articulate the importance of having someone who understands and supports one emotionally
January 29th, 2026 13:17
The #1 Follower
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dedication to a good friend. Although not her or even a friend read your poems as well. There are others that have interest in you. Keep up your work
January 29th, 2026 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dedication to a good friend. Although not her or even a friend read your poems as well. There are others that have interest in you. Keep up your work
January 29th, 2026 10:16
The Rubix Cube Game
Lorenz said:
It\'s just a game of memorization easy to comprehend ...
January 28th, 2026 07:18
Lorenz said:
It\'s just a game of memorization easy to comprehend ...
January 28th, 2026 07:18
The Rubix Cube Game
sorenbarrett said:
Have played with that cube many times but never broke it. Had a rubix sphere and pyramid. Don\'t let others tell you about you.
January 28th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Have played with that cube many times but never broke it. Had a rubix sphere and pyramid. Don\'t let others tell you about you.
January 28th, 2026 03:43
Field of Sorrows
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds power and flows in its questions. Nicely written
January 27th, 2026 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds power and flows in its questions. Nicely written
January 27th, 2026 19:33
The Eye of the Beholder
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of enchantment and held by another. Nicely said
January 26th, 2026 19:31
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of enchantment and held by another. Nicely said
January 26th, 2026 19:31
Ants of the Universe
lunarchloedip said:
i do feel like a tortured ant, sometimes, but i\'d like to imagine the universe is kind. which is probably very foolish :)
great concept, thanks for sharing!
January 25th, 2026 18:20
lunarchloedip said:
i do feel like a tortured ant, sometimes, but i\'d like to imagine the universe is kind. which is probably very foolish :)
great concept, thanks for sharing!
January 25th, 2026 18:20
Ants of the Universe
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting thought, why would we think that a power greater than us would have values better than ours.
January 25th, 2026 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting thought, why would we think that a power greater than us would have values better than ours.
January 25th, 2026 14:41
Ants of the Universe
Creator of Mystery said:
Hi, this is my first poem, please give me some feedback :).
January 25th, 2026 14:00
Creator of Mystery said:
Hi, this is my first poem, please give me some feedback :).
January 25th, 2026 14:00
