Comments received on poems by birdbird
A Story Weird
Eugene S. said:
Yes! Absolutely beautiful! I think i know where this comes from.
\"And grass by the lake
by the tree
by the air will
swear to your ears
that hear that we\'re all here.\"
👍🏼
June 2nd, 2026 17:53
Eugene S. said:
Yes! Absolutely beautiful! I think i know where this comes from.
\"And grass by the lake
by the tree
by the air will
swear to your ears
that hear that we\'re all here.\"
👍🏼
June 2nd, 2026 17:53
A Story Weird
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly loved the first part of this poem with its cadence and flow. Very nicely done
June 2nd, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly loved the first part of this poem with its cadence and flow. Very nicely done
June 2nd, 2026 05:10
Drown in Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme follows rhyme as thoughts race in this poem where free association seems the driving force. Well done
May 21st, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme follows rhyme as thoughts race in this poem where free association seems the driving force. Well done
May 21st, 2026 04:59
Feathered Leaves
sorenbarrett said:
What a most interesting take from the focus on a feather expanding to diverse and unrelated objects all tied with each other in an association that comes back to feathers. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
What a most interesting take from the focus on a feather expanding to diverse and unrelated objects all tied with each other in an association that comes back to feathers. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 08:12
A Full Moon Lullaby
Eugene S. said:
I can see the translation if I look.
I don\'t know that a feather is that much different than a tree in structure, but very different in that it helps a bird to soar.
May 10th, 2026 16:54
Eugene S. said:
I can see the translation if I look.
I don\'t know that a feather is that much different than a tree in structure, but very different in that it helps a bird to soar.
May 10th, 2026 16:54
A Full Moon Lullaby
sorenbarrett said:
That seems philosophical and surreal blending astrophysics with poetry
May 8th, 2026 16:10
sorenbarrett said:
That seems philosophical and surreal blending astrophysics with poetry
May 8th, 2026 16:10
+-
sorenbarrett said:
This reveals an abstract feel with layered meaning. Well done
May 7th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
This reveals an abstract feel with layered meaning. Well done
May 7th, 2026 04:25
Under a Tree
sorenbarrett said:
It is what it is they say and that is life. I hear in this poem much of this. There are elements of duality and the ups and downs and that is what life is about. Nicely written
May 4th, 2026 21:17
sorenbarrett said:
It is what it is they say and that is life. I hear in this poem much of this. There are elements of duality and the ups and downs and that is what life is about. Nicely written
May 4th, 2026 21:17
So Far Yet So Close
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear attraction and passion, obsession and compassion, a friendship well painted
May 1st, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear attraction and passion, obsession and compassion, a friendship well painted
May 1st, 2026 03:50
I\'ve
sorenbarrett said:
This is a waterfall of free association that runs through this piece
April 29th, 2026 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
This is a waterfall of free association that runs through this piece
April 29th, 2026 05:21
trying to Feel Alive
sorenbarrett said:
Lots of rhyme in this piece both end and internal. Well done
April 26th, 2026 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
Lots of rhyme in this piece both end and internal. Well done
April 26th, 2026 19:42
Ashes
sorenbarrett said:
Ashes and bird form evokes the thought of the Phoenix and it raising from its own ashes. Well written
April 24th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Ashes and bird form evokes the thought of the Phoenix and it raising from its own ashes. Well written
April 24th, 2026 05:03
Fault Line
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the meandering thoughts and feelings of a person riled yet easy going and just doing it their way no matter what. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the meandering thoughts and feelings of a person riled yet easy going and just doing it their way no matter what. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 05:00
Left
sorenbarrett said:
Here in free flowing thought form rhyme takes precedence leading line to line as the meter flows onward to the end. Very nice
April 22nd, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
Here in free flowing thought form rhyme takes precedence leading line to line as the meter flows onward to the end. Very nice
April 22nd, 2026 05:54
Leaves
sorenbarrett said:
This poem rambles through nature and the mind to times and seasons beyond. Well written
April 21st, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem rambles through nature and the mind to times and seasons beyond. Well written
April 21st, 2026 04:55
Intro
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a surreal dream in fragments of memory. A driven write nicely expressed
April 19th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a surreal dream in fragments of memory. A driven write nicely expressed
April 19th, 2026 04:36
Memories One
sorenbarrett said:
When free association joins rhyme then a surreal mix flows as a rap. Well done
April 17th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
When free association joins rhyme then a surreal mix flows as a rap. Well done
April 17th, 2026 04:14
Memories Zero
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem rhyme is the principal driving force as it rolls on in AA fashion with internal and end rhyme. Well done
April 16th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem rhyme is the principal driving force as it rolls on in AA fashion with internal and end rhyme. Well done
April 16th, 2026 04:25
Liar
sorenbarrett said:
In its repeated rhymes this poem paints a surreal picture of life. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
In its repeated rhymes this poem paints a surreal picture of life. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 04:44
Huh
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of pressure in this write where one feels pushed onward with a sword to one\'s back so to speak. Well done
April 14th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of pressure in this write where one feels pushed onward with a sword to one\'s back so to speak. Well done
April 14th, 2026 04:27
Ink
Friendship said:
Nice story. I love how you write this a short story.🤣 Enjoy the read.
April 13th, 2026 07:53
Friendship said:
Nice story. I love how you write this a short story.🤣 Enjoy the read.
April 13th, 2026 07:53
Ink
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the epoch poem in this story of a life. Well done
April 13th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the epoch poem in this story of a life. Well done
April 13th, 2026 04:22
Relax
sorenbarrett said:
There are words to another in this poem dedicated to the relationship between them. Well done
April 9th, 2026 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
There are words to another in this poem dedicated to the relationship between them. Well done
April 9th, 2026 19:23
Night
Abdullah123 said:
great write. Love the building tension with the shorter lines
April 6th, 2026 14:00
Abdullah123 said:
great write. Love the building tension with the shorter lines
April 6th, 2026 14:00
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