Comments received on poems by Minds of the younger
i hate her, i love her
sorenbarrett said:
Diametrically opposed feelings come together in this poem of desire and being smitten with passion, transformed it is hate and envy well written
October 14th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Diametrically opposed feelings come together in this poem of desire and being smitten with passion, transformed it is hate and envy well written
October 14th, 2026 08:17
generalization
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of how humans group and categorize to try to understand. I understand the process but don\'t like it. I refuse to diagnose for it is a statistical prejudice that lumps people, individuals into categories that they do not belong in. Well done
October 13th, 2026 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of how humans group and categorize to try to understand. I understand the process but don\'t like it. I refuse to diagnose for it is a statistical prejudice that lumps people, individuals into categories that they do not belong in. Well done
October 13th, 2026 09:02
deadly life
sorenbarrett said:
Looking in reverse death does give a reason to life in a backward way. Well done
October 12th, 2026 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
Looking in reverse death does give a reason to life in a backward way. Well done
October 12th, 2026 08:41
What the Children See
Sanjana Harnandan said:
I am a gen z and 15 lol gen alpha I don\'t know I want to cry they are like in the hallways saying 67 like omgggggggg
but this is a good poemmmm keep goingggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 8th, 2026 20:34
Sanjana Harnandan said:
I am a gen z and 15 lol gen alpha I don\'t know I want to cry they are like in the hallways saying 67 like omgggggggg
but this is a good poemmmm keep goingggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 8th, 2026 20:34
A Wounded Heart
sorenbarrett said:
What an insightful senryu so well composed a fave
October 8th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
What an insightful senryu so well composed a fave
October 8th, 2026 03:46
the least
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a fun way of dealing with vocabulary and remembering them
October 3rd, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a fun way of dealing with vocabulary and remembering them
October 3rd, 2026 04:02
Joplin tornado: the butterfly people
sorenbarrett said:
The explanation of the author\'s note gave this piece a whole new meaning and turns surreal into graphic reality. Well done
September 29th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
The explanation of the author\'s note gave this piece a whole new meaning and turns surreal into graphic reality. Well done
September 29th, 2026 10:37
Distorted
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a specific disorder but may be taken as a metaphor for all in that our perceptions are distortions of reality that we never see clearly. To notice is a revelation. Well written and a fave
September 18th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a specific disorder but may be taken as a metaphor for all in that our perceptions are distortions of reality that we never see clearly. To notice is a revelation. Well written and a fave
September 18th, 2026 09:03
Glub Glub
sorenbarrett said:
Always a problem may be a wrong turn. Nicely done
September 17th, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Always a problem may be a wrong turn. Nicely done
September 17th, 2026 09:37
Philophobia
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be a fear of everything by someone. A great style.
September 16th, 2026 18:00
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be a fear of everything by someone. A great style.
September 16th, 2026 18:00
A Message
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu sends its message clearly. Well done
September 15th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu sends its message clearly. Well done
September 15th, 2026 04:26
Thorned Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love is hard to bear. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love is hard to bear. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 03:52
Band-aids
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric it stands out as a focus either tactilely or visually. Nicely written
September 6th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric it stands out as a focus either tactilely or visually. Nicely written
September 6th, 2026 04:36
What the Children See
Cheeky Missy said:
This frankly is rendered from a far more mature and educated perspective than children per se possess. Interesting and childish, despite the assessment, this juxtaposition is rather comical. Hang in there. It doesn\'t get better but you might just figure out how to convince yourself it does. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2026 02:23
Cheeky Missy said:
This frankly is rendered from a far more mature and educated perspective than children per se possess. Interesting and childish, despite the assessment, this juxtaposition is rather comical. Hang in there. It doesn\'t get better but you might just figure out how to convince yourself it does. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2026 02:23
What the Children See
sorenbarrett said:
A write that each generation has felt, a right of passage so to speak. Heart felt growing pains expressed in this write. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
A write that each generation has felt, a right of passage so to speak. Heart felt growing pains expressed in this write. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 07:57
Evervast Void
coracaodacripta said:
We share a similar feel to the two of our day\'s writings. With all the chaos, it truly feels like we\'ve been deployed.
