A Journey to Luna-cy
Summersounds68 said:

Lysis, I believe there is always a light at the end of a tunnel. Your poem provides that light. Thank you for dedicating your poem to those who need that flashlight to help them surface beyond their lunacy. ~ Sonia

June 7th, 2016 22:01

MAYBE......
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

MAYBE LYSIS ! I love imponderable poems which ask unanswerable questions ! OMG - I love TIGERS and that is my No.1 for reincarnation their markings are awesome and I do love CATS as well ! I am six foot (but not quite ten !). I love our discourse through poetry so in that sense we are Poetic Soul Mates two sides of a Kentucky Quarter ! Thanks for sharin' an' carin' Yours BRIAN

June 6th, 2016 10:09

ALMOST.....
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS LYSIS - for another very enigmatic poem and thanks for your comment which "almost" explains it. I love th nuances in your beautifully structured poem. I "almost" met the Love of my Life on a London Tube Escalator ! Alas she was in the ascendancy and as usual I was descending. Thanks for sharing - lovely ! Yours BRIAN

June 5th, 2016 08:38

A Journey to Luna-cy
lysistrata said:

I had an espresso gelato and then ice lemon tea,because it is too hot here....
And realized that my literary mentor,Elizabeth Bishop,has written "Insomnia". It is 10.000 times better.
Damn,I should have read it first. But how much could a single mind achieve during a lifetime?!

June 3rd, 2016 16:39

Remembering the Island of Treason
Berthold Lippel said:

I never thought to memorize waves
but of course
A good poem: yes, I have felt like that.
A great poem:yes, I have never felt like that.
Lysistrata writes great poems

June 2nd, 2016 14:19

AromaTherapy
Berthold Lippel said:

I had to look up Bukowski
now I understand
the slob
quick, a shower

June 1st, 2016 16:47

George
Berthold Lippel said:

I love it. I sang reciting it. But I am confused. How much is yours or how much the original song? Bert is easily confused...

May 30th, 2016 16:06

George
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing LYSIS - Love the pathos in a perfectly structured poem. The CD did not download - what was it ? I'll check on YOU TUBE - Yours BRIAN

May 30th, 2016 09:36

Mummy\'s dirty secret
OnMySoul said:

Awesome.

May 30th, 2016 09:14

Mummy\'s dirty secret
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Oooooooooh LYSIS - the dreaded Morning Sickness another little unpleasantry we mere Men don't have to endure ! We all want to be Daddies someday but we forget about period pains - pregnancy - puking and production. We just put the order in and hope the nine months passes quickly and as painless as possible. They say if Men had babies no family would have more than one child ! Thanks for caring & sharing - BRIAN

May 29th, 2016 07:32