Comments received on poems by birdbird
Message to Anyone Who Needs It
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a confession of commitment and a write of rawness well penned
March 27th, 2026 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a confession of commitment and a write of rawness well penned
March 27th, 2026 06:25
Night
sorenbarrett said:
It is the repetitions of rhyming sounds that haunt this poem echoing through its lines creating an atmosphere in and of itself. Nicely done
March 27th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
It is the repetitions of rhyming sounds that haunt this poem echoing through its lines creating an atmosphere in and of itself. Nicely done
March 27th, 2026 04:16
Hell of a Mind
sorenbarrett said:
An angel is nothing but a devil reformed and a devil is nothing but an angel fallen. Well written it expresses frustration and pain over injury there is sadness here. Nicely penned
March 26th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
An angel is nothing but a devil reformed and a devil is nothing but an angel fallen. Well written it expresses frustration and pain over injury there is sadness here. Nicely penned
March 26th, 2026 05:02
Distance
sorenbarrett said:
This poem itself is revved up an speeds along. There is a lot of energy there. Well done
March 24th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
This poem itself is revved up an speeds along. There is a lot of energy there. Well done
March 24th, 2026 04:41
Brave Wings
sorenbarrett said:
There is reflection in this poem of one\'s strengths as well as weakness\' Nicely written
March 23rd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
There is reflection in this poem of one\'s strengths as well as weakness\' Nicely written
March 23rd, 2026 04:25
The Beast in a Storm
sorenbarrett said:
The question is what is the beast. A surrealistic poem of conflict a type of hunt and chase through time and space. Storms we all have and beasts we all have as well. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
The question is what is the beast. A surrealistic poem of conflict a type of hunt and chase through time and space. Storms we all have and beasts we all have as well. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 05:23
Found
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme and meter pattern in this poem it carries the reader along to the end. Well done
March 19th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme and meter pattern in this poem it carries the reader along to the end. Well done
March 19th, 2026 04:59
Not Me
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of us all good and bad the kind and cruel. All this reflected in this poem. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:24
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of us all good and bad the kind and cruel. All this reflected in this poem. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:24
Why Would The World Wait For You
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a rap of pun\'s and word play with homophones. It has a beat and flow and was fun to read.
March 14th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a rap of pun\'s and word play with homophones. It has a beat and flow and was fun to read.
March 14th, 2026 04:16
Dying
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the agony in this poem as it repeats itself over and over. A sad presentation. Well worded
March 13th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the agony in this poem as it repeats itself over and over. A sad presentation. Well worded
March 13th, 2026 03:54
Dying
sorenbarrett said:
This has a hip hop rap like beat to it in its meter as well as rhyme scheme. There is threatening in it as well. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
This has a hip hop rap like beat to it in its meter as well as rhyme scheme. There is threatening in it as well. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:45
Gone
sorenbarrett said:
Dark thoughts fill this poem and it calls out from the shadows. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Dark thoughts fill this poem and it calls out from the shadows. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 04:05
Message to Anyone Who Needs It
sorenbarrett said:
Self realization is a wonderful thing and trying to convey it to others a difficult thing. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Self realization is a wonderful thing and trying to convey it to others a difficult thing. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 04:01
Again
sorenbarrett said:
Here friendship is sought but not found in the form desired and the question becomes one of whether friendship is exclusive, can it be found in increments or does it have to be all or nothing. Maybe we expect too much and thereby defeat ourselves. Nicely written
March 7th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here friendship is sought but not found in the form desired and the question becomes one of whether friendship is exclusive, can it be found in increments or does it have to be all or nothing. Maybe we expect too much and thereby defeat ourselves. Nicely written
March 7th, 2026 03:49
Seashell
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to say accept people for who they are and don\'t be too picky. Nicely said
March 6th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to say accept people for who they are and don\'t be too picky. Nicely said
March 6th, 2026 03:50
Moby
sorenbarrett said:
A whale of a tale or rather a tail of a whale. Nicely written. Well done
March 5th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
A whale of a tale or rather a tail of a whale. Nicely written. Well done
March 5th, 2026 04:46
Lost
Poetic Licence said:
We live in a world of hypocrisy, confusion and ever increasing double standards, which this write rightly highlights. We are raising generations and conditioning them to believe this is too the norm. Well penned
March 4th, 2026 06:57
Poetic Licence said:
We live in a world of hypocrisy, confusion and ever increasing double standards, which this write rightly highlights. We are raising generations and conditioning them to believe this is too the norm. Well penned
March 4th, 2026 06:57
Lost
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic criticism of hypocrisy and the raising up a new generation into the same mold. Nicely written
March 4th, 2026 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic criticism of hypocrisy and the raising up a new generation into the same mold. Nicely written
March 4th, 2026 06:51
Less
sorenbarrett said:
It is the alliteration that raises the dust in this poem it clouds the air and causes the mind to pause and clear itself. Nicely done
March 3rd, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
It is the alliteration that raises the dust in this poem it clouds the air and causes the mind to pause and clear itself. Nicely done
March 3rd, 2026 05:03
Blinded
sorenbarrett said:
There is an echo of fear and timidity in this poem that resounds throughout. Nicely written it rages against the light.
March 2nd, 2026 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
There is an echo of fear and timidity in this poem that resounds throughout. Nicely written it rages against the light.
March 2nd, 2026 11:24
Deadache
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes an existential rap that could well be a song. It runs through the mental turmoil and devastations of life and the seeking of purpose. Nicely done
February 27th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes an existential rap that could well be a song. It runs through the mental turmoil and devastations of life and the seeking of purpose. Nicely done
February 27th, 2026 05:03
Edit
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of energy in this poem despite its downward view of things. Keep on writing
February 26th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of energy in this poem despite its downward view of things. Keep on writing
February 26th, 2026 04:29
Release
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of references to death in this poem and yet it swirls. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of references to death in this poem and yet it swirls. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 05:10
Waiting
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of word association that occurs on occasion particularly with intoxication. A fun read that skips and hops through lyrics in such a light fashion. Lovely
February 24th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of word association that occurs on occasion particularly with intoxication. A fun read that skips and hops through lyrics in such a light fashion. Lovely
February 24th, 2026 05:33
Sanity Freeze
marissa said:
This could most definitely be a heavy metal song,well done!
February 22nd, 2026 13:42
marissa said:
This could most definitely be a heavy metal song,well done!
February 22nd, 2026 13:42
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