Comments received on poems by The 2 A.M Writer
Inertia
lysistrata said:
My answer through truth & facts is that you are gettting IN return NOT any stone,but 'The Philosopher's Stone'!🎓
Think,think,think...
August 21st, 2016 23:34
lysistrata said:
My answer through truth & facts is that you are gettting IN return NOT any stone,but 'The Philosopher's Stone'!🎓
Think,think,think...
August 21st, 2016 23:34
Inertia
rrodriguez said:
Nicely written! I enjoyed it very much. It has a flow and rhymes very well.
August 21st, 2016 21:50
rrodriguez said:
Nicely written! I enjoyed it very much. It has a flow and rhymes very well.
August 21st, 2016 21:50
Head Trip
lysistrata said:
Have you been listening "Alice in Chains" and their "Man in the Box"?
August 3rd, 2016 09:11
lysistrata said:
Have you been listening "Alice in Chains" and their "Man in the Box"?
August 3rd, 2016 09:11
Mirror Unfamiliar
Solitary Sandpiper said:
This is skilled writing. It toes a line between sadness and whimsy that makes it very satisfying to read.
August 2nd, 2016 21:04
Solitary Sandpiper said:
This is skilled writing. It toes a line between sadness and whimsy that makes it very satisfying to read.
August 2nd, 2016 21:04
Ground Level Peace
willyweed said:
we should all strive to reach our highest self don't stand still. I like the way you put this together. ww
July 27th, 2016 18:55
willyweed said:
we should all strive to reach our highest self don't stand still. I like the way you put this together. ww
July 27th, 2016 18:55
Wrong turn Right
Survivor48 said:
great free verse poem with very good metaphors. has a powerful message as well. excellent job!
July 23rd, 2016 18:07
Survivor48 said:
great free verse poem with very good metaphors. has a powerful message as well. excellent job!
July 23rd, 2016 18:07
Wrong turn Right
AAA said:
this work is so beautifully written!!! i love the way it sounds and the idea behind it is perfect
July 22nd, 2016 23:31
AAA said:
this work is so beautifully written!!! i love the way it sounds and the idea behind it is perfect
July 22nd, 2016 23:31
Close to me
rrodriguez said:
Read... can your needs be met... yes, the poem is smooth.
July 21st, 2016 06:41
rrodriguez said:
Read... can your needs be met... yes, the poem is smooth.
July 21st, 2016 06:41
Clawing
willyweed said:
you can find comfort in God.
again this is well written. ! ww
July 19th, 2016 19:44
willyweed said:
you can find comfort in God.
again this is well written. ! ww
July 19th, 2016 19:44
Clawing
lysistrata said:
Comfort should be given free,but Trust is something that needs to be earned.
July 19th, 2016 13:12
lysistrata said:
Comfort should be given free,but Trust is something that needs to be earned.
July 19th, 2016 13:12
Writing Exercise #4
lysistrata said:
Of course this is all goddamn Tiring.
U are an Alphard...
July 14th, 2016 15:33
lysistrata said:
Of course this is all goddamn Tiring.
U are an Alphard...
July 14th, 2016 15:33
Robotic.
lysistrata said:
"Neither in the sky or down in the dirt"=?
Apathy is NOT the answer, but Agnosticism is a better path than military Atheism.
You are getting close to be nominated...
July 14th, 2016 07:11
lysistrata said:
"Neither in the sky or down in the dirt"=?
Apathy is NOT the answer, but Agnosticism is a better path than military Atheism.
You are getting close to be nominated...
July 14th, 2016 07:11
Stale.
willyweed said:
yeah sometimes it all don't seem worth while, I hope you can spackle. nice work ww
July 12th, 2016 18:00
willyweed said:
yeah sometimes it all don't seem worth while, I hope you can spackle. nice work ww
July 12th, 2016 18:00
Writing Exercise #3
lysistrata said:
Don't beg me . .Thanks my friend.
I enjoyed your metaphors and antithesis.
July 12th, 2016 11:58
lysistrata said:
Don't beg me . .Thanks my friend.
I enjoyed your metaphors and antithesis.
July 12th, 2016 11:58
Experiment, Pump, Scream, Paradise, and repeat
lysistrata said:
We need to fry your brain and tongue
Boil your eyes and lung
Not to transcend further the damage,
Right?
You started at 2 am and finished at 3 am?! I see you enjoyed yourself...
July 9th, 2016 12:07
lysistrata said:
We need to fry your brain and tongue
Boil your eyes and lung
Not to transcend further the damage,
Right?
You started at 2 am and finished at 3 am?! I see you enjoyed yourself...
July 9th, 2016 12:07
Random exercise #2
sickmind666 said:
I really enjoyed this writing exercise of yours. I have never seen any else's writing exercise before, and I find it rather interesting to see what runs rampant through another writers head.
July 9th, 2016 01:57
sickmind666 said:
I really enjoyed this writing exercise of yours. I have never seen any else's writing exercise before, and I find it rather interesting to see what runs rampant through another writers head.
July 9th, 2016 01:57
Pure?
lysistrata said:
No serious meaning?! This is Damn serious with or without the music inspiration....
Don't leave me hanging on - Give me the music.
July 7th, 2016 15:55
lysistrata said:
No serious meaning?! This is Damn serious with or without the music inspiration....
Don't leave me hanging on - Give me the music.
July 7th, 2016 15:55
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