Comments received on poems by birdbird
Bare
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great deal of angst in this poem, feelings of fear and trembling. Raw and timorous it shakes and quivers looking for shelter.
February 20th, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great deal of angst in this poem, feelings of fear and trembling. Raw and timorous it shakes and quivers looking for shelter.
February 20th, 2026 07:24
Absurd
sorenbarrett said:
There is angry tone to this poem that flows ever downward. Nicely written
February 17th, 2026 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
There is angry tone to this poem that flows ever downward. Nicely written
February 17th, 2026 20:05
Wild Really
sorenbarrett said:
Is it gild overlaying the vulnerable or is it true gold uncovered remains the question. A wonderful metaphor. Nicely done
February 15th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Is it gild overlaying the vulnerable or is it true gold uncovered remains the question. A wonderful metaphor. Nicely done
February 15th, 2026 07:40
Alphabetti Spaghetti
Eugene S. said:
Give us the alphabet why dont ya! Love the wordplay as usual!
February 14th, 2026 08:29
Eugene S. said:
Give us the alphabet why dont ya! Love the wordplay as usual!
February 14th, 2026 08:29
Alphabetti Spaghetti
sorenbarrett said:
Marked meter becomes the emphasis in this poem. Each stanza conforming to the form. Well done
February 14th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Marked meter becomes the emphasis in this poem. Each stanza conforming to the form. Well done
February 14th, 2026 04:56
Learn
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems meant to be a song. Nicely done with repeated power and questioning of the purpose of life. Well penned
February 13th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems meant to be a song. Nicely done with repeated power and questioning of the purpose of life. Well penned
February 13th, 2026 04:39
As Feathers Fall
sorenbarrett said:
Some clever wording combined with a catchy meter that seemed at times hypnotic. Nicely written
February 12th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Some clever wording combined with a catchy meter that seemed at times hypnotic. Nicely written
February 12th, 2026 04:15
The
Eugene S. said:
To start anew. I like the image of opening a casket and breaking ground - kinda like a seed sprouting.
February 11th, 2026 19:02
Eugene S. said:
To start anew. I like the image of opening a casket and breaking ground - kinda like a seed sprouting.
February 11th, 2026 19:02
The
sorenbarrett said:
Bravely creative this poem is a style I have never seen before it seems avant guard in a surreal way it has nuances of Lewis Carrol mixed with Salvador Dali and a bit of Picasso thrown in. It is a Pollock rolled out into a Renoir. I applauded your courage and creativity
February 10th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Bravely creative this poem is a style I have never seen before it seems avant guard in a surreal way it has nuances of Lewis Carrol mixed with Salvador Dali and a bit of Picasso thrown in. It is a Pollock rolled out into a Renoir. I applauded your courage and creativity
February 10th, 2026 04:40
Broken In To
sorenbarrett said:
Pain in this poem overflows and spills down the page. Well written
February 8th, 2026 19:01
sorenbarrett said:
Pain in this poem overflows and spills down the page. Well written
February 8th, 2026 19:01
Puppeteer
Eugene S. said:
Excellent!! Far more formal than what I\'ve seen before.👍🏼☠️
February 7th, 2026 11:57
Eugene S. said:
Excellent!! Far more formal than what I\'ve seen before.👍🏼☠️
February 7th, 2026 11:57
Puppeteer
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that sees life as dangerous and precarious and must be guarded against using its own means against it. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that sees life as dangerous and precarious and must be guarded against using its own means against it. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 10:14
i\'ve
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of pain in this poem and desperation. Sad and with little hope. Well done
February 5th, 2026 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of pain in this poem and desperation. Sad and with little hope. Well done
February 5th, 2026 19:46
Lightless
sorenbarrett said:
There was a time when I was in to numerology and it seems that this poem contains a great deal of this. Nicely written with counted meter which I have not taken the time to see if it has corresponding meaning.
February 4th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
There was a time when I was in to numerology and it seems that this poem contains a great deal of this. Nicely written with counted meter which I have not taken the time to see if it has corresponding meaning.
February 4th, 2026 05:08
Stultitia
sorenbarrett said:
A great write vacillating rom the insane to the sane when the difference is nothing more than being in agreement with the majority of others. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great write vacillating rom the insane to the sane when the difference is nothing more than being in agreement with the majority of others. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 08:08
Stultitia
lunarchloedip said:
love the shift from “i want to lose all sanity” to insanity
February 3rd, 2026 07:39
lunarchloedip said:
love the shift from “i want to lose all sanity” to insanity
February 3rd, 2026 07:39
Otiosity
lunarchloedip said:
this would be great performed live! each line flows into the next very well
February 3rd, 2026 07:38
lunarchloedip said:
this would be great performed live! each line flows into the next very well
February 3rd, 2026 07:38
Otiosity
sorenbarrett said:
An existential poem where the narrator feels split and with two opposing sides a critic, an underminer there is little room for compromise. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
An existential poem where the narrator feels split and with two opposing sides a critic, an underminer there is little room for compromise. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 08:49
Help Us
lunarchloedip said:
i like the flow of this one. its less typically structured and more an unfiltered spew of emotion, very raw and honest, very much what we need more of. thanks for sharing, really enjoyed!
February 1st, 2026 09:51
lunarchloedip said:
i like the flow of this one. its less typically structured and more an unfiltered spew of emotion, very raw and honest, very much what we need more of. thanks for sharing, really enjoyed!
February 1st, 2026 09:51
Help Us
sorenbarrett said:
A cry in the dark, savage and primal it screams in pain. Well written with a sense of disarray spreading itself across the page as a child spreads juice on the table. Lovely
February 1st, 2026 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
A cry in the dark, savage and primal it screams in pain. Well written with a sense of disarray spreading itself across the page as a child spreads juice on the table. Lovely
February 1st, 2026 09:17
Help Us
Thomas W Case said:
This is a raw howl against the machine—rage, beauty, and exhaustion tangled together without flinching.
It’s messy on purpose, and that sprawl feels honest, like someone refusing to go quietly while the system tightens its grip.
February 1st, 2026 07:36
Thomas W Case said:
This is a raw howl against the machine—rage, beauty, and exhaustion tangled together without flinching.
It’s messy on purpose, and that sprawl feels honest, like someone refusing to go quietly while the system tightens its grip.
February 1st, 2026 07:36
