Comments received on poems by lezyl legaspi
Random Thoughts
baj-a said:
I love random thoughts! such an interesting mind! and a very good poem!
March 21st, 2013 08:20
baj-a said:
I love random thoughts! such an interesting mind! and a very good poem!
March 21st, 2013 08:20
Random Thoughts
sokibgb said:
I like your poem so very much. Please keep on writing. Hopr to read more of your poetry.
Love, soki
February 25th, 2013 12:33
sokibgb said:
I like your poem so very much. Please keep on writing. Hopr to read more of your poetry.
Love, soki
February 25th, 2013 12:33
Dear friend
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! It is very sweet! I love this portrait of true friendship....it is so lovely and comforting! Beautiful!
January 11th, 2011 14:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! It is very sweet! I love this portrait of true friendship....it is so lovely and comforting! Beautiful!
January 11th, 2011 14:24
Too afraid
lezyl legaspi said:
i don't know how i made this poem.i just wrote it at times when nothing's alright in my life. at times when i'm totally broken and so alone. i just pour out all my thoughts and what i feel and there it is!
January 11th, 2011 03:57
lezyl legaspi said:
i don't know how i made this poem.i just wrote it at times when nothing's alright in my life. at times when i'm totally broken and so alone. i just pour out all my thoughts and what i feel and there it is!
January 11th, 2011 03:57
Sometimes
lezyl legaspi said:
thanks to all who commented on my poems. i really appreciate it!
January 11th, 2011 02:54
lezyl legaspi said:
thanks to all who commented on my poems. i really appreciate it!
January 11th, 2011 02:54
Too afraid
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. And you are not alone. It is what is required in the social world, where so much is affected and we cannot be ourselves lest we be trampled. It is so sad, but it is so real. La, home is practically the only place to be yourself, and sometimes not even there. Don't worry you sound like you show a successful face, when you are crumbling. And that's just how it goes in society. Excellent. You've expressed it very well.
January 7th, 2011 23:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. And you are not alone. It is what is required in the social world, where so much is affected and we cannot be ourselves lest we be trampled. It is so sad, but it is so real. La, home is practically the only place to be yourself, and sometimes not even there. Don't worry you sound like you show a successful face, when you are crumbling. And that's just how it goes in society. Excellent. You've expressed it very well.
January 7th, 2011 23:00
Sometimes
gerrylegister said:
Beautiful expression, sometimes we forget to be thankful
January 7th, 2011 18:32
gerrylegister said:
Beautiful expression, sometimes we forget to be thankful
January 7th, 2011 18:32
Sometimes
jerrypat said:
I'm a first timer also. Nice to meet you. I liked your poem. It chased the old story of life and what to do about it about as well as most have been able to do.
A couple of typos, but otherwise, this is a easy one to read and some pretty good advice emits from it.
January 6th, 2011 22:09
jerrypat said:
I'm a first timer also. Nice to meet you. I liked your poem. It chased the old story of life and what to do about it about as well as most have been able to do.
A couple of typos, but otherwise, this is a easy one to read and some pretty good advice emits from it.
January 6th, 2011 22:09
Sometimes
Zwinkele said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Its good to see a fresh poem that has a nice rhythm but no rhymes. I felt that it flowed very well, also!
January 6th, 2011 16:37
Zwinkele said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Its good to see a fresh poem that has a nice rhythm but no rhymes. I felt that it flowed very well, also!
January 6th, 2011 16:37
Sometimes
Cheeky Missy said:
Please don't be offended....but he that trusts in his own heart is a fool,....so I take issue briefly with the second stanza. But overall, ya, the advice to keep hanging in there, sometimes it prospers and sometimes not.....don't "throw in the towel" on life so easily, eh?
January 6th, 2011 12:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Please don't be offended....but he that trusts in his own heart is a fool,....so I take issue briefly with the second stanza. But overall, ya, the advice to keep hanging in there, sometimes it prospers and sometimes not.....don't "throw in the towel" on life so easily, eh?
January 6th, 2011 12:32
