Comments received on poems by lysistrata
Medley for a Bone Box
Augustus said:
Wow. The mixing of a novel and Greek mythology and dance.I must admit I\'d rather not take my chances with the Symplegades. I can hear my bones crushing already. Nicely done.
November 6th, 2016 11:01
Augustus said:
Wow. The mixing of a novel and Greek mythology and dance.I must admit I\'d rather not take my chances with the Symplegades. I can hear my bones crushing already. Nicely done.
November 6th, 2016 11:01
Dark Necessities
Augustus said:
I am not familiar with the writer or painter but now am intrigued.
October 13th, 2016 18:37
Augustus said:
I am not familiar with the writer or painter but now am intrigued.
October 13th, 2016 18:37
A Virgin and her Bloke
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
very interesting piece....different...I like it
September 19th, 2016 22:35
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
very interesting piece....different...I like it
September 19th, 2016 22:35
A Virgin and her Bloke
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LYSI for a very ingenious poem about the way of a Man with a Maid. Each verse takes us closer to the climax. Thanks for sharing. Please check my Angel Poem and my Fusion Poem ~ DO YOU BELIEVE IN ANGELS. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
September 19th, 2016 18:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LYSI for a very ingenious poem about the way of a Man with a Maid. Each verse takes us closer to the climax. Thanks for sharing. Please check my Angel Poem and my Fusion Poem ~ DO YOU BELIEVE IN ANGELS. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
September 19th, 2016 18:13
The Sleep of Reason Produces Monsters
Shahla Latifi said:
Thank you for this lovely poem.
September 8th, 2016 18:04
Shahla Latifi said:
Thank you for this lovely poem.
September 8th, 2016 18:04
The Sleep of Reason Produces Monsters
Reivax Camlost said:
The lament of one wishing for sleep to come, and bestow the mercy of escape from the weight of reality.
Reminiscent, somewhat, of the way in which thoughts, words, sights, sounds, smells, and colors seem to become an ever-repeating montage of confusion, when one becomes fatigued enough.
September 4th, 2016 08:57
Reivax Camlost said:
The lament of one wishing for sleep to come, and bestow the mercy of escape from the weight of reality.
Reminiscent, somewhat, of the way in which thoughts, words, sights, sounds, smells, and colors seem to become an ever-repeating montage of confusion, when one becomes fatigued enough.
September 4th, 2016 08:57
Villa(i)n Elle
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LYSI ~ Poetic rules of form and function are always meant to be broken because all true poets are FREE SPIRITS ! Love the visual MISTER POGGY rather than Miss Piggy. I will analyse the form later ~ love all modes which have repetition ! We all use "truthful lies" when we are in a corner (even me !) Thanks for caring ~ Love as always BRIAN If you have tome please check my latest poem HAPPINESS ~ Thanks B
September 1st, 2016 12:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LYSI ~ Poetic rules of form and function are always meant to be broken because all true poets are FREE SPIRITS ! Love the visual MISTER POGGY rather than Miss Piggy. I will analyse the form later ~ love all modes which have repetition ! We all use "truthful lies" when we are in a corner (even me !) Thanks for caring ~ Love as always BRIAN If you have tome please check my latest poem HAPPINESS ~ Thanks B
September 1st, 2016 12:44
HOPE
JohnThomas said:
Great poem. Great imagery.
As Jack would say, you have IT!
August 23rd, 2016 16:23
JohnThomas said:
Great poem. Great imagery.
As Jack would say, you have IT!
August 23rd, 2016 16:23
Abyss Road
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are wicked LYSI ~ thanks for another brilliant poem. I live in a flat so I can empathise with your Abyss Road cohort. All of us in FLATLAND have them and try to keep sane ! Racist bags ~ Female flashers called Nickoless ~ Veterns ~ Stalkers ~ Wankers ~ All the lonely people ~ where do they all come from ? Maybe I'll join you in the Green Fields ! Thanks for sharing love the art deco visual ! Yours BRIAN I have a posted a new FUSION ~ MY FAVORITE TIPPLE
August 22nd, 2016 07:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are wicked LYSI ~ thanks for another brilliant poem. I live in a flat so I can empathise with your Abyss Road cohort. All of us in FLATLAND have them and try to keep sane ! Racist bags ~ Female flashers called Nickoless ~ Veterns ~ Stalkers ~ Wankers ~ All the lonely people ~ where do they all come from ? Maybe I'll join you in the Green Fields ! Thanks for sharing love the art deco visual ! Yours BRIAN I have a posted a new FUSION ~ MY FAVORITE TIPPLE
August 22nd, 2016 07:44
Abyss Road
Seeker said:
Excellent write, bravo!! A very refreshing and imaginative dialogue. I wanted more.
