Comments received on poems by Minds of the younger
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sorenbarrett said:
Nonsense that makes sense. Nicely written with a powerful message. It takes a look from below to see the perspective of things. Nicely done
October 29th, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Nonsense that makes sense. Nicely written with a powerful message. It takes a look from below to see the perspective of things. Nicely done
October 29th, 2026 09:31
An internet affect
sorenbarrett said:
So true and worse still much of what is seen and heard is not true. Well said
October 28th, 2026 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
So true and worse still much of what is seen and heard is not true. Well said
October 28th, 2026 17:36
annoyance
Novaselic said:
Can’t say I never felt jealous of anyone, I have and I’m sure others had that feeling as well. Even a simple and short poem tells a great message, nicely done :))
October 24th, 2026 09:51
Novaselic said:
Can’t say I never felt jealous of anyone, I have and I’m sure others had that feeling as well. Even a simple and short poem tells a great message, nicely done :))
October 24th, 2026 09:51
annoyance
sorenbarrett said:
There is cold envy and jealousy dripping from this poem. A sense of resentment and buried anger even hatred here. Painted so well in so few words.
October 24th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
There is cold envy and jealousy dripping from this poem. A sense of resentment and buried anger even hatred here. Painted so well in so few words.
October 24th, 2026 03:53
I cant cry
sorenbarrett said:
That is a terrible experience and is quite miserable when the tears are stopped and won\'t come despite the need. Well written
October 23rd, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
That is a terrible experience and is quite miserable when the tears are stopped and won\'t come despite the need. Well written
October 23rd, 2026 04:06
I feel
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of inadequacy and inferiority fill this poem with regret for what one does to others. Nicely written
October 20th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of inadequacy and inferiority fill this poem with regret for what one does to others. Nicely written
October 20th, 2026 09:04
Past or Present
Paul Bell said:
The younger cousin was my homework excuse for years.
Some might be gone, but not in mind.
October 17th, 2026 05:45
Paul Bell said:
The younger cousin was my homework excuse for years.
Some might be gone, but not in mind.
October 17th, 2026 05:45
Past or Present
sorenbarrett said:
It is the vagueness of this write that makes it. Neither subject articulated or specified the noun remains only a shadow while the verb and adjective continue to act. A mystery to unravel that has no solution. Nicely done.
October 17th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is the vagueness of this write that makes it. Neither subject articulated or specified the noun remains only a shadow while the verb and adjective continue to act. A mystery to unravel that has no solution. Nicely done.
October 17th, 2026 03:55
Useful
sorenbarrett said:
This poem compares oneself against another and feel short in some way. Comparisons have a sense of doing this. Nicely done
October 15th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem compares oneself against another and feel short in some way. Comparisons have a sense of doing this. Nicely done
October 15th, 2026 04:38
i hate her, i love her
sorenbarrett said:
Diametrically opposed feelings come together in this poem of desire and being smitten with passion, transformed it is hate and envy well written
October 14th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Diametrically opposed feelings come together in this poem of desire and being smitten with passion, transformed it is hate and envy well written
October 14th, 2026 08:17
generalization
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of how humans group and categorize to try to understand. I understand the process but don\'t like it. I refuse to diagnose for it is a statistical prejudice that lumps people, individuals into categories that they do not belong in. Well done
October 13th, 2026 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of how humans group and categorize to try to understand. I understand the process but don\'t like it. I refuse to diagnose for it is a statistical prejudice that lumps people, individuals into categories that they do not belong in. Well done
October 13th, 2026 09:02
deadly life
sorenbarrett said:
Looking in reverse death does give a reason to life in a backward way. Well done
October 12th, 2026 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
Looking in reverse death does give a reason to life in a backward way. Well done
October 12th, 2026 08:41
What the Children See
sandyyyyyyana said:
I am a gen z and 15 lol gen alpha I don\'t know I want to cry they are like in the hallways saying 67 like omgggggggg
but this is a good poemmmm keep goingggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 8th, 2026 20:34
sandyyyyyyana said:
I am a gen z and 15 lol gen alpha I don\'t know I want to cry they are like in the hallways saying 67 like omgggggggg
