Comments received on poems by mylastwrites
The War Machine
sorenbarrett said:
War no one wins only survives and it seems that in loosing the powerful survive as the US has in Korea, Vietnam, Afghanistan well written
September 16th, 2026 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
War no one wins only survives and it seems that in loosing the powerful survive as the US has in Korea, Vietnam, Afghanistan well written
September 16th, 2026 13:30
There\'s No Way
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write about love lost. Nicely written
September 15th, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write about love lost. Nicely written
September 15th, 2026 16:27
Temptations
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point it speaks of loss due to temptation and indeed it is true.
September 14th, 2026 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point it speaks of loss due to temptation and indeed it is true.
September 14th, 2026 12:17
A Constant Reminder
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of anguish that seems will never end yet all things have an ending even if it is back where it starts again.
September 12th, 2026 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of anguish that seems will never end yet all things have an ending even if it is back where it starts again.
September 12th, 2026 15:24
The People
mylastwrites said:
Thank you for your comment. It\'s from my growing up days in the 60\'s.
September 12th, 2026 13:15
mylastwrites said:
Thank you for your comment. It\'s from my growing up days in the 60\'s.
September 12th, 2026 13:15
The People
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of defiance and drawing the line. Well done
September 11th, 2026 16:24
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of defiance and drawing the line. Well done
September 11th, 2026 16:24
Cycle Broken
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic statement of not following an example that was bad. Well said
September 10th, 2026 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic statement of not following an example that was bad. Well said
September 10th, 2026 14:40
Stronger Together
sorenbarrett said:
Well written. I love how you have taken the old sticks example and made it out of stones with good rhyme. Very nicely done
September 9th, 2026 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
Well written. I love how you have taken the old sticks example and made it out of stones with good rhyme. Very nicely done
September 9th, 2026 16:02
Life Learnings
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis true and in injustice we find life. A good write of progression.
September 8th, 2026 18:32
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis true and in injustice we find life. A good write of progression.
September 8th, 2026 18:32
Older
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m a senior and it is true but I accepted it long ago and don\'t fight it. A fun poem with good rhyme and meter. Well done
September 7th, 2026 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m a senior and it is true but I accepted it long ago and don\'t fight it. A fun poem with good rhyme and meter. Well done
September 7th, 2026 18:09
I\'m Better Off
sorenbarrett said:
Self recognition and the decision that solitude is better a good write
September 6th, 2026 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Self recognition and the decision that solitude is better a good write
September 6th, 2026 15:44
Spoken, Broken, No More Hoping
sorenbarrett said:
Early decisions lead to unhappiness in this poem. Well written
September 5th, 2026 17:55
sorenbarrett said:
Early decisions lead to unhappiness in this poem. Well written
September 5th, 2026 17:55
Nuclear War?
Doggerel Dave said:
Gave me a flashback to the sixties. Good question, good write.
September 1st, 2026 02:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Gave me a flashback to the sixties. Good question, good write.
September 1st, 2026 02:10
Nuclear War?
sorenbarrett said:
A tough question well put. I believe it may happen.
August 31st, 2026 15:06
sorenbarrett said:
A tough question well put. I believe it may happen.
August 31st, 2026 15:06
A Lasting Love
sorenbarrett said:
Time is accelerated when someone is close to death. Well written
August 30th, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
Time is accelerated when someone is close to death. Well written
August 30th, 2026 14:38
Life
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you all diminished but not yet disabled. Aging is a long process. Well done
August 29th, 2026 16:49
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you all diminished but not yet disabled. Aging is a long process. Well done
August 29th, 2026 16:49
Adios
sorenbarrett said:
A child\'s chant becomes more in this write and an invitation to leave. Well done
August 28th, 2026 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
A child\'s chant becomes more in this write and an invitation to leave. Well done
August 28th, 2026 13:53
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