Comments received on poems by AlitaOpal
Grandpa
willyweed said:
very nice piece Alita you cant beat
a cool poppa daddio or grandpa!
love it! ww
July 13th, 2016 22:26
willyweed said:
very nice piece Alita you cant beat
a cool poppa daddio or grandpa!
love it! ww
July 13th, 2016 22:26
I will be waiting
isituorme said:
A fine poem ,showing such a strong but fragile bonds. It's good because it's resonates in my mind ,
July 12th, 2016 05:26
isituorme said:
A fine poem ,showing such a strong but fragile bonds. It's good because it's resonates in my mind ,
July 12th, 2016 05:26
waking up
willyweed said:
wonderful sentiment in this poem and it's well crafted. it reminded me of a line in one of my poems.
life and death are just the same there is only one, you lived before this life began death will only take you home,- anyway much enjoyed. peace ww
July 11th, 2016 20:04
willyweed said:
wonderful sentiment in this poem and it's well crafted. it reminded me of a line in one of my poems.
life and death are just the same there is only one, you lived before this life began death will only take you home,- anyway much enjoyed. peace ww
July 11th, 2016 20:04
waking up
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ALITA ~ Awesome visual and an awesome poem. You categorise it as Fantasy ~ but it happens often when we pass from Dreamland to the 7am alarm ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 11th, 2016 17:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ALITA ~ Awesome visual and an awesome poem. You categorise it as Fantasy ~ but it happens often when we pass from Dreamland to the 7am alarm ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 11th, 2016 17:26
I will be waiting
willyweed said:
your poem is wonderful and graceful, good flow and structure and nice rhyme, I like it! welcome aboard and write on ! ww
July 8th, 2016 15:49
willyweed said:
your poem is wonderful and graceful, good flow and structure and nice rhyme, I like it! welcome aboard and write on ! ww
July 8th, 2016 15:49
I will be waiting
AlitaOpal said:
I feel as though I am a prodigal child reuniting with my family again. I'm so blown away by the unique pieces of work published on this site. It's so beautiful and I'd like to thank YOU all for making it so..
Glad to be part of this 💐💐💐
July 8th, 2016 14:49
AlitaOpal said:
I feel as though I am a prodigal child reuniting with my family again. I'm so blown away by the unique pieces of work published on this site. It's so beautiful and I'd like to thank YOU all for making it so..
Glad to be part of this 💐💐💐
July 8th, 2016 14:49
I will be waiting
PerpetualFlowers said:
Wow, seriously this is a great poem. I apologize for not commenting earlier
July 8th, 2016 13:58
PerpetualFlowers said:
Wow, seriously this is a great poem. I apologize for not commenting earlier
July 8th, 2016 13:58
I will be waiting
AlitaOpal said:
Thank you so much Brian for your comment. It's been almost 16 years since I've picked up a pen to write again..
Today I decided to join all of you in expressing myself through the art of poetry.
I love fantasy and fantasy poems too. I've read some amazing poems posted today and I feel like I've come to the right place..
Like painting, poetry is an art where any and everything can be expressed.
Once again thank you for reading
~ Alita
July 8th, 2016 11:28
AlitaOpal said:
Thank you so much Brian for your comment. It's been almost 16 years since I've picked up a pen to write again..
Today I decided to join all of you in expressing myself through the art of poetry.
I love fantasy and fantasy poems too. I've read some amazing poems posted today and I feel like I've come to the right place..
Like painting, poetry is an art where any and everything can be expressed.
Once again thank you for reading
~ Alita
July 8th, 2016 11:28
I will be waiting
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALITA ~ BEAUTIFUL VISUAL and equally beautiful first poem. I love Fantasy and Fantasy poems. I love rhyming couplets they give a poem great rhyme and rhythm. In my experience most "love affairs" are locked and lost in fantasy. In my experience there is always also a lot of wanting and waiting and (thank God) finding ! Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2016 10:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALITA ~ BEAUTIFUL VISUAL and equally beautiful first poem. I love Fantasy and Fantasy poems. I love rhyming couplets they give a poem great rhyme and rhythm. In my experience most "love affairs" are locked and lost in fantasy. In my experience there is always also a lot of wanting and waiting and (thank God) finding ! Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2016 10:59
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