Comments received on poems by Kebiin
A Prayer for the Day
Aamina said:
Let\'s hope that prayer is accepted for everyone. Lovely poem =)
April 17th, 2017 06:16
Aamina said:
Let\'s hope that prayer is accepted for everyone. Lovely poem =)
April 17th, 2017 06:16
A Prayer for the Day
Goldfinch60 said:
When you see a rainbow remember Gods Covenant with us all.
Good write.
April 17th, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
When you see a rainbow remember Gods Covenant with us all.
Good write.
April 17th, 2017 00:53
To My Dearest Friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and an obviously very good friend.
March 9th, 2017 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and an obviously very good friend.
March 9th, 2017 02:53
To My Dearest Friend
Augustus said:
The choice of your words are very pleasant on the ear and easy for the tongue to form. It is simple but profound. The message is clear.
March 8th, 2017 18:37
Augustus said:
The choice of your words are very pleasant on the ear and easy for the tongue to form. It is simple but profound. The message is clear.
March 8th, 2017 18:37
Bright
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Good friends are always there for you through thick and thin.
February 24th, 2017 16:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Good friends are always there for you through thick and thin.
February 24th, 2017 16:10
Step: One
Tony36 said:
The force is strong with this one. Sorry been watching Star Wars. Great write
February 17th, 2017 17:38
Tony36 said:
The force is strong with this one. Sorry been watching Star Wars. Great write
February 17th, 2017 17:38
He Who Writes
Augustus said:
I guess we\'ll be writers and not fighters. Nice.
December 14th, 2016 00:59
Augustus said:
I guess we\'ll be writers and not fighters. Nice.
December 14th, 2016 00:59
Wounds
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI KEBIIN - Are you from SALEM MASS or OREGON ? Loved your poem and the message it brings ! In the 21st C if we stand up for God and Christianity we are open tp persecution - Cutting - Ripping - Stoning - Its all in the BIBLE and we really are in the last days ! Thanks for caring and sharing - BRIAN
May 24th, 2016 14:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI KEBIIN - Are you from SALEM MASS or OREGON ? Loved your poem and the message it brings ! In the 21st C if we stand up for God and Christianity we are open tp persecution - Cutting - Ripping - Stoning - Its all in the BIBLE and we really are in the last days ! Thanks for caring and sharing - BRIAN
May 24th, 2016 14:37
A Message to My Friends
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT POEM - KEBIIN - Full of gratitude. It is only when we are down that we find who our true friends really are ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 20th, 2016 15:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT POEM - KEBIIN - Full of gratitude. It is only when we are down that we find who our true friends really are ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 20th, 2016 15:42
Polar
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KEBIIN - An interesting first poem. It's a "free verse" poem but it has great rhythm because of its meter ! I like the title because the content of the poem is "polarised". In many situations we can have both hate and compassion and your poem explores this. The poem you have posted is well worthy of this site so please post MORE ! BRIAN
May 13th, 2016 10:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KEBIIN - An interesting first poem. It's a "free verse" poem but it has great rhythm because of its meter ! I like the title because the content of the poem is "polarised". In many situations we can have both hate and compassion and your poem explores this. The poem you have posted is well worthy of this site so please post MORE ! BRIAN
May 13th, 2016 10:20
