Comments received on poems by The 2 A.M Writer
I Saw Myself Today Again, Again, And Again
orchidee said:
You have marked this as 18+, but it\'s disturbing. Also a bit ambiguous in places.
June 6th, 2017 14:23
orchidee said:
You have marked this as 18+, but it\'s disturbing. Also a bit ambiguous in places.
June 6th, 2017 14:23
Stay Gold
swingline said:
Loss of inspiration ? Go to the store for more . Along the way your eyes are fine tuned to the reality around . A lone leaf lofty in the lucid air . The bag lady shuffling through her collection of junk giving her a satisfaction we will never know . The hard to open front door of the store grudgingly giving in . The \"Hello\" from a patron passing you by . Then you by some beer .
June 4th, 2017 12:22
swingline said:
Loss of inspiration ? Go to the store for more . Along the way your eyes are fine tuned to the reality around . A lone leaf lofty in the lucid air . The bag lady shuffling through her collection of junk giving her a satisfaction we will never know . The hard to open front door of the store grudgingly giving in . The \"Hello\" from a patron passing you by . Then you by some beer .
June 4th, 2017 12:22
Stay Gold
Augustus said:
Slipping indeed, but such a neat slide through the ages. May kindred spirits find and guide you.
June 4th, 2017 12:10
Augustus said:
Slipping indeed, but such a neat slide through the ages. May kindred spirits find and guide you.
June 4th, 2017 12:10
Not Sure
swingline said:
I\'m not sure either . Turning wine into water would be a greater miracle .
May 20th, 2017 19:34
swingline said:
I\'m not sure either . Turning wine into water would be a greater miracle .
May 20th, 2017 19:34
I Have No F*cking Title Today (Free Write)
kevin browne said:
too stoned dude...!
May 11th, 2017 21:24
kevin browne said:
too stoned dude...!
May 11th, 2017 21:24
Chemical Cross
orchidee said:
Thoughtful write. Now, \'religion\' was the problem in Jesus\' day too. It started off the events leading up to Easter. But some do it just for fanaticism, or obsession, religious or not. Or even \'possession\' of some evil spirit within them. Surely that\'s not just an old-fashioned idea of yesteryear.
April 7th, 2017 03:37
orchidee said:
Thoughtful write. Now, \'religion\' was the problem in Jesus\' day too. It started off the events leading up to Easter. But some do it just for fanaticism, or obsession, religious or not. Or even \'possession\' of some evil spirit within them. Surely that\'s not just an old-fashioned idea of yesteryear.
April 7th, 2017 03:37
Chemical Cross
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write. You are so right violence is never the answer. Why cannot we ever \"Give Peace a Chance\".
April 7th, 2017 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write. You are so right violence is never the answer. Why cannot we ever \"Give Peace a Chance\".
April 7th, 2017 01:37
Empire State Christ
illia said:
pipe dreams well that\'s a quote if ever I heard one lol, and little shits to boot, have plenty of them, I have written some stuff that might make you think, I do love a good think. your writing lets me think thankyou
March 28th, 2017 08:54
illia said:
pipe dreams well that\'s a quote if ever I heard one lol, and little shits to boot, have plenty of them, I have written some stuff that might make you think, I do love a good think. your writing lets me think thankyou
March 28th, 2017 08:54
L.B.H (The Intro)
illia said:
I read this, and I find it captivating to be honest, I like it I would like to read more, I get it, nothing we aint feeling over this way, across the pond and all that bolloks. lol x
March 28th, 2017 08:51
illia said:
I read this, and I find it captivating to be honest, I like it I would like to read more, I get it, nothing we aint feeling over this way, across the pond and all that bolloks. lol x
March 28th, 2017 08:51
Red Rose
Augustus said:
Creepy twisted. I take it you are inviting this person for dinner. Heh, heh.
February 15th, 2017 17:07
Augustus said:
Creepy twisted. I take it you are inviting this person for dinner. Heh, heh.
February 15th, 2017 17:07
Crimson
willyweed said:
you said a mouth full and it was all flowing from the river of truth
January 31st, 2017 22:41
willyweed said:
you said a mouth full and it was all flowing from the river of truth
January 31st, 2017 22:41
Yellow And Purple
Augustus said:
Portrays a sick relationship where both choose not to leave. Disturbing imagery. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 00:17
Augustus said:
Portrays a sick relationship where both choose not to leave. Disturbing imagery. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 00:17
Droning While I\'m Drowning
Augustus said:
I like the broadcast / radio/ tune in analagy in each stanza.
January 21st, 2017 10:09
Augustus said:
I like the broadcast / radio/ tune in analagy in each stanza.
January 21st, 2017 10:09
Droning While I\'m Drowning
Clark said:
Great write and also it is so important to get out of those toxic relationships no matter how hard it may be. It will be very beneficial for your future. Once again, brilliant work
January 21st, 2017 01:34
Clark said:
Great write and also it is so important to get out of those toxic relationships no matter how hard it may be. It will be very beneficial for your future. Once again, brilliant work
January 21st, 2017 01:34
T.V Static Anxiety
Augustus said:
\"don\'t even have vacancy for myself\" Great rant.
January 18th, 2017 22:30
Augustus said:
\"don\'t even have vacancy for myself\" Great rant.
January 18th, 2017 22:30
Cigarette Love Song
willyweed said:
either way you\'re moving on another piece good of work
January 16th, 2017 21:17
willyweed said:
either way you\'re moving on another piece good of work
January 16th, 2017 21:17
Cigarette Love Song
willyweed said:
while you\'re dying there don\'t take to long I \'m off cheating on you I should tell you I\'m Having another love affair. nice change in style writer
January 16th, 2017 21:03
willyweed said:
while you\'re dying there don\'t take to long I \'m off cheating on you I should tell you I\'m Having another love affair. nice change in style writer
January 16th, 2017 21:03
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