Comments received on poems by Black Willow
My Hair
sorenbarrett said:
Be your own person and please oneself first comes through strong in this poem Nicely written
October 27th, 2026 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
Be your own person and please oneself first comes through strong in this poem Nicely written
October 27th, 2026 12:02
Fools Alone Are the Ones That Remain
Novaselic said:
I believe the fools left behind may be folks who are wealthy and privileged stay behind continue living their luxuries and those who bought the tickets were those who worked endlessly to support themselves or their families just to survive and believe that in the end, death could provide them comfort by taking away their pain. That’s interpretation but a wonderful poem nonetheless 😊
October 26th, 2026 09:59
Novaselic said:
I believe the fools left behind may be folks who are wealthy and privileged stay behind continue living their luxuries and those who bought the tickets were those who worked endlessly to support themselves or their families just to survive and believe that in the end, death could provide them comfort by taking away their pain. That’s interpretation but a wonderful poem nonetheless 😊
October 26th, 2026 09:59
Fools Alone Are the Ones That Remain
sorenbarrett said:
A solemn write of life and death and what the world has in store. Nicely penned
October 26th, 2026 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
A solemn write of life and death and what the world has in store. Nicely penned
October 26th, 2026 08:33
Purpose
Paul Bell said:
That is a lot of blood you\'re shedding.
In saying that, we\'re all bleeding for this world.
October 20th, 2026 05:49
Paul Bell said:
That is a lot of blood you\'re shedding.
In saying that, we\'re all bleeding for this world.
October 20th, 2026 05:49
Purpose
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic gesture of offering. Nicely condensed into a few lines. Well done
October 20th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic gesture of offering. Nicely condensed into a few lines. Well done
October 20th, 2026 04:23
The Abuser
sorenbarrett said:
Although not necessarily sexual there is a vicious cycle of abuser and abused carried on from one generation to the next. This poem leaves this feel. Well done.
October 16th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Although not necessarily sexual there is a vicious cycle of abuser and abused carried on from one generation to the next. This poem leaves this feel. Well done.
October 16th, 2026 04:21
The Way I Love
sorenbarrett said:
A somber write in most mature words for a seventeen year old. You may find more than grief returned.
October 15th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A somber write in most mature words for a seventeen year old. You may find more than grief returned.
October 15th, 2026 04:40
Sad
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the personification of a word makes it feel more real. Nicely done
October 14th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the personification of a word makes it feel more real. Nicely done
October 14th, 2026 04:41
Yellow and Blue
sorenbarrett said:
My attempts to see metaphor in this failed and I have to take it as literal and melancholically and nostalgically so. Nicely written
October 13th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
My attempts to see metaphor in this failed and I have to take it as literal and melancholically and nostalgically so. Nicely written
October 13th, 2026 04:39
Atom
sorenbarrett said:
Here the atomic chemistry of love. Nicely put in attraction and valences. Well done
October 11th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Here the atomic chemistry of love. Nicely put in attraction and valences. Well done
October 11th, 2026 04:43
The Fight
sorenbarrett said:
A talk to one\'s self as observations roll on out. Nicely done.
October 10th, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
A talk to one\'s self as observations roll on out. Nicely done.
October 10th, 2026 08:45
Communication
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper meaning lies in this tea party of scarlet color. Well done
October 9th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper meaning lies in this tea party of scarlet color. Well done
October 9th, 2026 04:05
Fantasy
Paul Bell said:
Still remember some of my nightmares.
How I survived I don\'t know, 3 headed monsters chasing me, it was brutal.
Give you a fav for reminding me.
October 8th, 2026 07:24
Paul Bell said:
Still remember some of my nightmares.
How I survived I don\'t know, 3 headed monsters chasing me, it was brutal.
Give you a fav for reminding me.
October 8th, 2026 07:24
Fantasy
sorenbarrett said:
Fantasy indeed and a young child is tucked in after a nightmare. Well written
October 8th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Fantasy indeed and a young child is tucked in after a nightmare. Well written
October 8th, 2026 04:02
