Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
El Yunque
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words upon nature rr. We have red-tailed kite flying over the place where I play croquet.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words upon nature rr. We have red-tailed kite flying over the place where I play croquet.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 02:53
You can go there from here
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words took me to a wonderful place rr.
Andy
March 11th, 2021 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words took me to a wonderful place rr.
Andy
March 11th, 2021 01:56
You can go there from here
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m sitting here in the Northern Cold, and suddenly along comes your poem and takes to the beauty and the warmth of your tropical isle. \"Everywhere you go, will be somewhere, \" caught my attention immediately. I then started on that journey and stopped to see the \"aqua-blue water\", the butter-gold beaches, the blue lagoon and cascading waters, and by then I was mesmerized. MY mind and I thank you for bringing us this quiet respite on a cold day. I\'m saving this for future use> - Phil A.
March 10th, 2021 17:15
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m sitting here in the Northern Cold, and suddenly along comes your poem and takes to the beauty and the warmth of your tropical isle. \"Everywhere you go, will be somewhere, \" caught my attention immediately. I then started on that journey and stopped to see the \"aqua-blue water\", the butter-gold beaches, the blue lagoon and cascading waters, and by then I was mesmerized. MY mind and I thank you for bringing us this quiet respite on a cold day. I\'m saving this for future use> - Phil A.
March 10th, 2021 17:15
Shall we together walk and live our dream?
L. B. Mek said:
a laudable attempt, not merely in your execution but that openness to self-betterment you exemplify in your comments,
an enjoyable read, but that 3rd verse should introduce a solution or juxtaposing sentiment\'s, to the arguments laid out in verses 1 and 2, if you choose to follow this format of delivery for your poetic thought\'s,
thanks for sharing
Happy New Year
January 8th, 2021 07:54
L. B. Mek said:
a laudable attempt, not merely in your execution but that openness to self-betterment you exemplify in your comments,
an enjoyable read, but that 3rd verse should introduce a solution or juxtaposing sentiment\'s, to the arguments laid out in verses 1 and 2, if you choose to follow this format of delivery for your poetic thought\'s,
thanks for sharing
Happy New Year
January 8th, 2021 07:54
Shall we together walk and live our dream?
Goldfinch60 said:
The last two lines say it all to me rr.
Andy
January 8th, 2021 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
The last two lines say it all to me rr.
Andy
January 8th, 2021 01:46
Shall we together walk and live our dream?
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Good go at a Shakespearean sonnet. Second line doesn\'t scan: suggest \"Our love will be more deep along the way.\" Suggest \"And often it\'s the second hand that broke\". - \"The kind of love is never dead—is oak.\". Suggest \"you spoke\" or \"I spoke\" or something. - \"youngling come somedays\" - this makes no sense to me.
I try to make some meaningful response to poems on MyPoeticSide. Anything but \"good write\". You\'re more than welcome to tie into my poems.
January 7th, 2021 19:32
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Good go at a Shakespearean sonnet. Second line doesn\'t scan: suggest \"Our love will be more deep along the way.\" Suggest \"And often it\'s the second hand that broke\". - \"The kind of love is never dead—is oak.\". Suggest \"you spoke\" or \"I spoke\" or something. - \"youngling come somedays\" - this makes no sense to me.
I try to make some meaningful response to poems on MyPoeticSide. Anything but \"good write\". You\'re more than welcome to tie into my poems.
January 7th, 2021 19:32
Leaping Lilies
Jerry Reynolds said:
You hit your goals here for sure. Good poem. Thanks for sharing.
January 6th, 2021 09:08
Jerry Reynolds said:
You hit your goals here for sure. Good poem. Thanks for sharing.
January 6th, 2021 09:08
Let\'s Grow Old Together
Christina8 said:
This is really a beautiful work, rr! Love the sentiment and the rhymes. Awesome
January 6th, 2021 07:54
Christina8 said:
This is really a beautiful work, rr! Love the sentiment and the rhymes. Awesome
January 6th, 2021 07:54
Let\'s Grow Old Together
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write rr, my wife and I did grow old together but she passed a year ago so now she is waiting for me.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write rr, my wife and I did grow old together but she passed a year ago so now she is waiting for me.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 01:49
I couldn\'t stop thinking about the girl
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write RR about a beautiful little girl.
It is good to see you back.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write RR about a beautiful little girl.
It is good to see you back.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 02:15
Chéri amour
dusk arising said:
Lovely poem sir. You are indeed a lucky man to enjoy such inspiration.
April 22nd, 2020 19:14
dusk arising said:
Lovely poem sir. You are indeed a lucky man to enjoy such inspiration.
April 22nd, 2020 19:14
Grandpa Came Over Today
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, only seen my children and grandchildren via the web over the last few weeks so this is very relatable to me.
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, only seen my children and grandchildren via the web over the last few weeks so this is very relatable to me.
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 00:25
Then how everything changes when I apologize
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly does rr, we must apologise for our inherent faults.
Andy
April 19th, 2020 15:15
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly does rr, we must apologise for our inherent faults.
Andy
April 19th, 2020 15:15
A rose in bloom
Goldfinch60 said:
That rose will bloom into a wonder in your life and her life will be filled with love and caring. Congratulations.
