Comments received on poems by mylastwrites



A Common Man
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely written it speaks for most of us. Nicely done

October 19th, 2026 16:41

Life, Then Death
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely written

October 13th, 2026 19:19

Test of Time
sorenbarrett said:

We all move on with our lives and those that separate it is nice to know that they are still friends whether by us or not. Nicely done

October 8th, 2026 16:02

An Action Regretted
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful a poem where love resides with regrets and the two are married giving birth to nostalgia. A fave

October 6th, 2026 20:18

It\'s Over
Kevin Hulme said:

Good One.

October 4th, 2026 18:58

It\'s Over
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and well written so brief the poem and the relationship

October 4th, 2026 15:26

Love Stays Strong
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely love poem proclaiming the importance of the other. Nicely done

October 3rd, 2026 15:23

Love, Joy and Happiness
Paul Bell said:

Amazing little organ that stays hidden, but controls all.
We probably don\'t praise it enough.

October 2nd, 2026 07:47

Love, Joy and Happiness
sorenbarrett said:

A good cover of the heart\'s dealings. Nicely written

October 1st, 2026 19:36

Kind Eyes
sorenbarrett said:

Words spoken to another from whom we hear no response. It is a call to action to be themself and do as they please. Nicely written with emotion.

September 30th, 2026 17:03

Mr. Knot Hole
orchidee said:

Good write M.

September 30th, 2026 02:43

Mr. Knot Hole
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read with a message. I must admit that I would find it hard to take advice from a knot hole. Good write

September 29th, 2026 21:03

I Wish You Had Been The First
sorenbarrett said:

Clever build up in this poem and nice finish. Well done

September 22nd, 2026 20:08

The War Machine
Friendship said:

Nicely written

September 16th, 2026 16:55

The War Machine
sorenbarrett said:

War no one wins only survives and it seems that in loosing the powerful survive as the US has in Korea, Vietnam, Afghanistan well written

September 16th, 2026 13:30

There\'s No Way
mylastwrites said:

Thank you.

September 16th, 2026 12:25

There\'s No Way
sorenbarrett said:

A sad write about love lost. Nicely written

September 15th, 2026 16:27

Temptations
mylastwrites said:

Thank you for reading.

September 15th, 2026 15:28

Temptations
sorenbarrett said:

Short and to the point it speaks of loss due to temptation and indeed it is true.

September 14th, 2026 12:17

A Constant Reminder
mylastwrites said:

Thank you.

September 14th, 2026 11:46

A Constant Reminder
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of anguish that seems will never end yet all things have an ending even if it is back where it starts again.

September 12th, 2026 15:24

The People
mylastwrites said:

Thank you for your comment. It\'s from my growing up days in the 60\'s.

September 12th, 2026 13:15

The People
sorenbarrett said:

A statement of defiance and drawing the line. Well done

September 11th, 2026 16:24

Cycle Broken
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic statement of not following an example that was bad. Well said

September 10th, 2026 14:40

Stronger Together
mylastwrites said:

Thank you.

September 10th, 2026 13:11

Stronger Together
sorenbarrett said:

Well written. I love how you have taken the old sticks example and made it out of stones with good rhyme. Very nicely done

September 9th, 2026 16:02

Life Learnings
mylastwrites said:

Thank you.

September 9th, 2026 14:53

Life Learnings
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed tis true and in injustice we find life. A good write of progression.

September 8th, 2026 18:32

Older
sorenbarrett said:

I\'m a senior and it is true but I accepted it long ago and don\'t fight it. A fun poem with good rhyme and meter. Well done

September 7th, 2026 18:09

I\'m Better Off
Friendship said:

Nice write

September 6th, 2026 16:48

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