Comments received on poems by AlitaOpal
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Pop64 said:
Wonderful form and delivery in this write, all coming together well for conveying the message therein.
October 4th, 2023 08:32
Pop64 said:
Wonderful form and delivery in this write, all coming together well for conveying the message therein.
October 4th, 2023 08:32
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AlitaOpal said:
Dyslexia is another word for genius unparalleled to the status quo.. writing is a form of expression whether it is appreciated or not.. it\'s all colours to me, poetry is beautiful.. Thank you for your comment, may you continue to be creative and unique 🌹🌹🌹
October 3rd, 2023 22:14
AlitaOpal said:
Dyslexia is another word for genius unparalleled to the status quo.. writing is a form of expression whether it is appreciated or not.. it\'s all colours to me, poetry is beautiful.. Thank you for your comment, may you continue to be creative and unique 🌹🌹🌹
October 3rd, 2023 22:14
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David Wakeling said:
This is like the Spelling test I had in Year 8.I got 3 out of 10.I tried to explain that I have dyslexia so the words blurred together just like this poem.
October 3rd, 2023 22:06
David Wakeling said:
This is like the Spelling test I had in Year 8.I got 3 out of 10.I tried to explain that I have dyslexia so the words blurred together just like this poem.
October 3rd, 2023 22:06
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BlessedbyGod said:
You are absolutely correct,
We go through so much stuff, good and bad!
The reward is well worth the journey!!
God bless
October 3rd, 2023 22:02
BlessedbyGod said:
You are absolutely correct,
We go through so much stuff, good and bad!
The reward is well worth the journey!!
God bless
October 3rd, 2023 22:02
Overthinking
Bobby O said:
Engraves my mind
Such a truly creative way to relate a “strong influence “ and leads me to believe a mind that creative will successfully construct that needed place for Quiet.
Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:52
Bobby O said:
Engraves my mind
Such a truly creative way to relate a “strong influence “ and leads me to believe a mind that creative will successfully construct that needed place for Quiet.
Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:52
The process
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love, love, love this! I can feel the emotion come through! Great write! \"Coming back home, nothing\'s the same, I think I learned this life is a game.\" Beautifully written!
June 16th, 2023 18:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love, love, love this! I can feel the emotion come through! Great write! \"Coming back home, nothing\'s the same, I think I learned this life is a game.\" Beautifully written!
June 16th, 2023 18:59
Passive aggressive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh wow! Great poem! Yeah...
\"But I just smile,
Grin and bear it a while,
Why can\'t I just be me,
So afraid to be,
Happy go lucky and wild,
Like an innocent child,
Maybe I\'m just passive aggressive,\"
I totally relate! Great share! Glad you published it here! :)
April 8th, 2023 23:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh wow! Great poem! Yeah...
\"But I just smile,
Grin and bear it a while,
Why can\'t I just be me,
So afraid to be,
Happy go lucky and wild,
Like an innocent child,
Maybe I\'m just passive aggressive,\"
I totally relate! Great share! Glad you published it here! :)
April 8th, 2023 23:10
Passive aggressive
Paul Bell said:
I think in 21st century Britain we live 24/7, 365 days a year on the rollercoaster of life. This is why mental health is through the roof, people want off just to retune their brains and regain life again.
August 6th, 2022 06:24
Paul Bell said:
I think in 21st century Britain we live 24/7, 365 days a year on the rollercoaster of life. This is why mental health is through the roof, people want off just to retune their brains and regain life again.
August 6th, 2022 06:24
Digging a hole
Paul Bell said:
This is why men let women do all the work, then take the credit. I\'m coming back as a dog living next door to a bitch. (A bitch being a female dog, not actually the bitch next door. lol.)
July 26th, 2022 04:26
Paul Bell said:
This is why men let women do all the work, then take the credit. I\'m coming back as a dog living next door to a bitch. (A bitch being a female dog, not actually the bitch next door. lol.)
July 26th, 2022 04:26
Truth..
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What are the quotes, \"You shall know the truth and the truth shall set you free...\", and, \"To thine own self be true....\"? Wise words from times gone past and, here in your poem, wisdom has also revealed itself! Great write!!!
July 21st, 2022 13:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What are the quotes, \"You shall know the truth and the truth shall set you free...\", and, \"To thine own self be true....\"? Wise words from times gone past and, here in your poem, wisdom has also revealed itself! Great write!!!
July 21st, 2022 13:28
Love for life
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
life-affirmingly sincere
in your messages, goal
to infuse you readers
with that same, grounded hope
imbued, in your uplifting lines:
\'I wear vulnerability,
No longer cynically,
But with trust,
Living life is a MUST!\'
Amen!
(thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
July 21st, 2022 00:21
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
life-affirmingly sincere
in your messages, goal
to infuse you readers
with that same, grounded hope
imbued, in your uplifting lines:
\'I wear vulnerability,
No longer cynically,
But with trust,
Living life is a MUST!\'
Amen!
(thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
July 21st, 2022 00:21
My first time
Neville said:
this is a good example of why I fell in love with poetry .. and what a delightful introduction to your posts here at MPS .... Neville
July 20th, 2022 14:44
Neville said:
this is a good example of why I fell in love with poetry .. and what a delightful introduction to your posts here at MPS .... Neville
July 20th, 2022 14:44
Love for life
Paul Bell said:
Yes, you\'ve got to live it to forgive it.
I think people should look into the future more often, cos let\'s face it, can we really replicate those mistakes from the past.
July 20th, 2022 09:23
Paul Bell said:
Yes, you\'ve got to live it to forgive it.
I think people should look into the future more often, cos let\'s face it, can we really replicate those mistakes from the past.
July 20th, 2022 09:23
The Maiden and the rat
isituorme said:
Loved it I pictured it in my mind so clearly.
July 20th, 2022 04:05
isituorme said:
Loved it I pictured it in my mind so clearly.
July 20th, 2022 04:05
Truth..
jorge serra said:
Is a beatiful poem about the truth and the need to be honest with us and with the people, in every moment of our lives.
February 19th, 2021 19:09
jorge serra said:
Is a beatiful poem about the truth and the need to be honest with us and with the people, in every moment of our lives.
February 19th, 2021 19:09
Truth..
FredPeyer said:
Truth and honesty are the basis of every relationship. You expressed it well!
February 18th, 2021 21:43
FredPeyer said:
Truth and honesty are the basis of every relationship. You expressed it well!
February 18th, 2021 21:43
The Maiden and the rat
FredPeyer said:
And I too always want the \'underdog\' to win. Truly enjoyed this poem.
February 18th, 2021 21:40
FredPeyer said:
And I too always want the \'underdog\' to win. Truly enjoyed this poem.
February 18th, 2021 21:40
Sometimes
FredPeyer said:
This image is great, the young girl and the old woman. And so is your poem (great). A long time ago I wrote a poem about all of us wearing masks, not being ourselves. The masks responding to the situation (i.e. lover, workplace, family, etc.) It is refreshing to read about how we should really be: ourselves! And here on MPS we can be that. No judgement!
February 18th, 2021 21:37
FredPeyer said:
This image is great, the young girl and the old woman. And so is your poem (great). A long time ago I wrote a poem about all of us wearing masks, not being ourselves. The masks responding to the situation (i.e. lover, workplace, family, etc.) It is refreshing to read about how we should really be: ourselves! And here on MPS we can be that. No judgement!
February 18th, 2021 21:37
Truth..
L. B. Mek said:
you have such a way of wording your write\'s, impactful: yet, so poetically romantic (sorry if that makes no sense)..
a great write!
thanks for sharing
February 18th, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
you have such a way of wording your write\'s, impactful: yet, so poetically romantic (sorry if that makes no sense)..
a great write!
thanks for sharing
February 18th, 2021 05:33
Truth..
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Alita, we must be true to all in our lives and if this happened to everyone the world would be a better place.
Following on from what d a has said:
\"Smile, it confuses people.\"
Andy
February 18th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Alita, we must be true to all in our lives and if this happened to everyone the world would be a better place.
Following on from what d a has said:
\"Smile, it confuses people.\"
Andy
February 18th, 2021 01:23
Truth..
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d vote for that anytime. In particularly persuasive verse anyway.
Phonies out for ever!
February 17th, 2021 20:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d vote for that anytime. In particularly persuasive verse anyway.
Phonies out for ever!
February 17th, 2021 20:32
Truth..
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love the flow and the rhyming . Good poem
February 17th, 2021 14:27
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love the flow and the rhyming . Good poem
February 17th, 2021 14:27
Truth..
dusk arising said:
Good stuff! Never be afraid of telling it how it is. The trouble it brings me can be mischievous fun.
Smile lots, people love it.
February 17th, 2021 12:55
dusk arising said:
Good stuff! Never be afraid of telling it how it is. The trouble it brings me can be mischievous fun.
Smile lots, people love it.
February 17th, 2021 12:55
The Maiden and the rat
L. B. Mek said:
unlabouring couplet\'s, delivering a seamlessly wonderful flow, especially like:
\'Now a woman in the dance proffession was walking by,
She saw the fair maiden dancing, which caught her eye,\'
using form to emphasis a change to your narratives uplifting tone, a really well executed write and a thoroughly engaging read,
thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 11th, 2021 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
unlabouring couplet\'s, delivering a seamlessly wonderful flow, especially like:
\'Now a woman in the dance proffession was walking by,
She saw the fair maiden dancing, which caught her eye,\'
using form to emphasis a change to your narratives uplifting tone, a really well executed write and a thoroughly engaging read,
thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 11th, 2021 04:26
The Maiden and the rat
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little fable - fun read.
Fan of Banksy or just his rat?
February 10th, 2021 04:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little fable - fun read.
Fan of Banksy or just his rat?
February 10th, 2021 04:03
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