September 3rd, 2026 21:53
coracaodacripta said:
We share a similar feel to the two of our day\'s writings. With all the chaos, it truly feels like we\'ve been deployed.
September 3rd, 2026 21:53
Evervast Void
Fränz Müller said:
It’s not all gloom and doom, but a lot of life is, though. It’s those occasional sparks and streaks of light we need to cling to when the sadness creeps in. Hang in there!
September 3rd, 2026 09:49
Fränz Müller said:
It’s not all gloom and doom, but a lot of life is, though. It’s those occasional sparks and streaks of light we need to cling to when the sadness creeps in. Hang in there!
September 3rd, 2026 09:49
Evervast Void
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem indeed with feelings of pessimism. Nicely written and prompts the feeling that it only gets darkest before the dawn. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem indeed with feelings of pessimism. Nicely written and prompts the feeling that it only gets darkest before the dawn. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2026 04:14
A Work of Art
Fränz Müller said:
Our bodies are works of art, suitable for display, though most people would prefer such art never see the light of day.
September 2nd, 2026 16:56
Fränz Müller said:
Our bodies are works of art, suitable for display, though most people would prefer such art never see the light of day.
September 2nd, 2026 16:56
A Work of Art
sorenbarrett said:
Be the cuts or tattoos self inflicted they find little social acceptance. Disfigurement in some societies is well accepted and encouraged be it scarification or tattoos and piercings. Never the less most of this is not self inflicted but done by a professional. I hear the meaning in this poem and it is sad for much of this self art is out of pain. Well written
September 2nd, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Be the cuts or tattoos self inflicted they find little social acceptance. Disfigurement in some societies is well accepted and encouraged be it scarification or tattoos and piercings. Never the less most of this is not self inflicted but done by a professional. I hear the meaning in this poem and it is sad for much of this self art is out of pain. Well written
September 2nd, 2026 04:09
The Hand that Hurts
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and most powerful metaphor. Nicely written.
September 1st, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and most powerful metaphor. Nicely written.
September 1st, 2026 03:34
The Lies of My Brain
sorenbarrett said:
Talking oneself out of a relationship is the easiest way to avoid intimacy and the work associated with it. Nicely written
August 30th, 2026 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
Talking oneself out of a relationship is the easiest way to avoid intimacy and the work associated with it. Nicely written
August 30th, 2026 20:31
The Screens of Screams
sorenbarrett said:
Advanced beyond years in insight and writing skill this poem represents a reflection on a technological entrapment of a generation and the creation of an existential crisis. Keep writing like this and you will be a great poet.
March 17th, 2026 03:14
sorenbarrett said:
Advanced beyond years in insight and writing skill this poem represents a reflection on a technological entrapment of a generation and the creation of an existential crisis. Keep writing like this and you will be a great poet.
March 17th, 2026 03:14
Without Words
sorenbarrett said:
This holds a dark view and expectations for a general worsening of things. Well written
February 21st, 2026 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
This holds a dark view and expectations for a general worsening of things. Well written
February 21st, 2026 15:05
Another World
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem with a great surprise ending. When I was a child I too was bullied by one particular guy. It lasted years and finally I fought him and even though I lost, after that we were good friends.
February 7th, 2026 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem with a great surprise ending. When I was a child I too was bullied by one particular guy. It lasted years and finally I fought him and even though I lost, after that we were good friends.
February 7th, 2026 11:13
A swept up heart
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely statement of recognition of love. Nicely written
February 6th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely statement of recognition of love. Nicely written
February 6th, 2026 05:08
Items of Skin
sorenbarrett said:
This has layers and at the bottom level is the physical and there I must agree one should not get cut, there is the emotional and there too one should not be cut, the mental then the social all areas where being cut is not a good thing. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
This has layers and at the bottom level is the physical and there I must agree one should not get cut, there is the emotional and there too one should not be cut, the mental then the social all areas where being cut is not a good thing. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 04:54
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