Andy
April 17th, 2020 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That rose will bloom into a wonder in your life and her life will be filled with love and caring. Congratulations.
Andy
April 17th, 2020 00:46
A rose in bloom
FredPeyer said:
rr, in this beautiful poem I can feel the love for this as yet unborn girl. You and your daughter are very lucky and I wish you all the BEST! After two boys, we had a girl and even though it was a long time ago, she is still my \"rose\"!
April 16th, 2020 11:53
FredPeyer said:
rr, in this beautiful poem I can feel the love for this as yet unborn girl. You and your daughter are very lucky and I wish you all the BEST! After two boys, we had a girl and even though it was a long time ago, she is still my \"rose\"!
April 16th, 2020 11:53
A rose in bloom
dusk arising said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful time in the lives of you and your family.
In the years to come may looking back upon such words bring the joys of this time back to your hearts.
April 16th, 2020 08:10
dusk arising said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful time in the lives of you and your family.
In the years to come may looking back upon such words bring the joys of this time back to your hearts.
April 16th, 2020 08:10
Kilimanjaro
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Kurt. You always go for the succinct. Did you read The Snows of Kilimanjaro by Ernest Hemingway? I\'m going to track down one of your books and read it. Thanks 😊
April 15th, 2020 13:48
rrodriguez said:
Thank you Kurt. You always go for the succinct. Did you read The Snows of Kilimanjaro by Ernest Hemingway? I\'m going to track down one of your books and read it. Thanks 😊
April 15th, 2020 13:48
Kilimanjaro
Kurt Philip Behm said:
A simply beautiful Poem Roberto. I especially love
these two lines...
\"A silvery adorned wreath,
Graying before time expires\"
One of my books was set in Tibet and Nepal, and
Mt. Everest (Sagarmatha ) played a big part in
the story.
I\'m thrilled your doing, and writing, so well.
Thanks for the lead...
Kurt
April 15th, 2020 13:43
Kurt Philip Behm said:
A simply beautiful Poem Roberto. I especially love
these two lines...
\"A silvery adorned wreath,
Graying before time expires\"
One of my books was set in Tibet and Nepal, and
Mt. Everest (Sagarmatha ) played a big part in
the story.
I\'m thrilled your doing, and writing, so well.
Thanks for the lead...
Kurt
April 15th, 2020 13:43
Kilimanjaro
rrodriguez said:
Thank you, Z. Did I get the Swahili portion right? I aimed to make the poem express the awesomeness of Kilimanjaro.
April 15th, 2020 13:29
rrodriguez said:
Thank you, Z. Did I get the Swahili portion right? I aimed to make the poem express the awesomeness of Kilimanjaro.
April 15th, 2020 13:29
Kilimanjaro
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome beautiful tribute eloquently phrased ! Great how you described the mountain so aptly . Kudos for this poetic marvel.
I\'ve settled in Tanzania for two decades now and the mountain is the pride here. I have mentioned it in my poems also.
April 15th, 2020 12:12
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome beautiful tribute eloquently phrased ! Great how you described the mountain so aptly . Kudos for this poetic marvel.
I\'ve settled in Tanzania for two decades now and the mountain is the pride here. I have mentioned it in my poems also.
April 15th, 2020 12:12
I wanto to be remembered as...
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words RR, may we all spread goodness in our lives.
Andy
April 15th, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words RR, may we all spread goodness in our lives.
Andy
April 15th, 2020 00:27
I wanto to be remembered as...
dusk arising said:
Looks like some people will remember you for saying god spoke to you. I wonder if they will believe that?
An awful lot of wants for one man.
April 14th, 2020 07:55
dusk arising said:
Looks like some people will remember you for saying god spoke to you. I wonder if they will believe that?
An awful lot of wants for one man.
April 14th, 2020 07:55
Do not go fearful into the sinister night (Villanelle)
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome motivating inspiring poem that we all need in these hard global pandemic times. You inspire all with a twist to the famous poetic line , against fear and panic. And I agree with lawless, it\'s a bit confusing to say \' pray against the forces of light\' , maybe you meant to say \'pray to\', be cause God is light and source of all light. Kudos,
April 14th, 2020 00:50
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome motivating inspiring poem that we all need in these hard global pandemic times. You inspire all with a twist to the famous poetic line , against fear and panic. And I agree with lawless, it\'s a bit confusing to say \' pray against the forces of light\' , maybe you meant to say \'pray to\', be cause God is light and source of all light. Kudos,
April 14th, 2020 00:50
Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:
If there was a god this madness would never have started! We have our words to write and read and I have music to listen to and to play, maybe you can find something new to learn or pick up on something you used to do, strange times - yes but good will come out of them.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
If there was a god this madness would never have started! We have our words to write and read and I have music to listen to and to play, maybe you can find something new to learn or pick up on something you used to do, strange times - yes but good will come out of them.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:38
Darkness
Christina8 said:
Yes I am feeling the blues from this mess too....I guess writing about it helps and here you did a wonderful job!!
March 26th, 2020 19:59
Christina8 said:
Yes I am feeling the blues from this mess too....I guess writing about it helps and here you did a wonderful job!!
March 26th, 2020 19:59
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