August 22nd, 2016 06:11
Seeker said:
Excellent write, bravo!! A very refreshing and imaginative dialogue. I wanted more.
August 22nd, 2016 06:11
BANANA
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very true LYSI "Where oppression and indifference (to the poor & needy) abounds ~ There does GRACE much more abound. The media only reports the problems it does not highlight the solutions. It preaches BAD NEWS (refugees drowning in the Med.etc) It ignores the good news about Communities (including my own) all over the World who are offering Asylum and TLC. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
August 16th, 2016 13:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very true LYSI "Where oppression and indifference (to the poor & needy) abounds ~ There does GRACE much more abound. The media only reports the problems it does not highlight the solutions. It preaches BAD NEWS (refugees drowning in the Med.etc) It ignores the good news about Communities (including my own) all over the World who are offering Asylum and TLC. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
August 16th, 2016 13:53
A Harmonious TriAngle
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LYSI ~ very Pythagorian ! We often in life find ourselves some isosceles ~ some right angled ~ some wrong angled ! PHEOBUS & PHOBUS a very unharmonius pair. I can see why they need you to intervene HARMONIA. I am an APPEASER and try to bring harmony into phobic situations and shed a little sweetness and light wherever there is bitterness and darkness ! Love it thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 14th, 2016 12:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LYSI ~ very Pythagorian ! We often in life find ourselves some isosceles ~ some right angled ~ some wrong angled ! PHEOBUS & PHOBUS a very unharmonius pair. I can see why they need you to intervene HARMONIA. I am an APPEASER and try to bring harmony into phobic situations and shed a little sweetness and light wherever there is bitterness and darkness ! Love it thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 14th, 2016 12:04
To a Dragon and a Phoenix
SheWasTheSun said:
This one makes me think. Love it. Great writing as usual Lysi.
July 29th, 2016 23:16
SheWasTheSun said:
This one makes me think. Love it. Great writing as usual Lysi.
July 29th, 2016 23:16
To a Dragon and a Phoenix
willyweed said:
Thank You For the birthday poem!
its wonderful and wow. ww
July 28th, 2016 10:08
willyweed said:
Thank You For the birthday poem!
its wonderful and wow. ww
July 28th, 2016 10:08
To a Dragon and a Phoenix
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I AM A DRAGON ACTUALLY...NICE JOB
July 28th, 2016 09:03
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I AM A DRAGON ACTUALLY...NICE JOB
July 28th, 2016 09:03
No Progress
Survivor48 said:
Wow, great rhyming poem with good metaphors as well. excellent job!
July 23rd, 2016 18:04
Survivor48 said:
Wow, great rhyming poem with good metaphors as well. excellent job!
July 23rd, 2016 18:04
LULLABY I
willyweed said:
rock a-bye baby. very gentle and heartfelt. beautiful work my dear!
July 19th, 2016 19:40
willyweed said:
rock a-bye baby. very gentle and heartfelt. beautiful work my dear!
July 19th, 2016 19:40
LULLABY I
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW LYSI ~ This beautiful and very personal and sentimental ! Children are a blessing from the Lord ! Thanks for sharing ~ If ever I have a Son I want one just like yours ! BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 07:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW LYSI ~ This beautiful and very personal and sentimental ! Children are a blessing from the Lord ! Thanks for sharing ~ If ever I have a Son I want one just like yours ! BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 07:22
APATHEIA
SheWasTheSun said:
Hi old friend, I love this! I know I haven't been around lately but I wanted to give this poem some recognition because it deserves it.
July 13th, 2016 09:25
SheWasTheSun said:
Hi old friend, I love this! I know I haven't been around lately but I wanted to give this poem some recognition because it deserves it.
July 13th, 2016 09:25
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