Comments received on poems by AlitaOpal
The Maiden and the rat
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is never as bad as it seems, each new day can bring such joy to it.
Andy
February 10th, 2021 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is never as bad as it seems, each new day can bring such joy to it.
Andy
February 10th, 2021 01:21
The Maiden and the rat
willow tree said:
💖 lovely story , enjoyed it very much . Good rhythm and rhyme!
February 9th, 2021 15:52
willow tree said:
💖 lovely story , enjoyed it very much . Good rhythm and rhyme!
February 9th, 2021 15:52
Sometimes
dusk arising said:
Who knows what we see in one another\'s charcters. The written word can reveal much but far from all. Besides which, outside influences upon one\'s mood whilst writing cannot be discerned by the reader.
February 9th, 2021 07:16
dusk arising said:
Who knows what we see in one another\'s charcters. The written word can reveal much but far from all. Besides which, outside influences upon one\'s mood whilst writing cannot be discerned by the reader.
February 9th, 2021 07:16
Sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:
Your free spirit will take you to such wonderful places in your life.
Andy
February 9th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Your free spirit will take you to such wonderful places in your life.
Andy
February 9th, 2021 01:28
Sometimes
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I see you for you? Well, not completely, but you are well on the way to explaining yourself, so go for it Alita...
February 8th, 2021 23:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I see you for you? Well, not completely, but you are well on the way to explaining yourself, so go for it Alita...
February 8th, 2021 23:41
Life
FredPeyer said:
A very inspiring poem, Alita! We should all become more like children, enjoy the moment and as you said, ask why!
February 5th, 2021 19:16
FredPeyer said:
A very inspiring poem, Alita! We should all become more like children, enjoy the moment and as you said, ask why!
February 5th, 2021 19:16
Life
b-LAH-que said:
Humility, forgiveness and grace truly are powerful tools for become our higher selves and granting us freedom from temptation toward the vices that would contradict such virtues.
I think you and I are similar in that we\'re both getting back into a beloved hobby of poetry after a long break. It\'s cool to see someone else in a similar mindset and doing well, it makes me want to keep going that much more. Well done, and I cant wait to read more of your work.
February 4th, 2021 15:18
b-LAH-que said:
Humility, forgiveness and grace truly are powerful tools for become our higher selves and granting us freedom from temptation toward the vices that would contradict such virtues.
I think you and I are similar in that we\'re both getting back into a beloved hobby of poetry after a long break. It\'s cool to see someone else in a similar mindset and doing well, it makes me want to keep going that much more. Well done, and I cant wait to read more of your work.
February 4th, 2021 15:18
Life
orchidee said:
Good write Alita.
I didn\'t get the hang of it. I tried to fly as The Birdman, then crashed into a cliff! lol.
February 4th, 2021 02:58
orchidee said:
Good write Alita.
I didn\'t get the hang of it. I tried to fly as The Birdman, then crashed into a cliff! lol.
February 4th, 2021 02:58
Expectations
Poetic Dan said:
The only bar we should set is the one for our self but also remembering we can just swing as well...
Inspirational stuff.
Keep up the write
February 4th, 2021 01:58
Poetic Dan said:
The only bar we should set is the one for our self but also remembering we can just swing as well...
Inspirational stuff.
Keep up the write
February 4th, 2021 01:58
Life
Poetic Dan said:
Boom... tingling all over! Thank you so much for your rhythm, May we never lose the why!
Then boundlessly fly...
Great vibe
February 4th, 2021 01:48
Poetic Dan said:
Boom... tingling all over! Thank you so much for your rhythm, May we never lose the why!
Then boundlessly fly...
Great vibe
February 4th, 2021 01:48
Life
dusk arising said:
It sure does get better when you ask why. Especially when the ones you expect to have answers are full of crap and you then see the truth staring back at you.
Truth doesn\'t come from a person in robes trying to get you to buy their idea of heaven. That was OK when people believed the world was flat but we\'re a lot wiser now aren\'t we.
February 3rd, 2021 17:36
dusk arising said:
It sure does get better when you ask why. Especially when the ones you expect to have answers are full of crap and you then see the truth staring back at you.
Truth doesn\'t come from a person in robes trying to get you to buy their idea of heaven. That was OK when people believed the world was flat but we\'re a lot wiser now aren\'t we.
February 3rd, 2021 17:36
My Beloved Son
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A very beautiful sentimental poem to your son and he\'s cute from what I see in the pic. You should frame this super nice poem. Kudos!
November 2nd, 2019 11:57
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A very beautiful sentimental poem to your son and he\'s cute from what I see in the pic. You should frame this super nice poem. Kudos!
November 2nd, 2019 11:57
Entering the silence
orchidee said:
A fine write Alita. Happy Birthday - for a couple of days ago! lol.
October 30th, 2019 11:41
orchidee said:
A fine write Alita. Happy Birthday - for a couple of days ago! lol.
October 30th, 2019 11:41
Entering the silence
isituorme said:
Very nice written by a person with a big heart I feel
October 23rd, 2019 16:16
isituorme said:
Very nice written by a person with a big heart I feel
October 23rd, 2019 16:16
Expectations
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ALITA for a very elegant and thought provoking POEM. I believe in WYSIWYG ~ What you see is what you get. We accept each other JUST as we ARE. We are in HARMONY we don\'t set LIMITATIONS or EXECTATIONS ! Why can\'t others treat us like that as well ? Yours as ever BRIAN. Please check my Poems & Fusion ~ Thanks B (UK)
February 6th, 2017 06:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ALITA for a very elegant and thought provoking POEM. I believe in WYSIWYG ~ What you see is what you get. We accept each other JUST as we ARE. We are in HARMONY we don\'t set LIMITATIONS or EXECTATIONS ! Why can\'t others treat us like that as well ? Yours as ever BRIAN. Please check my Poems & Fusion ~ Thanks B (UK)
February 6th, 2017 06:26
Separated
AlitaOpal said:
This poem is dedicated to a very dear friend/sister of mine.
Despite her situation she chooses to wear her smile everyday. She has shown me that no matter what happens, we still have choices and throughout all the extremities in life it\'s all growth..
Thank you for taking the time to read
January 26th, 2017 17:22
AlitaOpal said:
This poem is dedicated to a very dear friend/sister of mine.
Despite her situation she chooses to wear her smile everyday. She has shown me that no matter what happens, we still have choices and throughout all the extremities in life it\'s all growth..
Thank you for taking the time to read
January 26th, 2017 17:22
My Beloved Son
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely motivating poem written for a little son in wonderful rhyming. The format is great too. Thumbs up. I have lil sons too so I like this.
Pls do comment my latest poem too. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 14th, 2016 08:22
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely motivating poem written for a little son in wonderful rhyming. The format is great too. Thumbs up. I have lil sons too so I like this.
Pls do comment my latest poem too. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 14th, 2016 08:22
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