Comments received on poems by birdbird
Fault Line
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the meandering thoughts and feelings of a person riled yet easy going and just doing it their way no matter what. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the meandering thoughts and feelings of a person riled yet easy going and just doing it their way no matter what. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 05:00
Left
sorenbarrett said:
Here in free flowing thought form rhyme takes precedence leading line to line as the meter flows onward to the end. Very nice
April 22nd, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
Here in free flowing thought form rhyme takes precedence leading line to line as the meter flows onward to the end. Very nice
April 22nd, 2026 05:54
Leaves
sorenbarrett said:
This poem rambles through nature and the mind to times and seasons beyond. Well written
April 21st, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem rambles through nature and the mind to times and seasons beyond. Well written
April 21st, 2026 04:55
Intro
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a surreal dream in fragments of memory. A driven write nicely expressed
April 19th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a surreal dream in fragments of memory. A driven write nicely expressed
April 19th, 2026 04:36
Memories One
sorenbarrett said:
When free association joins rhyme then a surreal mix flows as a rap. Well done
April 17th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
When free association joins rhyme then a surreal mix flows as a rap. Well done
April 17th, 2026 04:14
Memories Zero
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem rhyme is the principal driving force as it rolls on in AA fashion with internal and end rhyme. Well done
April 16th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem rhyme is the principal driving force as it rolls on in AA fashion with internal and end rhyme. Well done
April 16th, 2026 04:25
Liar
sorenbarrett said:
In its repeated rhymes this poem paints a surreal picture of life. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
In its repeated rhymes this poem paints a surreal picture of life. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 04:44
Huh
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of pressure in this write where one feels pushed onward with a sword to one\'s back so to speak. Well done
April 14th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of pressure in this write where one feels pushed onward with a sword to one\'s back so to speak. Well done
April 14th, 2026 04:27
Ink
Friendship said:
Nice story. I love how you write this a short story.🤣 Enjoy the read.
April 13th, 2026 07:53
Friendship said:
Nice story. I love how you write this a short story.🤣 Enjoy the read.
April 13th, 2026 07:53
Ink
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the epoch poem in this story of a life. Well done
April 13th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the epoch poem in this story of a life. Well done
April 13th, 2026 04:22
Relax
sorenbarrett said:
There are words to another in this poem dedicated to the relationship between them. Well done
April 9th, 2026 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
There are words to another in this poem dedicated to the relationship between them. Well done
April 9th, 2026 19:23
Night
Abdullah123 said:
great write. Love the building tension with the shorter lines
April 6th, 2026 14:00
Abdullah123 said:
great write. Love the building tension with the shorter lines
April 6th, 2026 14:00
Message to Anyone Who Needs It
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a confession of commitment and a write of rawness well penned
March 27th, 2026 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a confession of commitment and a write of rawness well penned
March 27th, 2026 06:25
Night
sorenbarrett said:
It is the repetitions of rhyming sounds that haunt this poem echoing through its lines creating an atmosphere in and of itself. Nicely done
March 27th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
It is the repetitions of rhyming sounds that haunt this poem echoing through its lines creating an atmosphere in and of itself. Nicely done
March 27th, 2026 04:16
Hell of a Mind
sorenbarrett said:
An angel is nothing but a devil reformed and a devil is nothing but an angel fallen. Well written it expresses frustration and pain over injury there is sadness here. Nicely penned
March 26th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
An angel is nothing but a devil reformed and a devil is nothing but an angel fallen. Well written it expresses frustration and pain over injury there is sadness here. Nicely penned
March 26th, 2026 05:02
Distance
sorenbarrett said:
This poem itself is revved up an speeds along. There is a lot of energy there. Well done
March 24th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
This poem itself is revved up an speeds along. There is a lot of energy there. Well done
March 24th, 2026 04:41
Brave Wings
sorenbarrett said:
There is reflection in this poem of one\'s strengths as well as weakness\' Nicely written
March 23rd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
There is reflection in this poem of one\'s strengths as well as weakness\' Nicely written
March 23rd, 2026 04:25
The Beast in a Storm
sorenbarrett said:
The question is what is the beast. A surrealistic poem of conflict a type of hunt and chase through time and space. Storms we all have and beasts we all have as well. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
The question is what is the beast. A surrealistic poem of conflict a type of hunt and chase through time and space. Storms we all have and beasts we all have as well. Nicely done
March 20th, 2026 05:23
Found
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme and meter pattern in this poem it carries the reader along to the end. Well done
March 19th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme and meter pattern in this poem it carries the reader along to the end. Well done
March 19th, 2026 04:59
Not Me
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of us all good and bad the kind and cruel. All this reflected in this poem. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:24
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of us all good and bad the kind and cruel. All this reflected in this poem. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:24
Why Would The World Wait For You
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a rap of pun\'s and word play with homophones. It has a beat and flow and was fun to read.
March 14th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a rap of pun\'s and word play with homophones. It has a beat and flow and was fun to read.
March 14th, 2026 04:16
Dying
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the agony in this poem as it repeats itself over and over. A sad presentation. Well worded
March 13th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the agony in this poem as it repeats itself over and over. A sad presentation. Well worded
March 13th, 2026 03:54
Dying
sorenbarrett said:
This has a hip hop rap like beat to it in its meter as well as rhyme scheme. There is threatening in it as well. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
This has a hip hop rap like beat to it in its meter as well as rhyme scheme. There is threatening in it as well. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:45
Gone
sorenbarrett said:
Dark thoughts fill this poem and it calls out from the shadows. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Dark thoughts fill this poem and it calls out from the shadows. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 04:05
Message to Anyone Who Needs It
sorenbarrett said:
Self realization is a wonderful thing and trying to convey it to others a difficult thing. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Self realization is a wonderful thing and trying to convey it to others a difficult thing. Nicely done
March 9th, 2026 04:01
Again
sorenbarrett said:
Here friendship is sought but not found in the form desired and the question becomes one of whether friendship is exclusive, can it be found in increments or does it have to be all or nothing. Maybe we expect too much and thereby defeat ourselves. Nicely written
March 7th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here friendship is sought but not found in the form desired and the question becomes one of whether friendship is exclusive, can it be found in increments or does it have to be all or nothing. Maybe we expect too much and thereby defeat ourselves. Nicely written
March 7th, 2026 03:49
Seashell
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to say accept people for who they are and don\'t be too picky. Nicely said
March 6th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to say accept people for who they are and don\'t be too picky. Nicely said
March 6th, 2026 03:50
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