but this is a good poemmmm keep goingggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 8th, 2026 20:34
A Wounded Heart
sorenbarrett said:
What an insightful senryu so well composed a fave
October 8th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
What an insightful senryu so well composed a fave
October 8th, 2026 03:46
the least
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a fun way of dealing with vocabulary and remembering them
October 3rd, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a fun way of dealing with vocabulary and remembering them
October 3rd, 2026 04:02
Joplin tornado: the butterfly people
sorenbarrett said:
The explanation of the author\'s note gave this piece a whole new meaning and turns surreal into graphic reality. Well done
September 29th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
The explanation of the author\'s note gave this piece a whole new meaning and turns surreal into graphic reality. Well done
September 29th, 2026 10:37
Distorted
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a specific disorder but may be taken as a metaphor for all in that our perceptions are distortions of reality that we never see clearly. To notice is a revelation. Well written and a fave
September 18th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a specific disorder but may be taken as a metaphor for all in that our perceptions are distortions of reality that we never see clearly. To notice is a revelation. Well written and a fave
September 18th, 2026 09:03
Glub Glub
sorenbarrett said:
Always a problem may be a wrong turn. Nicely done
September 17th, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Always a problem may be a wrong turn. Nicely done
September 17th, 2026 09:37
Philophobia
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be a fear of everything by someone. A great style.
September 16th, 2026 18:00
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be a fear of everything by someone. A great style.
September 16th, 2026 18:00
A Message
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu sends its message clearly. Well done
September 15th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu sends its message clearly. Well done
September 15th, 2026 04:26
Thorned Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love is hard to bear. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love is hard to bear. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 03:52
Band-aids
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric it stands out as a focus either tactilely or visually. Nicely written
September 6th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric it stands out as a focus either tactilely or visually. Nicely written
September 6th, 2026 04:36
What the Children See
Cheeky Missy said:
This frankly is rendered from a far more mature and educated perspective than children per se possess. Interesting and childish, despite the assessment, this juxtaposition is rather comical. Hang in there. It doesn\'t get better but you might just figure out how to convince yourself it does. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2026 02:23
Cheeky Missy said:
This frankly is rendered from a far more mature and educated perspective than children per se possess. Interesting and childish, despite the assessment, this juxtaposition is rather comical. Hang in there. It doesn\'t get better but you might just figure out how to convince yourself it does. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2026 02:23
What the Children See
sorenbarrett said:
A write that each generation has felt, a right of passage so to speak. Heart felt growing pains expressed in this write. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
A write that each generation has felt, a right of passage so to speak. Heart felt growing pains expressed in this write. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 07:57
Evervast Void
coracaodacripta said:
We share a similar feel to the two of our day\'s writings. With all the chaos, it truly feels like we\'ve been deployed.
September 3rd, 2026 21:53
coracaodacripta said:
We share a similar feel to the two of our day\'s writings. With all the chaos, it truly feels like we\'ve been deployed.
September 3rd, 2026 21:53
Evervast Void
Fränz Müller said:
It’s not all gloom and doom, but a lot of life is, though. It’s those occasional sparks and streaks of light we need to cling to when the sadness creeps in. Hang in there!
September 3rd, 2026 09:49
Fränz Müller said:
It’s not all gloom and doom, but a lot of life is, though. It’s those occasional sparks and streaks of light we need to cling to when the sadness creeps in. Hang in there!
September 3rd, 2026 09:49
Evervast Void
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem indeed with feelings of pessimism. Nicely written and prompts the feeling that it only gets darkest before the dawn. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem indeed with feelings of pessimism. Nicely written and prompts the feeling that it only gets darkest before the dawn. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2026 04:14
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