Comments received on poems by birdbird
Moby
sorenbarrett said:
A whale of a tale or rather a tail of a whale. Nicely written. Well done
March 5th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
A whale of a tale or rather a tail of a whale. Nicely written. Well done
March 5th, 2026 04:46
Lost
Poetic Licence said:
We live in a world of hypocrisy, confusion and ever increasing double standards, which this write rightly highlights. We are raising generations and conditioning them to believe this is too the norm. Well penned
March 4th, 2026 06:57
Poetic Licence said:
We live in a world of hypocrisy, confusion and ever increasing double standards, which this write rightly highlights. We are raising generations and conditioning them to believe this is too the norm. Well penned
March 4th, 2026 06:57
Lost
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic criticism of hypocrisy and the raising up a new generation into the same mold. Nicely written
March 4th, 2026 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic criticism of hypocrisy and the raising up a new generation into the same mold. Nicely written
March 4th, 2026 06:51
Less
sorenbarrett said:
It is the alliteration that raises the dust in this poem it clouds the air and causes the mind to pause and clear itself. Nicely done
March 3rd, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
It is the alliteration that raises the dust in this poem it clouds the air and causes the mind to pause and clear itself. Nicely done
March 3rd, 2026 05:03
Blinded
sorenbarrett said:
There is an echo of fear and timidity in this poem that resounds throughout. Nicely written it rages against the light.
March 2nd, 2026 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
There is an echo of fear and timidity in this poem that resounds throughout. Nicely written it rages against the light.
March 2nd, 2026 11:24
Deadache
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes an existential rap that could well be a song. It runs through the mental turmoil and devastations of life and the seeking of purpose. Nicely done
February 27th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes an existential rap that could well be a song. It runs through the mental turmoil and devastations of life and the seeking of purpose. Nicely done
February 27th, 2026 05:03
Edit
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of energy in this poem despite its downward view of things. Keep on writing
February 26th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of energy in this poem despite its downward view of things. Keep on writing
February 26th, 2026 04:29
Release
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of references to death in this poem and yet it swirls. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of references to death in this poem and yet it swirls. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 05:10
Waiting
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of word association that occurs on occasion particularly with intoxication. A fun read that skips and hops through lyrics in such a light fashion. Lovely
February 24th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of word association that occurs on occasion particularly with intoxication. A fun read that skips and hops through lyrics in such a light fashion. Lovely
February 24th, 2026 05:33
Sanity Freeze
marissa said:
This could most definitely be a heavy metal song,well done!
February 22nd, 2026 13:42
marissa said:
This could most definitely be a heavy metal song,well done!
February 22nd, 2026 13:42
Sanity Freeze
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I ask myself who are the sanity thieves. Like most thieves of personal items it is usually someone you know. A good read
February 22nd, 2026 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I ask myself who are the sanity thieves. Like most thieves of personal items it is usually someone you know. A good read
February 22nd, 2026 13:02
Bare
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great deal of angst in this poem, feelings of fear and trembling. Raw and timorous it shakes and quivers looking for shelter.
February 20th, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great deal of angst in this poem, feelings of fear and trembling. Raw and timorous it shakes and quivers looking for shelter.
February 20th, 2026 07:24
Absurd
sorenbarrett said:
There is angry tone to this poem that flows ever downward. Nicely written
February 17th, 2026 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
There is angry tone to this poem that flows ever downward. Nicely written
February 17th, 2026 20:05
Wild Really
sorenbarrett said:
Is it gild overlaying the vulnerable or is it true gold uncovered remains the question. A wonderful metaphor. Nicely done
February 15th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Is it gild overlaying the vulnerable or is it true gold uncovered remains the question. A wonderful metaphor. Nicely done
February 15th, 2026 07:40
Alphabetti Spaghetti
Eugene S. said:
Give us the alphabet why dont ya! Love the wordplay as usual!
February 14th, 2026 08:29
Eugene S. said:
Give us the alphabet why dont ya! Love the wordplay as usual!
February 14th, 2026 08:29
Alphabetti Spaghetti
sorenbarrett said:
Marked meter becomes the emphasis in this poem. Each stanza conforming to the form. Well done
February 14th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Marked meter becomes the emphasis in this poem. Each stanza conforming to the form. Well done
February 14th, 2026 04:56
Learn
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems meant to be a song. Nicely done with repeated power and questioning of the purpose of life. Well penned
February 13th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems meant to be a song. Nicely done with repeated power and questioning of the purpose of life. Well penned
February 13th, 2026 04:39
As Feathers Fall
sorenbarrett said:
Some clever wording combined with a catchy meter that seemed at times hypnotic. Nicely written
February 12th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Some clever wording combined with a catchy meter that seemed at times hypnotic. Nicely written
February 12th, 2026 04:15
The
Eugene S. said:
To start anew. I like the image of opening a casket and breaking ground - kinda like a seed sprouting.
February 11th, 2026 19:02
Eugene S. said:
To start anew. I like the image of opening a casket and breaking ground - kinda like a seed sprouting.
February 11th, 2026 19:02
The
sorenbarrett said:
Bravely creative this poem is a style I have never seen before it seems avant guard in a surreal way it has nuances of Lewis Carrol mixed with Salvador Dali and a bit of Picasso thrown in. It is a Pollock rolled out into a Renoir. I applauded your courage and creativity
February 10th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Bravely creative this poem is a style I have never seen before it seems avant guard in a surreal way it has nuances of Lewis Carrol mixed with Salvador Dali and a bit of Picasso thrown in. It is a Pollock rolled out into a Renoir. I applauded your courage and creativity
February 10th, 2026 04:40
Broken In To
sorenbarrett said:
Pain in this poem overflows and spills down the page. Well written
February 8th, 2026 19:01
sorenbarrett said:
Pain in this poem overflows and spills down the page. Well written
February 8th, 2026 19:01
Puppeteer
Eugene S. said:
Excellent!! Far more formal than what I\'ve seen before.👍🏼☠️
February 7th, 2026 11:57
Eugene S. said:
Excellent!! Far more formal than what I\'ve seen before.👍🏼☠️
February 7th, 2026 11:57
Puppeteer
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that sees life as dangerous and precarious and must be guarded against using its own means against it. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that sees life as dangerous and precarious and must be guarded against using its own means against it. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 10:14
i\'ve
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of pain in this poem and desperation. Sad and with little hope. Well done
February 5th, 2026 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of pain in this poem and desperation. Sad and with little hope. Well done
February 5th, 2026 19:46
Lightless
sorenbarrett said:
There was a time when I was in to numerology and it seems that this poem contains a great deal of this. Nicely written with counted meter which I have not taken the time to see if it has corresponding meaning.
February 4th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
There was a time when I was in to numerology and it seems that this poem contains a great deal of this. Nicely written with counted meter which I have not taken the time to see if it has corresponding meaning.
February 4th, 2026 05:08
Stultitia
sorenbarrett said:
A great write vacillating rom the insane to the sane when the difference is nothing more than being in agreement with the majority of others. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great write vacillating rom the insane to the sane when the difference is nothing more than being in agreement with the majority of others. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 08:08
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