Comments received on poems by birdbird
Stultitia
lunarchloedip said:
love the shift from “i want to lose all sanity” to insanity
February 3rd, 2026 07:39
lunarchloedip said:
love the shift from “i want to lose all sanity” to insanity
February 3rd, 2026 07:39
Otiosity
lunarchloedip said:
this would be great performed live! each line flows into the next very well
February 3rd, 2026 07:38
lunarchloedip said:
this would be great performed live! each line flows into the next very well
February 3rd, 2026 07:38
Otiosity
sorenbarrett said:
An existential poem where the narrator feels split and with two opposing sides a critic, an underminer there is little room for compromise. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
An existential poem where the narrator feels split and with two opposing sides a critic, an underminer there is little room for compromise. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 08:49
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lunarchloedip said:
i like the flow of this one. its less typically structured and more an unfiltered spew of emotion, very raw and honest, very much what we need more of. thanks for sharing, really enjoyed!
February 1st, 2026 09:51
lunarchloedip said:
i like the flow of this one. its less typically structured and more an unfiltered spew of emotion, very raw and honest, very much what we need more of. thanks for sharing, really enjoyed!
February 1st, 2026 09:51
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sorenbarrett said:
A cry in the dark, savage and primal it screams in pain. Well written with a sense of disarray spreading itself across the page as a child spreads juice on the table. Lovely
February 1st, 2026 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
A cry in the dark, savage and primal it screams in pain. Well written with a sense of disarray spreading itself across the page as a child spreads juice on the table. Lovely
February 1st, 2026 09:17
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Thomas W Case said:
This is a raw howl against the machine—rage, beauty, and exhaustion tangled together without flinching.
It’s messy on purpose, and that sprawl feels honest, like someone refusing to go quietly while the system tightens its grip.
February 1st, 2026 07:36
Thomas W Case said:
This is a raw howl against the machine—rage, beauty, and exhaustion tangled together without flinching.
It’s messy on purpose, and that sprawl feels honest, like someone refusing to go quietly while the system tightens its grip.
February 1st, 2026 07:36
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